内容正文:
专题09 书面表达
1.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)题目:How to Relax and Stay Healthy
要求:
1. 80词左右
2. 结合 Unit 1 & Unit 2 内容
3. 语句通顺,无语法错误
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【答案】例文:
How to Relax and Stay Healthy
It is very important for us to relax and stay healthy. We can relax by listening to music, taking a walk or reading books. We shouldn’t study all the time. To stay healthy, we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruit. We should do exercise every day. We should sleep early and not stay up late. We should also keep happy every day. If we relax well and have good habits, we will be healthy and study better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,并突出重点,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明放松和保持健康的重要性;
第二步,介绍放松的方式;
第三步,从饮食、运动、作息、心理四个方面提出保持健康的建议;
第四步,总结良好习惯带来的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①relax by listening to music通过听音乐放松
②take a walk散步
③stay up late熬夜
④keep happy保持快乐
[高分句型]
①It is very important for us to relax and stay healthy. (It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.结构)
②If we relax well and have good habits, we will be healthy and study better. (If引导的条件状语从句,and连接的并列谓语)
2.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)以“How to grow up happily”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:紧扣本单元重点,基础难度,语句通顺,语法正确。
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【答案】例文
How to grow up happily
Growing up is not easy, but we can grow up happily. We should learn to deal with our feelings. We can talk with our parents or teachers when we are upset. We should learn to apologize if we are wrong and forgive others. We should be proud of our progress and never give up. We should be friendly and helpful to others.
If we do these, we will grow up happily and healthily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕“如何快乐成长”提出具体建议,注意单词大小写和标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用总起句点明应该快乐成长;
第二步:给出具体的建议;
第三步:总结并鼓励行动。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②be proud of为……感到自豪
give up放弃
[高分句型]
①We can talk with our parents or teachers when we are upset.(时间状语从句)
②If we do these, we will grow up happily and healthily.(条件状语从句)
3.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)秋季天气渐凉,呼吸道疾病感染人群剧增,为了向全校师生普及呼吸道疾病的相关知识,校园英语广播站向同学们征稿。假如你是李华,请你根据下列图示内容写一份英文稿件。
要求: 1. 阐述图示内容,并提出3 ~4点预防建议;2. 80 ~100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
It gets cool these days. More and more people get Autumn Respiratory Disease.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and students,
It gets cool these days. More and more people get Autumn Respiratory Disease.
Children and old people can catch the illness easily. 45% of the people have a sore throat and 35% of them have a cough. 13% of them have a fever. Besides, 7% of the people have breathing problems.
What can we do to prevent it? First, we need to do some exercise, especially for children and the old. Second, it’s necessary for us to drink enough water every day. Third, keep rooms clean and the air fresh all the time. Finally, we must see a doctor at once when we get the illness.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,点明主题;
第二步:详细阐述图示内容,并给出预防建议;
第三步:书写结尾,表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①a sore throat喉咙痛
②the old老年人
③enough water足够的水
④at once马上
[高分句型]
①Second, it’s necessary for us to drink enough water every day.(it作形式主语)
②Finally, we must see a doctor at once when we get the illness.(时间状语从句)
4.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)请以“My Healthy Habits”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述你有哪些健康习惯 (至少三个方面),以及这些习惯给你带来的好处。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
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【答案】例文;
My Healthy Habits
I have some healthy habits that help me stay fit and happy every day.
First, I eat healthy food. I have three meals on time and eat lots of fruit and vegetables. Second, I exercise regularly. I run for 30 minutes every morning and play basketball with friends on weekends. Exercise makes me strong and energetic. Third, I get enough sleep. I go to bed before 10 pm and sleep for about 8 hours every night. This helps me focus better in class.
