内容正文:
Unit 6 Animals
⭐Writing 知识点清单
一、核心写作目标
为英文杂志介绍一种特殊动物,包含:
· 清晰说明动物名称、外形特征
· 介绍其特殊生活习性、能力或其他独特之处
· 结构清晰、语言生动,符合说明文写作要求
二、写作结构与内容框架(以蓝鲸为例)
1. 段落结构(Para. 1 → Para. 2 → Para. 3)
段落
核心内容
示例(蓝鲸)
Para. 1
总体介绍 + 核心特征(是什么、体型 / 重量 / 长度等)
Blue whales are the biggest animals in the world. They can weigh between 100,000 and 200,000 kg and can grow up to 32 metres long!
Para. 2
饮食与寿命(吃什么、吃多少、能活多久)
They need a lot of food every day. A blue whale eats 3,600 kg of food a day... Most blue whales can live for 80 to 90 years.
Para. 3
特殊能力 / 生活方式(行动、交流、其他特点)
They usually swim quickly... and can make really loud sounds so they can hear each other 1,600 km away!
2. 必写内容点(Content Focus)
· ✅ 体重 / 长度 / 速度等数字特征
· ✅ 饮食:吃什么、每天吃多少
· ✅ 寿命:能活多久
· ✅ 特殊能力 / 习性:如发声、游泳方式、社交行为等
三、核心语言点(Focus on Language)
1. 描述动物的常用表达
(1) 用数字描述特征
· 体重 / 长度:... weigh between ... and ... kg / can grow up to ... metres long
· 食量:... eats ... kg of food a day
· 寿命:... can live for ... to ... years
· 速度 / 距离:... at a speed of ... km/h / ... can hear each other ... km away
(2) 用方式副词描述生活方式
· They usually swim quickly, alone or in pairs...
· They live peacefully in the ocean.
· They communicate loudly with each other.
(3) 介绍饮食与习性
· They often eat the tiny animals called...
· They don’t eat big fish.
· They usually live alone or in pairs.
⭐写作
题目:Introduce a Special Animal
假设你要为学校英文公众号介绍一种特殊的动物。请根据以下要点,写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 点明你要介绍的动物名称(如大熊猫 panda、大象 elephant、海豚 dolphin 等);
2. 描述它的外形或体型(颜色、大小、体重 / 长度等);
3. 介绍它的饮食或生活习性;
4. 说说它的一个特殊能力或特别之处。
要求:
· 短文须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
· 词数:60–80 词;
· 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
· 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
范文(大熊猫)
Introduce a Special Animal
My favourite special animal is the giant panda. It is one of the most lovely animals in the world.
Giant pandas are black and white. They are fat and look very cute. An adult panda can weigh up to 100 kg and grow to about 1.5 metres long. They mainly eat bamboo—an adult panda eats about 18 kg of bamboo a day!
They are good at climbing trees and swimming. Giant pandas are a symbol of China, and we must protect them well.
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