读后续写-个人成长文化交流类-国际夏令营中，Liming 从“角落里的中国学生”到“破解密码的文化使者” 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 重庆市南开中学高2026届高三第四次质量检测 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was my first day at the international summer camp in Canada. Students from over twenty countries gathered in the dining hall for breakfast. The atmosphere was lively, filled with greetings in different languages(过去分词短语做后置定语) that blended into a cheerful symphony of cultural diversity. Some laughed easily, exchanging jokes with their new friends(现在分词短语做伴随动作), while others eagerly compared notes on their travel experiences. Yet I sat alone at a corner table , feeling overwhelmed(现在分词短语做主语补语)by the unfamiliar environment and the fast rhythm of English conversations around me(交代信息伏笔及中心主旨). As I nervously picked at my scrambled eggs, a girl with curly blonde hair approached my table. “ Mind if I sit here?" she asked with a warm smile. I nodded , grateful for the company.(adj做主语补语)“I'm Emma, from Sweden,” she introduced herself, extending her hand(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “ Li Ming, from China,” I replied, shaking her hand tentatively(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Her friendliness softened my nervousness(无灵主语句). “Is this your first time abroad?" Emma asked, noticing my unease(现在分词短语做伴随动作). I admitted it was ,and that I was worried about my English skills.“ Don't worry,” she said reassuringly, everyone here is learning from each other. That's the beauty of this camp.” Her words comforted me, but I still felt the weight of being far from home. During the morning activity session, Emma and I ended up in the same group with students from Brazil, Japan, and France. The challenge required us to solve riddles in English and find hidden clues. I struggled to understand some of the wordplay, often asking for explanations(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Though my teammates were patient and encouraging, I couldn't shake the feeling that I was slowing them down. Still, the moment we were going to solve the last riddle together , I realized I was beginning to belong(伏笔). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: As we reached the last riddle , a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. Paragraph 2: Solving the riddle injected more confidence into me for the evening cultural presentation. 重庆市南开中学高2026届高三第四次质量检测 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was my first day at the international summer camp in Canada. Students from over twenty countries gathered in the dining hall for breakfast. The atmosphere was lively, filled with greetings in different languages that blended into a cheerful symphony of cultural diversity.Some laughed easily, exchanging jokes with their new friends, while others eagerly compared notes on their travel experiences, Yet I sat alone at a corner table , feeling overwhelmed by the unfamiliar environment and the fast rhythm of English conversations around me. As I nervously picked at my scrambled eggs, a girl with curly blonde hair approached my table. “ Mind if I sit here?" she asked with a warm smile. I nodded , grateful for the company.“ I'm Emma, from Sweden,” she introduced herself, extending her hand. “ Li Ming, from China,” I replied, shaking her hand tentatively. Her friendliness softened my nervousness. “Is this your first time abroad?" Emma asked, noticing my unease. I admitted it was ,and that I was worried about my English skills.“ Don't worry,” she said reassuringly,everyone here is learning from each other, That's the beauty of this camp.” Her words comforted me, but I still felt the weight of being far from home. During the morning activity session, Emma and I ended up in the same group with students from Brazil, Japan, and France. The challenge required us to solve riddles in English and find hidden clues. I struggled to understand some of the wordplay, often asking for explanations. Though my teammates were patient and encouraging, I couldn't shake the feeling that I was slowing them down. Still, the moment we were going to solve the last riddle together , I realized I was beginning to belong. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: As we reached the last riddle , a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. Paragraph 2: Solving the riddle injected more confidence into me for the evening cultural presentation. 一、读后续写类型思路 【类型分类】——本篇属于典型的： ✅ 成长励志类（成长自我突破） ✅ 跨文化交流类（国际夏令营） ✅ 友情建立类（从紧张到融入） 二、构思 1. 故事的核心矛盾 主矛盾：主人公语言焦虑 vs 融入国际氛围的愿望 情感线：紧张 → 被关怀 → 小突破 → 更自信 2. 续写应遵循的构思原则 ① 承接原文情绪线 原文情绪线是逐渐上升的： 孤独 → 被接纳 → 协作 → 归属感萌生 续写必须继续正向推进。 ② 承接原文的情节逻辑 已写到：最后一个谜语 → 出现“中国典故”相关线索 → 续写第一段应让主人公“因文化优势而闪光” 第二段开头已给：“这次解谜增强了我对晚间文化展示的信心” → 第二段必须写“文化展示成功”或“内心突破” 3. 续写整体框架 Paragraph 1 框架 线索出现（中国典故） → 主人公找到自信点 → 团队合作破题成功 → 情感峰值（融入感） Paragraph 2 框架 自信延伸 → 晚间文化展示准备/呈现 → 其他国家同学反馈 → 主人公成长 & 内在变化总结 重点：故事山模式必须完成“高潮 → 回落 → 解决” 三、故事山（Story Mountain） 原文中故事山的结构 阶段 原文体现 说明 开端 第一天夏令营、陌生环境、语言压力 引子：情绪不安 发展 Emma出现、友好交流、被安慰 友谊与支持出现 上升 小组活动、主人公语言困难 情绪张力加大 高潮预设 最后一条谜语即将解决，出现中国线索 续写开头承接的情绪峰值 结局（续写完成） 必须让主人公融入并获得成长 任务：你要写出完整结局 四、原文细节承接点 1. 情绪伏笔 I sat alone... feeling overwhelmed → 初始不安 Her friendliness softened my nervousness → 情绪转折 I was beginning to belong → 续写必须继续这一上升线 2. 人物关系伏笔 Emma 是关键辅助角色，应继续出现 小组多国成员 → 文化交流主题必须延续 3. 情节伏笔 “中国古代故事的线索” → 第一段一定要写 晚间文化展示 → 第二段必须重点写 五、伏笔等分析表 类型 具体内容 原文对应句 伏笔 主人公的中国文化背景 Li Ming, from China 最后一条谜语即将出现转折 the last riddle 文化展示活动 Paragraph 2 opening 冲突点 英语焦虑、不自信、怕拖团队 I couldn't shake the feeling... 隐含线索 团队合作氛围友好 patient and encouraging 中国典故对主人公有优势 “Chinese tale clue” 解决方案 主人公用文化知识帮助团队成功 续写段落需完成 在展示中勇敢表达并获得认可 续写第二段需呈现 六、文章分析表 分析角度 内容提炼 原文反映句（需重点承接） 人物刻画 主人公内向紧张，Emma友好外向，团队多国多元 I sat alone… feeling overwhelmed；Emma… warm smile 情感层次 紧张→缓和→焦虑→被鼓励→归属感萌生 softened my nervousness；I was beginning to belong 关键情节点 初遇 → 建立友谊 → 团队协作 → 解谜前夕 We were going to solve the last riddle 语言特色 多感官描写，文化氛围浓、节奏快 cheerful symphony；greetings in different languages 关键词分析 overwhelmed, nervous, reassured, belong 展现心理变化 心理描写 担心拖后腿、自我怀疑、自我鼓励 I couldn't shake the feeling that I was slowing them down 动作描写 坐在角落、轻挑食物、握手、合作 picked at my scrambled eggs；shaking her hand 环境描写 多语种、热闹、国际文化氛围 lively… greetings in different languages 隐含主题 多元文化互助、跨文化友谊、自我突破 全文贯穿 情感转折 因Emma而放松 → 团队鼓励 → 解谜将成功 Her friendliness softened my nervousness 空间转换 餐厅 → 活动区域 dining hall → morning activity session 时间过渡 首日清晨 → 上午活动 → 续写中晚间展示 During the morning activity session 七、续写设计 第一段（P1）设计技巧 利用中国典故作为转折点（作者文化优势） 主人公开始主动发言 团队惊喜、赞赏、合作加强 解谜成功＝情感高潮点 可以加入 内心独白（我突然意识到我也能贡献） 动作表现（leaned forward, pointed at the clue） 第二段（P2）设计技巧 把第一段的自信延伸到“文化展示”活动” 写准备过程（内心仍紧张但愿意尝试） 写展示过程（简单但真诚） 写反响（同学惊喜/鼓掌/提问） 写主人公的最终成长（I no longer felt like a stranger） 八、动作描写 / 心理描写 / 环境描写 （A）动作描写 I leaned forward, pointing at the clue with growing excitement. 我向前倾身，兴奋地指着线索。 Emma nudged me gently, signaling that I should speak up. Emma 轻轻碰了碰我，示意我可以发言。 I exchanged a quick glance with my teammates before explaining the story. 我和队友迅速对视一眼，然后开始解释这个故事。 My hands trembled slightly as I traced the characters on the card. 我手微微发抖，沿着卡片上的文字划过。 We huddled together around the final riddle, whispering possible answers. 我们围在最后一个谜题周围，小声讨论可能的答案。 The French boy snapped his fingers when the solution came to him. 那个法国男孩突然一打响指，灵光一现。 Emma clapped me on the shoulder as if cheering me on. Emma 拍了拍我的肩膀，像是在给我加油。 I took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage for the presentation. 我深吸一口气，走上了文化展示的舞台。 The group burst into applause when the lock finally clicked open. 当锁“咔哒”一声打开时，大家爆发出一阵掌声。 I bowed slightly to the audience, my nerves slowly melting away. 我向观众微微鞠躬，紧张慢慢消散。 B） A sudden spark of confidence lit up inside me. 一股突然的自信在我心里亮了起来。 I felt a warm surge of relief as my teammates nodded approvingly. 队友赞许地点头时，我感到一阵暖暖的轻松。 A wave of panic washed over me when I failed to understand the clue. 当我没理解线索时，一阵恐慌席卷而来。 I battled with the fear of embarrassing myself in front of everyone. 我努力对抗在大家面前出丑的恐惧。 Curiosity nudged aside my nervousness as I recognized the tale. 当我认出这个故事时，好奇心把紧张推开了。 Pride filled my heart when the group relied on my explanation. 当大家依赖我的解释时，我心中涌起一阵自豪。 I felt my worries slowly dissolve like mist in the morning sun. 我的担忧像晨光中的薄雾一样慢慢消散。 A tiny doubt whispered in my mind, wondering if I would mess up again. 一个小小的疑虑在我心里低语，担心自己会再次出错。 A sense of belonging settled warmly in my chest. 一种被接纳的温暖感觉落在我心上。 