In short, these healthy habits make me feel good and study well. I will keep them forever because health is the most important thing.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:这是一篇话题作文;
②时态:运用一般现在时;
③提示:围绕“我的健康习惯”展开,需至少介绍三个方面及其好处,考生应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
【写作步骤】
第一步:简要说明自己拥有健康习惯;
第二步:介绍三个健康习惯,并分别说明每个习惯的好处;
第三步:总结习惯带来的整体益处,并表达坚持的决心。
【亮点词汇】
①stay fit保持健康
②regularly有规律地
③energetic精力充沛的
【高分句型】
①I have some healthy habits that help me stay fit and happy every day. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
②I will keep them forever because health is the most important thing. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
5.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)用所学内容向同学介绍你熟悉的自然景观。(词数:50左右)
内容提示:Lushan Waterfall
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【答案】例文
Lushan Waterfall is a famous natural wonder in Jiangxi, China. The water falls from very high mountains, looking like a white dragon flying down. It looks very beautiful in sunlight. The sound of the rushing water is relaxing. Many visitors come to take photos here. It’s a great place to enjoy nature!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点围绕庐山瀑布的位置、形态、视觉与听觉特点展开,考生需涵盖核心信息并适当补充细节,注意语句连贯与卷面整洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍庐山瀑布的基本信息;
第二步,描述瀑布的形态、视觉效果与听觉感受;
第三步,总结其游览价值,点明它是享受自然的好去处。
[亮点词汇]
①natural wonder自然奇观
②hanging from悬挂于
③cool mist凉爽的水雾
④rushing water湍急的水流
⑤enjoy nature享受自然
[高分句型]
①The water falls from very high mountains, looking like a white dragon flying down. (现在分词短语作伴随状语,用比喻手法生动描绘瀑布形态)
6.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假如你是李华,最近有很多人得了流感,请你以“How to Prevent the Flu”为题目,写一篇文章。
提示词: wash hands, do sports, eat healthy food, have enough sleep, go to see a doctor, prevent (预防)
要求: 1. 要点齐全,语言表达准确,可适当补充; 2. 80 ~100 词。
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【答案】例文
How to Prevent the Flu
The flu is very common in winter and people get it easily. What should we do to prevent the flu?
First, we should wash our hands and change clothes often. Second, doing some sports is necessary for us, such as running and cycling on Sundays. They are good ways to make us healthy. Third, it’s important for us to eat healthy food every day. Fourth, we need to have enough sleep. Finally, we’d better go to see a doctor at once when we have the flu. We’ll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor’s advice.
【总体分析】①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕预防流感的方法展开,需包含所有提示词并适当补充内容。
【写作步骤】第一步:说明背景和目的;
第二步:列举具体预防措施;
第三步:总结建议,表达积极展望。
【亮点词汇】①common普遍的
②necessary必要的
③at once立即
【高分句型】①Finally, we’d better go to see a doctor at once when we have the flu.(时间状语从句)
②We’ll get well soon as long as we follow the doctor’s advice.(条件状语从句)
7.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)题目: My Favourite Free-time Activity
提示:
· 你最喜欢的闲暇活动是什么?
· 你通常什么时候做这件事?和谁一起做?
· 为什么喜欢做这件事?它给你带来了什么?
要求: 词数80-100词,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。
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【答案】参考范文:
My Favourite Free-time Activity
My favourite free-time activity is swimming. I usually go swimming with my father on weekends.
I love swimming because it makes me feel like a fish in the water. When I swim, I forget all about my homework. It helps me relax and stay healthy. Last summer, I learned to swim freestyle, and I felt so proud. I even won a small prize in a school swimming contest.
Swimming not only keeps me fit but also gives me confidence. Every time I finish swimming, I feel fresh and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕最喜欢的闲暇活动展开,需说明活动内容、时间、同伴、喜欢的原因及带来的好处。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山说明最喜欢的活动是游泳,并介绍通常进行该活动的时间和同伴。
第二步:阐述喜欢游泳的主要原因。
第三步:总结游泳带来的感受,并表达对其的积极评价。
[亮点词汇]
①free-time activity闲暇活动
②on weekends在周末
③stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①I love swimming because it makes me feel like a fish in the water.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
②Every time I finish swimming, I feel fresh and happy.(运用了Every time引导的时间状语从句)
8.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)你的外国朋友Tom要来中国游玩,你计划带他去桂林游玩,请你写一篇短文介绍桂林,词数100词左右,开头已给出。
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【答案】范文:
Hi Tom! Welcome to China. I’m going to take you to Guilin for a trip.
Guilin, located in southern China, is famous for its amazing natural scenery. You can see green mountains and clear rivers everywhere. When you take a boat trip on the Li River, you will feel like being in a Chinese painting. There are also many strange caves with beautiful stones. Guilin’s rice noodles are very delicious, with a soft texture and rich flavor that locals have enjoyed for centuries. Every year, millions of tourists from home and abroad come to visit this amazing place, taking photos and making wonderful memories.
I’m sure you’ll love this beautiful place!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作话题已给出,适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,承接开头,点明桂林的地理位置和总体印象;
第二步、从自然风光(如漓江、溶洞)和特色美食(如桂林米粉)两方面介绍桂林的魅力;
第三步、表达对此次旅行的期待,传递对桂林的喜爱并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①natural scenery自然风景
②strange奇怪的
③home and abroad国内外
[高分句型]
①Guilin, located in southern China, is famous for its amazing natural scenery.(过去分词作后置定语,使句子结构更简洁)
②When you take a boat trip on the Li River, you will feel like being in a Chinese painting.(时间状语从句,增强画面感)
9.(25-26八年级下·全国·课堂例题)根据4C的健康手册,完成一篇80词左右的短文,介绍保护眼睛的方法。
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【答案】例文
Nowadays students’ eyesight is getting poorer year by year. Many students watch TV, play computer games for a long time or read in poor light.
Do you know how to protect our eyes? First, take a short break after reading or writing for half an hour or so. Second, do more exercise. We should do eye exercises every day, and take part in outdoor activities. Third, keep a balanced diet. Eating more fruit and vegetables is helpful.
Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应围绕保护眼睛的方法展开,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明视力下降的原因;
第二步,具体阐述保护眼睛的方法;
第三步,呼吁大家保护眼睛。
[亮点词汇]
①protect保护
②do eye exercises做眼保健操
③balanced diet均衡饮食
[高分句型]
①Eating more fruit and vegetables is helpful.(动名词短语作主语)
10.(25-26八年级下·湖南·课后作业)每个人都有自己的业余爱好,不同的人有不同的业余爱好,你的业余爱好是什么?请以“My hobbies”为题写一篇英文短文,介绍一下自己的业余爱好。
注意:
1.介绍自己的业余爱好并阐述一下理由;
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;
3.不得使用真实姓名。词数80左右。
My hobbies
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【答案】例文
My hobbies
Different people have different hobbies. Hobbies can help you to develop your interests and keep you happy.
I love reading in my spare time. I often read books before going to bed, because I can hardly fall asleep without reading. I think reading helps me learn a lot. I’m also interested in playing basketball. I play basketball so well that I join in the school team. I often play basketball after school with my friends. It brings me fun and keeps me healthy.
But still we should focus on our own study, we shouldn’t spend too much time on our hobbies.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍自己的业余爱好并阐述一下理由,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点,词数80左右。
【写作步骤】
第一步:表明写作意图。开篇点题,总述不同的人有不同的爱好,以及爱好的好处;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。分别说明爱好阅读和打篮球的理由;
第三步:跳出单纯介绍爱好的框架,加入“爱好与学习平衡”的思考,让文章更有深度,体现了作者的理性思维。
【亮点词汇】
①hardly几乎不
②interested感兴趣的
③focus on专注于
④healthy健康的
【高分句型】
①Hobbies can help you to develop your interests and keep you happy.(运用了“keep + 宾语 + 形容词”的复合宾语结构)
②I play basketball so well that I join in the school team.(运用了so ... that ...引导的结果状语从句)
11.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假设你是学校医务室的医生,近期很多学生因天气变化生病。请你根据以下提示,写一篇关于如何预防疾病的英文宣传稿。提示:
1. 注意保暖,及时增添衣物;
2. 勤洗手,保持卫生;
3. 多喝水,多吃蔬菜水果;
4. 适当锻炼,增强体质;
5. 保证充足睡眠。
要求:
1. 词数 80—100;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】例文:
As the school doctor, I notice many students get sick due to weather changes. Here are tips to stay healthy.
First, keep warm by wearing enough clothes. Second, wash hands often to stay clean. Third, drink more water and eat fruits and vegetables. Also, do exercise regularly to build a strong body. You can play basketball or baseball with your friends. Finally, make sure to have enough sleep.
