内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别三 活动介绍类
[2023, 2021, 2025试卷示例(三), 2024副题]
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常见题目表述
①人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活 科技在我们的生
活中扮演着越来越重要的角色,学校也常常通过各类科技活动培
养同学们的创新思维和实践能力。你校近期组织了以“智启未来”
为主题的科技节活动,请你以“The Science Festival”为题并结合
以下图示,用英语写一篇短文介绍此次活动并谈谈你的想法。#1
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②人与自我:乐于实践&人与社会:志愿服务 社会实践活动
(social practice activity)可以帮助我们理解与运用知识。假设
你是李华,你打算邀请交换生Peter参加一次社会实践活动。请你
从以下两个活动方案中任选其一,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。#2
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Pick up rubbish
●When: this Saturday morning
●Where: People’s Park
●Why: to keep the park clean
to protect the environment ____________________________________
Help farmers grow vegetables
●When: this Sunday morning
●Where: Sunshine Garden
●Why: to learn farming skills
to develop good working habits
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作文框架
①介绍活动
开头:引入文章话题;
中间:介绍活动的时间、地点、人物+活动的具体内容等;
结尾:表达个人感悟。
②介绍节日
开头:介绍节日名称+节日意义;
中间:介绍节日活动;
结尾:表达个人情感。
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高分模板
①介绍活动
Dear ____,
I am very pleased to tell you that we are going to
organize a(n) ____(活动名称) and I would be very
happy if you could take part in the activity.
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The activity will be held on ____(活动日期) at ____
(活动地点).
In the morning, we ____(活动一). We will learn about
____(活动一的目的). Then we___ (活动二), which helps
us____(活动二的目的). After lunch, we will go to ____
(活动三), where we ____(活动三的目的).
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I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
注意:此模板也适用于 “已经发生过的活动”,句子时态需改为
一般过去时。
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②介绍节日
Dear____,
How are you doing? I’m really glad that you are
interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many
traditional festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival and
the Mid-Autumn Festival. I’d like to introduce ____
(节日名称) to you. ____(节日名称) is a(n) ____
(重要性) traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for
____(持续时间).
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Days before the festival, people ____(节日活动一).
They ____(节日活动二). During the festival, ___
(节日活动三). Then ____(节日活动四). To me, ____
(节日名称) means ___, because at that time, ____
(节日的意义).
Welcome to China to celebrate ____(节日名称) together.
I believe you will__ (感受).
Yours,
Li Hua
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优秀范文记背
Passage 1
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:引出话
题,简单
介绍科技
节 The Science Festival
Science is very
important in our life.
Our school had a
science festival on
April 25th. It was
held on the
playground. The Science Festival
Science makes our life
better, and our school held a
wonderful science festival on
April 25th. It took place on
the playground and many
students joined in.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:详
细介绍科
技节的活
动 There were many
fun activities. I played
chess against a robot. At
first, I thought I could
win, but the robot was
very smart. Then, I did
a small experiment with
my classmates. The activities were
exciting. Playing chess
against a robot was a
great challenge. Though I
lost, I was surprised by
how clever the robot was.
Then, doing experiments
with classmates was fun.
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:详细
介绍科技节
的活动 We followed the
steps and saw a
cool change. I also
tried VR glasses. It
made me feel like I
was traveling in
space—it was
amazing! We followed the steps
carefully and cheered when
we saw the interesting
results. The most amazing
part was wearing VR
glasses. It felt real to me
that I had a “travel” in
space, as if I was flying
among the stars.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:谈谈
对此活动的想
法 I loved this
festival. It made
me become more
interested in
science. I hope we
can have more
activities like this. This festival not only
brought me joy but also
inspired me to learn more
about science. It showed
me that science is around
us, and I’m looking
forward to the next activity
like this.
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Passage 2
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:邀请参加
种植蔬菜的
活动 Dear Peter,
Social practice is
a cool way to learn
things outside books.
Let’s take part in the
“Help farmers grow
vegetables” activity
this Sunday! Dear Peter,
Social practice can
connect knowledge with
real life, so I’d love to
invite you to take part in
the “Help farmers grow
vegetables” activity this
Sunday.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介绍
社会实践活
动的时间、
地点以及原
因 We’ll meet at
Sunshine Garden in
the morning. The
plan is to learn
farming skills and
develop good
working habits. We’ll go to Sunshine
Garden in the morning.
There, farmers will guide us
to practice farming skills.
Watering the young plants
and learning to care for
them will also be part of
our tasks.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介绍
社会实践活
动的时间、
地点以及原
因 First, farmers will teach
us how to prepare the
soil. Then we’ll sow
vegetable seeds. After
that, we need to water
them carefully. This activity not only
helps us learn basic
farming skills but also
develops good working
habits, teaching us to be
patient.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:表
明参加此次
活动的收获
并再次发出
邀请 This activity can
help us understand how
hard farmers work.
When we see the seeds
grow, we’ll also
understand why we
should save food. Working on the
farm, we’ll realize the
value of farmers’ labor
and why we should
treasure every grain.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:表
明参加此次
活动的收获
并再次发出
邀请 Let’s spend a
meaningful morning in
the garden together!
Yours,
Li Hua If you’re interested, let’s
spend a meaningful
morning in the garden
together.
Yours,
Li Hua
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