内容正文:
贵州
英 语
主题写作指导册
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第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别三 活动介绍类(2022贵阳)
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常见题目表述
①▶人与社会:文化自信◀华夏大地,人杰地灵;中华文明,源
远流长。你市电视台近期举办了关于“Introduction of China”的演
讲比赛,请你根据下图提示,选择或自拟至少两个要点写一篇演
讲稿参赛。
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②▶人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活◀科技在我们的
生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色,学校也常常通过各类科技活动
培养同学们的创新思维和实践能力。你校近期组织了以“智启未
来”为主题的科技节活动,请你以“The Science Festival”为题并结
合海报内容,用英语写一篇短文介绍此次活动并谈谈你的想法。#2
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③▶人与自我:乐于实践&人与社会:志愿服务◀社会实践活动
(social practice)可以帮助我们理解与运用知识。假设你是李华,
你打算邀请交换生Peter参加一次社会实践活动。请你从以下两个
活动方案中任选其一,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。#3
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Pick up rubbish
●When: this Saturday
morning
●Where: People’s Park
●Why: to keep the park
clean
to protect the environment ______________________________________
Help farmers grow vegetables
●When: this Sunday morning
●Where: Sunshine Garden
●Why: to learn farming skills
to develop good working habits
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作文框架
①介绍活动
开头:引入文章话题;
中间:介绍活动的时间、地点、人物等+活动的具体内容;
结尾:表达个人感悟。
②介绍节日
开头:介绍节日名称+节日意义;
中间:介绍节日活动;
结尾:表达个人情感。
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高分模板
①介绍活动
Dear____,
I am very pleased to tell you that we are going to
organize a(n)____(活动名称)and I would be very happy
if you could take part in the activity.
The activity will be held on ____(活动日期)at___
(活动地点).
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In the morning, we ____(活动一). We will learn about
___(活动一的目的). Then we ____(活动二), which helps
us ___(活动二的目的). After lunch, we will go to ____
(活动三), where we ____(活动三的目的).
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
注意:此模板也适用于 “已经发生过的活动”,句子时态需改为
一般过去时。
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②介绍节日
Dear___ ,
How are you going? I’m really glad that you are
interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many
traditional festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival and
the Mid-Autumn Festival. I’d like to introduce ____
(节日名称)to you. ____(节日名称)is a(n)__
(重要性)traditional holiday in China.
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It usually lasts for ____(持续时间).
Days before the festival, people ____(节日活动一).
They __ (节日活动二). During the festival, ____
(节日活动三). Then __ (节日活动四). To me,
(节日名称)means , because at that time, ____
(节日的意义).
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Welcome to China to celebrate ____(节日名称)together.
I believe you will ___(感受).
Yours,
Li Hua
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优秀范文记背
Passage 1
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:开篇点
题,表明
写信的目 Good morning,
everyone.I’m really
happy to tell you about
China. It’s a great
country with a long
history. Good morning,
everyone. I’d like to share
some wonderful parts of
China with you. It’s a
great country with a long
history.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具
体介绍祖
国的伟
人,名胜
古迹及中
国的传统
节 First, there are many great people. Qian Xuesen is one of them. He’s a famous
scientist. He helped China a lot in space science. Then, China has wonderful famous
places. China has a long-standing history and many great things. Let’s talk about great people first.
Qian Xuesen, a famous scientist, devoted his life to China’s space program. Then, there are amazing
famous places.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
邀请朋友
来中国 The Great Wall is super cool. It’s very long and old, like a
big dragon in the mountains. Also, we have fun traditional
festivals. The Spring Festival is my favorite. We get together, The Great Wall is world-famous. It’s like a huge dragon, lying in the mountains. It shows how
smart and strong Chinese people are. And we have lovely traditional festivals. The Spring Festival is the
most important one.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
邀请朋友
来中国 eat dumplings, and say
“Happy New Year” to
each other.
China has so
many great things. We
can enjoy its great
things together. Thank
you! Families get together, have
big meals, and wish each
other a good new year
during the festival.
China is full of beauty
and stories. Let’s enjoy its
great things together.Thank
you!
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Passage 2
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:引出话
题,简单
介绍科技
节 The Science Festival
Science is very
important in our life.
Our school had a
science festival on
April 25th. It was
held on the
playground. The Science Festival
Science makes our life
better, and our school held a
wonderful science festival on
April 25th. It took place on
the playground, and many
students joined in.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:
详细介绍
科技节的
活 There were many
fun activities. I played
chess against a robot. At
first, I thought I could
win, but the robot was
very smart. Then, I did a
small experiment with
my classmates. The activities were
exciting. Playing chess
against a robot was a
great challenge. Though I
lost, I was surprised by
how clever the robot was.
Then, doing experiments
with classmates was fun.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
谈谈对此
活动的想
法 We followed the steps
and saw a cool
change. I also tried
VR glasses. It felt like
I was traveling in
space—it was
amazing! We followed the steps
carefully and cheered when
we saw the interesting
results. The most amazing
part was wearing VR
glasses. It felt real to
“travel” in space, as if I
was flying among the stars.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
谈谈对此
活动的想
法 I loved this
festival. It made me
interested in science. I
hope we can have
more activities like
this. This festival not only
brought me joy but also
inspired me to learn more
about science. It showed
me that science is around
us, and I’m looking
forward to the next one.
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Passage 3
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:邀请参加
种植蔬菜的
活动 Dear Peter,
Social
practice is a
cool way to
learn things
outside books. Dear Peter,
Social practice can connect
knowledge with real life, so I’d
love to invite you to the “Help
farmers grow vegetables” activity
this Sunday.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介绍社会实践活动的时间、地
点以及原因 Let’s join the “Help farmers grow vegetables” activity this Sunday!
We’ll meet at Sunshine Garden in the morning. The plan is to learn farming skills and
build good working habits. We’ll go to Sunshine Garden in the morning. There, farmers will guide us to
practice farming skills. Watering the young plants and learning to
care for them will also be part of our tasks.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:表
明参加此次活
动的收获并再
次发出邀请 First, farmers will teach
us how to prepare the
soil. Then we’ll sow
vegetable seeds. After
that, we need to water
them carefully. This activity not only
helps us learn basic
farming skills but also
shapes good working
habits, teaching us to
be patient.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表明参加
此次活动
的收获并
再次发出
邀请 This activity can
help us understand how
hard farmers work. When
we see the seeds grow,
we’ll also understand
why we should save
food. Working on the
farm, we’ll realize the
value of farmers’ labor
and why we should
treasure every grain. If
you’re interested,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表明参加
此次活动
的收获并
再次发出
邀请 Let’s spend a meaningful
morning in the garden
together!
Yours,
Li Hua let’s spend a meaningful
morning in the garden
together.
Yours,
Li Hua
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