内容正文:
Unit 3 Trees and us单元写作精练
结合本单元“树木与人类的关系”主题,写一篇介绍树木重要性或呼吁保护树木的短文,或创作植树节现场报道脚本,描述树木的作用、树木的神奇之处及保护措施,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“树木与环保”相关核心词汇(如silent、oxygen、environment、convenient、furniture、communicate、species、dig、sapling、branch等)及短语(take in、come from、be made of、call on、cut down、communicate with、dig a hole、take care of等);
2.能熟练运用现在进行时描述正在发生的护树活动,用一般现在时陈述树木的常态作用,用连词(because、so、however)衔接逻辑,正确使用形容词后缀-ful/-less构成的词汇(useful、harmful等);
3.能按“树木作用→现状/活动→保护呼吁”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“珍视树木朋友,共建绿色家园”的单元主题。
本单元相关话题写作素材有:
词
汇
silent 无声的,oxygen 氧气,environment 环境,convenient 方便的,furniture 家具,communicate 交流,species 物种,dig 挖,sapling 树苗,branch 树枝;fresh 新鲜的,harmful 有害的,useful 有用的,protect 保护,save 节约 / 拯救,produce 产生,depend 依靠,plant 种植,forest 森林,earth 地球,soil 土壤,pollute 污染,leaf 叶子,root 根,trunk 树干,clean 干净的,cool 凉爽的,natural 自然的,wild 野生的,animal 动物,health 健康,future 未来,green 绿色的,care 爱护
短
语
take in 吸收;摄入 come from 来自
be made of 由…… 制成 call on 号召;动员
cut down 砍伐 communicate with 与…… 沟通
dig a hole 挖坑 plant a sapling 栽树苗
take care of 照顾;照料 support the sapling 支撑树苗
water the sapling 给树苗浇水 greenhouse gas 温室气体
fresh air 新鲜空气 save paper 节约用纸
stop polluting 停止污染 wood for furniture 制作家具的木材
build a green home 建设绿色家园 take action 采取行动
in danger 处于危险中 keep…clean 保持…… 干净
句
型
(1) 开头引入
1.are our silent friends and they are very important.树木是我们无声的朋友,它们非常重要。
2.Today is Tree Planting Day. We are doing something meaningful for trees.今天是植树节。我们正在为树木做有意义的事。
3.It’s necessary for us to know the importance of trees.我们有必要了解树木的重要性。
2. 中间描述
1.Trees can take in carbon dioxide and produce oxygen for us.树木可以吸收二氧化碳,为我们制造氧气。
2.Many animals live in trees, so trees are their natural homes.许多动物生活在树上,所以树木是它们天然的家园。
3.However, people cut down too many trees every year.然而,人们每年砍伐太多树木。
4.Look! Some students are digging holes and others are planting saplings.看!一些学生在挖坑,另一些在栽树苗。
5.We can save paper and plant more trees to protect them.我们可以节约用纸、多种树来保护它们。
3. 结尾总结
1.Let’s take action to protect trees and make our world greener.让我们行动起来保护树木,让我们的世界更绿。
2.Protecting trees is protecting ourselves.保护树木就是保护我们自己。
名言
1.The best time to plant a tree was 20 years ago. The second best time is now.(种树最好的时间是20年前,其次是现在)
2.Trees give peace to the souls of men.(树木给人类的心灵带来宁静)
3.He who plants a tree plants hope.(种树的人种下了希望)
优美句子
仿
(一)基础仿写
模板一:介绍树木的重要性
1. 树木是我们无声的朋友,它们在我们生活中扮演重要角色。
_____________________________________________________________________________
2. 它们对人类和环境都非常重要。
_____________________________________________________________________________
3. 树木吸收有害气体,产生新鲜氧气供我们呼吸。
_____________________________________________________________________________
4. 它们在日常生活中为我们提供水果和制作家具的木材。
_____________________________________________________________________________
5. 然而,一些人砍伐太多树木并污染环境。
_____________________________________________________________________________
6. 我们应该号召人们多种树并好好照料它们。
_____________________________________________________________________________
模板二:植树节现场报道脚本
1. 大家好,我正在城市公园做植树节现场报道。
_____________________________________________________________________________
2. 今天是植树节,我们正在做有意义的事。
_____________________________________________________________________________
3. 一些学生正在挖坑,准备种植小树苗。
_____________________________________________________________________________
4. 一些学生正在扶着树苗并认真给它们浇水。
_____________________________________________________________________________
5. 每个人都努力干活,一起享受这次绿色活动。
_____________________________________________________________________________
6. 树木能降温,让我们的环境更美丽舒适。
_____________________________________________________________________________
(二)进阶仿写
版本一:介绍树木的重要性
Trees are our silent friends. They are everywhere, from forests to cities. They are very important for us and the environment.
