Unit 5 Saving animals in danger 人与自然：拯救濒危动物（单元话题写作指导）英语新教材沪教版八年级下册

Unit 5 Saving animals in danger 单元话题写作指导 单元话题分析 “艺术与传统” 话题的核心是引导学生理解 “文化的传承、艺术的新生” 的意义。它既包含了对传统艺术形式（如书法、剪纸、京剧、非遗技艺）的认知与欣赏，也强调了在时代发展中，如何守护传统内核、用创新方式活化艺术，在了解、体验和传承的过程中建立文化自信，感受传统艺术的精神力量与审美价值。 在写作中，这个话题通常有以下几个常见的考查方向： ● 个人感悟类：分享自己接触某一种传统艺术的经历，描述它的表现形式、独特魅力，以及它如何影响自己的成长，比如从书法中学会耐心，从剪纸中感受民俗之美，或因传统艺术萌生传承的心愿。 ● 场景记录类：描述一次与传统艺术相关的难忘体验，比如参观非遗展览、观看京剧演出、跟着匠人学习陶艺，或是参与传统节日中的艺术活动，包括场景细节、过程体验和内心的触动。 ● 观察分析类：对某一种传统艺术形式（如国画、皮影戏、刺绣）或某件经典传统艺术品进行分析，说明它的艺术特点、文化内涵，以及它如何反映地域特色、民族精神或历史变迁，例如传统艺术如何在当代焕发新活力。 ● 观点表达类：阐述对传统艺术传承与发展的看法，分享守护或创新传统艺术的思考，比如如何平衡传统内核与现代表达，青少年应如何参与传统艺术传承，或科技如何助力传统艺术走向更广阔的舞台。 单元写作指导 一、话题单词必备 endangered species 濒危物种 wildlife 野生动物 habitat 栖息地 extinction 灭绝 conservation 保护；保育 poaching 偷猎 illegal 非法的 reserve 保护区 monitor 监测 endemic 特有的；地方性的 biodiversity 生物多样性 threat 威胁 survival 生存 sanctuary 避难所；野生动物保护区 sustainable 可持续的 二、话题短语必备 protect endangered animals 保护濒危动物 save wild animals 拯救野生动物 stop poaching 制止偷猎 protect natural habitats 保护自然栖息地 reduce carbon emissions 减少碳排放 ban illegal wildlife trade 禁止非法野生动物交易 set up wildlife reserves 建立野生动物保护区 raise awareness 提高意识 monitor animal populations 监测动物种群数量 fight against habitat destruction 抵制栖息地破坏 promote eco-tourism 推广生态旅游 carry out rescue operations 开展救援行动 follow environmental laws 遵守环保法律 spread knowledge of wildlife protection 传播野生动物保护知识 live in harmony with nature 与自然和谐共处 三、话题佳句必备 · 开头句（总起） 1. Many wild animals are in great danger now, and it’s time for us to take action to protect them. 许多野生动物现在正处于极大的危险之中，我们是时候采取行动保护它们了。 2. Protecting endangered animals is not just a job for scientists—it’s our duty as teenagers. 保护濒危动物不只是科学家的工作，它也是我们青少年的责任。 3. The number of endangered animals is dropping quickly because of human activities. 由于人类活动，濒危动物的数量正在快速减少。 4. Every animal has its place in nature, and we should learn to live in harmony with them. 每种动物在自然界中都有自己的位置，我们应该学会与它们和谐共处。 5. If we do nothing now, some lovely animals will disappear from the Earth forever. 如果我们现在什么都不做，一些可爱的动物将会永远从地球上消失。 6. Learning about endangered animals makes me realize how important it is to protect our planet. 了解濒危动物让我意识到保护我们的星球是多么重要。 7. More and more people are starting to care about the future of endangered wildlife. 越来越多的人开始关心濒危野生动物的未来。 8. Our earth is beautiful because of all kinds of animals, so we must save them. 我们的地球因各种各样的动物而美丽，所以我们必须拯救它们。 9. Saving endangered animals is saving our own future on the earth. 拯救濒危动物就是拯救我们自己在地球上的未来。 · 中间句 1.We can start with small things, like refusing to buy products made from endangered animals. 我们可以从小事做起，比如拒绝购买由濒危动物制成的商品。 2. Setting up more nature reserves can give endangered animals a safe place to live. 建立更多的自然保护区可以给濒危动物一个安全的生存场所。 3. Scientists are using new technology, like AI, to monitor the number of wild animals. 科学家们正在使用像人工智能这样的新技术来监测野生动物的数量。 4. We should tell our friends and family about the importance of protecting wildlife. 我们应该告诉我们的朋友和家人保护野生动物的重要性。 5. Cutting down too many trees takes away the homes of many wild animals. 过度砍伐树木夺走了许多野生动物的家园。 6. Governments should make strict laws to stop illegal hunting and trading. 政府应该制定严格的法律来制止非法狩猎和交易。 7. Many volunteers are working hard to clean up the habitats of endangered animals. 许多志愿者正在努力清理濒危动物的栖息地。 8. Learning about the habits of endangered animals helps us protect them better. 了解濒危动物的习性有助于我们更好地保护它们。 9. Climate change is making it harder for some animals to find food and live safely. 气候变化正使一些动物更难找到食物并安全生存。 10. We can join school clubs to spread knowledge about wildlife protection. 我们可以加入学校社团来传播保护野生动物的知识。 · 结尾句（总结） 1. Let’s work together to give endangered animals a bright and safe future. 让我们一起努力，给濒危动物一个光明而安全的未来。 2. Small actions can make a big difference—every one of us can help save wild animals. 小小的行动能带来巨大的改变 —— 我们每个人都能帮助拯救野生动物。 3. Protecting animals is not easy, but it’s worth doing for our planet and ourselves. 保护动物并不容易，但为了我们的星球和我们自己，这是值得做的。 4. If everyone tries their best, we can stop more animals from dying out. 如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力，我们就能阻止更多动物灭绝。 5. Let’s be the protectors of wild animals and keep our earth full of life. 让我们成为野生动物的守护者，让我们的地球充满生机。 6. The future of endangered animals is in our hands—we must not let them down. 濒危动物的未来掌握在我们手中 —— 我们绝不能让它们失望。 7. By protecting animals, we are protecting the beautiful balance of nature. 通过保护动物，我们正在保护自然界美丽的平衡。 8. Let’s start today and make our world a better place for all living things. 让我们从今天开始，为所有生物创造一个更美好的世界。 9. We should remember that no animal is alone—we all share this earth together. 我们应该记住，没有一种动物是孤独的 —— 我们共同分享这个地球。 10. With love and care, we can help endangered animals live happily on our planet again. 用爱和关怀，我们可以帮助濒危动物再次在我们的星球上快乐生活。 单元作文典例分析 为了增强同学们对野生动物的保护意识，你校英文报正在举办主题为 “Saving Our Animal Friends” 的征文活动。请你作为学校“生物探秘”兴趣小组的一员，介绍一种你们小组关注的濒危动物： 1、简要描述该动物（如：外形特征、生活习性、栖息地等）； 2、说明其濒危的主要原因及现状； 3、提出至少两条保护该动物的具体措施。 要求：1.表达完整，减少语误；书写规范，卷面整洁； 2.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 3.词数不少于80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving Our Animal Friends In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is ______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路分析】 1. 明确体裁与对象 这是一篇面向全校师生的英文征文，主题为 “Saving Our Animal Friends”，语气真诚、富有呼吁性，符合初二学生的表达习惯。文章以 “生物探秘” 兴趣小组的视角展开，先介绍关注的濒危动物，再分析其濒危原因，最后提出保护措施，结尾发出倡议，结构清晰且富有感染力。 2. 梳理信息，分段布局 · 开头段：使用题目给出的开头句，点明小组对濒危动物的关注，引出核心介绍对象（如亚洲象），简要描述其外形特征、生活习性与栖息地，让读者快速了解该动物。 · 主体段： 濒危原因与现状：分点说明动物面临的威胁，如栖息地丧失、非法偷猎、人兽冲突等，并给出具体数据（如现存数量），增强说服力。 保护措施：从政府、社会 / 学校、个人等层面提出至少两条具体可行的保护方案，可结合实例（如云南的人象冲突缓解项目）让内容更真实。 · 结尾段：总结保护濒危动物的意义，发出呼吁，号召大家共同行动，升华文章主题，让征文更有温度。 3. 语言技巧 · 使用 However, What’s worse, To protect them, For example 等过渡词，让段落衔接更自然，逻辑更清晰。 加入简单连接句（如 Asian elephants are not only gentle giants but also important parts of our ecosystem），丰富表达层次。 · 多用初二学过的词汇和句型，比如 due to, be facing dangers, take action, strictly punish, work together 等，确保语言准确易懂，符合年级水平。 【范文赏析】 基础版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant. These gentle giants have grey skin, big ears, and long trunks. They live in forests and grasslands in Asia, often traveling in groups. They eat plants, fruits, and sometimes crops. However, their survival is threatened. Human activities, such as cutting forests for farming and building roads, destroy their habitats. Worse still, illegal hunting for ivory continues, despite strict laws. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild. To protect them, governments should create more nature reserves and strengthen anti-poaching laws. Meanwhile, raising public awareness about refusing ivory products is crucial. Let’s act now before these magnificent creatures disappear forever! 进阶版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant, an endangered species we focus on. With grey, wrinkled skin and a long trunk, these gentle giants live in forests and grasslands across Asia. They eat plants, use their trunks to drink, and travel in herds, showing strong family bonds. However, Asian elephants are facing serious dangers. Their habitats are shrinking due to deforestation and farming expansion. Also, illegal hunting for ivory still exists despite international bans. What’s worse, when elephants destroy crops or villages, which sometimes causes conflicts with humans so locals might hurt or kill them. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild, and their number keeps dropping. To protect them, we must take action. Governments should build more nature reserves and strictly punish poachers. Schools and communities can organize activities to teach people about elephant conservation. For example, in Yunnan, local projects teach farmers to grow crops that elephants dislike, reducing human-elephant conflicts. Every creature matters on Earth. Let’s work together to save Asian elephants before it’s too late! 单元话题作文练习 假如你是新华中学（Xinhua Middle School）初二学生记者李华，你们学校上个月在深圳湾举行了“保护黑脸琵鹭（Platalea minor）”的观鸟活动，邀请专家对黑脸琵鹭进行详细讲解。请结合以下提示写一篇英文报道： 1. 外形特征：黑色面部皮肤覆盖至眼周，形似“黑色眼罩（black eye mask）”； 2. 保护情况：它是国家一级保护动物（Class I National Protected Animal）； 3. 栖息地：深圳湾（Shenzhen Bay）是它的全球第三大越冬地（wintering site）； 4. 政府保护措施：政府设立了智慧栖息地（Smart Habitat），使用智能监测器（Intelligent Monitoring Devices）； 5. 作为中学生，请提出你的保护建议（至少2点）。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名或校名，使用Li Hua作为署名； 3. 条理清晰，语句通畅，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 在我们国家，野生动物，尤其是濒危野生动物一直能得到很好的保护。2021年，我们国家千方百计保护云南亚洲象安全迁徙就是一个很好的例子。请根据以下内容，以“Saving Asian elephants”为题，写一篇介绍及保护亚洲象的英语短文。 Animal 亚洲象 Food 草，树叶，也吃香蕉和甘蔗(sugarcane) Living places 较热的地方 Description 亚洲最大最壮的陆地动物之一性格友善；极度濒危，数量稀少 Ways to protect Asian elephants 保护森林；不购买象牙(ivory)制品；……(请你自己补充一点) 要求： 1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Saving Asian elephants How much do you know about Asian elephants? Let’s learn more about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Saving animals in danger 单元话题写作指导 单元话题分析 “艺术与传统” 话题的核心是引导学生理解 “文化的传承、艺术的新生” 的意义。它既包含了对传统艺术形式（如书法、剪纸、京剧、非遗技艺）的认知与欣赏，也强调了在时代发展中，如何守护传统内核、用创新方式活化艺术，在了解、体验和传承的过程中建立文化自信，感受传统艺术的精神力量与审美价值。 在写作中，这个话题通常有以下几个常见的考查方向： ● 个人感悟类：分享自己接触某一种传统艺术的经历，描述它的表现形式、独特魅力，以及它如何影响自己的成长，比如从书法中学会耐心，从剪纸中感受民俗之美，或因传统艺术萌生传承的心愿。 ● 场景记录类：描述一次与传统艺术相关的难忘体验，比如参观非遗展览、观看京剧演出、跟着匠人学习陶艺，或是参与传统节日中的艺术活动，包括场景细节、过程体验和内心的触动。 ● 观察分析类：对某一种传统艺术形式（如国画、皮影戏、刺绣）或某件经典传统艺术品进行分析，说明它的艺术特点、文化内涵，以及它如何反映地域特色、民族精神或历史变迁，例如传统艺术如何在当代焕发新活力。 ● 观点表达类：阐述对传统艺术传承与发展的看法，分享守护或创新传统艺术的思考，比如如何平衡传统内核与现代表达，青少年应如何参与传统艺术传承，或科技如何助力传统艺术走向更广阔的舞台。 单元写作指导 一、话题单词必备 endangered species 濒危物种 wildlife 野生动物 habitat 栖息地 extinction 灭绝 conservation 保护；保育 poaching 偷猎 illegal 非法的 reserve 保护区 monitor 监测 endemic 特有的；地方性的 biodiversity 生物多样性 threat 威胁 survival 生存 sanctuary 避难所；野生动物保护区 sustainable 可持续的 二、话题短语必备 protect endangered animals 保护濒危动物 save wild animals 拯救野生动物 stop poaching 制止偷猎 protect natural habitats 保护自然栖息地 reduce carbon emissions 减少碳排放 ban illegal wildlife trade 禁止非法野生动物交易 set up wildlife reserves 建立野生动物保护区 raise awareness 提高意识 monitor animal populations 监测动物种群数量 fight against habitat destruction 抵制栖息地破坏 promote eco-tourism 推广生态旅游 carry out rescue operations 开展救援行动 follow environmental laws 遵守环保法律 spread knowledge of wildlife protection 传播野生动物保护知识 live in harmony with nature 与自然和谐共处 三、话题佳句必备 · 开头句（总起） 1. Many wild animals are in great danger now, and it’s time for us to take action to protect them. 许多野生动物现在正处于极大的危险之中，我们是时候采取行动保护它们了。 2. Protecting endangered animals is not just a job for scientists—it’s our duty as teenagers. 保护濒危动物不只是科学家的工作，它也是我们青少年的责任。 3. The number of endangered animals is dropping quickly because of human activities. 由于人类活动，濒危动物的数量正在快速减少。 4. Every animal has its place in nature, and we should learn to live in harmony with them. 每种动物在自然界中都有自己的位置，我们应该学会与它们和谐共处。 5. If we do nothing now, some lovely animals will disappear from the Earth forever. 如果我们现在什么都不做，一些可爱的动物将会永远从地球上消失。 6. Learning about endangered animals makes me realize how important it is to protect our planet. 了解濒危动物让我意识到保护我们的星球是多么重要。 7. More and more people are starting to care about the future of endangered wildlife. 越来越多的人开始关心濒危野生动物的未来。 8. Our earth is beautiful because of all kinds of animals, so we must save them. 我们的地球因各种各样的动物而美丽，所以我们必须拯救它们。 9. Saving endangered animals is saving our own future on the earth. 拯救濒危动物就是拯救我们自己在地球上的未来。 · 中间句 1.We can start with small things, like refusing to buy products made from endangered animals. 我们可以从小事做起，比如拒绝购买由濒危动物制成的商品。 2. Setting up more nature reserves can give endangered animals a safe place to live. 建立更多的自然保护区可以给濒危动物一个安全的生存场所。 3. Scientists are using new technology, like AI, to monitor the number of wild animals. 科学家们正在使用像人工智能这样的新技术来监测野生动物的数量。 4. We should tell our friends and family about the importance of protecting wildlife. 我们应该告诉我们的朋友和家人保护野生动物的重要性。 5. Cutting down too many trees takes away the homes of many wild animals. 过度砍伐树木夺走了许多野生动物的家园。 6. Governments should make strict laws to stop illegal hunting and trading. 政府应该制定严格的法律来制止非法狩猎和交易。 7. Many volunteers are working hard to clean up the habitats of endangered animals. 许多志愿者正在努力清理濒危动物的栖息地。 8. Learning about the habits of endangered animals helps us protect them better. 了解濒危动物的习性有助于我们更好地保护它们。 9. Climate change is making it harder for some animals to find food and live safely. 气候变化正使一些动物更难找到食物并安全生存。 10. We can join school clubs to spread knowledge about wildlife protection. 我们可以加入学校社团来传播保护野生动物的知识。 · 结尾句（总结） 1. Let’s work together to give endangered animals a bright and safe future. 让我们一起努力，给濒危动物一个光明而安全的未来。 2. Small actions can make a big difference—every one of us can help save wild animals. 小小的行动能带来巨大的改变 —— 我们每个人都能帮助拯救野生动物。 3. Protecting animals is not easy, but it’s worth doing for our planet and ourselves. 保护动物并不容易，但为了我们的星球和我们自己，这是值得做的。 4. If everyone tries their best, we can stop more animals from dying out. 如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力，我们就能阻止更多动物灭绝。 5. Let’s be the protectors of wild animals and keep our earth full of life. 让我们成为野生动物的守护者，让我们的地球充满生机。 6. The future of endangered animals is in our hands—we must not let them down. 濒危动物的未来掌握在我们手中 —— 我们绝不能让它们失望。 7. By protecting animals, we are protecting the beautiful balance of nature. 通过保护动物，我们正在保护自然界美丽的平衡。 8. Let’s start today and make our world a better place for all living things. 让我们从今天开始，为所有生物创造一个更美好的世界。 9. We should remember that no animal is alone—we all share this earth together. 我们应该记住，没有一种动物是孤独的 —— 我们共同分享这个地球。 10. With love and care, we can help endangered animals live happily on our planet again. 用爱和关怀，我们可以帮助濒危动物再次在我们的星球上快乐生活。 单元作文典例分析 为了增强同学们对野生动物的保护意识，你校英文报正在举办主题为 “Saving Our Animal Friends” 的征文活动。请你作为学校“生物探秘”兴趣小组的一员，介绍一种你们小组关注的濒危动物： 1、简要描述该动物（如：外形特征、生活习性、栖息地等）； 2、说明其濒危的主要原因及现状； 3、提出至少两条保护该动物的具体措施。 要求：1.表达完整，减少语误；书写规范，卷面整洁； 2.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 3.词数不少于80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving Our Animal Friends In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is ______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路分析】 1. 明确体裁与对象 这是一篇面向全校师生的英文征文，主题为 “Saving Our Animal Friends”，语气真诚、富有呼吁性，符合初二学生的表达习惯。文章以 “生物探秘” 兴趣小组的视角展开，先介绍关注的濒危动物，再分析其濒危原因，最后提出保护措施，结尾发出倡议，结构清晰且富有感染力。 2. 梳理信息，分段布局 · 开头段：使用题目给出的开头句，点明小组对濒危动物的关注，引出核心介绍对象（如亚洲象），简要描述其外形特征、生活习性与栖息地，让读者快速了解该动物。 · 主体段： 濒危原因与现状：分点说明动物面临的威胁，如栖息地丧失、非法偷猎、人兽冲突等，并给出具体数据（如现存数量），增强说服力。 保护措施：从政府、社会 / 学校、个人等层面提出至少两条具体可行的保护方案，可结合实例（如云南的人象冲突缓解项目）让内容更真实。 · 结尾段：总结保护濒危动物的意义，发出呼吁，号召大家共同行动，升华文章主题，让征文更有温度。 3. 语言技巧 · 使用 However, What’s worse, To protect them, For example 等过渡词，让段落衔接更自然，逻辑更清晰。 加入简单连接句（如 Asian elephants are not only gentle giants but also important parts of our ecosystem），丰富表达层次。 · 多用初二学过的词汇和句型，比如 due to, be facing dangers, take action, strictly punish, work together 等，确保语言准确易懂，符合年级水平。 【范文赏析】 基础版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant. These gentle giants have grey skin, big ears, and long trunks. They live in forests and grasslands in Asia, often traveling in groups. They eat plants, fruits, and sometimes crops. However, their survival is threatened. Human activities, such as cutting forests for farming and building roads, destroy their habitats. Worse still, illegal hunting for ivory continues, despite strict laws. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild. To protect them, governments should create more nature reserves and strengthen anti-poaching laws. Meanwhile, raising public awareness about refusing ivory products is crucial. Let’s act now before these magnificent creatures disappear forever! 进阶版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant, an endangered species we focus on. With grey, wrinkled skin and a long trunk, these gentle giants live in forests and grasslands across Asia. They eat plants, use their trunks to drink, and travel in herds, showing strong family bonds. However, Asian elephants are facing serious dangers. Their habitats are shrinking due to deforestation and farming expansion. Also, illegal hunting for ivory still exists despite international bans. What’s worse, when elephants destroy crops or villages, which sometimes causes conflicts with humans so locals might hurt or kill them. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild, and their number keeps dropping. To protect them, we must take action. Governments should build more nature reserves and strictly punish poachers. Schools and communities can organize activities to teach people about elephant conservation. For example, in Yunnan, local projects teach farmers to grow crops that elephants dislike, reducing human-elephant conflicts. Every creature matters on Earth. Let’s work together to save Asian elephants before it’s too late! 单元话题作文练习 假如你是新华中学（Xinhua Middle School）初二学生记者李华，你们学校上个月在深圳湾举行了“保护黑脸琵鹭（Platalea minor）”的观鸟活动，邀请专家对黑脸琵鹭进行详细讲解。请结合以下提示写一篇英文报道： 1. 外形特征：黑色面部皮肤覆盖至眼周，形似“黑色眼罩（black eye mask）”； 2. 保护情况：它是国家一级保护动物（Class I National Protected Animal）； 3. 栖息地：深圳湾（Shenzhen Bay）是它的全球第三大越冬地（wintering site）； 4. 政府保护措施：政府设立了智慧栖息地（Smart Habitat），使用智能监测器（Intelligent Monitoring Devices）； 5. 作为中学生，请提出你的保护建议（至少2点）。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名或校名，使用Li Hua作为署名； 3. 