Unit6 写作专项：Introducing an Animal2025-2026学年北师大版英语七年级下册

北师大版英语七年级下 Unit6 写作专项 Introducing an Animal 一、写作目标 结合本单元“动物、简单句与并列复合句、方式副词”的核心目标，能写一篇三段式短文介绍一种动物，内容包括：基本特征、生活习性和特殊能力。 1. 能正确使用并列复合句（and, but, or）和方式副词（quickly, loudly, carefully）丰富描述。 2. 能运用数据和细节，让介绍更具说服力。 3. 遵循“基本特征-生活习性-特殊能力”的三段式结构，语言流畅，字数控制在80-120词，贴合七年级学生水平。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：说明文（短文），用于为英文杂志介绍一种特别的动物，语气客观、信息清晰。 2. 人称：主要使用第三人称（they, it）描述动物。 3. 时态：核心使用一般现在时介绍事实和习性。 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清动物的体型、重量、寿命、食物、生活方式和特殊能力。 · 格式：包含开头（基本特征）、正文（生活习性）、结尾（特殊能力）三部分，结构完整。 · 字数：80-120词，合理运用并列复合句和方式副词，贴合单元语法要求。 三、典型例题 你要为一本英文杂志介绍一种特别的动物。请你写一篇短文，介绍这种动物的特别之处。 要点： 1. 这种动物是什么？它有什么基本特征（如体型、重量、寿命）？ 2. 它的生活习性是怎样的（如吃什么、怎么生活）？ 3. 它有什么特殊的能力或特点？ 四、思路点拨 1. 第一段（开头）：用“... are the ... animals in the world.”点明其独特地位，并用数据（重量、长度、寿命）描述基本特征。 2. 第二段（正文）：介绍其饮食习惯（每天吃多少、吃什么）和生活方式，使用并列复合句连接信息。 3. 第三段（结尾）：描述其特殊能力（如游泳速度、发声能力），并用方式副词（quickly, loudly）让表达更生动。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解） 第一段：开头（基本特征） 写作目的：开门见山，突出动物的独特性。 必写要素：独特地位 + 体型、重量、寿命 基础句式：[动物] are the [形容词最高级] animals in the world. They can weigh between [数字] and [数字] kg and can grow up to [数字] metres long! Most [动物] can live for [数字] to [数字] years. 示例：Blue whales are the biggest animals in the world. They can weigh between 100,000 and 200,000 kg and can grow up to 32 metres long! Most blue whales can live for 80 to 90 years. 第二段：正文（生活习性） 写作目的：详细介绍动物的日常。 必写要素：饮食习惯 + 生活方式 + 并列复合句 基础句式：They need a lot of food every day. A [动物] eats [数字] kg of food a day. They often eat [食物], but they don’t eat [其他食物]. They usually live [生活方式]. 示例：They need a lot of food every day. A blue whale eats 3,600 kg of food a day. They often eat the tiny animals called krill, but they don’t eat big fish. They usually live alone or in pairs. 第三段：结尾（特殊能力） 写作目的：展示动物的非凡之处，用副词丰富表达。 必写要素：特殊能力 + 方式副词 基础句式：They usually swim [方式副词], at a speed of [数字] km/h, and can make really [形容词] sounds so they can hear each other [数字] km away! 示例：They usually swim quickly, at a speed of 20 km/h, and can make really loud sounds so they can hear each other 1,600 km away! 六、范文（中英对照 ） A Special Animal Blue whales are the biggest animals in the world. They can weigh between 100,000 and 200,000 kg and can grow up to 32 metres long! Most blue whales can live for 80 to 90 years. They need a lot of food every day. A blue whale eats 3,600 kg of food a day. They often eat the tiny animals called krill, but they don’t eat big fish. They usually live alone or in pairs in the ocean. They usually swim quickly, at a speed of 20 km/h, and can make really loud sounds so they can hear each other 1,600 km away! It’s amazing how such large animals communicate so far apart. 中文翻译 一种特别的动物 蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物。它们的体重在10万到20万公斤之间，体长可达32米！大多数蓝鲸能活80到90年。 它们每天需要大量的食物。一头蓝鲸每天要吃3600公斤的食物。它们经常吃一种叫做磷虾的小动物，但不吃大鱼。它们通常独自或成对生活在海洋里。 它们通常游得很快，时速可达20公里，并且能发出非常响亮的声音，以至于在1600公里外都能听到彼此的声音！这么大的动物能在这么远的距离交流，真是太神奇了。 七、素材积累 好词 1. weigh between ... and ... kg 体重在……到……公斤之间 2. grow up to ... metres long 体长可达……米 3. live for ... to ... years 能活……到……年 4. tiny animals 小动物 5. live alone or in pairs 独自或成对生活 6. at a speed of ... km/h 以……公里/小时的速度 好句 1. Blue whales are the biggest animals in the world. They can weigh between 100,000 and 200,000 kg and can grow up to 32 metres long! （蓝鲸是世界上最大的动物。它们的体重在10万到20万公斤之间，体长可达32米！） 2. They often eat the tiny animals called krill, but they don’t eat big fish. （它们经常吃一种叫做磷虾的小动物，但不吃大鱼。） 3. They usually swim quickly, at a speed of 20 km/h, and can make really loud sounds so they can hear each other 1,600 km away! （它们通常游得很快，时速可达20公里，并且能发出非常响亮的声音，以至于在1600公里外都能听到彼此的声音！） 谚语 1. Animals are not property, they are sentient beings. （动物不是财产，它们是有感知的生命。） 2. The greatest pleasure of a dog is that you may make a fool of him, and he will not only take it in good part, but even thank you. （狗最大的乐趣在于，你可以愚弄它，它不仅不会生气，甚至还会感谢你。） 3. Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. （直到爱上一种动物，人的灵魂才会被完全唤醒。） 4. Save animals, save the earth. （拯救动物，拯救地球。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 A Special Animal [动物，如Pandas] are very special animals. They can weigh between [数字，如100] and [数字，如150] kg and can grow up to [数字，如1.5] metres long! Most [动物] can live for [数字，如20] to [数字，如30] years. They need a special diet every day. A [动物] eats about [数字，如12] kg of [食物，如bamboo] a day. They like to eat [食物] very much, but they also eat small animals sometimes. They usually live in [地点，如the bamboo forests of China]. They usually move [方式副词，如slowly] on the ground, and they can climb trees very [方式副词，如skillfully] to get food. They are also very good at [能力，如swimming] in the rivers nearby! ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $