类别2 经历感受类-【众相原创·赋能中考】2026年中考英语主题写作培优册配套课件（陕西专用）

该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦经历感受类写作核心考点，严格对接中考说明要求，分析2021副题及2024-2025试卷示例等真题命题趋势，归纳“帮助经历”“旅行经历”等常考题型，按“开头引入-事件叙述-结尾感悟”框架梳理写作要素，体现中考备考的针对性和实用性。 课件亮点在于“分阶范文记背+高分模板”模式，通过初阶与高阶范文对比（如“A Warm Moment”中环境描写从“rainy day”到“rained cats and dogs”的语言升级），培养学生语言能力和思维品质。提供“五个W和一个H”事件叙述法，助力学生掌握经历类写作技巧，教师可依此系统指导学生提升表达层次，高效冲刺中考。

陕西 英 语 主题写作培优册 1 第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背 类别二 经历感受类 [2024， 2025试卷示例（一）， 2021副题] 2 常见题目表述 ①人与自我：自我认识，自我管理，自我提升 生活并非一成不 变，总是充满了跌宕起伏。然而，他人一次不经意的帮助可能会 带给我们别样的温暖。请根据下面图示，以 “A（n） ____ Moment”为题，用英语讲述一次你接受他人帮助的经历以及你的 感受，不少于70词。#1.1 3 4 ②人与自我：丰富、充实、积极向上的生活 无论是长途旅行还 是郊游，每一次旅行都是珍贵的回忆。请以“My ____ Trip” 为 题，结合下面的图示，用英语写一篇不少于70词的短文。 5 作文框架 开头：以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历。 中间：讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果，即五 个“W”（what, who, when, where, why）和一个“H”（how）。 结尾：对上述经历进行总结，表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么 或以后会怎么做。 6 高分模板 One ____ Experience I’m glad to share ____（我的经历）. When I first went into junior high school, I ____ （遇到的经历） because ____（原因）. I was/felt ____（感受） and didn’t know what to do. ____（人物） encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice. First of all, ____（我的行为 ①）, which helped to ____（这样做的结果①）. Second, ____ 7 （我的行为②）. In this way, I not only ____ but also ____ （这样做的结果②）. Day by day, I could ____（可以做的事情） and I ____（现在的行为） now. Through the experience, I have fully realized that ____ （感悟）.#1.3 优秀范文记背 Passage 1 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Beginning：引出话 题 A Warm Moment Life is full of ups and downs, and sometimes a small kind act can light up our day. A Warm Moment Life is full of ups and downs. Once, an act of kindness from a classmate gave me a truly warm moment. 9 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Body： 讲述一件 你接受他 人帮助的 经历 Last Friday was a rainy day. After school, I found I had left my umbrella at home. Last Friday, it rained cats and dogs. When school was over, I ran to the school gate, only to realize I’d left my umbrella at home. 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Body： 讲述一件 你接受他 人帮助的 经历 I was worried and didn’t know what to do. Just then, my classmate Li Hua came over. He had an umbrella and said, “Let’s share it.” Standing there, feeling anxious and helpless, I didn’t know how to get back. Just then, my classmate Li Hua noticed me. Without a second thought, he walked up to me and said gently, “Let’s share it.” 续表 11 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Body： 讲述一件 你接受他 人帮助的 经历 We walked home together. On the way home, he always tried to keep me dry. His kindness gave me a warm feeling. On the way, he kept moving the umbrella to cover me well. Even though part of his clothes got wet, he didn’t care at all. His kind words and warm smile made the rainy day bright. 续表 12 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Ending： 表达自己 的感受 This moment was unforgettable. It made me want to help others in need too. This moment taught me the power of kindness. I’ll surely help others just as he did. 续表 13 Passage 2 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Beginning：表明学 校旅行是 令自己难 忘的旅行 My UnforgettableTrip School trips are always exciting! They bring us lots of fun memories. My Unforgettable Trip Life is full of wonderful memories, and school trips are always special. 14 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Body：详 细介绍旅 行的时 间、地点 和活动等 Last Friday, our school took us to the Nature Park for a trip. We went there by bus in the morning. Last Friday, our school organized a trip to the Nature Park, which is a place full of natural wonders. In the morning, we took a bus, chatting and laughing all the way. 续表 15 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Body：详 细介绍旅行 的时间、地 点和活动等 First, we walked along a small path. We saw colorful flowers and heard birds singing. Then, our science teacher showed us some interesting plants, like tall trees and small grass. As we walked along the winding path, the sweet smell of flowers filled the air. Our science teacher, with great patience, explained how plants grow, pointing at the thick trunks and tiny seeds under the soil. 续表 16 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Body：详 细介绍旅 行的时 间、地点 和活动等 At noon, we had a picnic on the grass. We shared sandwiches and fruit. Everyone was happy. At noon, we spread out our picnic mats on the soft grass. While sharing delicious food, we talked about our favorite parts of the trip. When the sun started to set, we went back, but the beauty of nature stayed in our hearts. 续表 17 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Ending： 表达自己 的感受 This trip was really fun. It made me love nature more. I can’t wait for the next school trip! This trip was not only fun, but it taught me to observe and appreciate the world carefully. I’ll always remember this special day. 续表 19 $