条理清晰，语句通畅，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 80词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Bird-Watching Activity Held to Protect Platalea Minor Last month, our school organized a meaningful bird-watching activity at Shenzhen Bay to protect the endangered Platalea minor. An expert was invited to introduce this rare species to us. The Platalea minor has unique black facial skin around its eyes, resembling a “black eye mask”. It is listed as a Class I National Protected Animal in China. Shenzhen Bay is its third-largest wintering site globally. To protect them, the government has set up a Smart Habitat with Intelligent Monitoring Devices to track their movements. As middle school students, we can also help by avoiding disturbing birds during bird-watching and spreading awareness about their protection. Let’s work together to save these beautiful birds! From Li Hua, an 8th grader at Xinhua Middle School 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用1-2句说明活动背景（时间、地点、目的）； 第二步，描述黑脸琵鹭的特征和保护等级； 第三步，介绍栖息地信息和政府措施； 第四步，列出至少两条学生建议； 第五步，用呼吁性语句结尾，增强感染力。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce…to…向……介绍…… ②set up建立 ③avoid doing sth.避免做某事 [高分句型] ①…our school organized a meaningful bird-watching activity at Shenzhen Bay to protect the endangered Platalea minor.（不定式作目的状语） ②Let’s work together to save these beautiful birds!（祈使句） 在我们国家，野生动物，尤其是濒危野生动物一直能得到很好的保护。2021年，我们国家千方百计保护云南亚洲象安全迁徙就是一个很好的例子。请根据以下内容，以“Saving Asian elephants”为题，写一篇介绍及保护亚洲象的英语短文。 Animal 亚洲象 Food 草，树叶，也吃香蕉和甘蔗(sugarcane) Living places 较热的地方 Description 亚洲最大最壮的陆地动物之一性格友善；极度濒危，数量稀少 Ways to protect Asian elephants 保护森林；不购买象牙(ivory)制品；……(请你自己补充一点) 要求： 1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)； 2.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Saving Asian elephants How much do you know about Asian elephants? Let’s learn more about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Saving Asian elephants How much do you know about Asian elephants? Let’s learn more about them. The Asian elephant is one of the largest and strongest land animals in Asia. They mainly eat grass and leaves. At the same time, they also eat bananas and sugarcane. They enjoy living in hotter places. They have a friendly personality, but with the hunting and killing of people, they are now extremely endangered and in rare numbers. In order to protect wild animals, we should return the home to the wild animals. What’s more, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abusing. We mustn’t buy ivory products. In a word, if we can share the Earth with the animals, we will have a better world and a brighter future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏已给出的关键信息，写短文介绍亚洲象及如何保护亚洲象。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章主题，介绍亚洲象； 第二步，介绍亚洲象的食物、居住环境、现状等； 第三步，介绍保护亚洲象的方法； 第四步，收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time 与此同时 ②in order to do sth. 为了做某事 ③cut down 砍倒 ④wild animals 野生动物 ⑤in a word 总而言之 [高分句型] ①The Asian elephant is one of the largest and strongest land animals in Asia.（“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构的运用） ②They have a friendly personality, but with the hunting and killing of people, they are now extremely endangered and in rare numbers.（but连接表转折关系的并列句） ③In a word, if we can share the Earth with the animals, we will have a better world and a brighter future.（if引导条件状语从句） 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $