内容正文:
贵州
英 语
主题写作指导册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
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中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考:暂未考查。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①谈论健康的重要性以及如何
保持健康;②青少年心理健康;③如何保证自身安全。
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主题教材链接
人教版 仁爱版
七(上)U6
Food Ⅰ
七(下)U10
Food Ⅱ
八(下)U1
Health and first
aid 七(上)U3 T3 What would you like to
drink?
八(上)U1 Playing Sports
八(上)U2 Keeping Healthy
八(下)U5 T3 Many things can affect our
feelings.
八(下)U7 T3 Section D Healthy eating
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开
头
句 1.There is an old saying, “A healthy body is a healthy
mind.”
2.Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health.
It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep
healthy.
3.Sports are of great importance to us. They can help us
build up our bodies and become healthy.
4.In order to make us grow up safely, our school has
made many safety rules for us to follow.
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中
间
句 健康
生活 1.You need to brush your teeth after eating to have
good teeth.[人教七(下) U2]
2.It’s said that half of the students don’t have
breakfast regularly or don’t eat anything at all in the
morning.[仁爱八(下) U7]
3.We should not only eat enough good, healthy food
but also eat regularly.[仁爱八(下) U7]
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中
间
句 健康
生活 4.It is a good idea for us to do exercise every day.
There is no doubt that regular exercise can give us
strong bodies.
5.It is necessary for us to have enough sleep. We
should go to bed and get up early to sleep for at
least eight hours every day.
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中
间
句 心理
健康 1.Doctors say too much pressure is not good for a
child’s development.[人教八(下) U4]
2.We should learn to deal with stress by listening to
relaxing music or watching interesting movies.
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中
间
句 心理
健康 3.When we are sad, it is a good choice to tell our
problems to our parents and teachers to ask for
help.
4.We should be friendly to our classmates and not
fight with them. If we are in trouble, we should ask
our teachers and parents for help.
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中
间
句 解决
烦恼
的建
议 1.I suggest that you should talk more about your
problems with your friends.
2.I think you should join some clubs and make
more friends.
3.We must get on well with others. It can keep us
in a good mood.
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中
间
句 人身
安全 1.It’s necessary for you to learn about first aid.
[仁爱八(上) U2]
2.At home, we should be careful with fire and
electricity.
3.Don’t push each other, especially when we go
upstairs or downstairs.
4.Besides, you’d better not ride side by side, or you
may be in danger.
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结尾句
(呼吁、表
达期望) 1.Follow the doctor’s advice, and you’ll get well
soon.
2.All in all, playing football is a good way to
build up my body and relax myself.
3.These are some good ways to keep healthy.
Everyone should try his/her best to care about
personal health for a better life.
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俗语谚语 1.Early to bed, early to rise.早睡早起。
2.Health is the first wealth. 健康是第一财富。
3.He who has health has hope. 拥有健康就拥有
希望。
4.A light heart lives long. 豁达者长寿。
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俗语谚语 5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一
苹果,医生远离我。
6.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man
healthy, wealthy and wise. 早睡早起使人健康、
富有且聪明。
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◆句子翻译
1.学生们应该更重视日常锻炼。(Tip: pay much more attention
to…)
________________________________________________________
Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise.
2.青少年有必要学会勇敢面对困难。(Tip: It is+adj. for sb. to
do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_________
It is necessary for teenagers to learn to face difficulties
bravely.
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3.体育活动中的团队协作对教会学生尊重至关重要。(Tip: be of
great importance to…)
________________________________________________________
__________________
Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to teach students respect.
4.对学生来说,早睡早起是个好的选择。(Tip: It is a good cho
ice for sb. to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
_______
It is a good choice for students to go to bed and get up
early.
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5.毫无疑问,坚持做运动能让我们变强壮。(Tip: There is no d
oubt that…)
________________________________________________________
____
There is no doubt that keeping doing sports makes us strong.
6.和朋友一起打打球能让我们心情愉悦。(Tip: keep sb. in a go
od mood)
________________________________________________________
___
Playing ball games with friends can keep us in a good mood.
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7.我们要对同学友好,还要勇敢地和他们一起尝试新的运动。
(Tip: be friendly to)
________________________________________________________
________________________
We should be friendly to our classmates and be brave to try new sports with them.
8.当我们感到难过时,我们可以多和朋友待在一起。
(Tip: spend…with…)
________________________________________________________
________
When we feel upset, we can spend more time with our
friends.
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◆句式升格
9.We take part in outdoor sports. Our bodies and minds will be
more healthy.(Tip: the+比较级,the+比较级)
________________________________________________________
_________________________
The more we take part in outdoor sports, the healthier our bodies and minds will be.
10.We should never give up exercising. It’s hard to stay healthy
both in body and mind without it.(Tip: because)
________________________________________________________
__________________________________________
We should never give up exercising because it’s hard to stay healthy both in body and mind without it.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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2025年是国家“体重管理年”实施的关键阶段,全民健康生活
行动计划倡导青少年通过科学方法管理体重。某英语网站正在举
办以“How to Manage Our Weight Wisely”为题的征文活动, 请
你用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享科学管理体重的建议。
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写作要求:
1.短文需包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为 80 左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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审题四要素:
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时
审要点:①体重管理的重要性;
②管理体重的方法(健康饮食、规
律锻炼、良好习惯、积极心态等);
③号召其他人也加入体重管理。
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How to Manage Our Weight Wisely
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一、构思框架
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
How to Manage Our
Weight Wisely
2025 is the Weight
Management Year. Everyone
should do something to be
healthier. How to Manage Our Weight
Wisely
2025 is the Weight
Management Year, and everyone
should take action to improve
their health.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Weight management is
important. It helps us
stay healthy and feel
better.
First, eat well.
Have more vegetables
and fruit, not sugary
or fatty snacks. ①________________________________
__________________________________
____________(用because引导的原因状
语从句升格)
First, keep a balanced diet. Eat
more vegetables and fruit instead of
snacks full of sugar and fat.
Weight management is important
because it helps us stay healthy and
feel better.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Drink enough water to
control calories.
Second, exercise for 30
minutes daily. We can
play sports with family
or friends. Third, early
to bed and early to
rise. Drinking enough water also helps
control calories. Second, exercise for at
least 30 minutes every day. Exercise
such as playing sports is fun, and ②__
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________(用it’s a good choice for
sb. to do sth.升格)Third,
it’s a good choice for us to spend time playing sports with our family and friends.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Avoid staying up late,
or we’ll feel tired.
When feeling sad, we
can talk to our friends
or write a diary to
relax. early to bed and early to rise. Avoid
staying up late, as we may feel tired.
Lastly, stay active. ③_______________
__________________________________
________________(用if引导的条件状
语从句升格) A cheerful mind is the
key to health.
If we feel sad,
we can talk to our friends or write
a diary to relax.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Let’s act together!
Share exercise videos
to encourage others.
Small steps bring big
changes! Let’s act together. ④____________
__________________________________
_____________(用encourage sb. to do
sth.升格) Small steps lead to big
changes!
Sharing
exercise videos can encourage others
to join in too.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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近来,安全问题备受关注。专家指
出,提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避
免80%的意外伤害。因此,自我保护是
青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以
“Self-Protection”
为题写一篇英文演讲稿,选择图中的两
个方面,谈谈自我保护的重要性,并提
出具体的建议。
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写作要求:
1.短文需包含图中信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为 80 左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Self-Protection
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Self-Protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently, safety has been paid much attention to. Self-
protection is one of the most important skills for us. We can
avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know
what to do in different situations.
Fires are one of the most terrible accidents around us.
If our building is on fire, the most important thing is to
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calm down first. Then, cover the mouth and nose with a
wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke and try to
get out as soon as possible. School bullying is another
danger that may happen around us. If we experience school
bullying, we must tell our teachers or parents about it. They
will help us deal with it well. What’s more, it’s necessary
for us to help others if they are in trouble. In a word, we
should learn some self-protection skills to live a safe and
happy life.
Thanks for your listening!
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