内容正文:
贵州
英 语
主题写作指导册
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第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别一 写人叙事类(5年3考)
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常见题目表述
①▶人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升◀在每个人的生
活中,总会有一个值得敬佩的人,成为我们心中的榜样。你校五
四青年节将要组织一次英语演讲比赛,请你参考以下图示,以“A
Hero in My Heart”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。
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Who:
father, mother, firefighter,
teacher…
Why:
1.patient and kind
2.bring hope to people
3.give people a lot of warmth
How:
1.take…as my role model
2.help those in need
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②▶人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升&人与社会:志
愿服务◀志愿服务是一种很有意义的助人方式,能够带来积极的
影响。假如你是李华,贵州志愿者之家正在招募志愿者,请认真
阅读以下信件,并按要求写一篇英语短文,应征志愿者。
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Dear teenagers,
Guizhou Volunteer Center needs lots of volunteers for Old
People’s Home, Children’s Hospital and History Museum.
Would you like to spend your weekends helping old people,
cheering up sick children or explaining local culture to visitors?
If so, please write to us and let us know.
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Here are some questions to help you.
●Why do you want to be a volunteer?
●What experience do you have?
●What is your plan?
●We are looking forward to receiving your application.
Guizhou Volunteer Center
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③▶人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活◀在我们的校园
生活中,老师扮演着至关重要的角色。他们不仅传授知识,还给
予我们关心和鼓励。假设你是李华,请以“The Nicest Teacher in
My Heart”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一位老师,
并分享一个你们之间的温暖小故事。
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④▶人与自我:职业启蒙,职业精神◀习近平总书记在2025年新
年贺词中说道:“梦虽遥,追则能达;愿虽艰,持则可圆。”校英
文报现正以“Fighting for Dreams”为题征稿,请你参考图文信息,
用英语写一篇短文投稿。
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作文框架
开头:引入这个人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征
(建议选取父母、朋友、老师等熟悉的人物)
①直接型:直接点明这个人物是谁。如:I’m glad to say
something about my best friend.
②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题,再点明这个人物。如:
During the process of growing up, it is very important to have
someone who knows us well. Among all the people around me,
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I think no one else but my father is the special person who
knows me best.
中间:你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when, where, what,
how)
①建议写作角度:这个人物帮助你成长的故事;这个人物身上的
闪光点;
②需要注意的点:经历类应用一般过去时。
结尾:你的感悟、感受、自己的做法、对这个人的美好祝愿#3
高分模板
The Most ____ Person in My Heart
To be honest, ____ is the most ____ person I’ve ever met.
She/ He ____(人物身份+人物外貌特征:has a round face, a
soft voice…). I think she/he is ____ because she/he is always
____(描写人物性格的形容词:patient, kind, helpful…). She/
He likes ____(人物爱好: help others, collect stamps, take part
in volunteer activities…).
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Once I ____(你遇到的麻烦:be sick, fail the exam, have
difficulty in + 学科,can’t get along well with…), she/he told
me ____(人物的行为:not to give up, not to worry about,
keep reading aloud, talk to, help people in need…). Then
she/he ____(人物的行为:teach me how to, ask me to,
encourage me to…). In addition, she/he ____(人物的行为:
give me flowers or books, give me helpful suggestions, listen to
me patiently…)when I was in trouble. I became/felt ____
(你的改变/感受: confident, moved, independent, happy,
relaxed…)because of her/him.
As her/his ____, I have learned that ____
(你的感悟:nothing is impossible, we should help others…). I
hope I will be a person like her/him. I also hope she/he will be
better and better.#1.3
优秀范文记背
Passage 1
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:表明谁
是自己心
目中的英
雄 Hello, everyone.
I’m glad to be here
to give a speech.
Everyone has a hero
in their heart, and
mine is my father. Hello, everyone. I’m glad
to be here to give a speech.
On the journey of life, there’s
always someone who shines
like a star, and the hero in my
heart is my father.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍他/她成
为自己心
目中英雄
的原因 He is patient and
kind. Every evening,
he listens to my daily
stories after work.
When I fall down, he
helps me stand up
and says, What moves me most
is his patience and kindness.
After tiring work, he still
spares time to listen to my
daily stories, and his eyes
are full of care. When I
fell down in a race,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达向他/
她学习的
决心 “Try again.”
His big
hands give
me warmth.
He often
helps old
people carry
heavy things. he didn’t lift me up directly but
encouraged me to stand up in a
warm voice, which planted courage
in my heart. He not only uses his
warmth to comfort me but also gives
his kindness to others, like helping
elderly neighbors carry heavy things
on rainy days.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达向他/
她学习的
决心 I see him as my
role model. I will help
my friends when they
need me. My father is
the best hero.
Thanks for listening. I’ve decided to
follow his example: to
offer a hand to those in
need, just like he does
every day.
Thanks for listening.
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Passage 2
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginnin
g:点明
自己想成
为志愿者 Dear Guizhou
Volunteer Center,. .
I’m Li Hua, a
junior high school
student. Dear Guizhou Volunteer Center,. .
I’m Li Hua, a junior high
school student. I’m writing to
apply to be a volunteer because
I believe that serving others is
a meaningful way to spend my
free time,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍自己志
愿活动的
经验及计
划 I want to be a
volunteer because
I think helping
others makes me
happy.
I have some
experience. Last
summer, and I really want to bring joy to
people in need.
I have some experience.
During last summer holiday, I
joined a volunteer group to visit
the Old People’s Home. We
prepared simple performances
for the elderly,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达期待
收到来信 I visited an Old People’s Home with my classmates. We talked with the old
people and helped them clean their rooms. They were very happy, and I felt
good too. such as singing old songs and telling funny stories. We also helped them with daily chores like folding clothes.
Seeing their bright smiles made me realize how valuable volunteering is. If I’m lucky enough to be a volunteer,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达期待
收到来信 I plan to go to the
Old People’s Home
on weekends. I’ll
listen to their stories
and do what I can to
help them. I hope to
be a good volunteer. I plan to go to the Old
People’s Home on weekends.
I’ll learn some simple
traditional games to play with
them, so they can have more
fun. I’m sure I can do a
good job.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达期待
收到来信 Looking forward
to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua Looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Passage 3
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:引出谁是
自己心中最
好的老师 The Nicest Teacher in My
Heart
In our school life,
teachers are very important.
They teach us knowledge
and care about us. The Nicest Teacher
in My Heart
In our colorful
school life, teachers
play a key role.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍他/她的
长相、爱
好、梦想、
能力、性格
并举例 My favorite teacher is Mr. Li.
Mr. Li is our math teacher. He is
of medium height and wears glasses. They not only pass on knowledge but also give us warmth and encouragement. Among all my teachers, Mr. Li is the nicest one in my heart.
Mr. Li, who is our math teacher, has a kind face and always wears a smile.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结全文
并表达他/
她是自己
心中最好
的老师 He can write great articles and often shares his stories with us. He is friendly and helpful. Last term, I was really
nervous about a math test. I studied hard but still felt worried. He’s good at turning boring math into fun stories and can write
excellent articles. He is patient and helpful. Last term, before a math test, I was extremely nervous as I
couldn’t understand some difficult problems.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结全文
并表达他/
她是自己
心中最好
的老师 The day before the test, Mr. Li noticed my worry. During his free time, he patiently explained
difficult math problems to me again. With his help, I did well in the test. Mr. Li also likes cycling and reading. Mr. Li noticed my worry. He spent his break time explaining difficult problems to me step by
step. Thanks to his help, I got a good grade in the test. Mr. Li has hobbies like cycling and
reading.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
总结全文
并表达他/
她是自己
心中最好
的老师 His dream is to make
every student love
math.
When I remember
his kindness and
patience, I feel warm.
He is the nicest
teacher in my heart. His dream is to make
math interesting for every
student.
Whenever I think of
his kindness and patience, I
feel warm. He truly is the
nicest teacher in my heart.
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Passage 4
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginnin
g:引出
话题, Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a
dream. My dream is to
be a teacher. Last year,
I had trouble with math.
My math teacher helped
me a lot. Fighting for Dreams
Everyone has a dream.
My dream is to become a
teacher. Last year, my
math teacher helped me
solve problems patiently,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
表明自己
的梦想及
其原因 She was very patient
when I asked her
questions. Her
kindness made me
want to be a teacher
too. Teachers can
really help students. and I was deeply inspired
by her kindness. This
experience makes me realize
that teachers have the
power to change students’
lives.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍为实现
梦想所作
出的努力 To make my
dream come true, I
need to study hard for
all my lessons. In my
free time, I spend
time reading books
about teaching. To turn my dream into
reality, I should study school
subjects hard and explore
educational books in my free
time. Besides, I’ve
volunteered to help
classmates with their
homework,
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:表
达实现梦想
的决心 Also, I often help my
classmates with their
homework. This makes me
better at talking with
others, and I can learn
more about how to teach. which has
improved my
communication skills
and deepened my
understanding of
teaching.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达实现梦
想的决心 I think if I
keep working
hard, my dream
will come true
one day. All in all, I really believe
that as long as I keep studying
hard, I will make my dream
come true one day. As the old
saying goes, “Where there is a
will, there is a way.”
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