内容正文:
贵州
英 语
主题写作指导册
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第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别四 观点看法类
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常见题目表述
①▶人与社会:良好的人际交往与人际关系◀在假期,我们应该
更多地陪伴家人还是朋友呢?在学校英语论坛上,同学们以此为
话题发帖讨论。假如你是李华,请你跟帖参与讨论。#1
Spending time with family or friends? All My page
______________ Li Hua
____________ Mike 2 minutes ago
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Spending time with family or friends? All My page
With such long hours in school on weekdays, I’d like to spend
more time with my family. I plan to help babysit my little
brother at home.
续表
Spending time with family or friends? All My page
_____________ Gina 5 minutes ago
I feel like spending more time with friends. We can do what
we like together. We are going to discuss projects or be
volunteers.
续表
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②▶人与社会:科学技术与工程,人类发明与创新◀AI
(人工智能)的兴起正在改变我们的学习方式。有的同学利用AI
极大提升了学习兴趣和效率;但也有同学过度依赖AI,减少了独
立思考的机会。请你结合图示信息,发表你的看法。
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③▶人与社会:和谐家庭◀家是我们的第一所学校。家风好,家
规正,对我们的健康成长至关重要。假如你是某中学的学生李华,
你校英文校刊正在开展以“My Family Rules”为主题的征文活动。
请你根据以下提示信息,写一篇英文短文投稿,介绍你的家规,
并谈谈你对这些家规的看法。#3
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作文框架
开头:引入话题,点明需要讨论的观点;
中间:介绍别人的观点 + 你自己的观点;
结尾:总结你的观点并提出愿望。
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高分模板
①对某现象的观点或看法
The topic of ____(主题)is becoming more and more
popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it.
Some people say ____(选择A)is their favourite. They hold
their view for the reason of ____(理由). However, others
think that ____(选择B)is a better choice for the following
three reasons. First, ____. Second(Besides), ____. Third
(Lastly), ___.(三个理由)
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From my point of view, I think ____(我的观点). The
reason is that ____. What’s more, ____. Moreover, ____.
(我的三个理由)
All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that ____
(总结我的观点). And I hope ____(提出愿望).
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②对某科技/发明的观点或看法
Nowadays, there is a hot discussion on ____(引出话题或
对象).
In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages
in____(某科技/某发明). Generally speaking, it is widely
believed that there are several positive points as follows.
Firstly, ____(优点一). Secondly, ___(优点二).
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Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”
___(某科技/某发明)is no exception, and in other words, it
still has negative points. To begin with, ___(缺点一). In
addition, ___(缺点二).
To sum up, we should try to give ____(某科技/某发明)
full play, and reduce its disadvantages at the same time. In
that case, we will surely make a better use of ____(某科技/
某发明).
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优秀范文记背
Passage 1
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:明确表
达观 Spending time with
family or friends?
Holidays are for
relaxing and being
with loved ones. Spending time with family
or friends?
It is a time for us to
relax and connect with
loved ones on holidays.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:给
出支持观
点的理 Should we choose
family or friends? I’d
rather spend more
holiday time with
family.
Family is where
I feel the warmest. When it comes to
choosing between family and
friends, I believe spending
more time with family is
my first choice.
Family members are the
ones who support us
forever. During weekdays,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结自己
的感受并
再次表明
自己的观
点 My parents work
hard on weekdays, so
holidays are a good
chance to be together.
I can help Mom cook
dinner and listen to
Dad’s funny stories. we’re busy with school and
work. So holidays are a really good chance for us to be together. I can help Mom cook dinner. And I can also sit with Dad to listen to his funny stories which always make me
laugh.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结自己
的感受并
再次表明
自己的观
点 We can also watch
movies or take a
walk in the park.
These small things
make me feel loved
and safe. Sometimes we watch a
movie at home, or take a
slow walk in the park after
dinner. These activities not
only strengthen family bonds
but also fill our hearts with
warmth.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结自己
的感受并
再次表明
自己的观
点 Of course,
friends are important
too, but family gives
me the deepest love.
So I’ll choose to be
with my family more
during holidays. Friends matter, yet
family is the root of our
happiness. So I’ll treasure
holiday time with my
family.
续表
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Passage 2
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginnin
g:表明
自己的观
点 AI is everywhere
in our daily life now.
Many are talking about
whether middle school
students can use AI to
study. Now AI technology
has found its way into our
daily life. There is a heated
discussion on whether
middle school students
should be allowed to use
AI in their studies.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍AI的益
处以及应
该避免的
问题 I think we should
use AI for study. AI
can give us helpful
information. When we
do homework and
can’t solve a problem,
AI can help us. I believe that middle
school students can use AI
when learning because it can
provide valuable information.
For example, AI can offer
help on homework in time.
What’s more,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结全
文——赞
成使用AI It can also organize information clearly, so we can understand difficult things easily. And it can make
learning fun. For example, we can use AI stories to learn
English. it can organize information
clearly, helping students
understand difficult topics.
It can also make learning
fun. However, we must
learn to use AI wisely and
avoid simply copying
answers.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结全
文——赞
成使用AI But we can’t just copy
AI’s answers. We need
to think for ourselves.
If we use AI well, it
can help us study better
and let us have good
study habits. Only by thinking
independently can we
truly improve our
knowledge and skills.
Therefore, if used the right
way,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结全
文——赞
成使用AI So, I think middle
school students can use
AI to study. AI can become a powerful
tool to develop our study
habits.
So, I agree that we
should be allowed to use
AI.
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Passage 3
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:点明家
规的重要
性 My Family Rules
Family rules
guide our growth. Let
me share my family
rules.
We must help
with housework, My Family Rules
Family rules play an
important role in our
growth. Let me share my
family rules and my
thoughts.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍家规的
具体内容 like cleaning rooms
and washing dishes. It
makes us learn duty.
Doing exercise daily is
a rule too. Running or
playing ball builds a
good body. It is important for us
to learn and understand
duty. So, we’re required to
do housework, like
sweeping floors and tidying
rooms. Exercising daily is a
must,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达感悟
并总结家
规的重要
性 We need to take care
of each other and
share joys and
troubles. Also, we
can’t argue. We talk
nicely to get along
well with others. which includes running
in the morning or playing
badminton after school to
help us build a good body.
What’s more, we need to
care for each other. When
someone is ill, we should
offer help.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达感悟
并总结家
规的重要
性 I think these rules are great! They teach responsibility and love. Following them, our family
stays happy. I’ll keep following them to become
better. Finally, arguing is not allowed.
We should solve problems by
talking calmly.
These rules are valuable.
They shape me into a
responsible, healthy, and kind
person. I’m thankful for them
as they lead to a warm family
life.
续表
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