Following these steps can help you prevent illnesses. Let’s stay healthy together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:以校医身份给出五条预防疾病建议,需涵盖所有提示点,语言简洁有号召力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点明身份和背景,引出健康建议;
第二步,用序数词 (First, Second…) 清晰列出五条建议;
第三步,结尾总结并发出倡议,增强宣传效果。
[亮点词汇]
①prevent illnesses预防疾病
②regularly定期地
③build a strong body增强体质
[高分句型]
①First, keep warm by wearing enough clothes. (祈使句的肯定形式)
②Following these steps can help you prevent illnesses. (动名词短语作主语)
12.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)大堡礁(The Great Barrier Reef)是世界上最大的珊瑚礁群,也是自然界的一大奇迹。请你根据下面的写作要点以“The Great Barrier Reef”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍这一自然奇迹。
Location
Off Australia’s northeast coast
Length and width
About 2,300 kilometres long; up to 161 kilometres wide
Creatures
Corals in different shapes and sea animals
Its role
People get food from it
Its value
Scientists: learn about sea life
Visitors: enjoy nature’s magic
写作要求:
1. 短文应包括表格内容,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 短文不少于80词。
提示词:open-minded思想开放的
The Great Barrier Reef
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【答案】例文
The Great Barrier Reef
The Great Barrier Reef is an amazing natural wonder. It lies off Australia’s northeast coast. It’s about 2, 300 kilometres long and up to 161 kilometres wide.
This special place is home to many creatures. There are many kinds of corals in different shapes and lots of sea animals.
It’s very important. Local people have got food from it for a long time. Scientists study it to learn more about sea life. It also shows nature’s magic and attracts many visitors.
It’s truly a treasure for everyone.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文 ;
②时态:一般现在时 ;
③提示:根据表格信息介绍大堡礁的位置、尺寸、生物、作用和价值,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首句点明大堡礁是世界最大珊瑚礁和自然奇迹。
第二步,按表格顺序介绍其位置、尺寸、生物、作用(提供食物)和价值(对科学家和游客的意义)。
第三步,结尾句呼吁保护,适当发挥。
[亮点词汇]
①coral reef system珊瑚礁系统
②natural wonder自然奇迹
③protect保护
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of corals in different shapes and lots of sea animals.(There be句型)
13.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假设你是李华,最近呼吸道传染病流行,请你根据提示,以“How to prevent the virus”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈我们怎样预防呼吸道传染病毒。
提示:
(1)wash our hands often;
(2)wear masks;
(3)do sports;
(4)eat healthy food and drink more water;
…
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、学校和地名等);
(4)词数:不少于80词(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
How to prevent the virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days. What should we do to prevent it?
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【答案】例文:
How to prevent the virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? Here are some useful tips.
Firstly, we should wash our hands with soap and water often, especially after going outside or before eating. This can kill germs on our hands. Secondly, wearing masks in crowded places like buses or shopping malls is necessary. It helps stop the virus from spreading through the air. Besides, doing sports is important. For example, running, jumping rope, or playing basketball can make our bodies stronger and improve our immunity. Also, eating healthy food like fruit and vegetables, drinking enough water, and avoiding junk food are good ways to stay healthy. Lastly, if we feel sick, we should stay at home and rest.
Let’s follow these steps to protect ourselves and others!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括经常洗手、戴口罩、做运动、吃健康食物和多喝水等,考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。通过引入话题,表达对当前呼吸道传染病流行的关切,并提出如何预防病毒的问题。
第二步:具体阐述预防措施。依照提示信息的要点,逐一介绍预防病毒的方法,包括经常洗手、戴口罩、做运动、吃健康食物和多喝水等。
第三步:书写结语。鼓励大家遵循这些步骤来保护自己和他人,传递积极向上的信息。
[亮点词汇]
①spread through the air通过空气传播
②improve our immunity提高我们的免疫力
③stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①Secondly, wearing masks in crowded places like buses or shopping malls is necessary. (动名词短语作主语)
②Lastly, if we feel sick, we should stay at home and rest. (if引导条件状语从句)
14.(25-26八年级下·辽宁·单元测试)请结合自己的经历,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你曾经遇到过的一个健康问题(如感冒、头痛、胃痛等)。
内容包括:
(1)你遇到了什么健康问题;
(2)这个问题是如何发生的;
(3)你采取了哪些措施来缓解或解决它;
(4)从这次经历中你学到了什么。
注意:
(1)词数80左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
A health problem I once had
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A health problem I once had
Last winter, I caught a bad cold.
It happened after I played outdoors in the rain without a jacket. I had a fever and a sore throat. To feel better, I rested in bed, drank warm water, and took some medicine. My mother also made me ginger tea.
From this, I learned that it’s important to dress properly for the weather and to act quickly when feeling unwell. Now, I always wear a coat when it’s cold or rainy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:需包含遇到的健康问题、问题发生的原因、解决措施及从中得到的教训,可适当发挥,使文章通顺、完整,词数约80词,标题已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引出话题,说明自己曾患重感冒;
第二步:阐述感冒的原因(雨天户外玩耍未穿外套)及症状;
第三步:介绍缓解感冒的措施(卧床休息、喝温水、吃药、喝姜茶);
第四步:总结从经历中学到的道理(根据天气穿衣、身体不适及时处理)。
[亮点词汇]
①catch a bad cold患重感冒
②sore throat喉咙痛
③dress properly合理穿衣
[高分句型]
①It happened after I played outdoors in the rain without a jacket.(after引导时间状语从句)
②From this, I learned that it’s important to dress properly for the weather and to act quickly when feeling unwell.(that引导宾语从句)
15.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假如你是李华,你校英文报准备举办以“我爱健康,快乐为本”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一篇题为“How to live a sunny life”的短文投稿。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上思维导图中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80左右。
How to Live a Sunny Life
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【答案】例文:
How to Live a Sunny Life
To live a sunny life, we need to keep both physically and mentally healthy.
For physical health, we must eat healthy food like vegetables and fruit. Also, taking exercise every day is necessary. Besides, we should avoid staying up late.
For mental health, we should be kind to others. We can also take up hobbies like reading to relax ourselves. What’s more, it’s important to keep a positive attitude towards life.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and enjoy a sunny life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总起,点明要拥有阳光生活,需同时保持身心健康;
第二步,分述保持身体健康的方法——健康饮食、坚持锻炼、避免熬夜;
第三步,分述保持心理健康的方法——友善待人、培养爱好、保持积极心态;
第四步,总结,呼吁大家拥有健康身心,享受阳光生活。
[亮点词汇]
①take up开始从事
②what’s more而且
③in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and enjoy a sunny life. (宾语从句)
②What’s more, it’s important to keep a positive attitude towards life. (it作形式主语)
16.(25-26八年级下·安徽·课后作业)假如你是Alan,昨天下午在体育课上和朋友们踢球时摔倒了。晚上回家后感到腿疼,但不确定自己是否应该去医院。请你写一封词数80~100的邮件给你的校医Dr Brian寻求帮助。
要点:
1. Describe how you got hurt. 2. Tell how you feel now. 3. Ask for advice.
Dear Dr Brian,
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Yours,
Alan
【答案】例文
Dear Dr Brian,
There is something wrong with me. So I’m writing to ask you for some advice.
Yesterday afternoon I fell down while playing football with my friends in PE class because I ran too fast. I came home at night and my legs hurt. My parents put ice bags on my legs and I felt much better. But now I still feel pain in my legs from time to time. Can you tell me what I should do? Do I really need to see a doctor?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Alan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般过去时描述受伤的经过,以一般现在时说明当前感受与求助需求;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,需完整覆盖受伤原因、当前感受、寻求建议三个核心内容,同时注意邮件格式的规范性与语气的礼貌性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接说明自身遇到的问题,引出写信求助的目的;
第二步,详细描述受伤的场景(体育课踢球摔倒),补充后续处理(父母用冰袋敷腿),并说明当前的身体感受(腿部仍不时疼痛);
第三步,提出具体疑问,询问是否需要前往医院就医,并表达对回复的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①from time to time不时,偶尔
②put ice bags on...用冰袋敷……
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Yesterday afternoon I fell down while playing football with my friends in PE class because I ran too fast. (包含时间状语从句 while playing football ... 与原因状语从句because I ran too fast,清晰交代受伤的场景与原因)
②Can you tell me what I should do? (包含宾语从句what I should do,委婉表达求助的具体需求)
17.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示,以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
写作要求:
(1) 文中须包含思维导图提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(3) 词数100左右 (文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is very important in our life. As we grow older, we’ll find it not easy to communicate with our parents. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.
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Hope you can have good communication with your parents.
【答案】范文
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is very important in our life. As we grow older, we’ll find it not easy to communicate with our parents. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly, talk to them more often. Share your daily life and feelings with them, such as what happened at school or how you feel about a certain thing. This helps them understand you better and makes the relationship closer. Secondly, if we have disagreements, try not to get too angry. Stay calm and explain your reasons clearly and patiently, and also try to see things from their perspective. Remember, they just want what’s best for you. Thirdly, learn to really listen. Sometimes, parents just want to share their thoughts or worries. Give them your full attention and show you care by nodding or asking questions.
Hope you can have good communication with your parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中的与父母沟通的技巧和做法,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“与父母沟通的重要性以及随着年龄增长沟通会变得困难”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“多交谈、有分歧时保持冷静、学会倾听”几个方面重点介绍与父母沟通的技巧和做法;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望与父母有良好沟通”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have disagreements存在分歧
②try not to尽量不要
③stay calm保持冷静
④from one’s perspective从某人的角度
⑤learn to学会
⑥give sb. one’s full attention全神贯注于某人
[高分句型]
①As we grow older, we’ll find it not easy to communicate with our parents.(“find it+形容词+to do sth.”句型)
②Remember, they just want what’s best for you.(宾语从句)
18.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”为题,写一篇作文。
要点提示:
1.与父母和谐相处很重要;
2.与父母和谐相处的做法或建议(如理解与尊重父母,多与父母交流,与父母和谐相处的感受……)。
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How to Get on Well with Our Parents
It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along well with our parents? Here is some of my advice.
We should understand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed to listen to them. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we’d better help them do some things. I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. We love each other.
Let’s get on well with our parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:为一般现在时;
③提示:围绕“如何与父母友好相处”展开,给出具体建议并结合自身经历,观点明确,条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,点明与父母友好相处的重要性,并提出本文将给出相关建议。
第二步,具体阐述与父母相处的方法。
第三步,结合自身经历,说明与父母相处融洽的状态,表达对父母的爱。
第四步,发出呼吁,倡导大家与父母友好相处。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with 与……相处融洽
②be supposed to 应该
[高分句型]
①It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents. (It’s + 形容词 + for sb. to do sth. 句型,意为“对某人来说做某事是……的”)
②Parents talk much because they care about us. (because引导原因状语从句)
19.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)题目: My Hobby and Me
提示:
·你的爱好是什么?
·这个爱好对你来说有什么特别的意义?
·如果没有这个爱好,你的生活会有什么不同?
要求: 词数80-100词,尝试运用比喻的修辞手法,让文章更生动。
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【答案】例文
My Hobby and Me
My hobby is collecting stamps. I started when I was eight. My father gave me his old stamp album.
Each stamp tells a story about a country or a famous person. When I look at them, I feel like I am travelling around the world. I also made friends with other stamp collectors.
Without this hobby, my life would be less colourful. It teaches me to see beauty in small things. I love it and it brings me much happiness. I will keep collecting stamps.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主,涉及假设时使用过去将来时;
③提示:围绕爱好(收集邮票)展开,说明其意义,并假设没有它的不同,按要求运用了比喻。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山说明爱好是集邮,并用比喻描述其意义。
第二步:具体说明集邮带来的好处。
第三步:用比喻假设没有集邮的生活会如何,并总结集邮的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①look at看……
②travel around the world周游世界
③colourful多彩的
[高分句型]
①I started when I was eight.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
②Without this hobby, my life would be less colourful. (运用了虚拟语气和比喻修辞手法)
20.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)假设你是学校健康宣传活动的一员,请你以“Protect Your Eyes from Digital Eye Strain”为题,写一篇60-80词的短文,介绍眼疲劳的原因、症状及预防方法。
要求:
1. 内容完整,语句通顺;
2. 语法正确,书写规范。
Protect Your Eyes from Digital Eye Strain
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【答案】例文:
Protect Your Eyes from Digital Eye Strain
Eye strain is a common problem for students who use phones or computers a lot. It can cause tired eyes, dry eyes, and headaches. If we don’t deal with it, our vision may get worse over time.
To avoid eye strain, we should take a 20-second break every 20 minutes and look at something 20 feet away. We should also look away from devices frequently. If we often suffer from eye strain, we should visit an eye doctor. Let’s protect our eyes and stay healthy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕学生因常用电子设备出现的视疲劳问题,说明其诱因、身体表现,以及能缓解或避免该问题的做法。
[写作步骤]
第一步:指出学生常使用手机、电脑易出现视疲劳这一普遍状况;
第二步:说明视疲劳带来的身体不适,以及忽视该问题的不良影响;
第三步:给出预防视疲劳的具体措施,结尾呼吁大家保护眼睛。
[亮点词汇]
①strain疲劳
②common常见的
③vision视力
④avoid避免
⑤frequently频繁地
[高分句型]
①Eye strain is a common problem for students who use phones or computers a lot.(用“who”引导定语从句明确视疲劳的高发群体,精准聚焦写作对象)
②To avoid eye strain, we should take a 20-second break every 20 minutes and look at something 20 feet away.(用“to”引导目的状语引出预防方法,结合具体的时间、距离描述,让建议更具体可操作)
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必练
1.(25-26八年级下,全国.单元测试)题目:How to Relax and Stay Healthy
要求:
1.80词左右
2.结合Unit1&Unit2内容
3.语句通顺,无语法错误
2.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)以“How to grow up happily'为题,写一篇短文。
要求:紧扣本单元重点,基础难度,语句通顺,语法正确。
3.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)秋季天气渐凉,呼吸道疾病感染人群剧增,为了向全校师生普
及呼吸道疾病的相关知识,校园英语广播站向同学们征稿。假如你是李华,请你根据下列图示内容写一份
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要求:1.阐述图示内容,并提出3~4点预防建议;2.80~100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Autumn Respiratory Disease(秋季呼吸道疾病)
■Symptoms(症状):
sore
fever
○爱)
throat
139%>
breathing
problems
45%
35%
cough
■Children and old
people catch it easily.
Dear teachers and students,
It gets cool these days.More and more people get Autumn Respiratory Disease.
That's all.Thank you.
4.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)请以“My Healthy Habits'”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述你有
哪些健康习惯(至少三个方面),以及这些习惯给你带来的好处。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80:
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试卷上无效。
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提升
5.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)用所学内容向同学介绍你熟悉的自然景观。(词数:50左右)
内容提示:Lushan Waterfall
6.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假如你是李华,最近有很多人得了流感,请你以“How to
Prevent the Flu'"为题目,写一篇文章。
提示词:wash hands,do sports,,eat healthy food,have enough sleep,,go to see a doctor,prevent(预防)
要求:1.要点齐全,语言表达准确,可适当补充;2.80100词。
7.(25-26八年级下.全国,单元测试)题目:My Favourite Free--time Activity
提示:
·你最喜欢的闲暇活动是什么?
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·你通常什么时候做这件事?和谁一起做?
为什么喜欢做这件事?它给你带来了什么?
要求:词数80-100词,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。
8.(25-26八年级下·全国单元测试)你的外国朋友Tom要来中国游玩,你计划带他去桂林游玩,请
你写一篇短文介绍桂林,词数100词左右,开头已给出。
Hi Tom!Welcome to China.I'm going to take you to Guilin for a trip.
9.(25-26八年级下·全国·课堂例题)根据4C的健康手册,完成一篇80词左右的短文,介绍保护眼
睛的方法。
10.(25-26八年级下·湖南·课后作业)每个人都有自己的业余爱好,不同的人有不同的业余爱好,
你的业余爱好是什么?请以“My hobbies”为题写一篇英文短文,介绍一下自己的业余爱好。
注意
1.介绍自己的业余爱好并阐述一下理由:
2表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯:
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3.不得使用真实姓名。词数80左右。
My hobbies
11.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假设你是学校医务室的医生,近期很多学生因天气变化生病。
请你根据以下提示,写一篇关于如何预防疾病的英文宣传稿。提示:
1.注意保暖,及时增添衣物;
2.勤洗手,保持卫生;
3.多喝水,多吃蔬菜水果:
4.适当锻炼,增强体质:
5.保证充足睡眠。
要求:
1.词数80-100:
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确:
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
l2.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)大堡礁(The Great Barrier Reef)是世界上最大的珊瑚礁群,
也是自然界的一大奇迹。请你根据下面的写作要点以“The Great Barrier Reef'”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍
这一自然奇迹。
Off Australia's
Location
northeast coast
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About 2,300 kilometres
Length and width
long;up to 161
kilometres wide
Corals in different
Creatures
shapes and sea animals
Its role
People get food from it
Scientists:learn about
sea life
Its value
Visitors:enjoy nature's
magic
写作要求:
1.短文应包括表格内容,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息:
3.短文不少于80词。
提示词:open-minded思想开放的
The Great Barrier Reef
13.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假设你是李华,最近呼吸道传染病流行,请你根据提示,以
“How to prevent the virus'"为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈我们怎样预防呼吸道传染病毒。
提示:
(1)wash our hands often;
(2)wear masks;
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(3)do sports;
(4)eat healthy food and drink more water;
…
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥:
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整:
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、学校和地名等):
(4)词数:不少于80词(已给出部分不计入总词数)。
How to prevent the virus
I am sorry to hear that many people have the virus these days.What should we do to prevent it?
14.(25-26八年级下·辽宁·单元测试)请结合自己的经历,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你曾经遇到过
的一个健康问题(如感冒、头痛、胃痛等)。
内容包括:
(1)你遇到了什么健康问题:
(2)这个问题是如何发生的:
(3)你采取了哪些措施来缓解或解决它;
(4)从这次经历中你学到了什么。
注意:
(1)词数80左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
A health problem I once had
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15.(25-26八年级下·全国·单元测试)假如你是李华,你校英文报准备举办以“我爱健康,快乐为
本”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一篇题为“How to live a sunny life"的短文投稿。
1.eat healthy food
physical health
2.exercise
How to live a
3.
sunny life
1.be kind to others
mental health(心理健康)
2.take up hobbies
3.✉
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上思维导图中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数80左右。
How to Live a Sunny Life
16.(25-26八年级下·安徽·课后作业)假如你是Aan,昨天下午在体育课上和朋友们踢球时摔倒了。
晚上回家后感到腿疼,但不确定自己是否应该去医院。请你写一封词数80~I00的邮件给你的校医Dr Brian
寻求帮助。
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要点:
1.Describe how you got hurt.2.Tell how you feel now.3.Ask for advice.
Dear Dr Brian,
Yours,
Alan
17.(25-26八年级下·全国单元测试)父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困
难。请根据所给思维导图的提示,以“How to Communicate with Our Parents'”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈
谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
Talk with them
Make a list of things
more!
our parents and we
disagree about
COMMUNICATE
with Parents
If we have
disagreements.try not
<to get too angry!
Learn how to really
listen!...
写作要求:
(1)文中须包含思维导图提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥:
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
(3)词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is very important in our life.As we grow older,we'll find it not easy to
communicate with our parents.So what should we do when communicating with them?Here are some of my
ideas.
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Hope you can have good communication with your parents.
18.(25-26八年级下.全国·课后作业)请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents??"为题,写一篇作文。
要点提示:
1.与父母和谐相处很重要;
2.与父母和谐相处的做法或建议(如理解与尊重父母,多与父母交流,与父母和谐相处的感受…)。
19.(25-26八年级下.全国.单元测试)题目:My Hobby and Me
提示:
你的爱好是什么?
这个爱好对你来说有什么特别的意义?
·如果没有这个爱好,你的生活会有什么不同?
要求:词数80-100词,尝试运用比喻的修辞手法,让文章更生动。
20.(25-26八年级下·全国·课后作业)假设你是学校健康宣传活动的一员,请你以“Protect Your
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