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场景篇 聚焦热考场景,成就满分佳作
热考场景一 亲情友情
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亲情类话题多围绕家庭日常生活展开:既包含亲人之间的互助与关爱,如 2021 年新高考全国卷Ⅰ中 “为妈妈做母亲节早餐” 的主题,便生动传递出家庭成员之间的温情;又可能涉及家人之间的矛盾与冲突,如 2025 年新高考全国卷Ⅰ中“因缺乏沟通导致关系疏远” 的情形;或是孩子想为父母分忧,却因方式不妥、经验不足反而 “帮倒忙” 的情况。友情类故事的脉络则通常是:主人公进入新环境后感到孤单寂寞,在新朋友、新同学的帮助下,通过参与某项活动逐渐融入集体;或是朋友之间因矛盾、误会产生隔阂,经偶然事件的触动或第三方调解,最终消除芥蒂,重归于好。亲情友情类话题蕴含着浓厚的育人价值,契合高考 “育人为本”的考查趋势,因此在备考时学生需重点关注这些热点情境。
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家庭亲情
1.亲情类的有关产生冲突、寻找解决办法、解决冲突的场面描写
*Getting annoyed instantly, he stormed into our room. Then, glaring at us, he questioned who had made such a mess of his flowers.
他随即生气了,冲进我们的房间,瞪着眼睛质问我们,是谁把他的花弄得这么乱。
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*The fault had been mainly on Richard's side but he was too stubborn to admit it.
主要是理查德错了,但他太固执了而没有承认。
*That day, I walked home with my father. The setting sun shone on us,casting our shadows on the road. We talked a lot that day,and it seemed that the journey from home to school had also been shortened. 那天,我和父亲一起步行回家。夕阳照在我们身上,把我们的影子投在路上。那天我们聊了很多,似乎从家到学校的路也变短了。
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2.亲情类相关的动作、神态和情感描写
*Sam sobbed and sprang out of his bed to give me a hug. 山姆抽泣着跳下床来拥抱我。
*Jim discovered there was no disappointment in his father's eyes but only pride and love.
吉姆发现父亲的眼里没有失望,只有骄傲和爱。
*When their mother saw the delicious breakfast,a spark of surprise flashed across her face.
当他们的母亲看到美味的早餐时,她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。
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3.亲情类结尾句
*It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会全心全意地珍惜它。
*Every time I faced challenges,a thought of giving up flashed in my mind,but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战,我的脑海里都会闪过放弃的念头,但是家人的支持给予我继续前进的力量。
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*The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window,together with love between my family, warmed us.
温暖的金色阳光,透过窗户照进来,和家人之间的爱一起,温暖了我们。
*Since then, my father's plain and encouraging words have always echoed in my mind, guiding the way of my life.
从那以后,父亲那句直白而鼓舞人心的话语一直在我的脑海中回响,指引着我的人生道路。
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*Following that,it gradually dawned on me that the love of mother is priceless,which nothing can match. 此后,我逐渐意识到,母亲的爱是无价的,没有什么能比得上。
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友谊情深
1.友谊面临的困境、误会、矛盾心理和弥补办法
*Our friendship is facing a crisis because we can't seem to resolve our differences.
我们的友谊正面临危机,因为我们似乎无法解决彼此之间的分歧。
*I was standing right next to her,but she just ignored me. 我就站在她旁边,但她根本不理我。
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*Suddenly Mary came up, casting me an angry and disappointed look.
突然玛丽走近,向我投来愤怒和失望的目光。
*I could only apologize for my ignoring him and hope that I could make it up by helping him with his studies. 我只能为我忽视他而道歉,并希望我能通过帮助他学习来弥补。
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2.友谊带来的改变
*She felt lonely and hopeless until I approached her warmly. From then on we two often learned together and shared happiness and sorrow.
她感到孤独和绝望,直到我热情地走近她。从那时起我们两个经常一起学习,分享快乐和悲伤。
*It was her company and encouragement that not only made me happy,but also boosted my confidence.
正是她的陪伴和鼓励不仅让我开心还增强了我的自信。
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3.友情类结尾句
*I nodded firmly, knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts.
我坚定地点了点头,深知善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。
*There's just one sure delight—friendship—like sunrise, warm and bright.
只有一种确定的快乐,那就是友谊,就像日出一样温暖而明亮。
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*It was on that very day that Tom made his first friend in the new school,and he truly appreciated the value of sincerity and honesty.
就在那一天,汤姆在新学校结识了他的第一个朋友,他真正体会到了真诚和诚实的价值。
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阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·武汉调研)I hurried into Lehman's grocery store. I was there to buy my grandmother's hearing aid batteries. More importantly, this was my chance to visit the love of my life—Artie.
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I ran to the shelf he was on, and there he was, right where I last saw him: a grey little guy with a large mouth that fit perfectly over my shoulder as I hugged him tightly. I adored that stuffed dolphin. As I held Artie, Mrs. Lehman, who had always been kind to me, passed by and smiled knowingly, “Hugging that dolphin again, huh?”
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But my brother, Rick, noticed I took a long time in Lehman's, saying, “You are a thirteen-year-old girl now. You are supposed to be quicker. Next time, I will go with you.” Oh great! My brother, Rick. He always laughed at me.
But I wouldn't give up. So, as we walked into the store, I suggested to Rick that he get the batteries, since he was older. Then I headed towards Artie. There he was, awaiting me. I grabbed him and hugged him tightly. Just then, I heard Rick saying, “What in the world are you doing?”
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“This is Artie,” I said. “I hug him every single time I come here. I can't afford it so I hope he doesn't get sold because I just love this little guy.” The look on Rick's face was unreadable, but I knew deep down that he wasn't going to make fun of me. In fact, a few times when he accompanied me to Lehman's, he said, “Go on and hug your dolphin, if it's still there.”
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One day, Rick was not home, so I went to Lehman's alone. I went straight to Artie's shelf. But he was gone. I searched every shelf but couldn't find him. Suddenly, a voice from the counter interrupted my search.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
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It was Mrs. Lehman herself.________________________________
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To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed.__________________
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[写作思路]
Step 1 故事梗概
情节线 开端:作者去莱曼(Lehman)夫人的杂货店为祖母买助听器电池,借机看望心爱的毛绒海豚阿蒂(Artie)→发展:哥哥瑞克(Rick)发现作者在店里待很久,决定陪作者一起去杂货店,在那里作者向他介绍了阿蒂→高潮:一天,瑞克不在家,作者独自去了杂货店,发现阿蒂不见了→结局:?
情感线 喜爱→无奈→失落→?
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Step 2 续写思路
(1)Para.1:It was Mrs. Lehman herself.
是莱曼夫人本人。
→Q1:关于阿蒂的去向,莱曼夫人说了什么?Q2:作者听到莱曼夫人的话后有什么反应?
→续写第一段应描写莱曼夫人告知作者阿蒂的情况及作者由此产生的强烈情感反应与表现展开。
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(2)Para.2:To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed.
令我惊讶的是,我发现床上有个盒子。
→Q1:盒子里是什么?和阿蒂有关吗?Q2:作者看到盒子里的东西后心情如何,有什么举动?
→续写第二段应描写作者打开盒子后的场景,细腻描绘其心情变化与行为反应,进而巧妙升华文章关于珍视、爱与温暖的主题。
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One possible version:
It was Mrs. Lehman herself. She spoke gently, “I guess you are looking for the stuffed dolphin. I'm sorry, but it was sold earlier today.” My heart dropped. I stood frozen for a moment, unable to process her words. I had hoped so much that he would still be there, waiting for me. Slowly, I walked back home, trying hard to hold back the tears. When I got in, I was unable to contain my disappointment and sadness any longer. I rushed into my room with tears rolling down my cheeks.
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To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed. Out of curiosity, I opened it. Amazingly, inside was Artie! I hugged it in disbelief, its mouth again resting perfectly over my shoulder. The familiar dolphin was in my hands again. At this moment, I heard Rick's voice from the doorway. “I couldn't let him slip away,” he said, grinning. “So, I bought Artie for you.” A wave of warmth washed over me as I realized what he had done. In his own quiet way, my dear brother had given me the greatest gift.
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