读后续写-环保主题家乡情怀个人成长类-高中生返乡开启“河道清洁”行动 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 云南省昆明市第一中学2026届高三上学期第四次联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mark’s hometown was a quiet little place in the countryside, with a beautiful river flowing gently through its center(with复合结构). When he was a kid, this river was always crystal-clear — its surface shone like countless small pieces of silver under the warm sun, and groups of colorful small fish swam freely in the shallow, cool waters(场景描写). It was undoubtedly Mark’s favorite spot in the whole town; every weekend, he’d gather his closest friends, grab their old fishing poles, and sit on the smooth, round stones by the grassy bank, chatting loudly about their daily lives and patiently waiting for fish to bite(现在分词短语做伴随动作)(伏笔). Last year, Mark left for another city to go to high school. He missed his peaceful hometown a lot, especially the beloved river that held so many of his childhood memories. During the long summer holiday, he packed his bags in excitement and couldn’t wait to come back home. But when Mark arrived at the river that sunny afternoon, he was completely shocked. The clear, lively river he remembered so well was gone(无灵主语句). The water wasn’t transparent and clean anymore, and the once tidy bank was full of dirty trash(对比描写，交代背景). He stood there, frozen(过去分词做adj补语), staring at the terrible scene(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and could hardly believe his own eyes. The happy, laughter-filled memories of fishing with friends suddenly(过去分词做后置定语) felt so far away(主动表被动), as if they belonged to another world. He slowly walked closer and saw more heartbreaking sights: plastic bottles, worn paper food wrappers, and knotted, dirty fishing lines were everywhere(进一步刻画冲突). Some empty bait tins even floated lazily in the water. The river water looked dark and cloudy, losing all its former brightness(现在分词短语做结果状语), and when a light wind blew(无灵主语句), it gave off an unpleasant smell that made Mark frown deeply. Mark felt a strong wave of heavy sadness welling up in his heart. He kept thinking about how clean, clear and lively the river used to be in his childhood, and how it had given him so many joyful, unforgettable days with his friends. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: He knew he couldn’t just walk away and let it stay this way. Paragraph 2: The river looked much better, but Mark didn’t stop there. 云南省昆明市第一中学2026届高三上学期第四次联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mark’s hometown was a quiet little place in the countryside, with a beautiful river flowing gently through its center. When he was a kid, this river was always crystal-clear — its surface shone like countless small pieces of silver under the warm sun, and groups of colorful small fish swam freely in the shallow, cool waters. It was undoubtedly Mark’s favorite spot in the whole town; every weekend, he’d gather his closest friends, grab their old fishing poles, and sit on the smooth, round stones by the grassy bank, chatting loudly about their daily lives and patiently waiting for fish to bite. Last year, Mark left for another city to go to high school. He missed his peaceful hometown a lot, especially the beloved river that held so many of his childhood memories. During the long summer holiday, he packed his bags in excitement and couldn’t wait to come back home. But when Mark arrived at the river that sunny afternoon, he was completely shocked. The clear, lively river he remembered so well was gone. The water wasn’t transparent and clean anymore, and the once tidy bank was full of dirty trash. He stood there, frozen, staring at the terrible scene, and could hardly believe his own eyes. The happy, laughter-filled memories of fishing with friends suddenly felt so far away, as if they belonged to another world. He slowly walked closer and saw more heartbreaking sights: plastic bottles, worn paper food wrappers, and knotted, dirty fishing lines were everywhere. Some empty bait tins even floated lazily in the water. The river water looked dark and cloudy, losing all its former brightness, and when a light wind blew, it gave off an unpleasant smell that made Mark frown deeply. Mark felt a strong wave of heavy sadness welling up in his heart. He kept thinking about how clean, clear and lively the river used to be in his childhood, and how it had given him so many joyful, unforgettable days with his friends. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: He knew he couldn’t just walk away and let it stay this way. Paragraph 2: The river looked much better, but Mark didn’t stop there. 一、文本类型判定 & 续写思路构建（高考英语读后续写要求） 1. 读后续写文本类型 本篇属于典型的——环保主题/家乡情怀/个人成长类 特点：人物从情绪冲击 → 行动 → 成果 → 成长领悟。 适合构思 行动改变型续写：主人公通过努力改变现状、修复环境或情感。 二、续写构思 （1）续写布局 Paragraph 1（转折段）： 任务：Mark 不能放任不管 → 决心采取行动 内容： ① 情绪驱动（悲伤→责任感） ② 采取行动（捡垃圾、拍照上传社交媒体、找村委会、召集朋友） ③ 团队帮助（同学 / 老友 / 村民加入） ④ 场景变化（初步改善） Paragraph 2（升华段）： 任务：河流变好，但 Mark 要继续行动 内容： ① 持续改善（发起“护河计划 / 巡河队”） ② 建立制度（告示牌、垃圾分类） ③ 内心成长（责任感、环保意识） ④ 情感升华（童年→未来 → “我也能改变世界的一角”） 三、原文要点 承接点 表现方式 例子 人物情感延续 从 shock → sadness → 决心行动 “He felt a strong wave of sadness…” 环境对比强烈 续写中要使用“曾经 vs 现在”对照 clear river ↔ dark cloudy water 行为动机必须来源于原文 不能凭空冒出理由，必须基于“童年回忆” childhood memories 人物性格稳定 Mark 热爱家乡 → 必然会主动修复环境 his favorite spot 动作延续 原文写“他走近观察” → 续写可写“开始清理” He slowly walked closer… 四、设计续写内容 （1）使用“动作链”推动情节 如：pick up garbage → take photos → call friends → talk to village head → organize cleanup （2）使用“情绪梯度”表现人物成长 sad → determined → encouraged → proud → hopeful （3）合理安排“团队力量” 带朋友、带村民、带同学 → 合理、正能量 （4）升华主题 环保意识 童年与责任 “Each small action matters.” 五、故事山模式 阶段 对应原文内容 续写任务 1. 开端 (Beginning) Mark 的童年回忆：清澈河流 历史背景，不能续写 2. 上升情节 (Rising Action) 回乡探望 → 发现河流被污染 承接情绪，推动行动 3. 高潮 (Climax) Mark 深深悲伤、震惊 段 1：决定采取行动 4. 下降情节 (Falling Action) 故事未给出 → 留给续写 团队清理，河流变好 5. 结局 (Resolution) 无 → 留给续写 段 2：环保长期计划、内心成长 六、原文中关键线索 1. 伏笔（未来行动的“铺垫”） 他“最喜欢的地方” → 必然会珍惜、保护 “难以置信的震惊” → 引发强烈行动 “sadness welling up” → 情绪驱动后续行为 2. 冲突点 童年美好记忆 vs 现在肮脏污染的现实 3. 隐含线索 Mark 具有责任心 → 会采取行动 家乡人可能疏于管理 → 需要集体力量 “夏天假期” → 时间充裕，利于开展活动 4. 解决方案 环境清理 发起宣传 组织志愿队 长期保护计划 七、原文分析表 分析角度 内容分析 原文对应句 人物刻画 Mark 热爱自然、重感情、责任感强 “Mark’s favorite spot…” 情感层次 怀念童年 → 激动回乡 → 震惊 → 悲伤 → 将决定行动（伏笔） “He was completely shocked.” “a strong wave of sadness…” 关键情节点 回乡 → 看到污染 → 深度悲伤 “the water wasn’t transparent…” 语言特色 大量对比、感官描写（视觉、嗅觉）、情绪递进 “dark and cloudy” “unpleasant smell” 关键词分析 crystal-clear / silver / dark / cloudy / heartbreaking / sadness 体现鲜明对比和情绪 心理描写 难以置信、悲伤、心痛 “could hardly believe his own eyes” 动作描写 回家、走近、观察、皱眉 “He slowly walked closer…” 环境描写 河水变化、垃圾、气味 “plastic bottles… dirty fishing lines…” 隐含主题 环保、责任、成长、家乡情怀 主角从回忆到行动 情感转折 喜悦回乡 → 震惊 → 心痛 → 决心行动（待续写） 由“couldn’t wait”到“shocked” 空间转换 城市 → 家乡；远处观察 → 走近河边 “walked closer” 时间过渡 童年 → 去年去外地读书 → 现在暑假回来 “Last year…” “During the long summer holiday…” 八、续写示范框架 Paragraph 1（决心 + 行动）结构模板 情绪强化 行动决心 具体行为 人物互动 情节推进（河流开始变好） Paragraph 2（改善 + 升华）结构模板 结果展现 持续行动 长期计划 成长感悟 情感升华 + 主题呼应 9、 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写 A. 动作描写 He bent down and picked up the first plastic bottle with trembling fingers. 他弯下腰，用微微发抖的手指拾起第一个塑料瓶。 Mark rolled up his sleeves and stepped into the shallow water without hesitation. Mark 挽起袖子，毫不犹豫地踏入浅水。 He waved at his friends, signaling them to come and help. 他朝朋友们挥手，示意他们过来帮忙。 He snapped a few photos of the polluted river to post online. 他拍了几张被污染的河流照片准备用于网络发布。 Mark dragged a heavy bag of trash toward the riverbank. Mark 拖着一大袋沉重的垃圾往河岸走去。 He knelt beside the water, carefully untangling the dirty fishing lines. 他跪在水边，小心地解开缠绕的脏鱼线。 He hurried to the village office to report the situation. 他匆匆赶到村委会报告情况。 He motioned for the younger kids to stay away from the dangerous area. 他示意小孩子远离危险区域。 Mark straightened up, wiping sweat from his forehead. Mark 直起身来，擦去了额头的汗水。 He tied the trash bags tightly and carried them to the recycling point. 他将垃圾袋系紧，然后搬到回收点。 B. 心理描写 A sharp pain stabbed his heart as he looked at the ruined river. 当他看到被破坏的河流时，一阵刺痛袭上心头。 He hesitated for a moment, unsure where to begin. 他犹豫了片刻，不知道从哪里开始。 A sense of responsibility slowly rose within him. 一种责任感在他心中慢慢升起。 He felt both frustrated and determined at the same time. 他同时感到沮丧和坚定。 The warm childhood memories flashed across his mind. 温暖的童年记忆在他脑海中闪现。 He blamed himself for not returning earlier to protect the river. 他责怪自己没有早些回来保护这条河。 His sadness turned into quiet anger. 他的悲伤转化为平静的愤怒。 A spark of hope lit up in his heart when others joined him. 当其他人加入他时，他心中燃起一丝希望。 He felt proud watching the river slowly regain its beauty. 当看到河流恢复美丽，他感到自豪。 Deep inside, he knew this was only the beginning. 在心底，他知道这仅仅是开始。 C. 环境描写 The air smelled slightly fresher after hours of cleaning. 清理了几个小时后空气闻起来稍微清新了一些。 Sunlight reflected on the water, revealing faint traces of its former clarity. 阳光照在水面上，隐约显露出它曾经的清澈。 Trash bags piled neatly at the side of the riverbank. 一袋袋垃圾整齐地堆放在河岸边。 The breeze carried away the unpleasant odor little by little. 微风一点点吹散了难闻的气味。 Shadows of the trees danced on the cleaner surface of the water. 树影在稍微清澈的水面上摇曳。 The gentle flowing sound returned, though still mixed with faint noise. 温柔的流水声回来了，尽管仍夹杂着细微的杂音。 Children’s laughter echoed faintly from the distance. 孩子的笑声从远处隐约传来。 The stones on the riverbank looked brighter after being washed clean. 河岸的石头被洗干净后看起来更亮。 The sky turned golden as the sun set behind the hills. 夕阳落在山后，天空变成了金色。 A light mist rose above the river, adding a touch of peace. 河面上升起一层薄雾，增添了几分宁静。 高级替换词 1. 表情绪（Emotion） 普通词 高级替换 sad sorrowful / heartbroken / distressed angry outraged / frustrated / irritated happy delighted / thrilled / overjoyed worried anxious / troubled / uneasy surprised astonished / stunned / taken aback 2. 表“看见 / 注意到” See---spot / catch sight of / witness notice--observe / detect look at--gaze at / fix his eyes on 3. 表“变好 / 改善” get better---improve / recover / regain its beauty clean---spotless / unpolluted 4. 表“决定 / 下决心” decide -- make up his mind / determine / resolve try---attempt / strive to / make an effort to 5. 表“帮助 / 合作” help -- assist / lend a hand / support work together--cooperate / join forces ④ 地道搭配 + 词法解析 + 可积累语料 固定搭配 a wave of sadness / anger / relief 一阵悲伤 / 愤怒 / 轻松感 could hardly believe his eyes 简直不敢相信自己的眼睛 bring back memories (of…) 让……回忆涌现 take action to do sth. 采取行动去…… be determined to do sth. 决心要…… step forward to help 站出来帮忙 join hands to… 携手去……（非常适合环保类续写） the river regained its clarity 河流重新恢复清澈 protect what once protected us 保护曾经保护过我们的东西（主题升华） leave a lasting impact on… 对……留下长远影响 （B）可积累语料 1. crystal-clear 词性：adj. 词义：清澈透明的 近义词：transparent / limpid / pure 反义词：murky / cloudy / muddy 例句： The water used to be crystal-clear. His intention was crystal-clear—he wanted to save the river. 2. heartbreaking 词性：adj. 词义：令人心碎的、令人痛心的 近义词：painful / upsetting / distressing 反义词：comforting / pleasing 例句： The scene was heartbreaking. It was heartbreaking to see his childhood river ruined. 3. well up（情绪） 词性：v.（短语动词） 词义：（情绪）涌上心头 近义词：rise / flood / surge 反义词：fade / disappear 例句： Sadness welled up inside him. Tears welled up in her eyes. 4. regain 词性：v. 词义：恢复、重新获得 近义词：recover / restore / retrieve 反义词：lose / worsen 例句： The river gradually regained its beauty. He regained his confidence. 5. cloudy（形容水） 词性：adj. 词义：浑浊的 近义词：murky / muddy / unclear 反义词：clear / bright 例句： The water looked dark and cloudy. Cloudy water made it hard to see any fish. 6. determine（决心） 词性：v. 词义：决定，下决心 近义词：resolve / make up one’s mind / commit 反义词：hesitate / waver 例句： He determined to take action. She determined to protect the forest. 10、 Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1: He knew he couldn’t just walk away and let it stay this way. For the river had shaped his childhood and deserved better than silent sorrow. Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he rolled up his sleeves and began picking up the scattered trash, starting with the floating bottles nearest to him(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Although the unpleasant smell made him frown, a sense of responsibility slowly replaced the shock he had felt moments ago. As he worked, childhood memories—his friends' laughter, the sparkling water, the cool stones under his feet—kept flashing through his mind, urging him to keep going(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Soon, a familiar voice called his name from behind. It was one of his old friends who happened to pass by and was stunned by what Mark was doing(强调句). After a brief explanation, the friend silently joined him, grabbing another trash bag(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The quiet cooperation between them gradually attracted a few more townspeople who were walking nearby. Encouraged by Mark’s determination(过去分词做原因状语), they stepped forward one after another, forming a small group(现在分词短语做结果状语)working side by side(现在分词短语做伴随动作). By late afternoon, piles of trash bags lined the riverbank neatly, marking the first signs of change(现在分词短语做结果状语). Paragraph 2: The river looked much better, but Mark didn’t stop there. Because he knew cleaning it once would never solve the problem, wiping the sweat from his forehead(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he told the others that they needed to prevent the river from being polluted again. With their support, he carefully recorded the polluted spots and took several photos, hoping to present them to the village office later(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Encouraged by the small progress(过去分词做原因状语) they had already made, Mark drafted a simple plan to raise awareness—posters, weekly clean-ups, and short talks at the community center. Although his voice was tired, everyone could feel the determination behind it. When the sun dipped behind the hills, the river finally reflected a faint golden glow, reminding(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Mark of its old beauty. Looking at the cleaner bank(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he felt a warm pride rising in his heart, knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he had taken the first real step to protect what he loved. 地道搭配 roll up one’s sleeves step forward one after another be replaced by a sense of responsibility attract more people to join in mark the first signs of change take the first real step to… 情绪描写亮点词语 a sense of responsibility rose within him silent sorrow determination behind his tired voice warm pride rising in his heart 动作描写亮点词语 picking up scattered trash wiping sweat from his forehead grabbing another trash bag recording polluted spots 高级替换词 responsibility → duty / obligation / commitment 例句： A strong sense of duty pushed him forward. He felt committed to restoring the river. determine → resolve / be set on / make up one’s mind to 例句： He resolved to continue the work. Mark was set on preventing future pollution. cooperate → join hands / work side by side / team up 例句： The villagers joined hands to save the river. They worked side by side until sunset. Version 2 Paragraph 1: He knew he couldn’t just walk away and let it stay this way. Because the river had once been a peaceful shelter where he and his friends grew up together, gathering his courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he stepped into the shallow water and picked up a tangled fishing line, feeling the cold water against his legs(现在分词短语做伴宿动作). The more he cleaned, the clearer his memories became—his younger self chasing fish, the sound of water splashing, and the soft breeze brushing his cheeks(独立主格补充). Just when he felt overwhelmed by the amount of trash, he heard footsteps. One of his friends paused, shocked by the polluted river but inspired by Mark’s silent effort.(过去分词短语做adj主语补语) Without hesitation, his friend joined him, followed by another passerby(过去分词短语做后置定语) who offered extra bags. Their small group gradually turned into a team working in steady rhythm. They talked less and worked more, as if each piece of trash they removed brought back a small piece of the river’s former purity. When the sun started lowering, the river surface slowly revealed faint reflections again(无灵主语句), and hope flickered in Mark’s eyes. Paragraph 2: The river looked much better, but Mark didn’t stop there. He understood that without long-term protection, the river would soon fall back into its miserable state. After thanking everyone, he suggested setting up a simple “Clean River Day” every week, something easy enough for the whole town to join(独立主格). The idea was warmly welcomed, and someone even proposed printing signs reminding people not to litter(现在分词短语做后置定语). Mark wrote down the suggestions carefully and promised to report them to the village office. Although the day’s work had drained his strength, an unshakable determination burned inside him(无灵主语句). Before leaving, he stood by the river in silence, watching the gentle flow regain a soft glimmer of life(现在分词短语做伴宿动作). The scene touched something deep within him—an understanding that protecting the river meant protecting his past, his home, and the future generations who would stand where he stood today. Version 3 Paragraph 1: He knew he couldn’t just walk away and let it stay this way. Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴宿动作), he reminded himself that change always started with small steps. He picked up a long stick and dragged several pieces of trash toward the bank, trying not to disturb the cloudy water too much(现在分词短语做伴宿动作). Although the unpleasant smell stung his nose(无灵主语句), he refused to back down. His heart ached as he remembered how he and his friends once splashed joyfully here. Just then, familiar footsteps approached(无灵主语句). One of his childhood friends, who had also returned for the holiday, stopped in disbelief at the sight. After hearing what happened, he nodded firmly and bent down to join him. The two worked silently but efficiently, their movements synchronized like they used to be during fishing days(独立主格). Passersby soon noticed their effort and hesitated at first, but Mark’s persistence moved them. Gradually, more hands reached in(无灵主语句), and the riverbank transformed little by little. Paragraph 2: The river looked much better, but Mark didn’t stop there. Because he knew action mattered only when it lasted. He suggested creating a small volunteer group responsible for monitoring the river every month(adj做主语补语). His friend supported the idea enthusiastically, and the others agreed as well. Mark recorded everyone’s names and discussed simple rules, such as sorting trash properly and reporting new pollution quickly. As they wrapped up the day’s work, the light breeze carried a faint freshness(无灵主语句) that hadn’t been felt for years. The river was still far from perfect, yet Mark felt deeply encouraged. Looking at the half-recovered water(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he realized the day had not just cleaned the river—it had awakened the town’s sense of responsibility. With renewed hope, he promised himself to continue the mission for as long as it took. 官方：读后续写(25分) Para l: He knew he couldn't just walk away and let it stay this way. Mark got down to making preparation for his cleaning. A sense of responsibility surging through his heart(独立主格刻画人物), he clenched fists tightly. He set out to pick up the trash on the bank into the large bags he had prepared in advance, as for the waste floating on the water(现在分词短语做后置定语), he made use of big nets to scoop. Overwhelmed with delight and excitement(过去分词短语主语补语), he couldn't help whistling his favourite ballad. Mark worked from early morning to night. Exhausted as he was(倒装句), he thought it worthwhile to do so." What a beautiful river it used to be(感叹句)! I do hope(强调句)it will be forever!" Mark said to himself, full of determination in his eyes(adj短语做主语补语), with a broad smile lighting up his face(with复合结构). Para 2 The river looked much better, but Mark didn't slop there. The next day, he made posters about protecting the river and then put them up around the neighborhood. What made Mark overjoyed was that the neighbors spoke highly of what he did. In the meantime, he also reported to local officials, advocating setting up trash bins along the riverbank and organizing regular cleaning(现在分词短语做伴随动作). So moved and grateful were the neighbors that(强调句) they were willing to do voluntary cleaning on a regular basis. Soon, more people became aware of the significance of enhancing sustainability. Seized by joy and relief,(过去分词做原因状语) Mark grinned from ear to ear, feeling(现在分词短语做伴随动作) a burden was lifted off his heart. It was Mark's act of kindness and persistence that revived beauty, which proved that every effort to protect nature was never in vain. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $