内容正文:
技法三 多维描写,形神兼备
1
在读后续写中运用动作、心理和情绪、环境和场景等多维描写,让故事更具感染力,多维描写相结合既让人物更加立体,更加连贯,又能让读者沉浸式走进故事,提升续写细腻度与感染力。
返回首页
二轮专题复习
1.与“head”相关的词块
抬头 raise/lift one's head 低头 lower/hang/bend one's head
摇头 shake one's head 点头 nod one's head
把头埋进 bury one's head in 转头 turn one's head around
高抬着头 hold one's head high 坚定地点点头 give a determined nod
【动作描写】
返回首页
二轮专题复习
2.与“eye”相关的词和词块
看到,发现 spot 瞥见 glimpse
眯起眼 narrow one's eyes 盯着 stare at/eyes be fixed on/eyes be glued to
凝视着某人 look at sb. with a fixed gaze 直视某人的眼睛 look into one's eyes/ look sb.
straight in the eye
怒视 glare at 看到 catch sight of
返回首页
二轮专题复习
扫视 glance at 目光落在某物上 one's eyes/gaze/ glance fall(s) on sth.
眨眼 blink one's eyes/wink at sb. 迅速地看某人一眼 shoot/throw/cast sb. a
(+adj.) look/glance at sb.
返回首页
二轮专题复习
3.与“hand/finger”相关的词和词块
鼓掌 clap/applaud 伸手去够;伸进 reach (out) for;reach into
抓住 catch/seize/grasp/grab 握住 take hold of/grab hold of
快速
翻阅 finger through 手颤抖着 with one's hands shaking/trembling
返回首页
二轮专题复习
4.与“arm/shoulder/back”相关的词块
扑进某人怀里 throw oneself into one's arms 双臂
交叉 with arms crossed/ fold one's arms
拉某人进怀/拥抱 hold sb. in one's arms/ throw/ put one's arms around sb. /hug sb. tightly/gather sb. into one's arms 臂挽着臂走 walk arm in arm
返回首页
二轮专题复习
伸出/张开双臂 hold out/open one's arms 耸耸肩 shrug one's shoulders
回头看 look (back) over one's shoulder 弯腰/驼背 bend one's back
伸懒腰 stretch one's back 把背靠在…… lean one's back against...
俯身 lean down 向前倾 lean forward
返回首页
二轮专题复习
5.与“mouth/voice”相关的词和词块
小声说 murmur 耳语 whisper in one's ear
责骂 scold 吹口哨 whistle
清清嗓子 clear one's throat 边哭边说 say through tears
补充说…… add that... 严肃地说 speak in a serious voice
情不自禁地问 can't help asking 好奇地问 ask with curiosity
返回首页
二轮专题复习
自言自语 talk to oneself 高声地喊叫 shout at the top of one's voice
大喊一声 let out a cry 抱怨 complain
尖叫 scream/yell 重重地叹气 sigh heavily
返回首页
二轮专题复习
6.与“heart”相关的词块
使某
人心痛 make one's heart bleed/ache 心情沉重 one's heart sinks
心碎了/
心融化了 one's heart breaks/melts 心情激动/
心怦怦狂跳 one's heart beats/ races/pounds wildly
返回首页
二轮专题复习
7.与“foot/leg”相关的词和词块
一跃而起 leap/jump/spring to one's feet 蹑手蹑脚地走 tiptoe
拖着双腿 drag one's legs 挣扎着站起来 struggle to one's feet
跌倒后起来 pick oneself up 跪下 kneel down/on one's knees
来回踱步 pace up and down/ back and forth 绊倒 trip up/over
返回首页
二轮专题复习
冲进 rush into 加快脚步 quicken one's steps
追逐 chase after 挤过去 push/force one's way
溜进/溜出 slip/steal/slide into/out 逃跑 flee away
前往 head for/make one's way for 摸索着走 feel one's way
返回首页
二轮专题复习
根据汉语提示补全句子
1.她静静地坐着,目光定格在那张旧照片上,嘴角噙着一丝温柔的笑意,回忆涌上心头。
She sat quietly, _____________________________________, a soft smile playing on her lips as memories flooded back.
2.她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。
She _________________________________________________________ and answered his question truthfully.
(with) her eyes fixed on the old photo
looked her father straight in the eye/looked into her father's eyes
返回首页
二轮专题复习
3.他们站在拥挤的房间里,他俯身在她耳边轻声说:“谢谢你能来——没有你我做不到这些。”
As they stood in the crowded room, he ______________________________________, “Thank you for being here—I couldn't have done this without you.”
4.她说不出话来,面露喜色,将儿子揽入怀中。
Speechless, she smiled radiantly and ____________________________.
leaned down and whispered in her ear
gathered her son into her arms
返回首页
二轮专题复习
5.漫长的一天工作结束后,他拖着沉重的脚步回家,疲惫不堪。
He __________________ as he walked home from work, exhausted after a long day.
6.然后莉萨站起来,穿过人群朝我走来。
Then Lisa stood up and ________________________________ towards me.
dragged his legs
made her way through the crowd
返回首页
二轮专题复习
7.她保持镇静,但心却怦怦狂跳。
She stayed calm, but inside, her heart ______________________________________.
8.他伸手探入口袋,抽出一张字条,带着温柔的微笑将它轻轻按进我掌心。
He _________________________, withdrew a note and pressed it into my hand with a gentle smile.
was pounding/racing/beating wildly
reached into his pocket
返回首页
二轮专题复习
9.他一跃而起,冲出客厅。
He ___________________________________ and rushed out of the living room.
leapt/jumped/sprang to his feet
返回首页
二轮专题复习
1.常与人物“情感、情绪”搭配的词块
充满(某种强
烈的感情) be burning with 某种情感突然袭来 sweep over/flood (over)/wash over/come over sb.
被(强烈的感情、愿望等)影响 be seized by/with (感情或感觉)充溢,难以忍受 be overwhelmed/ overcome by/with
【心理和情绪描写】
返回首页
二轮专题复习
2.表示“喜乐、兴奋、满意”的词块
突然大
笑起来 burst into laughter/ burst out laughing 面带灿烂的笑容 wear a bright/broad smile
向某人
微笑 give sb. a smile/smile at sb. 笑得合不拢嘴 smile from ear to ear
手舞
足蹈 jump/dance for/with joy 高兴地/激动地
跳了起来 jump/spring to one's feet with joy/excitement
返回首页
二轮专题复习
露出
喜色 (one's eyes/face) light(s) up/ brighten(s) (up) 脸上露出灿烂的笑容 a bright/shining smile appears on/ spreads across/ crosses one's face
兴奋地两眼放光 one's eyes shine
with excitement 欣喜若狂 be on top of the world/be wild with joy
情绪高涨 in high spirits 心情好 in a good mood
返回首页
二轮专题复习
令某人感到
(非常)高兴的是 to one's (great) delight 对……很满意 be content/satisfied with...
返回首页
二轮专题复习
3.表示“生气、愤怒”的词块
冲某
人发火 blow up at sb. (脸)涨得通红 go red
勃然大怒 explode/burst with anger 非常生气 feel/get angry/ mad/be seized by anger/be overwhelmed with anger
发脾气 lose one's temper 愤怒地 in anger
返回首页
二轮专题复习
气得满脸通红 flame with anger 气得手发抖 hands trembling with anger
返回首页
二轮专题复习
4.表示“紧张、慌张、担心、害怕”的词块
大脑一片空白 go blank 面色苍白 go pale
惊恐万分 be full of fear/ horror/ be filled with terror 惊恐万状 in panic/a state of panic
心跳得厉害 have one's heart
pounding/pulse racing 吓呆 freeze with terror
返回首页
二轮专题复习
如坐针毡 sit on pins and needles 心都提到喉咙口了 have one's heart in one's mouth/throat
深吸一口气 take a deep breath 受惊地,惊恐地 in horror/alarm
膝盖/腿发软无力 one's knees/legs feel weak 心慌,紧张 have butterflies in one's stomach
返回首页
二轮专题复习
5.表示“惊讶、诧异”的词块
使某人伤心 break one's heart 突然哭了起来 burst into tears/burst out crying
耷拉着头 hang one's head 陷入绝望 sink/fall into desperation/despair
怀着沉重的/
悲伤的心情 with a heavy/ sinking/ broken heart 硬挤出一丝笑容 force a smile
返回首页
二轮专题复习
眼泪涌出 tears well up 泪水模糊了双眼 one's eyes cloud with tears
绝望地 in despair 情绪低落 in low spirits
掩面啜泣 sob/weep with one's face hidden in one's hands 眼含泪水 in tears
返回首页
二轮专题复习
7.表示“惭愧、羞愧”的词块
羞愧地低下头 hang/drop/lower/bend/bow/ duck one's head in shame 为……而感到愧疚 feel sorry/guilty for...
脸红 (one's face) flush(es) /turn(s) red 强烈的羞愧感 a strong sense of shame
出于内疚 out of guilt 后悔不已 be trapped in regret
返回首页
二轮专题复习
8.表示“放松、舒适”的词和词块
平静下来 calm down 心情轻松的 light-hearted/with a light heart
感觉自在 feel at home 让某人感觉自在 make sb. at home
松了一口气 breathe a sigh of relief 叹/松了一口气 sigh with relief
让某人欣慰的是 to one's relief 自在的;安逸的 be at ease
返回首页
二轮专题复习
根据汉语提示补全句子
1.老师突然叫到我时,我的脑子一片空白,一个答案也想不起来。
_____________________ when the teacher called on me unexpectedly, and I couldn't remember a single word of the answer.
My mind went blank
返回首页
二轮专题复习
2.当生日蛋糕被端出来时,小女孩的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒,开心地鼓起了掌。
When the birthday cake was brought out, ________________________________________,and she clapped her hands happily.
the little girl's eyes shone with excitement
返回首页
二轮专题复习
3.听到玻璃破碎的声音,她吓得一动不动,心怦怦直跳,疑惑屋里可能是谁。
She ___________________ at the sound of breaking glass, her heart pounding as she wondered who might be in the house.
4.当我说起为他生日准备的惊喜派对时,他的眼睛一下子亮了,我才知道他其实一直暗暗期待着。
__________________ when I mentioned the surprise party for his birthday, and I knew he'd been secretly hoping for one.
froze with terror
His eyes lit up
返回首页
二轮专题复习
5.她在比赛中的表现超出了所有人的预期,没人想到她能闯进决赛,更别说拿一等奖了。
Her performance in the competition ______________________________________; no one had thought she'd make it to the final round, let alone win the first prize.
6.他站在门口,眼里满是惊恐,盯着那个破碎了的代代相传的花瓶。
He stood at the door, ______________________________,staring at the broken vase that had been in his family for generations.
went beyond everyone's expectations
with his eyes full of horror
返回首页
二轮专题复习
7.小男孩在沙发底下找到了丢失的玩具,松了一口气,紧紧抱着它,仿佛再也不会放手。
The little boy found his lost toy under the sofa and ____________________, hugging it tightly as if he'd never let go.
8.发现自己的玩具被粗心的同学弄坏时,他脸色涨红,怒火中烧。
______________________, and he ________________________ when he found his toy had been damaged by the careless classmate.
sighed with relief
His face turned red
was burning with anger
返回首页
二轮专题复习
9.小女孩低下头,声音发颤地为打碎花瓶道歉。
The little girl _______________,_____________________ as she apologized for breaking the vase.
10.她因忘记闺蜜的生日而感到愧疚,于是烤了一个蛋糕,还写了一封真诚的道歉信来弥补。
She ____________________________ her best friend's birthday, so she baked a cake and wrote a heartfelt apology note to make up for it.
hung her head
her voice trembling
felt guilty for forgetting
返回首页
二轮专题复习
1.天气
暴风雨之夜 a stormy night 在茫茫大雨中 in the blinding rain
连绵不断的雨 continuous/constant rain 雷声隆隆 thunder rolls
狂风暴雨 fierce/heavy/violent storms 风在树林中呼啸 the wind whistles through the trees
【环境与场景描写】
返回首页
二轮专题复习
四面受风 exposed to the four winds of heaven 浓雾笼罩着…… a thick mist hangs over...
厚厚的一层
雾/雪/云 a blanket of fog/snow/cloud 一道阳光 a ray of sunlight
投下阴影 cast a shadow 沐日光浴 bask/be bathed in (the) sunshine
落日 the setting sun 天气放晴 clear up
返回首页
二轮专题复习
2.地理位置
一个偏僻的小村子 a small village off the map 在一个群山环抱的村庄里 in a village among the hills
位于……的最北端 be situated at the northern extreme of... 人烟稀少的农村地区 the thinly populated rural area
返回首页
二轮专题复习
3.其他环境
井井有条 in good order 乱糟糟 in a mess
极度安静的状态 deathly stillness 昏暗的灯光 the dim light
聒噪的人群 the noisy crowd 一个拥挤的/宽敞的房间 a crowded/ spacious room
返回首页
二轮专题复习
根据汉语提示补全句子
1.我醒来时,浓雾笼罩着花园,玫瑰花上挂着晶莹的水珠,仿佛在哭泣一般。
When I woke up, ___________________________________, making the roses glisten with tiny droplets as if they'd been crying.
a thick mist hung over the garden
返回首页
二轮专题复习
2.早上拉开窗帘时,整个村庄都被一层厚厚的积雪覆盖,屋顶和田野变成了一片柔和的白色仙境。
When we opened the curtains in the morning, ______________________________________________, turning the rooftops and fields into a soft, white wonderland.
the whole village was covered in a blanket of snow
返回首页
二轮专题复习
3.这片人口稀少的农村地区零星分布着小农舍,那里生活节奏缓慢,空气中弥漫着青草和泥土的清新气息。
____________________________________________________________, where the pace of life is slow and the air smells of fresh grass and earth.
4.她在喧闹的人群中跟丢了妈妈,一边挤过人群呼喊着妈妈的名字,一边感到恐慌加剧。
She ________________________________________, panic rising as she pushed through people calling out her mother's name.
The thinly populated rural area is dotted with small farmhouses
lost sight of her mother in the noisy crowd
返回首页
二轮专题复习
5.暴风雨过后,志愿者们合力清理了折断的树枝和杂物,日落时分公园已恢复整洁有序。
After the storm, volunteers worked together to clear the fallen branches and debris, ________________________________ by sunset.
6.金色的麦田沐浴在阳光下,麦穗在微风中轻轻摇曳,仿佛在随着阳光的暖意起舞。
____________________________________________, the ears swaying gently in the breeze as if dancing to the warmth of the sun.
leaving the park in good order
The field of golden wheat was bathed in sunshine
返回首页
二轮专题复习
7.她蜷缩在壁炉旁,听着猛烈的风暴摇晃窗户——每一阵狂风都像受伤的野兽般嚎叫,雨点敲打得如此猛烈,让人觉得屋顶都可能塌下来。
She huddled by the fireplace, ______________________________ _________________ —each gust of wind howled like a wounded animal, and the rain drummed so hard that it felt like the roof might cave in.
listening to violent storms shake the windows
返回首页
二轮专题复习
8.雨后一小时,天空开始放晴,阳光从云层中探出头来,在远处的山峦上勾勒出一道淡淡的彩虹。
____________________________ an hour after the rain, with the sun peeking through the clouds and painting a faint rainbow over the distant hills.
The sky began to clear up
返回首页
二轮专题复习
9.那棵古老的橡树在草坪上投下长长的影子,孩子们轮流跳过影子,仿佛在和阳光玩游戏。
The ancient oak tree ____________________________________, where children took turns jumping over it as if playing a game with the sun.
10.山顶高处,那棵孤松虽饱受四面八方来的风的侵袭、身处恶劣环境,却依旧长得高大挺拔。
High on the mountain peak, the lone pine tree, though _____________________________________ and in harsh conditions, has grown tall and strong.
cast a long shadow across the lawn
exposed to the four winds of heaven
返回首页
二轮专题复习
$