读后续写-家庭亲情个人成长励志类-被全镇嫌弃的旧灯，被一个女孩救活了 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 天一大联考2025-2026学年(上)高三顶尖计划(二)试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In Willowbrook, a small quiet town by a slow river, the old lantern by the water burned every night without fail(伏笔). It was a simple glass lamp on a wooden post, kept burning with oil and devotion(过去分词短语做后置定语). Fishermen used its steady light to find their way home. Children whispered as they walked past , saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作)it kept the scary dark under the old bridge away. For most people, it was just a common sight-like the river's gentle waves or the birds in the trees. But for Elena, it was the only string holding her shaky world together(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Elena grew up in a house where silence filled the corners. Her father, a poor fisherman , spoke little and worked late. At twelve, she often did her homework by the window, watching the flame shining across the water(现在分词短语做伴随动作), steady(adj做主语补语) while everything else shifted. When her father forgot dinner or came home exhausted(过去分词做主语补语), she would imagine that the lantern was speaking for him :I am still here, I am still light. Trouble came suddenly one autumn. A terrible storm hit Willowbrook(无灵主语句). Trees were bent in half, and riverbanks were flooded. When night came without the familiar light, Elena felt empty ,like her heart missed a beat. Early the next morning, she ran to the riverbank. The lantern lay in the mud, its glass broken into small pieces(独立主格). Villagers stood around shaking their heads, saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作) another old thing was gone.Worse, the town meeting had already decided to put up a new floodlight-brighter, easier, more modern(adj做补语). No one cared about the old lantern. Elena's heart was heavy. To her, the lantern was more than a light. It was her father's silent company and a steady comfort(冲突点). That warmth could never be replaced by cold electricity. Elena suggested fixing the lantern , but most people thought it was unnecessary. Even her father said she was wasting time. But only Elena knew what the lantern meant to her. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Elena decided to follow her heart. Paragraph 2: Elena carried the lantern to the riverbank and placed it on the wooden post. 天一大联考2025-2026学年(上)高三顶尖计划(二)试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In Willowbrook, a small quiet town by a slow river, the old lantern by the water burned every night without fail. It was a simple glass lamp on a wooden post(f), kept burning with oil and devotion. Fishermen used its steady light to find their way home. Children whispered as they walked past , saying it kept the scary dark under the old bridge away. For most people, it was just a common sight-like the river's gentle waves or the birds in the trees. But for Elena, it was the only string holding her shaky world together. Elena grew up in a house where silence filled the corers. Her father, a poor fisherman , spoke little and worked late. At twelve, she often did her homework by the window, watching the flame shining across the water, steady while everything else shifted. When her father forgot dinner or came home exhausted, she would imagine that the lantern was speaking for him : I am still here. I am still light. Trouble came suddenly one autumn. A terrible storm hit Willowbrook. Trees were bent in half, and riverbanks were flooded, When night came without the familiar light, Elena felt empty ,like her heart missed a beat. Early the next morning, she ran to the riverbank. The lantern lay in the mud, its glass broken into small pieces. Villagers stood around shaking their heads, saying another old thing was gone.Worse, the town meeting had already decided to put up a new floodlight-brighter, easier, more modern. No one cared about the old lantern.Elena's heart was heavy. To her, the lantern was more than a light. It was her father's silent company and a steady comfort. That warmth could never be replaced by cold electricity. Elena suggested fixing the lantern , but most people thought it was unnecessary. Even her father said she was wasting time. But only Elena knew what the lantern meant to her. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Elena decided to follow her heart. Paragraph 2: Elena carried the lantern to the riverbank and placed it on the wooden post. 一、读后续写分类 1. 续写类型归类 本篇属于 ✔ 家庭亲情个人成长励志类 ✔ 亲情线（父女情感修复） ✔ 情感寄托类（物象象征 —— Lantern作为情感寄托） ✔ 人物内驱型（主人公为信念行动） 2. 续写构思总体原则 （1）思路聚焦：承接“情感线+行动线”双轨推进 原文情感核心：Elena把灯笼看作父亲的沉默陪伴 矛盾核心：镇上要换灯 → 老灯被认为无用 → Elena坚持修复 行动力：她决定修、修过程中遇阻、最终完成、获得认可 （2）续写布局应采用“故事山模式” 第一段（Paragraph 1）特点： 起—承—转：她决定行动 → 面对困难 → 有人阻止/父亲沉默 → 她坚持下去 第二段（Paragraph 2）特点： 转—合：修复完成 → 父亲态度转变 → 情感升华 → 灯再次点亮构成象征性收束 （3）续写框架 ① 情感动因（why） 她执念于修灯，因为灯象征父爱 → 内心力量来源明确 ② 行动步骤（how） 捡灯 → 修补 → 试灯 → 遭质疑 → 不放弃 → 继续修复 ③ 情感转折（emotional turn） 父亲从“不理解”→“默默帮助”→“认可” ④ 升华（so what） 灯光再亮 → 父女关系照亮 → 故事完成闭环 3. 续写注意事项 （1）不得新增重要人物 可用“villagers”“fishermen”等集体称呼，但不能出现新独立人物。 （2）情节必须合理承接原文 原文：灯碎了 → 她想修 → 无人支持 → 父亲反对 续写：必须围绕「修灯」展开，不得偏离主线。 （3）语言风格需延续原文意境 原文风格：朴素、温情、小镇氛围 光线意象（light、warmth、steady）贯穿 续写需保持同样的静美与象征性。 （4）要体现人物成长 从“孤独依赖灯光”→“主动修复灯光”→“成为光的创造者” 4. 设计 （1）巧用“象征/隐喻”呼应原文 灯光 = 爱、陪伴、父亲 修复灯光 = 修复关系 （2）加入“父亲的情感觉醒”作为转折点 父亲本来不理解 → 最终在沉默中给予帮助（情感递进且契合原文人物性格：沉默、内敛） （3）加入“自然/环境描写”营造画面感 如：wind softened / river calmed / dawn light / warm glow用于强化情绪。 （4）结尾构成“灯重新亮起”的情感闭环 典型高分收尾句： The lantern glowed again, just like the silent love between them. This time, it was not only the river that was lit up, but also her father’s eyes. 二、故事山 故事山元素 原文位置 续写任务 起（背景） 小镇、灯笼、父亲沉默 不再赘述 承（矛盾出现） 暴风雨 → 灯碎 → 镇上要换灯 → 无人支持她修灯 第一段承接矛盾，写“坚持修灯” 转（情节高潮） 她决定修，但父亲反对，村民不理解 第一段后半段：修灯遇阻，情绪受挫 合（矛盾解决） 父亲可能会悄悄帮她 → 灯重亮 第二段：行动成功，情感修复 三、文章分析 分析角度 内容分析（可直接告诉学生） 原文反应句（证据） 人物刻画 Elena：敏感、坚韧、情感寄托于灯；父亲：沉默、内敛、勤劳；村民：实用主义 “silence filled the corners.” / “her father… spoke little” / “only Elena knew what the lantern meant to her.” 情感层次 借光寄情 → 灯碎心碎 → 被否定 → 坚持修复 → 重获温暖 “it was her father’s silent company” / “her heart was heavy” 关键情节点 灯碎 → 镇上投票 → 她坚持修 → 父亲反对 → 情感冲突形成 “The lantern lay in the mud…” / “town meeting… a new floodlight” 语言特色 大量意象（light、river、silence）、象征、静谧小镇氛围 “steady light” / “gentle waves” 关键词分析 steady light, silent company, shaky world, empty, heavy heart → 情绪变化明显 “shaky world” / “empty” / “heavy” 心理描写 灯是她的精神支柱；灯碎=安全感碎 “it was her father’s silent company and a steady comfort.” 动作描写 她跑去河边、捡灯、观察灯碎 “she ran to the riverbank” 环境描写 静谧小镇对比暴风雨、小镇会议对比孩子情感 “small quiet town” / “terrible storm hit” 隐含主题 光是爱的象征；修灯是修复关系；成长靠自己点亮内心之光 整体贯穿light象征 情感转折 从依赖 → 惊慌 → 伤心 → 坚定 → 最终治愈 “When night came without the familiar light, Elena felt empty.” 空间转换 家中窗边 → 河边 → 镇民会议背景 → 修灯空间 “by the window…” → “riverbank” 时间过渡 暴风雨夜 → 第二天早晨 “Early the next morning” 五、文章细致点 1. 伏笔（Foreshadowing） 父亲沉默但并非不在乎 → 服务于“最终理解、帮忙”的可能性 灯=父亲的象征 → 最终灯复亮必须与父亲相关 2. 冲突点（Conflict） 村民、镇会议反对修灯 父亲认为她在浪费时间 情感冲突：现代化与旧物的意义 3. 隐含线索 灯光承载父爱 灯稳如父亲“无声的陪伴” → 续写需回到“父与女”的情感线 4. 解决方案（Resolution） Elena修灯成功 父亲态度转变、给予帮助 灯光亮起 → 情感修复与成长象征完成 6、 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写 动作描写 She bent down carefully, picking up the shattered pieces of glass one by one.　她小心弯下腰，把碎玻璃一片片拾起。 Her fingers trembled slightly as she brushed the mud off the old lantern. 　她的手指微微颤抖，轻轻拂去旧灯笼上的泥。 Elena tightened her grip on the lantern frame, as if holding onto a part of her childhood. 　Elena抓紧灯架，仿佛抓住童年的一部分。 She wiped her forehead with the back of her hand, leaving a trail of dirt. 　她用手背擦了擦额头，留下了一道泥痕。 The girl pushed open the door quietly, hoping not to disturb her exhausted father. 　女孩轻轻推开门，希望不要吵到疲惫的父亲。 She knelt beside the lantern, adjusting the tiny screws with great patience. 　她跪在灯旁，耐心地调着小螺丝。 A soft sigh escaped her lips as the flame flickered for the first time. 　当火焰初次闪动时，她轻轻叹了口气。 Her father paused mid-step, watching her in silent surprise. 　她父亲脚步一顿，默默惊讶地看着她。 She pressed her palm against the cold glass, checking for cracks. 　她把手贴在冰凉的玻璃上，查看是否有裂纹。 Elena lifted the lantern with both hands, as if it were something sacred. 　Elena用双手托起灯笼，仿佛那是神圣之物。 心理描写 A wave of disappointment washed over her when she saw the broken lantern. 　看到破损的灯笼，一阵失望涌上心头。 Her heart tightened, afraid that the warmth she relied on had vanished forever. 　她心头一紧，害怕她依赖的温暖从此消失。 She fought back the urge to cry, forcing herself to stay calm. 　她强忍住想哭的冲动，逼自己冷静。 Doubt flickered in her mind, but determination quickly replaced it. 　怀疑在脑中闪过，但很快被决心取代。 A quiet hope rose within her as she worked on the lantern. 　当她修灯时，一丝希望在心里升起。 His words stung her, but she refused to step back. 　他的话刺痛了她，但她拒绝退缩。 For a moment, she felt the loneliness of her childhood return. 　一瞬间，她仿佛又回到了儿时的孤独中。 Warm relief flooded her chest when the flame finally steadied. 　当火焰终于稳定时，一股温暖的释然涌上心头。 She sensed her father’s silent support, though he said nothing. 　她感受到了父亲无声的支持，尽管他什么也没说。 Pride bloomed inside her, soft but powerful. 　一种柔软却强大的自豪在她心中绽放。 环境描写 The river glimmered faintly under the pale morning light. 　河水在清晨微弱的光中隐约闪亮。 A thin mist hung above the water, softening the broken shapes around her. 　水面上飘着薄雾，让周围破碎的景象变得柔和。 The air smelled of wet soil after the storm. 　暴风雨后，空气里弥漫着湿土的气味。 The town was unusually quiet, as if holding its breath. 　小镇异常安静，仿佛屏住了呼吸。 Clouds drifted slowly across the sky, leaving trails of silver light. 　云朵缓缓飘过天空，留下银色光痕。 The wooden post stood lonely by the riverbank, waiting for its light to return. 　河岸旁的木柱孤独地立着，仿佛在等待它的光重新归来。 A soft breeze stirred the leaves, carrying the scent of the river. 　微风吹动树叶，带来河水的气息。 Shadows stretched long across the path as the sun dipped lower. 　随着太阳的下沉，影子在小路上渐渐拉长。 The gentle lap of waves against the bank echoed in the quiet air. 　轻柔的水波拍打河岸的声音回荡在静谧的空气中。 When the lantern lit up again, its warm glow spread like a small sunrise. 　当灯再次亮起时，它的暖光像一轮小小的日出扩散开来。 高级词替换 （A）情绪类高级词 基础词 高级替换词 sad heart-sore / downhearted happy uplifted / light-hearted afraid uneasy / unsettled nervous on edge / tense hopeful reassured / encouraged （B）动作类高级词 基础词 高级替换词 hold clutch / grip / seize look at gaze at / peer at walk wander / stride / pace say murmur / whisper / remark help assist / lend a hand （C）描写光与环境（特别适合本篇） 基础词 高级替换词 light glow / radiance / gleam dark gloom / shadow / dusk shine shimmer / glimmer quiet hushed / tranquil cold chilly / crisp / biting 固定搭配 ① hold on to sth. 坚持/保留某物（抽象或具体） → Elena坚持修灯必用 ② fight back tears / emotions 强忍情绪 ③ be flooded with（emotion） 被某种情绪淹没（高级替换 feel…） ④ cast a warm glow 散发温暖光芒（适合灯光） ⑤ watch in silence 沉默地注视（符合父亲人设） ⑥ be torn between A and B 在两者之间挣扎（情感冲突） ⑦ steady one’s breath 稳住呼吸（修灯时的紧张） ⑧ a surge of (emotion) rushed through sb. 情绪突然袭来 ⑨ kneel beside / bend over 动作描写高频 ⑩ give…a gentle wipe / polish 轻轻擦拭（修复动作） 生词短语 ① shattered (adj.) 词意： 破碎的 近义词： broken, smashed, crushed 反义词： intact, complete 例句：The shattered lantern lay helplessly in the mud. Her hopes felt as shattered as the broken glass. ② flicker (v.) 词意： 闪烁；摇曳 近义词： waver, tremble, glimmer 反义词： steady, stabilize 例句：A tiny flame flickered, struggling against the wind. Hope flickered inside her once more. ③ steady (v./adj.) 词意： 使稳定；稳定的 近义词： stabilize, firm, strengthen 反义词： shake, falter 例句：She steadied the lantern with careful hands. His voice was steady despite his worry. ④ devotion (n.) 词意： 奉献，挚爱 近义词： dedication, commitment 反义词： neglect, indifference 例句：The lantern had burned for years out of pure devotion. She repaired it with the same devotion she had received from it. ⑤ glimmer (n./v.) 词意： 微光；闪烁 近义词： gleam, shimmer 反义词： darkness, dullness 例句：A faint glimmer lit up her eyes. The lantern gave a gentle glimmer across the river. 7、 Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1: Elena decided to follow her heart. Though the villagers' doubtful looks still echoed in her mind, she refused to let them shake her belief. Kneeling beside the broken lantern(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she cleaned the glass pieces carefully, her hands moving with a mixture of nervousness and devotion(独立主格). The more she worked, the more vividly childhood memories returned—her father’s silent figure at the door(独立主格刻画人物), the soft glow across her homework pages, and the comfort that came from the steady flame when words failed him(无灵主语句). Fixing the lantern(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she realized, was also fixing the distance between them. Even when her father stepped outside and told her gently that “some things are too old to bring back,(延续父亲的态度)” she only smiled, sensing the tiredness rather than disapproval in his voice(现在分词短语做伴随动作). As the sun dipped lower and the repaired lantern finally flickered to life(无灵主语句), its soft flame trembled but held on—just like her hope. Holding the lantern close(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she knew exactly where she needed to take it next, ready to return it to the riverbank(adj做主语补语). Paragraph 2: Elena carried the lantern to the riverbank and placed it on the wooden post. For a moment she held her breath, afraid(adj做主语补语)the fragile flame might go out again. But instead it glowed more steadily,(无灵主语句) casting a warm circle of light on the rippling water(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The familiar glow seemed to call out, gently stitching together everything(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the storm had broken—not only the lamp, but the unspoken bond between her and her father. Behind her, soft footsteps approached.(无灵主语句) Her father stood quietly, his figure outlined by the lantern’s warm halo(独立主格). No words were needed; the look in his tired eyes—mixed with surprise, pride, and something like apology—was enough. He reached out and rested a rough hand on her shoulder, a gesture(补语) he rarely made. “You did well,” he whispered, the river breeze carrying his voice.(独立主格) As the lantern shone steadily again, Elena understood something: light could be repaired, but so could hearts, as long as someone was willing to begin. 动作描写亮点短语 kneeling beside the lantern cleaned the glass pieces carefully held her breath placed it on the wooden post his hand rested on her shoulder 心理描写亮点句 refused to let them shake her belief childhood memories returned vividly fixing the lantern was fixing the distance afraid the flame might go out again pride and apology mixed in his tired eyes 地道搭配 follow her heart echo in her mind tremble but hold on cast a warm circle of light stitch together what was broken 高级词汇与替换 基础词 替换词 fix restore / mend / repair think reflect / consider tired weary / drained light glow / radiance sad heart-sore / heavy-hearted 可积累词汇 1. flicker（闪烁） 同义词：glimmer / waver 例句：A faint hope flickered inside her. The lantern flickered before growing steady. Memories flickered across her mind. 2. devotion（挚爱） 同义词：commitment / dedication 例句：She worked with quiet devotion. The lantern had burned for years out of pure devotion. Devotion often shines where words fail. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Elena decided to follow her heart. Even though doubt pressed heavily on her shoulders(无灵主语句), she gathered the damaged lantern and carried it home, spreading tools across the small table by the window(现在分词短语做伴随动作). With rain still dripping from the eaves(with复合结构), she began working with a focus she had never felt before. Every sound—the turning of a screw, the clink of glass—seemed to echo her determination(无灵主语句). As she polished the dented frame, she recalled winter nights when her father returned late, his silence softening only (独立主格)when he glanced at the lantern’s glow. Perhaps, she thought, fixing it would remind him of the things neither of them had said for years. Her father stopped in the doorway, watching her with furrowed brows(现在分词短语做伴随动作), yet he didn’t interrupt. That small hesitation felt like permission. When the lantern finally emitted a fragile glow, her heart lifted, and she gathered it gently into her arms, ready to bring it back to the place it belonged.(adj短语做补语) Paragraph 2: Elena carried the lantern to the riverbank and placed it on the wooden post. The gentle flame wavered in the wind(无灵主语句). The river, still recovering from the storm(无灵主语句), reflected the warm glow like a ribbon of gold. As the lantern brightened, the villagers who had once dismissed it slowed their steps, murmuring in surprise(现在分词短语做伴随动作). From behind Elena came the soft crunch of gravel(全部倒装句)—her father again. He stood at her side, staring at the restored lantern(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as though seeing it for the first time. Standing together under the rekindled glow(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she felt years of silence loosen between them. The lantern’s light no longer belonged only to the river—it belonged to them both, a small but steady beginning. spreading tools polishing the dented frame shielded it with her hands slowed their steps stared as though seeing it for the first time 心理描写亮点 doubt pressed on her shoulders focus she had never felt before her heart lifted breath caught silence loosened between them 高级搭配 echo her determination memories he rarely shared belonged to them both wavered in the wind recovering from the storm 1. waver（摇曳） 同义词：falter / tremble 例句：The flame wavered but refused to die. Her confidence never wavered. Shadows wavered on the riverbank. 2. murmur（低声说） 同义词：whisper / mutter 例句：The villagers murmured in surprise. He murmured a quiet apology. Leaves murmured in the breeze. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Elena decided to follow her heart. She gathered the broken lantern and sat by the dim window, where she had once done her homework under its gentle glow. The storm clouds still hung low, mirroring the heaviness inside her(现在分词短语做伴随动作), but she refused to surrender to discouragement. As she carefully matched the broken glass pieces together, a realization settled over her:(无灵主语句) the lantern had witnessed every quiet moment of her childhood(无灵主语句)—moments her father was too exhausted to speak through. Perhaps, without knowing, he had relied on the lantern just as much as she had. When he appeared at the doorway and sighed that “old things break,” his words held more weariness than dismissal. She met his eyes and smiled softly, hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he could read the determination she could not put into words. After hours of repairing, the flame came alive again, trembling like a newly found voice((现在分词短语做伴随动作). Holding it steadily(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she stepped toward the river where the lantern truly belonged. Paragraph 2: Elena carried the lantern to the riverbank and placed it on the wooden post. Its warm glow spread slowly across the water, brushing the surface with soft gold(现在分词短语做伴随动作 ). The quiet beauty of the moment wrapped around her like a long-lost embrace.(无灵主语句) Behind her, her father approached, his footsteps hesitant at first(独立主格). He stopped beside her, gazing at the lantern(现在分词短语做伴随动作)as memories drifted through his eyes like shadows passing over water. “He said light should always come home.” Suddenly the lantern was no longer just comfort—it was a thread tying generations together. Elena felt tears rise, not from sadness but from belonging. Her father placed his hand over hers, a simple gesture carrying years of unspoken care(独立主格). As the lantern burned steadily, she realized rebuilding it had rebuilt something within them too—a shared light that, once lost, had finally found its way back. 动作亮点 matched broken pieces together stepped toward the river gazing at the lantern memories drifted through his eyes placed his hand over hers 心理亮点 refused to surrender to discouragement realization settled over her hoping he could read her determination tears rose from belonging rebuilt something within them 高级搭配 mirror the heaviness witness every quiet moment a newly found voice a thread tying generations unspoken care 1. surrender to（屈服于） 近义词：yield to / give in to 例句：She refused to surrender to doubt. He almost surrendered to exhaustion. Never surrender to fear in difficult times. 2. drift（慢慢流动） 近义词：float / wander 例句：Memories drifted through her mind. Clouds drifted above the quiet town. The lantern’s glow drifted across the river. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $