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Unit 3 Feelings and emotions
⭐ Writing知识点清单
一、高频核心单词
英文单词
中文释义
例句
emotional
情绪的;易激动的
I am too emotional.
upset
使心烦;使苦恼
It upset me a lot.
refuse
拒绝
I refused to talk to her.
overreact
反应过激
I came to realise I overreacted.
explain
解释
She explained what had happened.
project
项目
They went to the museum to do a project.
solve
解决
The best way to solve it is to talk to them.
helpful
有帮助的
Being too emotional is not helpful.
perfect
完美的
I’m not perfect!
grade
成绩;年级
I study hard and get good grades.
二、固定搭配与短语
· emotional experience 情感经历
· study hard 努力学习
· get good grades 取得好成绩
· feel sad 感到难过
· refuse to do sth. 拒绝做某事
· try to do sth. 尽力做某事
· come to realise 逐渐意识到
· talk to sb. about sth. 与某人谈论某事
· do a project 做一个项目
· reading club 阅读俱乐部
· have a problem with sb. 与某人有矛盾
· the best way to do sth. 做某事的最好方法
· at the end 最后;最终
· for hours/days 数小时 / 数天之久
三、固定句式与句型
1. 介绍自身优缺点
I study hard and get good grades. However, I’m not perfect! I am too emotional.
· 结构:肯定描述 + However + 否定 / 不足描述,用于对比自身优点与缺点。
· 仿写:I work hard and finish tasks on time. However, I’m not patient enough.
2. 描述情绪持续时间
Sometimes, I feel sad for hours or even days.
· 结构:feel + 情绪形容词 + for + 时间段,表达情绪持续的时长。
· 仿写:Sometimes, I feel excited for hours after a good game.
3. 表达强烈情绪
Last week, my best friend Lily visited a museum with Anna, NOT ME! It upset me a lot.
· 结构:事件描述 + 感叹句 / 强调句 + 情绪影响,突出事件带来的情绪冲击。
· 仿写:Yesterday, my brother played my game without asking me! It made me really angry.
4. 反思与解决问题
A few days later, I came to realise I overreacted. So, I talked to Lily about my feelings...
· 结构:时间状语 + 反思句 + So + 解决行动句,体现从意识到问题到采取行动的过程。
· 仿写:After class, I came to realise I was wrong. So, I said sorry to my deskmate.
5. 总结经验教训
Whenever we have a problem with friends, it’s not helpful to be emotional. The best way to solve it is to talk to them.
· 结构:Whenever 引导时间状语从句 + 观点句 + 解决方法句,用于提炼从经历中得到的道理。
· 仿写:Whenever we meet difficulties, it’s not helpful to give up. The best way to overcome them is to keep trying.
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⭐ Writing范文
真题一(侧重朋友矛盾・校园版)
题目: 假如你是李华,你校英语杂志正在征集 “An Essay on an Emotional Experience” 主题短文。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文记录一次与朋友的情绪经历。
写作要点:
1. 点明你的情绪问题(如:容易生气、过于敏感等);
2. 描述一次具体的朋友矛盾事件(起因、你的情绪反应、你如何解决问题);
3. 总结你从这次经历中学到的道理。
要求:
1. 词数:80-100 词;
2. 内容完整,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 必须使用一般过去时描述事件,用一般现在时总结感悟;
4. 结构清晰,符合 “引入情绪问题→描述事件与解决→总结收获” 的框架。
参考范文
An Essay on an Emotional Experience
I’m Li Hua, 14. I study hard, but I’m too quick to get angry. Sometimes, I feel upset for hours over small things.
Last week, my deskmate forgot to return my English book. I felt so angry that I refused to talk to him. Later, he explained he lost it and bought me a new one. I realised I overreacted. I said sorry to him, and we became closer.
I learn that anger is not helpful. The best way to solve problems is to talk and listen to each other.
真题二(侧重本地成长・学习压力版)
题目: 假如你是李华,你的外国笔友 Tom 想了解你的一次成长经历。请你写一篇短文,向他介绍一次你面对学习压力的情绪经历。
写作要点:
1. 点明你的情绪问题(如:害怕考试、容易焦虑等);
2. 描述一次具体的考试压力事件(起因、你的感受、你如何调整情绪);
3. 说明你从这次经历中学到的调节情绪的方法,以及你现在的变化。
要求:
1. 词数:80-100 词;
2. 内容完整,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 必须使用一般过去时描述经历,用一般现在时总结感悟;
4. 可适当加入本地学习场景(如期中 / 期末考试、本地中考压力等)。
参考范文
An Essay on an Emotional Experience
I’m Li Hua, 14. I work hard at my lessons, but I have a problem: I feel too nervous before exams. Sometimes, I can’t sleep well the night before a test.
Last month, we had our mid-term exam in Lanzhou. I felt so worried that I couldn’t focus on my study. My mum noticed this and talked to me. She told me to take a walk and listen to soft music to relax. I followed her advice and felt much better.
I learn that it’s no use being anxious. The best way to face pressure is to relax and prepare well. I’m more confident now.
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