内容正文:
贵州
英 语
主题写作指导册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
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中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考: 2023贵州要求以“My ____ Family Memory”
为题,介绍家庭记忆及感受。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①介绍中华民族传统美德;②
与家人如何相处。
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主题教材链接
人教版 仁爱版
七(上)U2 The family
八(下)U4 Interpersonal communication /
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1.Home is where the heart is. My family makes
every moment filled with warmth.
2.We value the time we spend with our family and
friends in our everyday lives.
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中
间
句 介绍
家庭
记忆
及感
受 1.Every year, my family and I take a photo together
under the big tree in our village. I like taking photos
because they help me remember fun times with
my family.[新人教七(上) U7]
2.Think about how your family and friends will feel.
[外研九(下) M5]
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中
间
句 介绍
家庭
记忆
及感
受 3.My family got away for a holiday last summer
and went to some famous places along the original
road.[北师九(全) U7]
4.No matter how busy they are, my parents always
find time for me.
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中
间
句 介绍
家庭
记忆
及感
受 5.The more time I spend with my family, the
happier I feel.
6.Every weekend, we have dinner together and talk
about our days. There’s no better feeling than
being with family.
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中
间
句 介绍
中华
民族
传统
美德 1.Respecting the old and loving the young is a
good tradition that we should follow.
2.Traditional virtues are part of our culture. That’s
why I think everyone must keep them alive.
3.I’ve come to understand our family values
behind this saying—to be truthful and honest.
4.I’ve learned that respecting elders isn’t just a
rule—it’s a way to love our family.
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中
间
句 和家
人如
何相
处 1.I get into trouble because my parents do not
allow me to play outside. I do not understand why
they are so strict with me.[译林牛津九(上)
U3]
2.Parents should allow children to have their own
choices.
3.We should first ask parents for help because they
have more experience and are always there to help
us.
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结尾句 1.A little patience and more care can make our
family full of love.
2.As for me, I’ve realized that we should have a
talk instead of arguing with our parents.
3.Understanding is like a bridge, which can help
narrow the generation gap.
俗语谚语 1.Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水。
2.Harmony in a family makes everything successful.
家和万事兴。
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◆句子翻译
1.当我们遇到问题时,我们可以向家人寻求帮助。(Tip:ask…for
help)
_______________________________________________________
When we meet problems, we can ask our family for help.
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2.父母有时对我们严格,但这能帮助我们学会在人际交往中尊重
他人。(Tip: be strict with…)
________________________________________________________
___________________________________________
Parents are sometimes strict with us, but it helps us learn to respect others in interpersonal relationships.
3.我们彼此交流得越多,我们的家庭就会越幸福。(Tip: the+比
较级, the+比较级)
________________________________________________________
_________
The more we talk with each other, the happier our family
will be.
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4.无论我们遇到什么问题,我们的家人总会帮助我们。
(Tip: no matter)
________________________________________________________
_________
No matter what problems we have, our family will always
help us.
5.我们应该相互倾听,而不仅仅是谈论自己。这样能让我们更加
亲密。(Tip:instead of…)
________________________________________________________
_____________________________
We should listen to each other instead of only talking about ourselves. It makes us closer.
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◆句式升格
6.There are many good memories. And we share them with our
family.(Tip: that引导的定语从句)
________________________________________________________
________
There are many good memories that we share with our
family.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来
温暖、快乐、健康、智慧以及一次前进的力量。英语课上,你们
班开展了一次以家庭为主题的讨论,请你参考以下信息,以
“Make a(n) ____ Home”为题,写一篇短文,分享自己的想法。
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写作要求:
1.请补全标题;
2.短文需包含图示所有信息,并适当拓展;
3.词数为80左右;
4.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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审题四要素:
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时
审要点:①介绍可以让家庭温暖的三个方面的建议;②表达自己的想法。
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Make a(n)___ Home
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一、构思框架
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Make a Warm Home
A warm home is a
nice place for our
hearts. Small actions can
make it full of love. Make a Warm Home
A warm home is like a safe
place for the heart.①______________
_________________________________
______(用It’s believed that…句型升
格)
It’s believed that small actions can make it full of love.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
First, spend more time
with family. We can have
meals together. We can
watch movies on
weekends, or we can walk
after dinner. These
moments make us feel
close. Second, First, spend more time with
family. We can have dinner
together, watch movies on
weekends or go for walks after
supper.②_______________________
_______________________________
___(用There is no doubt that…句
型升格)Second,
There is no doubt that these moments make us feel closer.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
talk about happiness and
problems with family. When we
share happy feelings, they grow.
When we have problems, family
can help and support us. Third,
help with housework. talk about happiness and
problems with our family.
When we share joys, they
become bigger. If we have
troubles, family can give us
advice and support.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
It’s not just parents’
job. Small things
like cleaning rooms
and washing the
dishes can show
our care. ③___________________________________
_________________(用It is +adj. for sb.
to do sth.句型升格) It’s not just parents’
job. Small things like cleaning rooms and
washing the dishes can show our care.
Third, it is necessary for us to help
with housework.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
A warm home needs
us to do our parts and
listen to each other. These
little things make us
closer, and that’s true
warmth. A warm home isn’t just about
having a big house. It’s about
doing our part and listening to
each other. These little things make
us closer, and that’s true warmth.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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良好的亲子沟通是家庭和谐
的重要基石,当沟通出现阻碍时,
恰当的方法往往能化解矛盾。假
如你是李华,你的朋友Jack和父
母在沟通方面存在问题,请你用英语给Jack写一封电子邮件,给
予他一些建议。
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写作要求:
1.邮件需包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为 80 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Jack,
Good parent-child communication helps to create a happy
family.____
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Jack,
Good parent-child communication helps to create a
happy family.I know you’re having trouble talking with your
parents, so I want to share my story and some simple ideas
with you.
Once, I wanted to go to a friend’s party on a school
night. My parents said “No” at first. I got a bit angry, but
then I sat down and listened. They were worried about my
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sleep and study. After hearing that, I told them I’d finish
my homework first and be back early. Finally, they agreed.
Here are my suggestions for you. First, talk with your
parents when you’re all calm. Don’t argue with your parents
when you’re angry. Second, listen to your parents. Let them
say their ideas. Third, tell them your feelings softly. For
example, you can tell them you feel sad when you can’t talk
well.
I hope these can help. May you and your parents
understand each other better.
Yours,
Li Hua
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