内容正文:
福建
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题一 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活(2024,
2021)
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中考主题角度解读
1.福建近8年真题:2024和2021年要求学生介绍学校活动情况并
表达自己的感受。
2.近3年全国真题考查角度:①参加学校活动;②参与学校活动
的感受及收获;③对新生提出校园生活的建议。
教材主题单元链接
七(下)Unit 5 学校日常 九(下)Unit 6 Topic 3 毕业活动
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一阶 素材积累
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词块积累
1.参加学校活动
set up some clubs成立一些俱乐部
take an active part in积极参加
join the basketball club加入篮球俱乐部
different kinds of activities不同种类的活动
have a picnic去野餐 visit a farm参观农场
do morning exercises做早操/晨练 volunteer activity志愿活动
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1.参加学校活动
hold a talent show举办才艺表演
win first/second/third prize获得一/二/三等奖
take part in an English speaking contest参加英语演讲比赛
play soccer/ping-pong/basketball/tennis/volleyball踢足球/打乒乓球
/打篮球/打网球/打排球
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2. 参与学校活动的感受及收获
make progress取得进步
be full of fun 充满乐趣
learn a lot from sth.从某事中学到很多
make full use of充分利用
have a good effect on对……有良好的影响
enrich our school life丰富我们的校园生活
have a sense of achievement有成就感
work well with teammates与队友合作愉快
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2. 参与学校活动的感受及收获
overcome difficulties克服困难
leave a deep impression留下深刻印象
be thankful to teachers and classmates感激老师和同学们
be proud of sb.对某人感到骄傲
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3.对新生提出校园生活的建议
graduate from从……毕业
come to an end即将结束
pass/fail the exam通过考试/未通过考试
listen carefully in class课堂上认真听讲
plan your goals规划你(们)的目标
manage time wisely合理管理时间
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3.对新生提出校园生活的建议
ask teachers for help向老师求助
respect different opinions尊重不同意见
try new things bravely勇敢尝试新事物
follow school rules遵守校规
stay active and exercise保持活跃并锻炼
be brave to face challenges勇敢面对挑战
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好句积累与仿写
1.We have all kinds of after-class activities in our school.
2.On September 21st, we have a school trip in the
afternoon.[人教七(上)U8 P47]
3.Last August, our class did something very special on our
school trip.[人教八(上)U1 P8]
4.How time flies! We’ll graduate from Beijing International
School this weekend![仁爱九(下)U6 P43]
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角度1 参加学校活动
1.In order to make our school life more colorful, all kinds of
clubs have been set up.(in order to… 为了……)
为了结交新朋友并享受乐趣,我决定加入学校美术俱乐部。
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In order to make new friends and have fun, I have decided to join the school art club.
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2.The more school activities you take part in, the happier you
will feel.(the+比较级,the+比较级 越……,就越……)
你越积极参加校园活动,就会变得越自信。
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The more actively you take part in school activities, the
more confident you will become.
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3.Why don’t you join the school sports meeting this year? It
will be very interesting!(Why don’t…?为什么不……?)
你为什么不加入学校读书俱乐部呢?你可以和喜欢读书的人交朋友!
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_________________________
Why don’t you join the school reading club? You can make friends with book lovers!
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4.There are several volunteer activities, such as visiting the old
people’s home and cleaning the city park.(such as例如)
有许多精彩的学校活动可以参加,例如篮球比赛和运动会。
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There are many wonderful school activities to take part in, such as the basketball match and the sports meeting.
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角度2 参与学校活动的感受及收获
5.I not only enjoyed performing in the school talent show, but
also learned to overcome my fear during the process.
(not only… but also… 不仅……而且……)
我不仅通过加入篮球队锻炼了身体,还交到了许多朋友。
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I not only strengthen my body by joining the basketball
team, but also make many friends.
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6.If you join the science club, you might discover your interest
in experiments.(if如果,引导条件状语从句)
如果你帮忙打扫学校花园,你会让它变得更漂亮,还会为自己感
到骄傲。
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If you help clean the school garden, you will make it more beautiful and feel proud of yourself.
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7.My friends encouraged me to enter the poetry competition,
and I won the second prize!(encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人
做某事)
我的老师鼓励我参加英语角,我在口语方面取得了进步。
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My teacher encouraged me to join the English corner, and I made progress in spoken language.
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角度3 对新生提出校园生活的建议
8.You’d better take an active part in different kinds of activities
and make your school life more colorful.(had better do sth.最
好做某事)
当你在学习或生活中遇到问题时,最好及时向老师求助。
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You had better ask teachers for help in time when you have problems with study or life.
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9.As long as you work hard, your dream will be achieved one
day.(as long as只要)
只要你遵守校规并尊重他人,就会拥有快乐的校园生活。
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As long as you follow the school rules and respect others,
you will have a happy school life.
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10.It’s necessary to learn to solve problems on your own.
(It’s+adj.+to do sth.做某事是……的)
每天放学后复习所学内容很有帮助。
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It’s helpful to review what you’ve learned after school every day.
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1.All in all, it was an exciting day.[人教七(下)U11 P65]
2.Even though I was sad that junior high is over, I looked
forward to new experiences in senior high![人教九(全)U14
P112]
3.I feel a little sad because we have to say goodbye. But I will
remember our friendship forever.[仁爱九(下)U6 P43]
4.If you make full use of your free time, you will have a
wonderful school life and you will learn a lot.
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二阶 典例探究
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(2024福建)假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践
活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示,
用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。
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注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入
总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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Dear Henry,
I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last
Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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细审题
①主题:给Henry分享学校开展的实践活动
②文体: ________
③人称:第 ____人称
④时态:介绍实践活动过程以 ____________为主;表达感想时用 ____________
⑤要点:介绍实践活动过程;谈谈感想
应用文
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一般过去时
一般现在时
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拟提纲
the history of
watch local opera performances
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成篇章
基础范文 高阶范文
Dear Henry,
I’m glad that you’re
interested in our school study
tour last Friday. Let me tell
you something about it. Dear Henry,
I’m glad that you’re
interested in our school study
tour last Friday. Let me tell you
something about it.
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基础范文 高阶范文
In the morning, we
visited the History Museum.
We learned about the history
of the Long March. ①Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army. In the morning, we visited
the History Museum. We learned
about the history of the Long
March. ①____________________
____________________________
__________________________
(用which引导的定语从句来补
充说明红军的故事)
Then we listened to
the stories of the Red Army,
which touched us deeply.
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基础范文 高阶范文
After lunch, we went to the
Folk Culture Center, where
we enjoyed paper cutting art.
We also watched local opera
performances that are
educational. After lunch, we went to the
Folk Culture Center, where we
enjoyed paper cutting art. We
also watched local opera
performances that are
educational.
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基础范文 高阶范文
② We became more
interested in Chinese history.
②______________________
____________________________
____________________________
(用“the+比较级, the+比较
级”升格句子)
The longer we stayed here, the more we became interested in Chinese history.
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基础范文 高阶范文
③The tour deepens our
love for our country and
enriches our understanding of
traditional Chinese art! ③______________________
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____________(用not only… but also…结构升格句子,使句子更丰富)
The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art!
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基础范文 高阶范文
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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三阶 写作训练
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校园生活如同一片花园,同学们在其中播种、欢笑和收
获……这些经历记录了同学们的成长。初中生活即将结束,你校
英语社团正在开展主题为“My Valuable School Days”的征文活动,
请你结合海报内容写一篇短文积极参与此活动。词数80左右。#1
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注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总
词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Valuable School Days
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an
end.____
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My Valuable School Days
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to
an end. It’s time for me to say goodbye to my teachers and
classmates. I’ll never forget my colorful school days.
I remember I used to be a shy girl in my first year.
My English was really poor. I always hid behind my books
and never said anything in class. My teacher encouraged me
to read aloud and join in the discussion. With her help, I
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became more and more outgoing and confident. Finally, I
made progress in English and became a top student.
In the past three years, I have grown up so much. I’ll
try my best to be a better person in the future.
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