内容正文:
贵州
英 语
主题写作指导册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自然
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中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考:暂未考查。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①介绍环境污染问题以及环保
建议;②共建绿色校园;③保护动、植物。
3.热点角度:①绿水青山就是金山银山;②绿色发展。
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主题教材链接
人教版 仁爱版
七(下)U5 Animals in the zoo
七(下)U7 The weather
九(全)U13 Protecting the
environment 八(上)U4 T1 What’s the
strongest animal on the farm?
九(上)U2 Saving the Earth
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1.As we all know, air pollution has become a
serious problem.[仁爱九(上) U2]
2.Pollution is our great enemy, and we have to fight
it.[外研九(上) M12]
3.Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the
world today.[译林牛津八(下) U8]
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开头句 4.The Earth is our home. Therefore, it is our duty
to take action to protect it.
5.As is known to everyone, animals are our friends.
However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
So, we need to take action at once.
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中
间
句 环境
问题 1.The river was dirty. Even the bottom of the river
was full of rubbish.[人教九(上) U13]
2.Making a loud noise in public is also a kind of
pollution. It not only disturbs others but also does
great harm to people’s hearing.[仁爱九(上) U2]
3.The more cars there are in the street, the more
serious air pollution is.
4.Many people can’t deal with waste well and always
use plastic bags, which are bad for the environment.
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 1.To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus
or subway instead of driving. Also, we can ride a
bike. It’s good for health and it doesn’t cost
anything.[人教九(全) U13改编]
2.I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks
when I buy takeaway food. I use the ones at home.
[人教九(全) U13]
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 3.We encourage students to collect waste paper and
soft drink cans. Then we sort them so that they can
be recycled.[仁爱九(上) U2]
4.It’s wise for people to choose public transport or
ride bicycles.[译林牛津八(下) U8]
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 5.I’ve tried my best to protect the environment. I
recycle. I don’t throw away things if I don’t want
them any more. And I turn off the lights when I
leave a room.
6.We can save water by taking shorter showers and
turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 7.Last but not least, it’s of great importance to
stop using plastic bags and chopsticks.
8.Bring your own bag when you go shopping. It’s a
good way to reduce packaging.
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中
间
句 保护
动植
物的
行为 1.If possible, we can take part in some activities to
learn more about wild animals and try to protect
them.
2.What’s more, we should advise the government to
make laws so that wild animals can get effective
protection.
3.There are many things we can do to protect the
environment. As students, we can plant trees. And we
can organize some activities to ask people to stop
cutting down trees.
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中
间
句 共建
绿色
校园 1.At a green school, every class collects waste which
can be recycled or used again. Then the school sells
the waste and uses the money to help students in
poor areas.[外研九(上) M12]
2.Students at a green school also learn ways to save
energy and recycle at home. That means less waste.
[外研九(上) M12]
3.Each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage,
we should actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
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结尾句
(表达希
望与感
受) 1.So together, our actions can make a difference and
lead to a better future! [人教九(全) U13]
2.Though pollution is heavy now, I don’t think it’s
hopeless. If everyone starts to do something, the
world will be saved.[外研九(上) M12]
3.We cannot hope for rapid change, but let’s take
these simple steps today so that we will save the
world for our grandsons and granddaughters
tomorrow.[外研九(上) M12]
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俗语谚语 1.Save water; wasting it is shameful.节约用水,浪费
可耻。
2.Clear waters and green mountains are invaluable
assets. 绿水青山就是金山银山。
3.Sharing the same sky, we protect the earth together.
同顶一片蓝天,共护一方水土。
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◆句子翻译
1.我们学校环境最大的问题之一就是课间休息后操场上有很多垃
圾。(Tip: one of the biggest problems…)
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
One of the biggest problems in our school environment is that there is lots of rubbish on the playground after breaks.
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2.正如所有学生所知,多植树有助于保持空气清洁。(Tip: as is
known to sb.)
________________________________________________________
______________
As is known to all students, planting more trees helps keep the air clean.
3.周末在公园捡垃圾对我们的环境有好处。(Tip: be good for…)
________________________________________________________
______________
Picking up rubbish in the park on weekends is good for our environment.
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4.离开教室时关灯是非常重要的。(Tip: It’s of great importance
to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_______________
It’s of great importance to turn off the lights when leaving the classroom.
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5.我们班开始收集旧书并重新利用,以此减少浪费。(Tip: start
to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
______________
Our class starts to collect old books and reuse them to
reduce waste.
6.购物时,我们可以用布袋代替塑料袋。(Tip: instead of)
________________________________________________________
_______
We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
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◆句式升格
7.We pick up litter on the playground after P.E. class. The
ground stays clean.(Tip: so that)
________________________________________________________
_______________________
We pick up litter on the playground after P.E. class so that the ground stays clean.
8.We grow some plants in the school garden. It makes the air
fresher.(Tip: which)
________________________________________________________
_____________
We grow some plants in the school garden, which makes the air fresher.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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地球是人类唯一的家园,面对气候变化挑战,中国承诺力争
2060年之前实现碳中和。这不仅是国家战略目标,更是全民参与
的绿色行动。上周五你和同学们参加了学校开展的环保活动。请
你根据下图信息,以“A(n) ____ Green Activity”为题写一篇
短文,谈谈这次活动的过程及你的感想。
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写作要求:
1.短文需包含图示所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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审题四要素:
审体裁:记叙文
审人称:第一人称为主
审时态:讲述活动的过程为一般过去时;表达感想时为一般现在时
审要点:①介绍环保活动的经历;②表达自己的感想。
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A(n)___ Green Activity
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一、构思框架
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
A Meaningful Green
Activity
Protecting the
environment is very
important. It keeps our
planet healthy and safe. We
must take care of the Earth,
or we will face problems. A Meaningful Green Activity
Protecting the environment is
very important because it keeps
our planet healthy and safe.①___
_____________________________
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(用if连接)
If
we don’t take care of the Earth,
we will face problems.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Last Friday, our
school held a green
activity. In the morning,
my classmates and I
walked to school. We
didn’t choose to take a
bus or a car. Then we
listened to a speech. Our school had an
environmental protection activity
last Friday.②___________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
(用instead of升格)When we
arrived, we listened to a speech.
In the morning, my classmates and I walked to school instead of taking a bus or a car.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
The teacher told us the
ways to protect the Earth.
He also explained the
importance of taking action.
After that, we planted
trees. ③____________________________
______________________________
______________________________
(用why引导的宾语从句及it
is +adj.+to do sth.升格)After
that, we planted many trees.
The teacher told us how to protect the Earth and explained why it’s important to take action.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
From this activity, I
learned two important
things. First, we should
save the Earth by doing
small things. Second, we
must stop wasting things.
Every drop of water and
every piece of paper is
important. Through this activity, I’ve
learned that protecting the
environment starts with small
things.④_______________________
______________________________
______________________________
______(用try one’s best to do
sth.升格)Every small effort counts
on the journey to a greener future.
We should try our best
to save the Earth by changing
daily habits and stop wasting
things.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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随着人与自然和谐共生的理念逐渐深入人心,越来越多的人
开始聚焦保护生物多样性。你们学校正在举办 “Protect Wild
Animals” 的主题活动,在了解相关知识后,你发现许多野生动
物的生存现状非常令人担忧。请根据以下提示,写一篇关于保护
野生动物的短文,并向校园网站英语专栏投稿。#1
Protect
Wild
Animals ●Which wild animals are in danger?
●Why are wild animals endangered?
●Why should we protect wild animals?
●How do we protect wild animals?
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写作要求:#1.1.1
1.短文需包含图示所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Protect Wild Animals
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Protect Wild Animals
The Earth is home to both humans and wild animals,
but some wild animals are in great danger today.
Why is this happening? First, people cut down too
many trees, so animals lose their homes. For example, some
birds can’t find places to build nests. Second, some people
kill animals for money. They take their fur or meat and sell
them. Third, dirty water and air from factories make
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animals sick. We must do something to help them. The
government can make rules to stop people from cutting
down trees and killing animals. As students, we can tell our
friends and family why it’s important to protect animals. We
can also stop buying things made of animals, like fur coats.
Protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves. Let’s try
our best to keep them safe.
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