内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第三部分 写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别一 写人叙事类
(2025, 2022, 2023副题, 2020副题)
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常见题目表述
①人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升 在每个人的生活
中,总会有一个值得敬佩的人成为我们心中的榜样。你校五四青
年节将要组织一次英语演讲比赛,请你参考以下图示,以“A
Hero in My Heart”为题,用英语写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。#1
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Who:
father, mother, firefighter, teacher, …
Why:
1. patient and kind
2. bring hope to people
3. give people a lot of warmth
How:
1. take… as my role model
2. help those in need
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②人与自我:劳动实践 假定你是李辉,你对风筝很感兴趣,上
周六你在家亲手制作了一个蝴蝶形状的风筝。请你结合下面图示
信息,用英语写一篇短文,分享你的制作过程。
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作文框架
开头:引入这个人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征
(建议选取父母、朋友、老师等熟悉的人物)
①直接型:直接点明这个人物是谁。如:I’m glad to say
something about my best friend.
②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题,再点明这个人物。如:
During the process of growing up, it is very important to have
someone who knows us well. Among all the people around me,
I think no one else but my father is the special person who
knows me best.
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中间:你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when, where, what,
how, ...)
①建议写作角度:这个人物帮助你成长的故事;这个人物身上的
闪光点;
②需要注意的点:经历类文章应用一般过去时。
结尾:你的感悟、感受、自己的做法、对这个人的美好祝愿
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高分模板
The Most ___ Person in My Heart
To be honest, ____ is the most ____ person I’ve ever met.
She/He ___(人物身份+人物外貌特征:has a round face, a
soft voice, …). I think she/he is____ because she/he is always
(描写人物性格的形容词:patient, kind, helpful, …). She/He
likes____(人物爱好: help others, collect stamps, take part in
volunteer activities, …).#1.1
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Once I ____(你遇到的麻烦:be sick, fail the exam, have
difficulty in + 学科,can’t get along well with, …), she/he
told me ___ (人物的行为:not to give up, not to worry about,
keep reading aloud, talk to, help people in need, …). Then
she/he ____(人物的行为:teach me how to…, ask me to…,
encourage me to…). In addition, she/he ____(人物的行为:
give me flowers or books, give me helpful suggestions, listen to
me patiently, …) when I was in trouble. I became/felt____
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(你的改变/感受: confident, moved, independent, happy,
relaxed, …) because of her/him.
As her/his ____, I have learned that ____
(你的感悟:nothing is impossible, we should help others, …).
I hope I will be a person like her/him. I also hope she/he will
be better and better.#1.3
优秀范文记背
Passage 1
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning:
表明谁是自
己心目中的
英雄 Hello,
everyone. I’m
glad to be here to
give a speech.
Everyone has a
hero in their
heart, and mine is
my father. Hello, everyone. I’m glad
to be here to give a speech.
On the journey of life, there’s
always someone who shines
like a star, and the hero in
my heart is my father.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介绍
他/她成为自
己心目中英
雄的原因 He is patient
and kind. Every
evening, he listens
to my daily
stories after work. What moves me most is
his patience and kindness.
After a tiring day at work, he
still spends time listening to
my daily stories, and his eyes
are full of care.
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:介
绍他/她成
为自己心
目中英雄
的原因 When I fall
down, he helps
me stand up and
says, “Try
again.” His big
hands give me
warmth. He often
helps old people
carry heavy
things. Once I fell down in a race, he
didn’t lift me up directly but
encouraged me to stand up in a
warm voice, which planted
courage in my heart. He not
only uses his warmth to comfort
me but also gives his kindness
to others, like helping elderly
neighbors carry heavy things on
rainy days.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
表达向他/
她学习的
决心 I see him as my
role model. I will help
my friends when they
need me. My father is
the best hero.
Thanks for
listening. I’ve decided to follow
his example: to offer a
hand to those in need, just
like he does every day.
Thanks for listening.
Passage 2
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Beginning: 引
出制作风筝的
主题 Making a Kite
I like kites very
much, so I made a kite
at home last Saturday. Making a kite
I am interested
in kites, so I made a
kite by myself at
home last Saturday.
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体
介绍所需
要的材料
及制作方 Before making it,
I prepared some
bamboo and silk, a
knife, a pair of
scissors, a needle,
some thread and a
long string. I began to
make it. Before making it, I
prepared some bamboo, a
piece of silk, a knife, a
pair of scissors, a needle,
some thread and a long
string. When everything
was ready, I began to make
it.
写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体
介绍所需
要的材料
及制作方 First, I cut the bamboo
into thin pieces. And I
fixed the thin bamboo
pieces to form the
shape of a butterfly.
Second, I cut the silk
and fixed it. First of all, I cut the
bamboo into thin pieces.
And I fixed the thin
bamboo pieces to form the
shape of a butterfly.
Second, I cut the silk and
fixed it according to the
shape.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Body:具体
介绍所需
要的材料
及制作方 Finally, I tied the
string to the kite. And
then the kite was
finished. I tried to fly
it high in the sky and
I succeeded. Finally, I tied the string to
the kite. And then the kite
was finished. I tried to fly
it high in the sky. To my
surprise, I succeeded.
续表
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写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文
Ending:
己的感受 I’m very happy.
So I’m going to
make more beautiful
kites by myself in
the future. Practice makes perfect.
I’m going to make more
beautiful kites by myself in
the future.
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