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专题强化训练30　 读后续写(二)　助人为乐 1 Writing 1 　　阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　(2025·石家庄质量检测)Ms. Carter's classroom was always warm, even in winter. The walls were covered with student essays and faded world maps. 14-year-old Jamie sat in the back row, his head hanging low and eyes fixed on his worn shoes. He hadn't turned in his assignments for several days. 专题强化训练 　　“Stay after class, Jamie，” Ms. Carter said softly one December afternoon. Her voice wasn't angry—just worried. “I know you're capable，” she said, sliding his blank notebook across the desk. “But you've missed every deadline. Is there anything wrong？” 　　Jamie, struggling with something he couldn't express, held back his words and remained silent. Outside, raindrops tapped the windows like impatient fingers. 专题强化训练 　　The next day, Ms. Carter drove to Jamie's home after school. As she knocked on a half-open door, she heard a child's cry. Jamie answered her knock. He was so surprised to see Ms. Carter, his face red with panic. A baby girl was on his back, and an oxygen machine hummed (发嗡嗡声) beside a sofa where a weak woman slept. 专题强化训练 　　“My mom...she has pneumonia(肺炎)，” Jamie explained in a low voice, blocking the doorway. “I have to take care of my sister after school. The day care centre kicked her out last month because Mom missed payments. You see, she can't go to work now.” 　　Ms. Carter's throat tightened. She noticed the microwave meals piled on the table. A photo on the fridge showed Jamie wearing a big smile, his mother's arms around him—a lifetime ago. 　　“Why don't you tell me？” 专题强化训练 　　“You'd think I'm lying，” he said, voice shaking. “But...I'll catch up on my study, I promise.” 　　That evening, after returning home, Ms. Carter contacted a charity organization in the town and explained the family's difficult situation. The organization readily promised to help Jamie and his family. The next day, the head of the organization came to the school with funds in an envelope, which were enough to cover the expenses of day care for at least one month. 专题强化训练 　　注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 　　Ms. Carter called Jamie to the office._________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 　　After school, Jamie got home and handed the envelope to his mom. __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 专题强化训练 [写作思路] Step 1　故事梗概 　　情节线　开端：14岁的杰米已经好几天没有交作业了，面对卡特老师的关心，杰米藏着心事却无法开口，于是保持沉默→发展：卡特老师开车去杰米家，发现他妈妈得了肺炎，他妹妹需要他照顾→高潮：卡特老师联系了一个慈善组织，帮助杰米得到了足够的资金来支付至少一个月的日托费用→结局：？ 　　情感线　杰米尴尬、沉默；卡特老师担心→杰米震惊→卡特老师同情、关心→？ 专题强化训练 Step 2　续写思路 (1)Para.1：Ms. Carter called Jamie to the office.卡特老师把杰米叫到了办公室。 →Q1：卡特老师如何告知杰米资助金的事情？ Q2：杰米得知真相时的反应和感想如何？ →续写第一段应描写杰米得知真相时的反应和感想，本段可描述一些对话，但对话不宜过多，注重全方位描写杰米的反应，如面部描写和手部描写等。 专题强化训练 (2)Para.2：After school, Jamie got home and handed the envelope to his mom. 放学后，杰米回到家，把信封递给了他的妈妈。 →Q1：杰米的妈妈看到这笔钱后有什么反应？Q2：杰米一家的情况在这笔钱的帮助下有什么转变？ →续写第二段应描写这笔钱给杰米一家带来的帮助，但重点应落在杰米的学业改善上，同时本段可以呼应原文第一句 “Ms. Carter's classroom was always warm, even in winter.”，且升华主旨。 专题强化训练 One possible version： 　　Ms. Carter called Jamie to the office. Sunlight shone on the envelope as Ms. Carter pushed it toward Jamie. “This will settle the problem，” she said, her eyes reflecting the concern for the young boy and his family. Jamie's fingertips brushed the seal, where the charity's name shone. His throat tightened, eyes clouding with tears. “Thank you, Ms. Carter. I didn't expect...” Ms. Carter patted Jamie on the shoulder and smiled, “I believe you and your family will get through this soon.” Biting his lips, Jamie nodded. 专题强化训练 　　After school, Jamie got home and handed the envelope to his mom. The envelope felt so heavy in Mom's trembling hands. “They're really kind.” Mom's whisper melted all the messes in the house. The money meant so much to them. With the medicine bought and the baby taken care of, Jamie's mom was recovering day by day. That night, Jamie's pencil moved freely across homework for the first time in weeks, its shadow dancing alongside Mom's steady breathing on the monitor. When Jamie finally handed his homework to Ms. Carter, the classroom hummed with life, no longer just warmth, but also light. 专题强化训练 Writing 2 　　阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　(2025·石家庄毕业班质检)The July sun was burning over Oakwood Avenue. Twelve-year-old Mia felt sweat dropping down her back as she arranged the freshly made lemonade (柠檬水) on her folding table. She'd made the chalk drawings that morning: pink hearts and blue skateboards. Her big poster swung desperately in the hot wind: Lemonade 50 cents—Save for Skateboard! 专题强化训练 　　“Business slow, eh？” Mr.Rossi's voice carried flour-dusted kindness from his grocery store doorway. And the smell of freshly baked bread followed him. Mia nodded, smoothing seven sweaty coins on the table. 　　As they were talking, a silver car stopped by. A businessman in a nice suit stepped out, a phone glued to his ear. “I said I would be there soon！” He seemed to be in a hurry. Grabbing a bottle of lemonade, he put a $20 bill onto the table. “Keep the change！” 专题强化训练 　　Mia was surprised. “No, sir. But...” Hurriedly, she counted out $19.50. “Here's your change, sir.” 　　“Keep it. Consider it a tip，” the businessman said with a gentle smile. 　　“No, I can't. The lemonade's fifty cents，” Mia insisted. The car door was closed, with only tire (轮胎) marks left on the dirt road. 　　Mia stared at the bill. Twenty dollars. Enough for skateboard wheels! Her fingers brushed through the cash box. 专题强化训练 　　“Wow, good luck，” Mr. Rossi said and went back to his grocery store. 　　“But my mom used to say, money weighs heavy in dishonest pockets，” Mia whispered. As she was about to put away the money, she spotted something under the maple tree—a black leather wallet sticking out through dead leaves. 专题强化训练 　　Mia's fingers shook as she opened it. Credit cards. A driver's license. And a hundred-dollar bill. Her skateboard fund screamed in her ears, but Mom's voice shouted louder. Mia could feel the wallet was heavy and realized the owner would be very worried. 　　Without any hesitation, Mia went to Mr. Rossi for help. Looking through the contents of the wallet, Mr. Rossi said the owner would surely return and look for it. So maybe the best choice was to wait. 　　注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 专题强化训练 　　Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 　　The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 专题强化训练 [写作思路] Step 1　故事梗概 　　情节线　开端：炎炎 7 月，12 岁的米娅在路边支摊，想通过卖 50 美分一杯的柠檬水来攒钱买一个滑板，旁边的杂货店老板罗西先生和她闲谈着→发展：一位西装革履的商人从汽车上下来买了一杯柠檬水，他给了米娅20美元，示意她无需找零便离开了。米娅想起妈妈的教诲，陷入了纠结，她不安心收对方那么多钱。正在此时，她发现了一个黑色钱包→高潮：米娅去找罗西先生商量对策，罗西先生让米娅等着失主来找钱包→结局：？ 　　情感线　充满热情→生意不好的忧心→开心、惊讶→内心纠结不安→焦急→？ 专题强化训练 Step 2　续写思路 (1)Para.1: Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. 米娅在她的柠檬水摊前等到了天黑。 →Q1：此时，街上的情形如何？米娅的心情如何？ Q2：那位商人到来的时候是什么状态？ Q3: 那位商人找回自己钱包后有什么感受？ 他会做什么事情？ →续写第一段应描写那位商人到来之后米娅和他的交流，可展现商人由担忧到宽慰再到感激的变化。根据续写第二段段首句可知，本段结尾应该引到买滑板上。 专题强化训练 (2)Para.2: The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. 那位商人承诺给米娅买一个滑板。 →Q1：米娅对此会做出怎样的回应？ Q2：那位商人会做什么？ Q3：米娅最后有什么样的感受？ →根据文中对米娅的描写可知，米娅是一个自食其力、诚实正直、拾金不昧的孩子。由此可推知，米娅应该会拒绝那位商人的提议。因此，续写第二段应描写米娅的拒绝和商人对此的反应，以及米娅的收获。 专题强化训练 One possible version： 　　Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. The street quieted down, and most neighbors had already gone inside. Just as Mia began to pack up, headlights lit the road. The silver car returned, and the businessman came out, his expression filled with concern. When Mia handed him the wallet, his shoulders relaxed and a thankful smile spread across his face. He glanced inside, and was clearly relieved because everything was still there.He insisted on giving the hundred-dollar bill to Mia. But Mia refused，saying, “My mom used to say, we should not ask for a reward for our kindness.” Just then, the businessman noticed the poster，“Lemonade 50 cents—Save for Skateboard！” 专题强化训练 　　The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. However, Mia hesitated for a moment and then politely declined. She explained that saving up for it by herself made the goal more meaningful. Instead, she offered him another bottle of lemonade—this time chilled with extra ice. The man smiled and paid the proper amount before driving off. As Mia packed up her stand, she felt a quiet pride settle in her heart. Though she hadn't reached her goal yet, she knew she was on the right path. 专题强化训练 $