Courage finally took root as I stepped forward. 当我迈出那一步时，勇气终于在我心中扎根。 （C）环境描写 The dining hall buzzed with greetings in a dozen different languages. 食堂里回荡着十几种语言的问候声。 Morning sunlight streamed through the glass windows, casting golden stripes on the floor. 晨光透过玻璃窗洒进来，在地板上留下金色条纹。 Laughter floated across the field where groups gathered for the activity. 操场上成群的学生聚在一起，笑声飘荡在空气中。 Colorful national flags fluttered gently in the summer breeze. 五颜六色的国旗在夏日微风中轻轻飘动。 The puzzle station was set beneath a tall maple tree, its leaves rustling softly. 谜题站设在一棵高大的枫树下，树叶轻轻沙沙作响。 The campgrounds were alive with the scent of pine and freshly cut grass. 营地弥漫着松木和刚修剪的草香。 The activity tents stood neatly in rows, each echoing with excited chatter. 活动帐篷整齐成排，每个里头都传出兴奋的交谈声。 Warm lights glowed on the stage as evening fell over the camp. 夜幕降临时，舞台上暖光亮起。 Music from different cultures blended into a gentle evening rhythm. 来自不同文化的音乐混合成柔和的夜间旋律。 The camp felt like a tiny globe where every step led to a new culture. 整个营地像一个小小的地球，每一步都通向一种新文化。 4. 固定搭配 ① overwhelmed（adj.）不知所措的 / 压倒性的情绪 搭配： feel overwhelmed by… be overwhelmed with emotions become overwhelmed at the moment 近义词： stressed, burdened, shaken 反义词： calm, composed 例句：I felt overwhelmed by the unfamiliar environment. She was overwhelmed with gratitude when the team cheered for her. ② reassure（v.）安慰，使安心 搭配： reassure sb that… offer reassuring words give a reassuring smile 近义词： comfort, encourage, soothe 反义词： worry, upset 例句：Emma reassured me that everyone was learning. His reassuring tone melted my anxiety instantly. ③ belong（v.）归属感 搭配： feel I belong a sense of belonging begin to belong 近义词： fit in, integrate 反义词： isolate, alienate 例句：I felt I was beginning to belong. A deep sense of belonging settled over me. ④ tentatively（adv.）试探性地 搭配：smile tentatively answer tentatively reach out tentatively 近义词： hesitantly, cautiously 反义词： firmly, confidently 例句：I shook her hand tentatively. He spoke tentatively, unsure of the answer. ⑤ surge（n./v.）涌现、激增（情感类高分词） 搭配： a surge of confidence a surge of excitement confidence surged through me 近义词： rush, wave, flood 反义词： decline, fade 例句： A surge of pride filled my heart. Confidence surged through me as the team clapped. ⑥ dissolve（v.）消散、融化（用于情绪） 搭配： worries dissolve tension dissolve fear dissolve into excitement 近义词： fade, disappear 反义词： intensify, strengthen 例句：My worries slowly dissolved. His gentle words dissolved my anxiety. ⑦ nudge（v.）轻推、示意（动作描写高分词） 搭配： nudge sb gently nudge sb to do sth give sb a nudge 近义词： prod, push lightly 反义词： ignore 例句：Emma nudged me to speak. He nudged me with a playful grin. ⑧ flutter（v.）飘动、跳动（用于旗子/心情/动作） 搭配： flags flutter heart flutter leaves flutter in the breeze 近义词： wave, flap 反义词： stay still 例句： The flags fluttered in the breeze. My heart fluttered with nervous excitement. ⑨ trace（v.）沿着（线索/文字）描摹 搭配： trace the characters trace the outline trace the clue 近义词： follow, outline 反义词： erase 例句：I traced the characters slowly. He traced the map with his fingertip. ⑩ melt away（phr.）逐渐消退（情绪类短语） 搭配：fear melts away tension melts away worries melt away 近义词： fade away, vanish 反义词： build up 例句：My fear melted away. The tension melted away as the audience smiled. 9、 Possible Versions(4) Paragraph 1 As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. I immediately recognized the story of the Monkey King, and my mind raced with possibilities. Tentatively, I suggested an approach to the group, explaining the sequence of events in the tale(现在分词短语做伴随动作). My teammates leaned in, listening attentively(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and a smile spread across Emma’s face(无灵主语句). Encouraged(过去分词短语做主语补语), I traced the clue on the card with my finger, pointing out key details(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The Brazilian student nodded, connecting my explanation to the puzzle(现在分词短语做伴随动作), while the French boy clapped his hands lightly. Slowly, piece by piece, the final answer emerged(无灵主语句). Relief and pride surged through me as we solved it together. I realized that my knowledge of Chinese stories could not only help the team but also make me feel more confident and included. That moment marked a turning point: I was no longer