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专题强化训练34
读后续写(六) 人与动物
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Writing 1
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·合肥高三质检)On a bitterly cold January morning in Alexandria, Minnesota, the temperatures had dropped dangerously below freezing point, and biting winds made conditions even worse. Overnight, a thick blanket of snow had quietly covered the town, streets were deserted, and a sharp silence hung in the air. People stayed indoors, enjoying hot drinks and keeping their fireplaces burning brightly, cautious about the bitter cold that threatened frostbite and hypothermia (低体温).
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The town was quiet as people remained indoors. However, Eleanor, an 83-year-old lady who lived alone, worried the birds would go hungry in this freezing weather. As she struggled through deep snow, her boots had suddenly slipped on hidden ice beneath, causing her to fall. Unable to rise with wet gloves and numb (麻木的) fingers, she had been stuck in the snow. Unfortunately, she could turn to nobody for help.
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Originally, Eric Nelson had no intention of stepping outside that morning. He stood at his kitchen window, briefly observing the frozen landscape and rubbing (搓) his hands together to stay warm. However, as he thought about the possibility of frozen water pipes—an inconvenience that could make the already unbearable cold worse—he decided to step out quickly and inspect them.
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As Eric opened his front door, an icy wind struck his face, nearly taking his breath away. To his surprise, he noticed his elderly neighbor Eleanor's small dog, Maya, was already standing anxiously on his doorstep, shaking slightly but barking insistently. She moved her feet anxiously as her breath formed small white clouds in the cold air. Snow stuck to her fur, suggesting she had been outside for longer than was safe in such extreme temperatures.
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Eric instantly sensed something was seriously wrong. Eleanor rarely went outside, especially in such extreme weather. Feeling increasingly uneasy, he quickly followed the anxious dog as she dashed urgently toward Eleanor's backyard. When he arrived, his heart sank. Eleanor lay helplessly on the snow-covered ground near a bird feeder, pale-faced and shaking uncontrollably.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
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Without hesitation, Eric rushed to Eleanor.___________________
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Two days later, Eleanor knocked on Eric's door after being released from the hospital._____________________________________________
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[写作思路]
Step 1 故事梗概
情节线 开端:极寒天气下,小镇被大雪覆盖,埃莉诺担心鸟儿们挨饿外出查看,途中摔倒被困雪地→发展:埃里克原本不想出门,但因担心水管冻结外出检查,发现埃莉诺的狗玛雅在门口焦急求救→高潮:埃里克跟随玛雅来到埃莉诺家后院,发现埃莉诺倒在雪地中,情况危急→结局:?
情感线 埃莉诺的情感变化:孤独但善良→无助、痛苦→?
埃里克的情感变化:责任心强→警觉和担忧→?
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Step 2 续写思路
(1)Para.1:Without hesitation, Eric rushed to Eleanor.埃里克毫不犹豫地冲向埃莉诺。
→Q1:埃里克是怎样救助埃莉诺的?Q2:埃莉诺是否安然无恙?
→续写第一段应描写埃里克对埃莉诺的救助及埃莉诺被送往医院救治,脱离险境。
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(2)Para.2:Two days later, Eleanor knocked on Eric's door after being released from the hospital.两天后,埃莉诺从医院回来,敲响了埃里克的门。
→Q1:埃莉诺去埃里克家做什么?Q2:埃里克是怎样回应的?
→续写第二段应描写埃莉诺对埃里克的感谢, 可以采用心理、动作和语言描写等。
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One possible version:
Without hesitation,Eric rushed to Eleanor. Kneeling beside her, he swiftly removed his thick coat, wrapping the shivering elderly lady like a protective shield. Noticing her pale complexion, he dialed emergency services without a second's delay, while rubbing her hands gently in a bid to restore her circulation. “Hold on, Eleanor! Help is approaching!” he urged her on, in a firm tone despite the swirling anxiety within. Within minutes, the ambulance arrived, and he accompanied her to the hospital. Hours later, relief washed over him when he was told Eleanor was safe and sound.
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Two days later, Eleanor knocked on Eric's door after being released from the hospital. Behind her was Maya, the dog whose tail wagged wildly with excitement. “Thanks, Eric. Without you, I wouldn't be here,” Eleanor said, her eyes brimming with heartfelt gratitude. “Maya led you to me—she's my little savior, and so are you.” Eric invited her in with a smile on his face, and after some tea, Eleanor revealed she had been feeding birds for years, unable to bear their suffering in winter. Touched, Eric offered to assist her in the future. From that day on, their bond grew stronger, united by mutual kindness and the unexpected companionship formed on a freezing morning.
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Writing 2
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·长沙新高考适应性考试)It was New Year's Day. I made a resolution to find my stray (走失的) dog, Puppy-Rocky. In the morning, I could hear icy rain knocking the windows. I said a quick prayer for Puppy-Rocky. He was out there somewhere in the storm, and I could just feel it. Sure, it had been three months since he'd gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles (奇迹).
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That fall, Puppy-Rocky, my sweet dog, had disappeared from my parents' house in California. He had been staying with them while I was between apartments. At the time, I lived and worked in New York City. I was staying with friends until I signed my lease (租约) on a new place. Puppy-Rocky had gotten out of my parents' house two days before I was set to fly back home to pick him up.
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My mom and I spent that entire visit searching for him. Mom was the family's resident “realist”, which meant she spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. “He's either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found him,” she said. I rolled my eyes. Mom always supported me, but this time she doubted. She could have done with a little more faith!
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Besides, though I couldn't explain it, I believed I'd see my Puppy-Rocky again. His barks never faded away. He'd been homeless when I first met him, a naughty little dog that had survived all on his own. If any dog could do the impossible, it was my Puppy-Rocky. Even after I returned to New York City without him and the weeks stretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we'd be reunited.
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Now, home again for the holidays, I was determined to pick up my search. I grabbed Puppy-Rocky's carrier, loaded it into the car, and then asked my mom to drive me to the shelter for the homeless dogs, hoping he'd been found.
“Dave, you have to be realistic,” my mom said as we headed to the garage. “He's been gone too long. You're not going to find him.”
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
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“Don't you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked.
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When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears. __________________________________________
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[写作思路]
Step 1 故事梗概
情节线 开端:元旦当天,“我”决定找回“我”在加州已经走失3个月的狗Puppy-Rocky→发展:“我”的妈妈已经失去了信心→高潮:“我”有坚定的信心,认为“我”和Puppy-Rocky 会团聚→结局:?
情感线 “我”意志坚定、满怀希望→妈妈信心不足→?
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Step 2 续写思路
(1)Para.1:“Don't you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked.
“难道你不相信新年奇迹吗?”我问道。
→Q1:妈妈听到“我”的话之后会有什么反应,会说什么?Q2:“我们”去了动物救助站之后是如何寻找的,有什么发现吗,感受如何?
→结合第二段段首句可知,续写第一段应描写妈妈对“我”的回应,以及“我们”在动物救助站最后一个房间之前寻找时所做的努力及心理感受。
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(2)Para.2:When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears.当“我”走进动物救助站的最后一个房间时,“我”听到了熟悉的叫声。
→Q1:“我”听到Puppy-Rocky的叫声时的反应?Q2:Puppy-Rocky是什么状态和反应?Q3:“我们”对奇迹的再次理解。
→续写第二段应描写“我”找到Puppy-Rocky时的激动心情,并呼应原文中反复提到的对奇迹的相信,以及妈妈经过此事之后对奇迹的看法。
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One possible version:
“Don't you believe in New Year miracles?” I asked. Rolling the eyes, Mom climbed into the driver's seat, mumbling to herself,“There's just no way. You're not going to find him. Be realistic.” “Mom! It's my Puppy-Rocky! Promise! I'm sure I will see him again!!!” I kept yelling on the way to the shelter. Upon arriving there, we walked through rows of cages from room to room. I carefully examined dogs of all colors, shapes and sizes. None! All our efforts were in vain. Hopeless as it might be, I went on searching, followed by my mom, who had been trying to prepare me for the worst.
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When I stepped into the last room of the shelter, a familiar bark came into my ears. Following the sound, I spotted a little dog wagging the tail towards me. It was him? I double-checked it... Exactly, my Puppy-Rocky! It was bonier than ever before. Excited tears welling up, I immediately opened the cage door. He jumped into my arms as usual. I held him closely as Mom looked on, mouth wide open. It was indeed the season for miracles: three months after separation, we reunited. Puppy-Rocky's return did let me, and especially my mom, firmly believe: we can do with more faith!
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