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七年级英语下册Unit5知识点-Writing写作讲义
Writing water-saving tips(写节水小贴士)
一、写作任务分析
世界各地许多地方缺乏足够的清洁饮用水。水是宝贵的,我们应该明智地使用它。如何节约用水?请分享你的想法!
写作要点:
- 介绍节水的重要性
- 针对不同场景(浴室、厨房、公共场所等)提出节水建议
- 使用清晰的逻辑结构
- 使用本单元学到的词汇和表达
二、常用短语和句型
1. 引入话题的句子
We all need water in our daily lives. 我们日常生活中都需要水。
Water is precious. 水是宝贵的。
We should not waste water. 我们不应该浪费水。
There are many ways to save water. 有很多节约用水的方法。
We can make a big difference if we start today! 如果我们今天开始,就能产生很大的影响!
2. 提出建议的句型
We should ... 我们应该……
We can ... 我们可以……
Remember to ... 记得要……
Don't forget to ... 不要忘记……
It's a good idea to ... ……是个好主意。
Try to ... 尽量……
3. 浴室节水建议
Take shorter showers. 洗短一点的澡。
Turn off the tap when brushing your teeth. 刷牙时关掉水龙头。
Don't let the water run while washing your face. 洗脸时不要让水一直流。
Fix dripping taps. 修理滴水的水龙头。
4. 厨房节水建议
Wash vegetables in a bowl instead of under running water. 用碗洗菜,不要用流水洗。
Reuse water to water plants. 重复用水来浇植物。
Only run the dishwasher when it's full. 洗碗机满了再开。
Don't use too much water to cook. 做饭不要用太多水。
5. 公共场所节水建议
Report dripping taps to the teacher or worker. 向老师或工作人员报告滴水的水龙头。
Use water wisely at school. 在学校明智地用水。
Don't play with water. 不要玩水。
Put up water-saving signs. 张贴节水标志。
6. 洗衣节水建议
Wash clothes only when you have a full load. 衣服攒够了再洗。
Use the right amount of water for the washing machine. 洗衣机用适量的水。
Hand wash small items. 小件物品手洗。
三、写作框架
标题: Water-saving Tips / How to Save Water
开头段:引入话题
- We all need water in our daily lives, so we should not waste it.
- Water is precious. There are many ways to save water.
- We can make a big difference if we start today!
中间段:按场景提出建议
In the bathroom:
- First, take shorter showers. Don't stay in the shower too long.
- Second, turn off the tap when you are brushing your teeth.
- Also, fix dripping taps. A dripping tap can waste a lot of water.
In the kitchen:
- When washing vegetables, use a bowl instead of running water.
- You can reuse the water to water your plants.
- Only run the dishwasher when it's full.
In public places:
- If you see a dripping tap, report it to the teacher or worker.
- Don't play with water at school.
- Put up signs to remind people to save water.
结尾段:呼吁行动
- Saving water is easy if we try.
- Let's start today and make our world better!
四、写作词汇库
save water 节约用水
waste water 浪费水
tap 水龙头
drip 滴水
fix 修理
report 报告
shower 淋浴
brush teeth 刷牙
turn off 关掉
running water 流水
reuse 重复使用
water plants 浇植物
dishwasher 洗碗机
full load 满载
hand wash 手洗
sign 标志
remind 提醒
五、写作练习
Step 1: Plan(计划)
用思维导图组织你的节水建议:
场景 建议1 建议2 建议3
In the bathroom _____________ _____________ _____________
In the kitchen _____________ _____________ _____________
In public places _____________ _____________ _____________
When washing clothes _____________ _____________ _____________
Step 2: Write(写作)
根据你的计划,写一篇关于节水小贴士的文章。给文章起一个标题。
标题: ________________________________
We all need water in our daily lives, so we should not waste it. There are many ways to save water. We can make a big difference if we start today!
In the bathroom:
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
In the kitchen:
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
In public places:
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
When washing clothes:
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
Let's save water together!
Step 3: Check and revise(检查与修改)
完成写作后,用下面的清单检查你的文章:
检查项目
是否完成
我提供了不同场景的节水建议(如浴室、厨房等)
□
我的信息呈现清晰、逻辑合理
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我用了本单元学到的单词和表达
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我使用了正确的拼写、语法和标点符号
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七、范文参考
Water-saving Tips
We all need water in our daily lives, so we should not waste it. Water is precious. There are many ways to save water. We can make a big difference if we start today!
In the bathroom:
First, take shorter showers. Don't stay in the shower too long. Second, turn off the tap when you are brushing your teeth. Also, fix dripping taps. A dripping tap can waste a lot of water.
In the kitchen:
When washing vegetables, use a bowl instead of running water. You can reuse the water to water your plants. Only run the dishwasher when it's full.
In public places:
If you see a dripping tap, report it to the teacher. Don't play with water at school. Put up signs to remind people to save water.
When washing clothes:
Wash clothes only when you have a full load. Use the right amount of water for the washing machine. Hand wash small items.
Saving water is easy if we try. Let's start today!
How to Save Water
We use water every day, but sometimes we waste it. Here are some tips to save water.
In the bathroom:
- Take shorter showers.
- Turn off the tap when brushing your teeth.
- Fix dripping taps.
In the kitchen:
- Wash vegetables in a bowl.
- Reuse water to water plants.
- Don't use too much water to cook.
At school:
- Report dripping taps to the teacher.
- Don't play with water.
- Use water wisely.
If everyone saves a little water, we can save a lot. Let's save water together!
教师版(含答案)
一、写作指导要点
- 文章要有开头、中间、结尾的结构
- 按场景分类提出建议(浴室、厨房、公共场所等)
- 使用祈使句或 should/can 提出建议
- 结尾呼吁行动
二、范文解析
开头段: 引入话题,说明节水的重要性
中间段: 按场景分类提出具体建议
结尾段: 呼吁大家一起行动
常用句型:
- We should / can ...
- Don't forget to ...
- It's a good idea to ...
- If you see ... , report it.
三、写作练习(参考范文)
Save Water, Save the World
We all need water in our daily lives, so we should not waste it. Here are some easy ways to save water.
In the bathroom:
Take shorter showers. Turn off the tap when you brush your teeth. Fix dripping taps.
In the kitchen:
Wash vegetables in a bowl. Reuse the water to water plants. Only run the dishwasher when it's full.
At school:
If you see a dripping tap, tell a teacher. Don't play with water. Use water wisely.
When washing clothes:
Wash clothes only when you have a full load. Hand wash small items.
Let's save water together!
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