Trees can ________ (作用1,如take in CO₂ and produce oxygen) and ________ (作用2,如provide us with wood and fruit). They make our air ________ (形容词,如clean) and our lives ________ (形容词,如convenient). Many animals live in trees, so trees are their homes too.
However, some people ________ (伤害树木的行为,如cut down too many trees). We must protect trees. We can ________ (护树措施1,如save paper) and ________ (护树措施2,如plant saplings on Tree Planting Day). Let’s love our tree friends and keep our world green!
版本二:植树节现场报道
Hello, everyone! Today is Tree Planting Day. I’m reporting from ________ (地点,如City Park). Many students are here to plant trees.
Look! Some students are ________ (动作1,如digging holes) with shovels. Others are ________ (动作2,如putting saplings into the holes). Some are ________ (动作3,如watering the saplings) carefully. Everyone is working hard and having fun.
Planting trees is meaningful. Trees make our city ________ (形容词,如greener) and air ________ (形容词,如fresher). Let’s join in and plant more trees. Together, we can build a better environment!
写作步骤
懂
Step 1 审题立意(明确方向,不跑偏)
核心要求:读懂写作要求,确定介绍对象、时态、写作重点和情感基调,避免跑题。
审主题:
审人称:人称:第一人称(分享感悟、现场报道)或第三人称(客观介绍树木的重要性);
审时态:现在进行时或 一般现在时
审要点:内容:覆盖“1-2个树木核心作用(生态、生活)、2-3个护树行动/活动细节、1个保护呼吁或感悟”3个要点;
字数:80–100词,描述符合科学常识,语言符合七年级学生水平,体现对树木与人类共生关系的理解。
Step 2 谋篇布局(搭建框架,填内容)
核心要求:按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架,合理分配内容,逻辑清晰。
段落
核心作用
内容要点(用单元句型)
开头(1-2句)
引出主题,点明树木的重要性
1. Trees are our silent friends and they are very important.
2. It’s necessary for us to know the importance of trees.
中间(3-4句)
具体阐述,说明树木作用、现状 / 活动细节
1. Trees can take in carbon dioxide and produce oxygen for us.
2. Many animals live in trees, so trees are their natural homes.
3. However, people cut down too many trees every year.
4. Look! Some students are digging holes and planting saplings.
结尾(1-2句)
总结呼吁,号召大家保护树木
1. Let’s take action to protect trees and make our world greener.
2. Protecting trees is protecting ourselves.
Step 3 检查修改(纠错润色,拿高分)
核心要求:检查语法、拼写和语句通顺度,修正错误,让作文更流畅。
语法检查:人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。
拼写检查:所有词汇拼写精准,无字母漏写、错写。
语句检查:句子通顺,连接词使用合理,无中式英语。
细节检查:词数是否达标,结尾情感明确,内容贴合主题。题型通关
练
1. 树木对人类的生命具有相当重要的价值。树木给人类带来的不仅仅是食物、木材、住房和工作,而更重要的是它们对人类赖以生存的环境有着重大的生态效益。如果人类毁坏树木,那就是毁坏人类自己的家园。请你以“Trees are important”为题目,按照以下提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈保护树木的必要性。
提示:1.说明树木对人类生存的重要性;
2.谈谈树木日渐减少的现状及原因;
3.保护树木我们应该采取哪些措施。
Trees are important
Trees are our friends and they are helpful to us.
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2. 假如你是一名志愿者,周日上午,你来到公园, 看到市政府为市民免费提供自行车服务。回校后你与同学们展开了怎样保护树木的讨论。请根据下面的提示,以“How to save trees”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求: 呈现以下所有要点、条理清楚、语法正确、语言流畅。可以适当发挥。不少于80 词。
提示词语: instead of 代替;send 发送;both sides of every piece of paper 每张纸的两面
How to save trees
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3.假定你是李华,为了提高学生对保护树木和环境的认识,你们学校举办了植树节系列活动。请根据以下内容提示,向你校英国交换生 Leo写信介绍此次活动,并分享你的活动心得。
时间
3月12日下午
活动
①参加有关如何保护树木的讲座;
②和同学一起种树。
活动心得
①进一步了解树木的重要性;
②……
要求:
1. 80词左右 (开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:lecture 讲座
Dear Leo,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a piece of exciting news with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 你们学校决定组织一次主题为“Planting Trees for the Earth”的植树活动。假设你是班长,你要动员你班同学参加这次活动,请你写一篇不少于80词的英文发言稿。
要点:
(1)我国的森林覆盖率 (coverage rate) 低,近年来情况有所改善;
(2)树可以吸收有害气体,保持空气清新,防止水土流失;
(3)保护树木的建议 (至少2点)。
Dear fellow students,
Forests are important to the environment.
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Unit 3 Trees and us单元写作精练
结合本单元“树木与人类的关系”主题,写一篇介绍树木重要性或呼吁保护树木的短文,或创作植树节现场报道脚本,描述树木的作用、树木的神奇之处及保护措施,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“树木与环保”相关核心词汇(如silent、oxygen、environment、convenient、furniture、communicate、species、dig、sapling、branch等)及短语(take in、come from、be made of、call on、cut down、communicate with、dig a hole、take care of等);
2.能熟练运用现在进行时描述正在发生的护树活动,用一般现在时陈述树木的常态作用,用连词(because、so、however)衔接逻辑,正确使用形容词后缀-ful/-less构成的词汇(useful、harmful等);
3.能按“树木作用→现状/活动→保护呼吁”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“珍视树木朋友,共建绿色家园”的单元主题。
本单元相关话题写作素材有:
词
汇
silent 无声的,oxygen 氧气,environment 环境,convenient 方便的,furniture 家具,communicate 交流,species 物种,dig 挖,sapling 树苗,branch 树枝;fresh 新鲜的,harmful 有害的,useful 有用的,protect 保护,save 节约 / 拯救,produce 产生,depend 依靠,plant 种植,forest 森林,earth 地球,soil 土壤,pollute 污染,leaf 叶子,root 根,trunk 树干,clean 干净的,cool 凉爽的,natural 自然的,wild 野生的,animal 动物,health 健康,future 未来,green 绿色的,care 爱护
短
语
take in 吸收;摄入 come from 来自
be made of 由…… 制成 call on 号召;动员
cut down 砍伐 communicate with 与…… 沟通
dig a hole 挖坑 plant a sapling 栽树苗
take care of 照顾;照料 support the sapling 支撑树苗
water the sapling 给树苗浇水 greenhouse gas 温室气体
fresh air 新鲜空气 save paper 节约用纸
stop polluting 停止污染 wood for furniture 制作家具的木材
build a green home 建设绿色家园 take action 采取行动
in danger 处于危险中 keep…clean 保持…… 干净
句
型
(1) 开头引入
1.are our silent friends and they are very important.树木是我们无声的朋友,它们非常重要。
2.Today is Tree Planting Day. We are doing something meaningful for trees.今天是植树节。我们正在为树木做有意义的事。
3.It’s necessary for us to know the importance of trees.我们有必要了解树木的重要性。
2. 中间描述
1.Trees can take in carbon dioxide and produce oxygen for us.树木可以吸收二氧化碳,为我们制造氧气。
2.Many animals live in trees, so trees are their natural homes.许多动物生活在树上,所以树木是它们天然的家园。
3.However, people cut down too many trees every year.然而,人们每年砍伐太多树木。
4.Look! Some students are digging holes and others are planting saplings.看!一些学生在挖坑,另一些在栽树苗。
5.We can save paper and plant more trees to protect them.我们可以节约用纸、多种树来保护它们。
3. 结尾总结
1.Let’s take action to protect trees and make our world greener.让我们行动起来保护树木,让我们的世界更绿。
2.Protecting trees is protecting ourselves.保护树木就是保护我们自己。
名言
1.The best time to plant a tree was 20 years ago. The second best time is now.(种树最好的时间是20年前,其次是现在)
2.Trees give peace to the souls of men.(树木给人类的心灵带来宁静)
3.He who plants a tree plants hope.(种树的人种下了希望)
优美句子
仿
(一)基础仿写
模板一:介绍树木的重要性
1. 树木是我们无声的朋友,它们在我们生活中扮演重要角色。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Trees are our silent friends and they play an important role in our life.
2. 它们对人类和环境都非常重要。
_____________________________________________________________________________
They are very important for both human beings and the environment.
3. 树木吸收有害气体,产生新鲜氧气供我们呼吸。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Trees take in harmful gases and produce fresh oxygen for us to breathe.
4. 它们在日常生活中为我们提供水果和制作家具的木材。
_____________________________________________________________________________
They provide us with fruit and wood for furniture in our daily life.
5. 然而,一些人砍伐太多树木并污染环境。
_____________________________________________________________________________
However, some people cut down too many trees and pollute the environment.
6. 我们应该号召人们多种树并好好照料它们。
_____________________________________________________________________________
We should call on people to plant more trees and take care of them.
模板二:植树节现场报道脚本
1. 大家好,我正在城市公园做植树节现场报道。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Hello, everyone. I’m reporting from the City Park on Tree Planting Day.
2. 今天是植树节,我们正在做有意义的事。
_____________________________________________________________________________
It’s Tree Planting Day today, and we are doing meaningful things.
3. 一些学生正在挖坑,准备种植小树苗。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Some students are digging holes and preparing to plant young saplings.
4. 一些学生正在扶着树苗并认真给它们浇水。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Some students are supporting the saplings and watering them carefully.
5. 每个人都努力干活,一起享受这次绿色活动。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Everyone is working hard and enjoying the green activity together.
6. 树木能降温,让我们的环境更美丽舒适。
_____________________________________________________________________________
Trees can cool the air and make our environment more beautiful and comfortable.
(二)进阶仿写
版本一:介绍树木的重要性
Trees are our silent friends. They are everywhere, from forests to cities. They are very important for us and the environment.
Trees can ________ (作用1,如take in CO₂ and produce oxygen) and ________ (作用2,如provide us with wood and fruit). They make our air ________ (形容词,如clean) and our lives ________ (形容词,如convenient). Many animals live in trees, so trees are their homes too.
However, some people ________ (伤害树木的行为,如cut down too many trees). We must protect trees. We can ________ (护树措施1,如save paper) and ________ (护树措施2,如plant saplings on Tree Planting Day). Let’s love our tree friends and keep our world green!
版本二:植树节现场报道
Hello, everyone! Today is Tree Planting Day. I’m reporting from ________ (地点,如City Park). Many students are here to plant trees.
Look! Some students are ________ (动作1,如digging holes) with shovels. Others are ________ (动作2,如putting saplings into the holes). Some are ________ (动作3,如watering the saplings) carefully. Everyone is working hard and having fun.
Planting trees is meaningful. Trees make our city ________ (形容词,如greener) and air ________ (形容词,如fresher). Let’s join in and plant more trees. Together, we can build a better environment!
参考范文:
版本一:介绍树木的重要性
Trees are our silent friends. They are everywhere, from forests to cities. They are very important for us and the environment.
Trees can take in CO₂ and produce oxygen and provide us with wood and fruit. They make our air clean and our lives convenient. Many animals live in trees, so trees are their homes too.
However, some people cut down too many trees. We must protect trees. We can save paper and plant saplings on Tree Planting Day. Let’s love our tree friends and keep our world green!
版本二:植树节现场报道
Hello, everyone! Today is Tree Planting Day. I’m reporting from City Park. Many students are here to plant trees.
Look! Some students are digging holes with shovels. Others are putting saplings into the holes. Some are watering the saplings carefully. Everyone is working hard and having fun.Planting trees is meaningful. Trees make our city greener and air fresher.
Let’s join in and plant more trees. Together, we can build a better environment!
写作步骤
懂
Step 1 审题立意(明确方向,不跑偏)
核心要求:读懂写作要求,确定介绍对象、时态、写作重点和情感基调,避免跑题。
审主题:
审人称:人称:第一人称(分享感悟、现场报道)或第三人称(客观介绍树木的重要性);
审时态:现在进行时或 一般现在时
审要点:内容:覆盖“1-2个树木核心作用(生态、生活)、2-3个护树行动/活动细节、1个保护呼吁或感悟”3个要点;
字数:80–100词,描述符合科学常识,语言符合七年级学生水平,体现对树木与人类共生关系的理解。
Step 2 谋篇布局(搭建框架,填内容)
核心要求:按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架,合理分配内容,逻辑清晰。
段落
核心作用
内容要点(用单元句型)
开头(1-2句)
引出主题,点明树木的重要性
1. Trees are our silent friends and they are very important.
2. It’s necessary for us to know the importance of trees.
中间(3-4句)
具体阐述,说明树木作用、现状 / 活动细节
1. Trees can take in carbon dioxide and produce oxygen for us.
2. Many animals live in trees, so trees are their natural homes.
3. However, people cut down too many trees every year.
4. Look! Some students are digging holes and planting saplings.
结尾(1-2句)
总结呼吁,号召大家保护树木
1. Let’s take action to protect trees and make our world greener.
2. Protecting trees is protecting ourselves.
Step 3 检查修改(纠错润色,拿高分)
核心要求:检查语法、拼写和语句通顺度,修正错误,让作文更流畅。
语法检查:人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。
拼写检查:所有词汇拼写精准,无字母漏写、错写。
语句检查:句子通顺,连接词使用合理,无中式英语。
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1. 树木对人类的生命具有相当重要的价值。树木给人类带来的不仅仅是食物、木材、住房和工作,而更重要的是它们对人类赖以生存的环境有着重大的生态效益。如果人类毁坏树木,那就是毁坏人类自己的家园。请你以“Trees are important”为题目,按照以下提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈保护树木的必要性。
提示:1.说明树木对人类生存的重要性;
2.谈谈树木日渐减少的现状及原因;
3.保护树木我们应该采取哪些措施。
Trees are important
Trees are our friends and they are helpful to us.
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【答案】参考范文
Trees are important
Trees are our friends and they are helpful to us.
Trees provide us with a lot of useful things, such as fruits, wood, and even jobs. And they are very helpful to protect our living environment. People and animals depend on trees a lot.
However, trees are getting fewer and fewer these days. People cut down a great number of trees for money and they don’t plant trees. What’s worse, some forests are losing because of wildfires. What a pity.
Therefore, it is time to do something to protect trees. Firstly, we should call on people not to cut down so many trees and some laws should be carried out to stop people from cutting down trees. Secondly, we can hold some activities to plant trees on some special days, such as the Tree Planting Day. Thirdly, we should not drop any drink bottles or cigarettes in the wild, which may cause forest fires.
I hope everyone can protect trees. In fact, protecting trees means protecting ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”;
③提示:考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并要适当发挥补充,注意使用正确的词汇和句型,注意行文连贯和逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,以“树木是人类的朋友并且很有帮助”来引出下文;
第二步,说明树木的重要性以及树木日渐减少的现状和原因;
第三步,表述保护树木的措施,可用firstly,secondly,thirdly这样的词语使得文章更连贯,并注意总结文章,强调要保护树木。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物
②depend on依赖
③a great number of大量的
④stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we should call on people not to cut down so many trees and some laws should be carried out to stop people from cutting down trees.(带有情态动词的被动语态)
②Thirdly, we should not drop any drink bottles or cigarettes in the wild, which may cause forest fires.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
2. 假如你是一名志愿者,周日上午,你来到公园, 看到市政府为市民免费提供自行车服务。回校后你与同学们展开了怎样保护树木的讨论。请根据下面的提示,以“How to save trees”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求: 呈现以下所有要点、条理清楚、语法正确、语言流畅。可以适当发挥。不少于80 词。
提示词语: instead of 代替;send 发送;both sides of every piece of paper 每张纸的两面
How to save trees
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【答案】例文:
How to save trees
Trees are very important to us, so we should try our best to protect them well. How do we save trees?
First, we should plant more young trees and stop cutting them down. After that, we can go to work by bike or on foot. We can’t drive cars too often. Then we can try to send e‑mails instead of wasteful paper letters. At last, we should use both sides of every piece of paper carefully.
If we start now, we can save a large number of trees and make the earth greener.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍树对人类的重要性,引出保护树木的措施;
第二步,具体介绍保护树木的方式;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down砍倒
②instead of而不是
③a large number of许多,大量
[高分句型]
If we start now, we can save a large number of trees and make the earth greener.(if引导的条件状语从句)
3.假定你是李华,为了提高学生对保护树木和环境的认识,你们学校举办了植树节系列活动。请根据以下内容提示,向你校英国交换生 Leo写信介绍此次活动,并分享你的活动心得。
时间
3月12日下午
活动
①参加有关如何保护树木的讲座;
②和同学一起种树。
活动心得
①进一步了解树木的重要性;
②……
要求:
1. 80词左右 (开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当增加细节;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:lecture 讲座
Dear Leo,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a piece of exciting news with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Leo,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a piece of exciting news with you. Our school held activities to teach students about planting trees and protecting the environment.
The event began in the afternoon on 12 March with a lecture on how to protect trees. Following that, my classmates and I took part in a tree-planting activity. By taking part in this event, I learnt more about the importance of trees. They not only create cleaner air for us to breathe but also make our lives more convenient. I can’t imagine a world without them. I call on people to protect them from now on.
I’m looking forward to knowing about your experiences.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,特别注意不要遗漏表格中需要自行补充的“活动心得”,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题。问候对方,并告知对方自己学校举办了植树造林以及保护环境的活动;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍活动的时间、内容以及自己的活动心得。
第三步,书写结语。期待了解对方的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①how to do sth.如何做某事
②take part in参加
③learn about
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Our school held activities to teach students about planting trees and protecting the environment.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②I’m looking forward to knowing about your experiences.(动名词作宾语)
4. 你们学校决定组织一次主题为“Planting Trees for the Earth”的植树活动。假设你是班长,你要动员你班同学参加这次活动,请你写一篇不少于80词的英文发言稿。
要点:
(1)我国的森林覆盖率 (coverage rate) 低,近年来情况有所改善;
(2)树可以吸收有害气体,保持空气清新,防止水土流失;
(3)保护树木的建议 (至少2点)。
Dear fellow students,
Forests are important to the environment.
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【答案】参考范文
Dear fellow students,
Forests are important to the environment. We should plant more trees for the Earth.
At present, the coverage rate of forests in China is low, but the situation has improved in recent years. Trees can take in harmful air and keep the air fresh. Trees can prevent water and soil loss. To protect the Earth, people should take action as soon as possible.
I have some advice. First, people should plant more trees around the world. Second, people should stop cutting down too many trees.
Let’s try our best to protect the Earth!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我国目前森林覆盖情况;
第二步,介绍植树的好处;
第三部,提出保护树木的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……是重要的
②at present目前
③cut down砍伐
[高分句型]
①To protect the Earth, people should take action as soon as possible.(动词不定式表示目的)
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