内容正文:
主题8志愿服务与公共服务
主题写作指导
主题写作演练
Step1:2.应用文3.一般过去时;一般过去时;一般
Volunteering Makes the World Better
现在时4.第一人称
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer
Step 2:
activity with my classmates.We went to a nearby nursing
开头:②Last Saturday,we organized a volunteer activity and
home and helped the elderly clean their rooms,talked with
it was really meaningful.
them and performed songs for them.The smiles on their faces
中间:①First,we put up posters and handed out
made us feel warm and proud.
advertisements to make people realize the importance of
Through this activity,I learned the importance of
environmental protection.2Then,we swept the streets helping others.It not only brings joy to those in need but also
and cleaned up the parks.By doing these,the places looked gives us a sense of purpose and achievement.I also became
much cleaner and tidier.
more patient,responsible and willing to care for others.
结尾:①I think volunteer work is very important.
②It lets
I hope more students can join volunteer work.Together,
us learn to care for others and our environment and makes our
we can make the world a warmer and better place
world better.
3I hope I can have a chance to do volunteer
work with you
主题9
文化自信
主题写作指导
主题写作演练
Step1:2.说明文3.一般现在时4.第一人称
Dear Jack
Step 2:
I'm glad you're interested in Chinese culture.Chinese
开头:②We do that because it's our parents who give us life
art can be quite interesting.One of the traditional Chinese
and raise us carefully.
art forms is paper cutting.People use scissors to cut paper
3With the selfless love of our parents,we grow up healthily
into different shapes and patterns.
and happily.
In Chinese culture,paper cuttings are often used as
中间:①Firstly,we should offer to do some housework like
decorations during festivals and celebrations because they are
sweeping the floor,cooking meals and washing dishes when
believed to bring good luck and drive away evil spirits.I
we are free.2Secondly,we should listen to their stories or
really enjoy paper cutting because the designs are very
advice from the bottom of our hearts.3Lastly,we should
beautiful and it is also a way to express creativity.
study hard and repay them with excellent schoolwork.
Paper cutting has a long history and it represents
结尾:①Parents are the most important persons for us in the
Chinese culture.I hope more people can learn about it and
world.2Let's do everything we can to show filial respect for
enjoy its beauty.I feel proud of this traditional art form and I
them.
hope we can help pass it on forever
Yours,
Li Hua
主题10
讲
自然生态与环境保护
主题写作指导
主题写作演练
Step1:2.记叙文3.一般过去时:一般过去时;一般现
Small Actions,Big Changes
在时4.第一人称
The earth is the only home for everyone on it.It's crying
Step 2:
for our help now.Nowadays,we can see rubbish
开头:②The goal was to teach us to sort waste correctly.
everywhere,and the air is badly polluted.These
中间:①First,we listened to a talk about recycling.The
environmental problems are threatening our lives.
speaker told us the harm that plastic waste has done to
As middle school students,we can do many things to
animals in the sea.
2Then,we tried sorting rubbish into
protect the environment.First,we should save water by
three bins:paper,food waste,and harmful things.3After
turning off the tap in time.Second,we can sort the waste
that,we had a fun test about saving the Earth.I won a
properly to recycle more things.Third,we'd better choose
reusable bottle.
public transportation,like buses and subways instead of
s结尾:①This activity made me realize everyone can do small
cars.
things to reduce pollution.2I will use fewer plastic bags,
Let's take these small actions right now.With
sort waste every day,and tell my friends and family to do the
everyone's efforts,we can make a big change and create a
same.
better world.
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参考答案·安徽英语一战成名新中考
主题8志愿服务与公共服务
【命题角度归纳】①志愿服务经历与感受[2021]:②志愿服务活动介绍:③和谐家庭与社区生活。
主题
词汇积累
经历
收获与感受
L.raise money筹款
I.meet new people结识新朋友
2.hand/give out分发
2.get a strong feeling of pride有一种强烈的自豪感
志愿
3.clean up the city park打扫城市公园
3.have a sense of achievement有成就感
服务
4.give away books to children in need把书送给有4.develop communication skills提升沟通技巧
经历
需要的孩子
5.make a difference to our society对我们的社会产
与感
5.volunteer at an animal hospital在动物医院做志
生影响
受
愿者
6.make our after-.class life more colorful使我们的课
6.put up posters about protecting the environment
外生活更加丰富多彩
贴关于保护环境的海报
L.volunteer activities志愿活动
8.give love and care给于爱和关心
2.give away赠送
g.take an active part in积极参加
志愿
3.be in need在需要时
10.old people's home老人之家
服务
4.be ready to do sth.准备好做某事
11l.give out food分发食物
活动
5.be willing to do sth..愿意做某事
l2.put up notices张贴通知
介绍
6.volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事
l3.offer to help主动提供帮助
7.look after/take care of照顾
和谐
L,share housework together一起分担家务
5.keep the community tidy保持社区整洁
家庭
2.cook dinner for the family为家人做晚餐
6.invite neighbors to a party邀请邻居参加聚会
与社
3.celebrate special moments庆祝特殊时刻
7.throw rubbish into the dustbin把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
区生
4.give back to the community回馈社区
8.create a warm environment营造温暖的环境
活
写作佳句及优秀范文见反面《主题写作诵读》P23~P24
住题
写作指寻
假如你是李辉,你参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)”组织的志愿者话动。
请给你的笔友Buce写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的相关情况。要点如下:
1.活动时间:上周六;
2.活动内容:张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道和公园等;
3.你对志愿者工作的看法及期望。
注意:
1.邮件需包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100(邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:poster(n.海报);advertisement(n.广告)
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Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school.
Yours,
Li Hui
Step1细审题
1.主题:志愿者活动。
2.文体:给笔友写一封电子邮件,文体为
3.时态:向笔友介绍上周六参加的志愿者活动的相关情况,用
:表达自己对志愿者工作的看法,
可用
也可用
4.人称:介绍自己上周六参加的志愿者活动,应用
5.要点:①活动时间:②活动内容:③对志愿者工作的看法及期望。
Step2搭框架
参考词汇:organize;take part in;volunteer activity;a member of.…
开头:点明主题,
写句子:①我是学校环保俱乐部的一名志愿者。
介绍志愿者活动
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school.(已给出)
的时间(要点1)
②上周六,我们组织了一场志愿者活动,它很有意义。
参考词?汇:put up posters;give out/hand out advertisements;sweep the streets;make sb.do
sth.clean up...
写句子:①我们首先开始张贴海报,分发广告,以此来使人们认识到保护环境的重要性。
中间:具体介绍
志愿者活动的内
容(要点2)
②然后我们打扫了街道和公园,这使得这些地方看起来更加干净整洁。
参考词汇:I think..;I feel..;I hope.;it's important/necessary/meaningful to do sth.
写句子:①我认为志愿者工作非常重要。
结尾:表达自己
对志愿者工作的
②它使得我们学会关心他人和环境,让我们的世界变得更加美好。
看法以及期望
(要点3)
③我希望能有机会和你一起做志愿工作。
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主题写作讲练·安微英语
一战成名新中考
Step3成语篇
初阶范文
进阶范文
Dear Bruce,
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment
Club of my school.Last Saturday,we organized a
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my
school.DLast Saturday,I took part in a volunteer activity that
volunteer activity and it was really meaningful.
was organized by the club.It was really meaningful.
First,we put up posters and handed out
advertisements to make people realize the
2We started by putting up posters and handing out
advertisements to raise people's awareness of environmental
importance of environmental protection.Then,we
protection.Then,we picked up the rubbish and swept the
picked up the rubbish and swept the streets.
streets.Finally,we cleaned up the park by sweeping the fallen
Finally,we cleaned up the park and swept the
leaves.By doing these,the places looked much cleaner and
fallen leaves.By doing these,the places looked
tidier.
cleaner and tidier.
3I think it's meaningful to do volunteer work.4It not
I think volunteer work is very important.It lets
only helps make our environment better but also lets us learn to
us learn to care for others and our environment and
care for others and our environment.I'm looking forward to
makes our world better.I hope I can have a chance
having a chance to do volunteer work with you.
to do volunteer work with you.
Yours,
Yours,
Li Hui
Li Hui
亮点赏析:
①巧用hat引导定语从句;
②巧用动词不定式作目的状语,明确志愿者活动的目的;
③巧用高级句式“it is meaningful to do sth..”,用it作形式主语,体现句式表达的灵活性和多样性;
④巧用关联词not only.but also.使句子表达流畅,逻辑连贯。
主题
写作演练
[2025合肥蜀山区三模]假如你是李辉,上周参加了学校组织的志愿者活动,请你以“Volunteering Makes
the World Better'”为题,向校英文报投稿。要点如下:
1.活动内容:
2.个人收获:
3.提出号召。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Volunteering Makes the World Better
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer activity with my classmates.
主题写作讲练·安微英语
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