Unit 7 知识点-Writing 写作讲义 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

七年级英语下册Unit7知识点-Writing写作讲义 Writing an article about someone you admire most （写一篇关于你最钦佩的人的文章） 一、写作任务分析 学校网站正在征集关于你钦佩的人的文章。你最钦佩谁？为什么钦佩他/她？写一篇文章发给我们。 写作要点： - 选择你要写的人物（可以是科学家、医生、老师、家人等） - 介绍这个人做了什么（成就、贡献） - 说明你为什么钦佩他/她（原因） - 使用本单元学到的词汇和表达 二、范文学习 Gu Fangzhou — People's Scientist Gu Fangzhou was a great Chinese scientist. He was born in 1926. He worked very hard to help children. In the past, many children got a serious disease called polio. It made them unable to walk. Gu Fangzhou wanted to stop this disease. He and his team worked day and night. Finally, they developed a "sugar pill" to stop children from getting polio. This medicine was easy to take and helped millions of children. I admire Gu Fangzhou because he saved many children's lives. He worked hard and never gave up. He is a real hero in my heart. Nan Rendong — Role Model of the Times Nan Rendong was a famous Chinese astronomer. He was the chief engineer of the FAST project, the world's largest radio telescope. Nan Rendong spent more than 20 years building FAST. He chose the right place in Guizhou and solved many difficult problems. He worked very hard and never thought about himself. Even when he was sick, he still worked on the project. Because of him, China now has the best telescope in the world. I admire Nan Rendong because he dedicated his life to science. He shows us that if we work hard, we can achieve great things. He is my role model. 三、范文解析 1. 文章结构分析 部分 内容 作用 开头 介绍人物基本信息 让读者知道这个人是谁 中间 描述人物的成就和贡献 说明这个人做了什么了不起的事 结尾 表达钦佩的原因 说出为什么钦佩这个人 2. 常用句型 介绍人物 ... was a great ... / ... is a famous ... 介绍出生 He/She was born in ... 描述背景 In the past, ... / At that time, ... 描述努力 He/She worked very hard / worked day and night 描述成就 He/She developed / invented / created ... 描述结果 This helped millions of people 表达钦佩 I admire ... because ... 表达感受 He/She is a real hero / my role model 四、写作词汇库 1. 描述人物的词 scientist 科学家 doctor 医生 teacher 老师 engineer 工程师 astronomer 天文学家 hero 英雄 role model 榜样 great 伟大的 famous 著名的 hard-working 勤奋的 dedicated 奉献的 selfless 无私的 2. 描述成就的动词 develop 研发 invent 发明 create 创造 discover 发现 build 建造 save 挽救 help 帮助 stop 阻止 protect 保护 3. 描述努力和坚持的词 work hard 努力工作 work day and night 日夜工作 never give up 永不放弃 spend time on 花时间在 solve problems 解决问题 overcome difficulties 克服困难 4. 表达钦佩的句型 I admire ... because ... 我钦佩……因为…… He/She is a real hero. 他/她是个真正的英雄。 He/She is my role model. 他/她是我的榜样。 I want to be like him/her. 我想成为他/她那样的人。 He/She inspires me to ... 他/她激励我去…… 五、写作框架 标题： [人名] — [称号/描述] 开头段：介绍人物 - [人名] was/is a great [职业]. - He/She was born in [年份]. 中间段：描述成就 - [描述背景问题或情况] - He/She worked hard to [做什么]. - Finally, he/she [取得的成就]. - This helped/saved [多少人/影响]. 结尾段：表达钦佩 - I admire [人名] because [原因]. - He/She is my role model / a real hero. 六、写作练习 Step 1: Plan（计划） 用思维列表组织你的信息： The person I admire most _____________ Who he/she is _____________ What he/she did _____________ What he/she achieved _____________ The reason(s) I admire him/her _____________ Step 2: Write（写作） 根据你的计划，写一篇关于你最钦佩的人的文章。 标题： ________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ Step 3: Check and revise（检查与修改） 完成写作后，用下面的清单检查你的文章： 检查项目 是否完成 我介绍了这个人的基本信息 □ 我描述了这个人的成就 □ 我表达了我钦佩的原因 □ 我用了本单元学到的单词和表达 □ 我使用了正确的拼写、语法和标点符号 □ 八、范文参考 Yuan Longping — Father of Hybrid Rice Yuan Longping was a great Chinese scientist. He was born in 1930. He is called the "Father of Hybrid Rice". In the past, many people in China did not have enough food to eat. Yuan Longping wanted to solve this problem. He worked very hard for many years. Finally, he developed hybrid rice. This kind of rice grows faster and produces more food. It helped feed millions of people in China and around the world. I admire Yuan Longping because he helped so many people. He worked hard and never gave up. He is a real hero in my heart. My Mother — My Hero My mother is the person I admire most. She is a teacher and works very hard every day. Every morning, she gets up early to cook breakfast for me. She helps me with my homework and gives me advice when I have problems. At school, she teaches her students with love and patience. Many of her students become successful because of her help. I admire my mother because she is kind, hard-working, and always puts others first. She is my role model. I want to be like her when I grow up. Zhong Nanshan — A Great Doctor Zhong Nanshan is a famous Chinese doctor. He was born in 1936. He helped many people during the COVID-19 pandemic. When the virus broke out, Zhong Nanshan went to Wuhan to help. He worked day and night to find ways to stop the virus. He told people how to stay safe and protect themselves. Because of his hard work, many lives were saved. I admire Zhong Nanshan because he is brave and selfless. He shows us what a real hero looks like. I hope to be as helpful as him one day. 教师版（含答案） 一、写作指导要点 - 文章要有清晰的结构：开头介绍人物，中间描述成就，结尾表达钦佩 - 使用具体的例子和细节让人物更生动 - 使用形容词和副词描述人物的品质 - 表达钦佩时要给出具体原因 二、范文解析要点 Gu Fangzhou 科学家 研发糖丸疫苗，阻止小儿麻痹症 挽救孩子生命，努力工作 Nan Rendong 天文学家 建造FAST望远镜 奉献科学，克服困难 三、写作练习（参考范文） My Grandfather — A Kind Doctor My grandfather is the person I admire most. He was a doctor and worked in a small town. Every day, he helped sick people. He worked very hard and never said no to anyone. Sometimes, poor people couldn't pay him, but he still helped them. He said, "Helping others is more important than money." I admire my grandfather because he is kind and selfless. He taught me to help others. He is my hero. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $