专题 J817 Unit 1 Past and present 书面表达-【题型易-必考题型精练】2025-2026学年八年级下学期英语 话题中心题型梯度特训-译林版

考前语法精练 专题J817书面表达 单元话题特训（新教材译林版） Unit 1 Past and present 过去与现在 姓名：___________班级：___________座号：___________ 内容提要 初阶练手 进阶提升 能力突破 Passage 1 我们日常的课本学习不仅能学到知识，而且也会改善着我们的生活习惯。只要我们有一颗上进心，就一定会带来很大的变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息，以“My Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的变化并简要说明理由。 过去 1.花很多时间打游戏； 2.不喜欢看书 现在 1.喜欢旅行，举一例说明（如去过哪些景点） 2.爱好看书，举一例说明（如每天阅读时长） 3.经常锻炼，举一例说明（如喜爱做的运动） 原因 1.旅游帮助你了解世界，享受自然之美 2.读书帮助你获取知识，开拓视野 他人看法 老师或家人朋友认为你的变化…… 参考词汇：锻炼 take exercise 要求： 1、注意语句通顺，条理清晰； 2、词数90左右，必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，省略号部分适当发挥； 3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Changes ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件， 请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。 To: Liming@netease.com From: Kevin@hotmail.com Subject: changes Dear Li Ming, Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time? And the May Day holiday is coming, do you have any plans for it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly, Kevin 注意事项： 1.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总次数。 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—GaoYou has changed a lot over the years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming Passage 3 假如你是校报的一名专栏作者，本周你计划撰写一篇以“我家乡的变迁”为主题的报道。完成这篇90词左右的英文稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Changes of My Hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 根据中文提示，写一篇英语短文My Hometown。 要点： 1.常州是我的家乡，近几年发生了很大的变化。 2.人们的生活越来越幸福，几乎每家都有小汽车，大部分家庭都住在套房或者别墅里。 3.许多旅游景点 如：红梅公园 (Hongmei Park):可以散步、放风筝、欣赏美景、拍照片……   中华恐龙园 (China Dinasour Park):尽情游玩…… 如果你有足够的时间，还可以去市中心逛逛品尝常州特色美食…… 4.如果你没有时间，你可以进行网上旅游，也可以欣赏到很多美景的图片…… 5.你的感想…… 词数：90词左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 如今,科技影响着我们生活的方方面面,如快捷出行无忧、随时在线学习、购物足不出户、AI随问随答等。请以“How Technology Changes Our Lives”为题,根据所给提示,完成一篇90词左右的英语短文。开头已给出,不计入总词数。提示：1.What changes has technology brought us? (Give 2 examples) 2.What is your favourite change brought by high technology? 3.What are your thoughts on using technology? How Technology Changes Our Lives Technology is developing faster than ever.________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢？假设你是李华，学校社团举办主题为“Changes in Our Lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语文章投稿，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 7 生活在飞速发展，未来的世界总是充满无限遐想。请你以 “Life in the Future” 为题，畅想未来30年的生活。内容需包含以下要点： 1. 我们居住的城市与环境会发生哪些变化； 2. 人们的日常生活 (如出行、学习、工作等) 会有哪些不同； 3. 谈谈你对未来生活的感受。 要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；90词左右。 Life in the Future ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 8 假如你是校报的一名专栏作者，本周你计划撰写一篇以“二十年我市变迁”为主题的报道。请根据下图提示，完成这篇90词左右的英文稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Over the past twenty years, our city has changed a lot and taken on a new look.__________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 9 假设你是李明，你的英国笔友杰克对中国古代历史十分感兴趣。他本想去敦煌参观莫高窟，却因事务繁忙，无法亲自前往。请你根据下方提示，写一封90词左右的邮件向他推荐敦煌莫高窟的线上游览项目。开头和结尾已为你给出，不计入总词数。 推荐“数字敦煌”项目 1. 介绍莫高窟的概况 位置：甘肃省 特色：精美的壁画、彩塑，中国古代艺术瑰宝 2. 描述线上游览的功能和优势 功能：360度全景观看、高清图像放大查看细节 优势：足不出户即可探秘、配有详细的解说和介绍 3. 邀请杰克体验线上探秘之旅 表达期待 邀请他尝试并分享感受 参考词汇  莫高窟    Mogao Caves丝绸之路    the Silk Road 壁画    mural / fresco 彩塑    painted sculpture 佛像    Buddha statue 佛教艺术    Buddhist art  文化遗产    cultural heritage 世界文化遗产    World Cultural Heritage site Digital Dunhuang Dear Jack, Since you're too busy to visit the Mogao Caves in Dunhuang in person, I'd like to__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Mogao Caves. Try it soon and tell me what you think! Passage 10   假设你是李华，你所在城市将举办以“My Country，My Pride”为主题的中学生英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境 、文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化(至少阐述以上两个方面)，并谈谈你的感受。词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My Country, My Pride Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 8 / 8乐思英语 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $考前语法精练 专题J817书面表达 单元话题特训（新教材译林版） Unit 1 Past and present 过去与现在 姓名：___________班级：___________座号：___________ 内容提要 初阶练手 进阶提升 能力突破 Passage 1 我们日常的课本学习不仅能学到知识，而且也会改善着我们的生活习惯。只要我们有一颗上进心，就一定会带来很大的变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息，以“My Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的变化并简要说明理由。 过去 1.花很多时间打游戏； 2.不喜欢看书 现在 1.喜欢旅行，举一例说明（如去过哪些景点） 2.爱好看书，举一例说明（如每天阅读时长） 3.经常锻炼，举一例说明（如喜爱做的运动） 原因 1.旅游帮助你了解世界，享受自然之美 2.读书帮助你获取知识，开拓视野 他人看法 老师或家人朋友认为你的变化…… 参考词汇：锻炼 take exercise 要求： 1、注意语句通顺，条理清晰； 2、词数90左右，必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，省略号部分适当发挥； 3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Changes ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Changes   In the past, I used to spend much time playing computer games. I didn’t like reading books at all. But now I have changed a lot.   I like travelling. I have been to many places of interest, such as Hong Kong Disneyland and the Sydney Opera House. I like reading as well. I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books. Usually, I stand in a long line to borrow books from the library. I often exercise now. I like playing basketball with my friends and I run in the morning everyday.   I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. I have fun reading books and get a lot of knowledge from books. They open up a whole new world to me.     My teachers and family praise my progress, saying I’ve become more active and knowledgeable. I believe positive changes start with a willing heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作； ② 时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作主题已给出，需根据表格内容分过去、现在、原因和他人看法四部分展开，注意举例说明。 [写作步骤] 第一步：对比现在和过去，引出变化； 第二步：详细描述现在的三大变化并举例说明； 第三步：说明变化原因； 第四步：补充他人评价。 [亮点词汇] ① used to 过去常常 ② not…at all 一点也不 ③ have been to 去过 ④ learn about 了解 ⑤ start with 以……开始 [高分句型] ① I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature.（宾语从句） ② My teachers and family praise my progress, saying I’ve become more active and knowledgeable.（现在分词作状语） Passage 2 假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件， 请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。 To: Liming@netease.com From: Kevin@hotmail.com Subject: changes Dear Li Ming, Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time? And the May Day holiday is coming, do you have any plans for it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly, Kevin 注意事项： 1.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总次数。 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—GaoYou has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Caoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner. I’ve changed too. I’m taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends. For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city. I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据对方来信总结写作要点有：家乡的变化；自己的变化、新买电脑的用途、空闲时间的活动；假期计划。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写家乡的变化； 第二步，描述自己的变化、新买电脑的用途、空闲时间的活动； 第三步，描写五一假期计划。 [亮点词汇] ①study online在网上学习 ②listen to music听音乐 ③plan to do sth计划做某事 [高分句型] I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music.（动词不定式作状语） Passage 3 假如你是校报的一名专栏作者，本周你计划撰写一篇以“我家乡的变迁”为主题的报道。完成这篇90词左右的英文稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Changes of My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes of My Hometown My hometown is Yangzhou, a beautiful city in Jiangsu. It has greatly changed over the years. In the past, it was famous for its old streets and classical gardens. People lived in low houses and rode bikes to work, enjoying a slow but happy life. Now Yangzhou is more modern, with new buildings and wider roads. The high-speed railway makes traveling much easier. Luckily, the city still keeps its traditional beauty, and the old gardens are well protected. I love my hometown because it perfectly combines the old and the new, with a rich history and a bright future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时”； ③提示：对比家乡过去与现在的变化，描述具体变迁（如道路、建筑、生活设施等），并表达感受与展望。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用1—2句总述家乡变化巨大，引出主题； 第二步，描述过去和现在的具体变化； 第三步，总结变化带来的好处，并表达对家乡的热爱。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②more modern更现代化的 ③traditional beauty传统美 [高分句型] ①Luckily, the city still keeps its traditional beauty, and the old gardens are well protected. (and连接的并列句) ②I love my hometown because it perfectly combines the old and the new, with a rich history and a bright future. (because引导原因状语从句) Passage 4 根据中文提示，写一篇英语短文My Hometown。 要点： 1.常州是我的家乡，近几年发生了很大的变化。 2.人们的生活越来越幸福，几乎每家都有小汽车，大部分家庭都住在套房或者别墅里。 3.许多旅游景点 如：红梅公园 (Hongmei Park):可以散步、放风筝、欣赏美景、拍照片……   中华恐龙园 (China Dinasour Park):尽情游玩…… 如果你有足够的时间，还可以去市中心逛逛品尝常州特色美食…… 4.如果你没有时间，你可以进行网上旅游，也可以欣赏到很多美景的图片…… 5.你的感想…… 词数：90词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： My Hometown is Changzhou. It has changed a lot these years. People live a happier life now. Almost every family has a car. Most families live in flats or villas. There are many tourist attractions, like Hongmei Park. You can walk, fly kites, enjoy beautiful views and take photos there. You can have fun at China Dinosaur Park . If you have enough time, you can visit the city center and try local food. If you don’t have time, you can take an online tour to see nice pictures. I feel proud of my hometown. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：围绕家乡常州的变化、人民生活、旅游景点及网上旅游方式展开，最后表达个人感想。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍家乡及总体变化； 第二步，分述生活变化和具体旅游景点活动； 第三步，提供网上旅游选项并表达感想。 【亮点词汇】 ①happier life更幸福的生活 ②tourist attractions旅游景点 ③beautiful views美景 ④online tour网上旅游 ⑤feel proud of感到自豪 【高分句型】 ①If you have enough time, you can visit the city center and try local food.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） ②If you don’t have time, you can take an online tour to see nice pictures.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） Passage 5 如今,科技影响着我们生活的方方面面,如快捷出行无忧、随时在线学习、购物足不出户、AI随问随答等。请以“How Technology Changes Our Lives”为题,根据所给提示,完成一篇90词左右的英语短文。开头已给出,不计入总词数。提示：1.What changes has technology brought us? (Give 2 examples) 2.What is your favourite change brought by high technology? 3.What are your thoughts on using technology? How Technology Changes Our Lives Technology is developing faster than ever. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How Technology Changes Our Lives Technology is developing faster than ever. It has greatly changed our daily lives. For example, high-speed trains make our trips faster and more comfortable. We can take many useful online courses easily. My favourite change is online shopping. In the past, I had to go to stores to buy things. It took much time and energy. Now I can buy almost everything at any time with a smartphone. It saves time and offers more choices. I think technology makes our lives much more convenient. If we use it correctly, it will lead us to a better future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需列举科技带来的两个变化、说明自己最喜欢的变化，并表达对使用科技的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，总述科技带来变化； 第二步，明确自己最喜欢的变化并简述原因； 第三步，书写总结。 [亮点词汇] ①developing发展 ②energy精力 ③convenient方便的 [高分句型] ①I think technology makes our lives much more convenient. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) ②If we use it correctly, it will lead us to a better future. (运用了If 引导的条件状语从句) Passage 6 社会快速发展让人民的生活不断变化。你的生活发生了哪些变化呢？假设你是李华，学校社团举办主题为“Changes in Our Lives”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语文章投稿，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in Our Lives With the development of society, amazing changes have taken place in our lives. First, people had to go to the market to buy things, but now they are used to shopping online. Second, they used to walk to other places, but now they take buses or the underground. Third, people communicated by letter before, but now they make video calls on mobile phones, just like talking face to face. Finally, there were small old houses, but now you can see many tall buildings. All in all, as time goes by, people’s lives are getting better and better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：变化应包括：购物、交通、通讯、居住环境等 确定人称：第三人称 (they) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、地名和学校名称，词数控制在90词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，总领全文 主体段：分述变化 结尾段：结尾总结 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：购物方式 过去：go to the market to buy things等 现在：shop online/online shopping等 要点二：出行方式 过去：walk to other places/on foot等 现在：take buses or the underground/by taxi/by plane等 要点三：通讯方式 过去：communicate by letter等 现在：make video calls on mobile phones等 要点四：居住环境 过去：small old houses等 现在：many tall buildings等 Passage 7 生活在飞速发展，未来的世界总是充满无限遐想。请你以 “Life in the Future” 为题，畅想未来30年的生活。内容需包含以下要点： 1. 我们居住的城市与环境会发生哪些变化； 2. 人们的日常生活 (如出行、学习、工作等) 会有哪些不同； 3. 谈谈你对未来生活的感受。 要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；90词左右。 Life in the Future ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Life in the Future In 30 years, our city will be greener and cleaner with more trees and parks. People will use flying cars to travel, making trips faster. Students will study at home using smart computers, and many will work online too. Technology will change our lives in many great ways. I believe life will be more convenient. Robots will help with housework, so we have more free time. However, we should also protect nature while enjoying technology. I am excited about the future and hope to see it soon. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文（畅想未来），以一般将来时为主。 明确要点：未来城市与环境变化，人们出行、学习、工作的变化，对未来生活的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I / We） 注意事项：90词左右，要点齐全，语句通顺。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明30年后城市环境会变得更好。 主体段：描述出行、学习、工作、家务等方面的变化。 结尾段：表达对未来的期待，同时提出要保护自然。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：城市与环境 环境描述：greener and cleaner/more trees and parks 要点二：日常生活 出行: use flying cars 学习: study at home using smart computers 工作: work online 要点三：感受 感受：I am excited about the future and hope to see it soon. Passage 8 假如你是校报的一名专栏作者，本周你计划撰写一篇以“二十年我市变迁”为主题的报道。请根据下图提示，完成这篇90词左右的英文稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Over the past twenty years, our city has changed a lot and taken on a new look. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Over the past twenty years, our city has changed a lot and taken on a new look. The roads used to be muddy and narrow, with few parks for people to relax. Now, they are wide and clean, and many new parks have been built. Public transport has also improved greatly. Instead of crowded buses, we now have the underground and high-speed trains. Some families even own cars. More job opportunities have appeared, so young people are willing to stay or return after college instead of leaving for big cities. I feel proud of these changes and hope to contribute to our city in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”以及“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步，分点介绍城市在公共空间（道路、公园）、公共交通、就业机会三方面的今昔对比； 第三步，表达对城市变化的自豪之情，并展望未来贡献。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be曾经是 ②instead of而不是 ③feel proud of…为……感到自豪 [高分句型] I feel proud of these changes and hope to contribute to our city in the future.（feel proud of表达自豪，hope to do表达未来愿望，升华主题） Passage 9 假设你是李明，你的英国笔友杰克对中国古代历史十分感兴趣。他本想去敦煌参观莫高窟，却因事务繁忙，无法亲自前往。请你根据下方提示，写一封90词左右的邮件向他推荐敦煌莫高窟的线上游览项目。开头和结尾已为你给出，不计入总词数。 推荐“数字敦煌”项目 1. 介绍莫高窟的概况 位置：甘肃省 特色：精美的壁画、彩塑，中国古代艺术瑰宝 2. 描述线上游览的功能和优势 功能：360度全景观看、高清图像放大查看细节 优势：足不出户即可探秘、配有详细的解说和介绍 3. 邀请杰克体验线上探秘之旅 表达期待 邀请他尝试并分享感受 参考词汇  莫高窟    Mogao Caves丝绸之路    the Silk Road 壁画    mural / fresco 彩塑    painted sculpture 佛像    Buddha statue 佛教艺术    Buddhist art  文化遗产    cultural heritage 世界文化遗产    World Cultural Heritage site Digital Dunhuang Dear Jack, Since you're too busy to visit the Mogao Caves in Dunhuang in person, I'd like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Mogao Caves. Try it soon and tell me what you think! 【答案】范文 Dear Jack, Since you’re too busy to visit the Mogao Caves in Dunhuang in person, I’d like to recommend the “Digital Dunhuang” online project to you. The Mogao Caves are located in Gansu Province along the ancient Silk Road. They are famous for their beautiful murals and painted sculptures, which are treasures of Chinese Buddhist art. Through the online project, you can take a virtual tour without leaving home. The 360-degree panoramic views let you see every detail clearly, and you can even zoom in to enjoy the exquisite paintings. You can also access video commentaries that introduce the stories behind each cave, which helps you understand the cultural background of these ancient artworks. I believe you’ll enjoy this special way to explore the Mogao Caves. Try it soon and tell me what you think! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：推荐类电子邮件，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：给无法实地参观敦煌莫高窟的Jack推荐“Digital Dunhuang”线上项目，包含莫高窟基本介绍、项目功能与体验优势 确定人称：第二人称(you) 注意事项：词数不少于90词，注意信息要点，不要出现语法和拼写错误。 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明对方无法实地参观的情况，引出线上项目推荐 主体段：先介绍莫高窟的地理位置与艺术价值，再分点介绍线上项目的核心功能与优势 结尾段：表达期待与鼓励，自然收尾 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：莫高窟基础介绍 地理位置：be located in Gansu Province位于甘肃省，along the ancient Silk Road沿古丝绸之路 艺术价值：be famous for beautiful murals以精美壁画闻名，painted sculptures彩塑，treasures of Chinese Buddhist art中国佛教艺术瑰宝 要点二：线上项目核心功能 虚拟游览功能：take a virtual tour虚拟游览，without leaving home足不出户，360-degree panoramic views360度全景，zoom in放大，exquisite paintings精美画作 文化解读功能：access video commentaries获取视频解说，introduce the stories behind each cave介绍洞窟背后的故事，understand the cultural background了解文化背景 要点三：结尾鼓励 表达期待：enjoy this special way喜欢这种特别的方式，explore the Mogao Caves探索莫高窟，tell me what you think告诉我你的想法 Passage 10   假设你是李华，你所在城市将举办以“My Country，My Pride”为主题的中学生英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境 、文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化(至少阐述以上两个方面)，并谈谈你的感受。词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My Country, My Pride Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【答案】例文： My Country, My Pride Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here. Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue skies have returned to our lives. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space program. The successful launch of Shenzhou-12 has turned our space dream into reality. I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：需阐述环境、文化传播、太空科技中至少两个方面的发展变化，并表达个人感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇礼貌问候并点明演讲主题； 第二步，列举中国在环境、文化、航天等方面的具体变化，并抒发个人自豪感与未来期许； 第三步，礼貌结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①take measures采取措施 ②take place发生 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. (运用现在完成时强调从过去持续至今的变化与发展) ②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. (运用which引导非限制性定语从句) 9 / 14乐思英语 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $