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Unit 1
The secrets of happiness
Developing ideas
(Reading)
五、单元整体教学过程——第五课时 (Reading)
Can you believe hair can help others?
What can you see in the pictures?
Read Para 1-2 and answer questions
方案一
What was Zhou Jian's hair like?
How did people react to Zhou Jian’s appearance(外貌,外表)?
How did Zhou Jian respond?
He had long hair.
They talked about his long hair behind his back.
Sometimes they laughed at him.
He stayed calm and never felt ashamed.
Read Para 3-4 and answer the question
方案一
How long did Zhou Jian keep his hair long?
What did he do in the barber’s shop?
He kept his hair long for over two years.
He had a haircut and put his hair into a bag.
假发
Read Para 5 and answer the question
方案一
What would people do with the hair?
Why did he send his hair in the post office?
Who sent him the letter and what was the letter about?
Because he wanted to help kids with cancer.
The City Children’s Hospital sent the letter to thank for his help.
Read Para 6 and answer the question
方案一
Read Para 6 and answer the question
方案一
What did he do next?
After he got a letter from the hospital, he smiled and said to himself, “lt's time to grow happiness again.”
long
talked about
laughed
(反应)
Read Para 1-2 and fill in blanks
方案二
方案二
Read Para 3-4 and fill in blanks
kept his hair long
cut it short
post office
Read Para 5 and fill in the blank
方案二
假发
Where was the letter from?
What would people do with the hair?
kids with cancer
Read Para 6 and fill in blanks
方案二
smiled
grow happiness
Further thinking:
1. What kind of person is Zhou Jian?
2.What do you think “hope grew together with his hair” mean?
3. What will Zhou Jian do to “grow happiness again”?
4.Why does the writer use the words of Plato in the last paragraph?
He is kind, brave, determined (有决心的,坚定的) and selfless(无私的).
It means as his hair grew, more wigs would be made and more kids would be helped. He also became hopeful.
He will grow his hair long again.
To tell us that the key to happiness is doing good and helping others.
Beginning
Development
Climax
Ending
设置悬念
被误解嘲笑但内心坚定,制造读者对留长发原因的好奇。
铺垫原因
留发两年多,“希望与头发一同生长”,暗示重要目标
揭示真相
剪掉长发并装袋,前往邮局,揭示捐赠头发的真实目的。
升华主题
引用柏拉图名言,点明“幸福源于行善”的主旨。
核心写作手法鉴赏
对比手法:突出品格与深化主题
外在嘲笑与内在坚定对比;怪异外表与美好行为对比。
悬念设置:激发阅读探究欲
开头隐瞒留发原因,只描绘误解场景,增强故事吸引力。
引用名言:增加思想深度
结尾引用柏拉图名言,点明中心思想,提升文化底蕴。
细节描写:刻画生动形象
通过“小心翼翼装头发”等动作描写,直观展现人物情感。
写作思路与手法
Elevating
the theme
倒数第2个箭头是指向climax还是ending ?结合前面的信息梳理,再斟酌一下
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1. I feel surprised and happy for the kids with cancer. I understand why Zhou Jian grew his hair long.
2. I can learn from the passage that helping others makes us happy. To be happy, we shouldn’t only focus on our own lives. We should think about other people, too.
Possible answers:
Further thinking:
Read aloud
Growing happiness
Before Zhou Jian cut his hair
Zhou Jian cut his hair
After Zhou Jian cut his hair
Retell
Advanced level
long hair, blew off, waved, talked about, laughed at
kept it long, cut it short, to the post office
received, letter from hospital,grow...again
Growing happiness
Keeping hair
Cutting and sending hair
Feeling and future plan
Retell
Zhou Jian is ... with .... People ... his ... behind his back and... him. But he never....
He ... for over two yeas. Finally, he ... the barber’s shop and .... He went to ... and... to the City Children’s Hospital.
He got ... because he... the kids .... He... in the mirror and decided to....
Intermediate level
Growing happiness
Keeping hair
Cutting and sending hair
Feeling and future plan
Zhou Jian is a boy with_______ hair. People often _______ about his long hair and _______ at him. He didn’t care and _______ his hair for over two years.
Zhou Jian ______ to a barber’s shop to cut his hair. Then he ______ the hair into a bag and _______to the post office.
Zhou Jian ______ a thank-you card because he ________ the kids with cancer. He ________ happy and planned to _________ happiness again.
Basic level
long
talked
laughed
kept
went
put
walked
got
helped
felt/was
grow
Retell
One Possible Answer:
Zhou Jian is a boy with long hair. People often talked about his long hair behind his back and laughed at him. But he never felt any shame.
He kept the long hair for over two years. Finally, he went to the barber’s shop and cut it short. He went to the post office and sent it to the City Children’s Hospital.
He got a thank-you card because he helped the kids with cancer. He smiled in the mirror and decided to grow happiness again.
Would you cut the hair to send to the people who need it?
If you would like to send the hair, what should you do before you send it?
Further thinking : answer questions
What Happens When You Donate Your Hair?
机构名称 背景与定位 捐发核心要求 亮点与特色 官方渠道
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癌友公益 2015 年成立的非盈利组织,与肿瘤医院合作,为癌症患者提供免费假发 长度≥30-35cm,半年内未烫染;需提供健康证明 可通过合作医院了解假发使用情况,见证爱心传递 相关合作肿瘤医院渠道
Language Points——词组
1.blow off 吹掉,吹走 2.wave in the air 在空中飘动
3.shake one’s head 摇头 4.say to oneself 自言自语
5.laugh at 嘲笑 6.behind one’s back 在某人背后
7.keep one‘s hair long 留长发 8.feel ashamed 感到羞愧
9.grow together with 与……一起生长 10.day after day 日复一日
11.cut short 剪短 12.do one’s work 发挥作用;完成工作
13.receive a letter 收到一封信 14.happiness springs from... 幸福源自……
Language Points——句型
...carefully put...into
Finally, the time came.
Thank you for helping...
...is enough for...
...remembered the words of...
6.It’s time to..
随堂检测
名词(n.) hat voice shame
barber shoulder customer
scissors office cancer
wig
动词(v.) blow wave fall
receive grow
形容词(adj.) surprised smart
副词(adv.) finally
请写出下列单词的中文意思
随堂检测
1.收集完旧书后,我们把它们小心地放进一个大箱子里,准备寄给乡村学校。
After collecting the old books, we carefully them a big box to send to the village school.
2.我们为这场慈善义卖准备了好几个月,终于,这一刻到来了,我们可以为无家可归的孩子们筹集善款了。
We prepared for the charity sale for months, and when we could raise money for homeless kids.
3.我的老师常说:“感谢大家帮助那些有需要的人。这会让世界变得更温暖。”
My teacher always says, “ those in need. It makes the world a warmer place.”
4.我们筹集到的钱足够为贫困学生购买 50 个新书包。
The money we raised buying 50 new schoolbags for the poor students.
随堂检测
5.当我做志愿者感到疲惫时,我想起了妈妈的话:“帮助别人是寻找幸福的最好方式。”
When I felt tired from volunteering, I my mom: “Helping others is the best way to find happiness.”
6.我想是时候分享我的故事,鼓励其他人也加入进来了。
I think share my story and encourage others to join in.
7.随着我帮助的人越来越多,我的喜悦感也与我对社区的热爱一同生长。
As I helped more people, my sense of joy my love for the community.
8.我坚信,幸福源于向他人伸出援手,让他们的生活变得更美好。
I truly believe that giving a hand to others and making their lives better.
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Growing happiness
Growing happiness
long
talked
laughed
kept ...
went
put
walked ...
got
helped
felt/was
grow ...
动词
过去式 原形
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blew blow
waved wave
heard hear
shook shake
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