Unit3 Food and Culture 同步读后续写写作课件-2025-2026学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第二册

Unit 3 Food and Culture 人教版2019选择性必修第二册 读后续写 读话题写作文高二上 Learning objectives At the end of class, you will be able to： 1.指导学生准确确定文本、时空、人物和事由； 2.指导学生谋篇布局，故事情节衔接自然，叙事完整； 3.指导学生遣词造句，言语得体。 1 2 3 技法点拨 佳句仿写 目 录 CONTENTS 写作实践 3 技 法 点 拨 ： 使续写更加形象生动 01 4 (1)Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。 (2)Joyfully, he skipped up the strect.他高兴地蹦蹦跳跳沿着街道走去。 【赏析】这里的carefully和joyfully把后面的两个动作“step”和“skip”描写得更加细致和生动。 Tip1：副词开头 (1)Curious to know what was inside. he tiptoed into the dark cave. 他好奇地想知道里面是什么，踮着脚尖走进了黑暗的洞穴。 【赏析】这里的“Curious to know what was inside（很想知道里面是什么）”就是形容词短语，表明他进洞穴的原因。和当于:He was curious to know what was inside, and he tiptoed into the dark cave. (2)Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot. 一句话也说不出来，他就愣在了原地。 【赏析】这里的“unable to say a word”也是一个形容词短语，表现了“愣在原地”的伴随动作：说不出一句话。 Tip 2:形容词短语开头 ( 1)Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.他小心翼翼地环顾四周，溜进了房间，轻轻地关上门。 【赏析】这里的“Looking around him cautiously”意为：小心翼翼地环顾四周。 (2)Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. 简感到失望，不得不再待一夜。 【赏析】本句中的开头，用了doing的形式，即feeling disappointed感到失望。 Tip3：非谓语开头 (1)"Let's see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. “让我们看看谁先到达那里!”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。 (2)"Get into the car.”Paul shouted at Mac.“上车!”保罗对麦克喊道。 Tip 4：对话或独白开头 (1)We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多好风景。 (2)I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys, holding me entirely in their fascination.我望着车窗外，蜿蜒的河流、高耸的山脉、阳光明媚的海滩和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。 Tip 5：背景描写 佳 句 仿 写： 跟着课文学佳句 02 10 细节描写 1.又绝望又疲惫，简跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。 Desperate and exhausted, Jane knelt down, with tears rolling down her checks. 2.我们可以自己用炉子烤肉, 这让我们更有参与感, 而且保证了烤串有温度，味道也更好。 The stoves allow us to cook the meat, which gives us a feeling of participation, and it allows us to eat the meat at a perfect temperature, which ensures a good taste and flavour. 原： Tired, hungry, and not knowing a word of Chinese, we had no idea how to order, so the chef just began filling our table with the best food we had ever eaten. 原：For example, America’s most popular Chinese dish is Gencral Tso's chicken, which consists of fried chicken covered in a sweet sauce. flavoured with hot red peppers. 细节描写 4.五一假期期间我们去了济南，然后到了山东省的淄博市，好好品尝了一下那里独特的烧烤。 During the May Day holiday we travelled to Ji’nan, and then we moved to Zibo, a city in Shandong Province, to have a good taste of its special barbecue. 原： We soon moved to Shandong Province in the castern part of North China. My favourite dish there was boiled dumplings served with vinegar. 原： The food（上文的Sichuan peppercorns） was wonderful and different, but what was even more important was the friendship offered us. 3.更重要的是，每个人都应该拥右一种勇于面对困难的精神。 What is even more important is that everyone should hold a kind of spirit to go through difficulties bravely. 03 写作实践: 触类旁通 13 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Special#2，Please My flight arrived in San Diego around midnight，and by the time I drove home and got into bed it was nearly 2:00 a. m. I was tired and jet-lagged when I dragged myself out of the bed. Nevertheless，I had to be up bright and early that morning: I was the opening keynoter（主旨发言人） at a national conference. In short，I needed to recover quickly. A hearty breakfast in the early morning sun was what I needed. I headed for Carlos & Annie’s，a popular restaurant located in the heart of the seaside town. “I’d like steak and eggs，please,” I said to the waitress after I had finally found a table in the restaurant. “Oh, I'm sorry,” she apologized. “We're out of Special#2. We've served the last of our steaks. How about Special#14?” “Oh，no steak and eggs?” I couldn't seem to accept it. I'm not sure if it was my heartfelt sigh that caught Carlos，the owner's attention. His warm，caring brown eyes seemed determined to pinpoint the best solution. He then said, “You know，I think I did see one final steak back there.” Pressing my luck，I quickly declared, “Wow，that would be great. But you know，I'm not sure if I want a breakfast stenk at all. What I really want is a steak—one that’s two inches thick，tender and juicy，served medium rare.” “Not to worry,” Carlos assured me and left. The young waitress gave me a wink（眨眼） and said with a knowing smile, “Carlosis being Carlos again!” I did not give her words much thought. Then，I noticed Carlos as he left the restaurant through the side door and walked into a neighborhood grocery store across the street. Carlos exchanged morning greetings with everyone he knew and even helped the owner of the bookstore next door by holding the items that filled her arms. Then he reentered the restaurant with a bag in his hand. 典例赏析 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para1: Within minutes，an exact Special#2 was in front of me, its sight and smell instantly lifting my spirits. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para2: I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had already sold the restaurant, a revelation that made my heart sink. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 22 第一步：读透文本 16 1.主题分析 本文以时间为主线，叙述了主人公经历长途跋涉后到达日的地，第二天早起，试图通过享受一顿丰盛的早餐(hearty breakfast)来恢复精力, 来到社区最受欢迎的一家早餐店，点了一份Special#2的早餐，却被告知心仪的菜单项已售罄。此时, 餐厅老板走出来说可以为他做一份。 2. 情节梳理：故事要素 即故事的人物、时间、地点、事件的起因、经过和结果，也就是我们常说的“5W1H”。 要素 内容 who I（一个疲惫的旅行者），Carlos（餐馆老板） when in the early morning where in a restaurant why I nceded a hearty breakfast to lift up my spirits. what “我”希望通过一顿丰盛的早餐来恢复元气，却发现所想要的菜单项已售罄。what Carlos的一系列行动不仅满足了“我”的需求，还让“我”体会到了人性中的 善意和关怀。 how Carlos bought ingredients and made a special meal for me. 22 第二步：构建情节 19 What’s the genre of the passage? Narration（记叙文） Argumentation（议论文） Exposition（说明文） Read for the genre 1:两段首句定第一段 根据续写第一段首句“Within minutes, an exact Special#2 was in front of me, its sight and smell instantly lifting my spirits（几分钟后，一模一样的Special#2出现在我面前，看到它，闻到它的味道，我的精神立刻振奋起来）.”可知，本段可以描述Carlos成功地为作者提供了他所期待的早餐，为作者带来了喜悦和惊喜。再结合第二段提示句中的“I was about to leave”可知, 结尾句可以写“用完早餐+起身+感谢+结账+告别”。 2:第二段首句定第二段 根据第二段所给首句“I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had alrcady sold the restaurant. a revelation that made my heart sink（我正要离开时得知 Carlos已经卖掉了餐厅,这一发现让我的心一沉）.”可知，故事即将出现一个转折, 引发“我”对于遇见、变化和记忆的深刻反思。可以用“It's the moments of genuine connection that truly enrich our lives.”来升华主题。 思路点拨 Within minutes, an exact Special #2 was in front of me, its sight and smell instantly lifting my spirits. If Carlos hadn't stepped in, my day might have continued in a haze of disappointment. As I took the first bite, I couldn't help but marvel at how a simple act of kindness could profoundly alter one's outlook. “In a world often filled with haste and indifference, gestures like these stand out, ”Ithought to myself. Having finished my breakfast, I rose from the table, expressed my heartfelt thanks to Carlos, paid my bill and said goodbye. I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had already sold the restaurant, a revelation that made my heart sink. Had I known this would be my last encounter in this familiar setting, perhaps I would have lingered a bit longer, soaking in everydetail. This unexpected change served as a poignant reminder that nothing in life ispermanent, except the memories we hold dear and the impact we have on eachother. “It's the moments of genuine connection that truly enrich our lives, ”Ireflected as I walked away, grateful for the brief but meaningful interaction that would now be treasured in my collection of memories. 佳作展现 At the end of the lesson, I am able to： 1 2 3 4 5 plan the layout of the story( the plot is natural, and the narrative is good) use appropriate words and sentences to express what I want to write an continuation writing properly. 自我评价 Thank you for your listening $