just an observer but an active contributor. Paragraph 2 Solving the riddle injected more confidence into me for the evening cultural presentation. When the time came to stand on the stage, I felt a flutter of nervousness, but the memory of our riddle success steadied me(无灵主语句). I began describing the Monkey King’s adventures, illustrating the clever tricks and bravery of the character(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The audience, including my teammates and other campers, watched attentively, occasionally nodding or smiling(现在分词短语做伴随动作). As I spoke, my voice grew stronger, more assured, and I noticed Emma giving me an encouraging look. I ended with a warm smile, receiving applause(现在分词短语做结果状语) that melted away the last traces of fear. Sitting down(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt a profound sense of belonging and pride; the day that began with anxiety had transformed into a milestone of self-confidence and cultural connection. 地道搭配 & 亮点短语 Tentatively suggested / leaned in / traced the clue / piece by piece / surge through me / melt away fear 情绪描写亮点 relief, pride surged, flutter of nervousness, profound sense of belonging 动作描写亮点 leaned in, clapped hands lightly, traced the clue, stood on stage, smiled warmly 可积累语料 & 替换词 词汇/短语 替换 同义词/联想 例句 surged through filled flooded, rushed Confidence surged through me. flutter of nervousness tremor jitters, heartbeat A flutter of nervousness ran through me. leaned in moved closer bent forward, inched forward She leaned in to listen. traced followed outlined, drew I traced the map carefully. melt away vanish fade, dissipate Fear melted away as I spoke. Version 2 Paragraph 1 As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. My heart skipped a beat as I realized it was the story of the clever Rabbit and the Moon. Hesitant at first, I whispered my interpretation to Emma, who smiled encouragingly. Gaining courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I explained the tale to the group, breaking it down into simple steps(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The Japanese student pointed to a symbol I hadn’t noticed, confirming my guess, and I felt a small surge of pride. Together, we debated the sequence and solved the riddle just in time. Relief and excitement mingled as I realized that my input mattered. My nervousness melted into a quiet joy, and I noticed for the first time that I had truly started to belong to this international group. Paragraph 2 Solving the riddle injected more confidence into me for the evening cultural presentation. As I stepped onto the stage, I remembered the teamwork that had led us to the solution. My voice, though slightly trembling at first, became steadier as I recounted the story, describing each clever action of the rabbit(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Emma’s supportive glance and the attentive audience gave me assurance. I added small gestures, pointing at imaginary characters and acting out moments(现在分词短语做伴随动作), which drew laughter and applause. By the end, I felt exhilarated, my previous fear replaced by pride and delight(独立主格刻画人物心理). Sitting down(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I reflected that being understood and appreciated by others made the distance from home seem less daunting, and my confidence had grown considerably. 地道搭配 & 亮点短语 heart skipped a beat / whispered my interpretation / surge of pride / nervousness melted into joy / stepped onto the stage 情绪描写亮点 heart skipped a beat, surge of pride, exhilarated, quiet joy 动作描写亮点 whispered, pointed, acting out moments, stepped onto the stage 可积累语料 & 替换词 词汇/短语 替换 同义词/联想 例句 skipped a beat quickened thumped, fluttered My heart skipped a beat. whispered murmured muttered, breathed She whispered the answer softly. exhilarated thrilled delighted, overjoyed I felt exhilarated after the success. acting out dramatizing performing, mimicking He acted out the scene. steadier firmer stronger, more confident Her voice grew steadier with each word. Version 3 Paragraph 1 As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. I blinked in surprise, realizing it described the legendary Archer Hou Yi. Tentatively, I shared my thoughts with Emma, who nodded encouragingly. My confidence grew as I outlined the story for the group, pointing to details on the clue(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The French and Brazilian students exchanged smiles and suggestions, and gradually, our teamwork led us to the solution. A warm sense of achievement flowed through me. The riddle’s solution not only highlighted my cultural knowledge but also made me feel included and valued. For the first time, I sensed that my presence made a difference, and my nervousness from the morning seemed like a distant memory. Paragraph 2 Solving the riddle injected more confidence into me for the evening cultural presentation. Standing in front of the audience(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I recalled how the riddle had been solved collaboratively. My voice started a little hesitantly, but I gradually gained steadiness as I narrated the tale of Hou Yi and the heroic deeds. I used gestures to show archery actions, and the audience reacted with smiles and applause. Emma’s approving nod reinforced my confidence. By the time I finished, I felt a surge of pride and joy; I had successfully conveyed the story and shared my culture. The evening ended with cheers, and I realized that being brave enough to participate had transformed my fears into fulfillment and self-assurance. 地道搭配 & 亮点短语 blinked in surprise / warm sense of achievement / flow through me / hesitant but gradually gained steadiness / surge of pride 情绪描写亮点 warm sense of achievement, nervousness → distant memory, surge of pride, joy 动作描写亮点 blinked, outlined the story, gestures to show actions, standing in front of the audience 可积累语料 & 替换词 词汇/短语 替换 同义词/联想 例句 tentative hesitant cautious, careful He made a tentative suggestion. achievement accomplishment success, triumph A warm sense of achievement filled me. included valued accepted, appreciated I felt included in the team. surge rush wave, burst A surge of joy went through me. steadily firmly confidently, securely Her voice grew steadily more confident. 分词短语：Encouraged by Emma, I explained the tale 高级连接词：gradually, tentatively, while, as, before, together, by the time 官方:第二节范文 As we reached the last riddle, a clue about an ancient Chinese tale suddenly popped up. It referred to the legend of the Monkey King from “ Journey to the West," something I knew by heart from childhood stories. Hesitantly, I explained the tale's themes of adventure and transformation , linking it to the puzzle's hints about “ a mischievous traveler with a magical staff, "(现在分词短语做伴随动作) My teammates listened attentively, and Emma's eyes widened in admiration. “ That's it!” Carlos(人名添加的不好！！)from Brazil shouted, as we connected the dots to reveal the hidden treasure - a small box of international treats. The group's applause washed over me(无灵主语句), turning my initial anxiety into a sense of triumph(现在分词短语做伴随动作). For the first time, I felt my cultural background was an asset, not a barrier, fostering deeper connections(现在分词短语做结果状语) as we shared laughs over our victory. Solving the riddle injected more confidence into me for the evening cultural presentation. I volunteered to showcase a traditional Chinese fan dance , incorporating elements from my heritage(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that I'd practiced back home. With Emma and the others cheering me on(with复合结构), I moved gracefully under the camp lights, explaining the symbolism of harmony and elegance(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The audience, including campers from diverse nations, responded with enthusiasm, asking questions(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that sparked lively discussions on global traditions. As the night wound down with a group photo and promises to stay in touch, I realized the camp had bridged my isolation into lasting friendships. When I headed back to my cabin, the weight of homesickness lifted(无灵主语句), replaced by gratitude for this transformative experience(过去分词做结果状语) that celebrated unity in diversity. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $