摘要:
该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦“人与自然”主题下的环境污染、环保意识与行为等核心考点,对接全国视野中“共建绿色校园”“低碳生活”等命题趋势,整合人教版、外研版相关课本单元句型,按“开头-中间-结尾”分层梳理,结合陕西中考命题角度,归纳说明文、记叙文等常考题型,体现备考针对性。
课件亮点在于“分层三阶写作指导”,一阶通过课本句型翻译与句式升格(如用“so that”“which”优化句子)夯实语言能力,二阶对比初高阶范文(如细化“clothing such as cotton”等内容)提升思维品质,三阶实战“环保创意实践周”写作(涵盖作品、活动、感受)强化学习能力。助力学生掌握写作结构与得分技巧,为教师提供系统复习框架,高效备战中考。
内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自然
主题10 环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
八(下)U7 Facts about the
world 九(全)U13 Protecting the
environment
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the
world today.
2. The earth is our home. Therefore, we should take
action to protect it.
3. As is known to everyone, animals are our friends.
However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 1. To cut down air pollution, we should take the
bus or subway instead of driving. Also, we can ride
a bike. It’s good for health and it doesn’t cost
anything.[人教九(全)U13]
2. I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks
when I buy takeaway food. I use the ones at home.
[人教九(全)U13]
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 3. We can do more to protect the environment. For
example, we can help keep the air clean by planting
trees.[外研九(上)M12]
4. I’ve already tried my best to protect the
environment. I recycle. I don’t throw away things if I
don’t want them any more. I turn off the lights when
I leave a room.[外研九(上)M12]
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中
间
句 保护
环境
的做
法 5. It’s wise for people to choose public transport or
ride bicycles.
6. Last but not least, it’s of great importance to
stop using plastic bags and wooden chopsticks.
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中
间
句 保护
动植
物的
行为 1. If possible, we can take part in some activities to
learn more about wild animals and try to protect
them.
2. What’s more, we should advise the government to
make laws so that wild animals can get enough
protection.
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中
间
句 共建
绿色
校园 1. At a green school, every class collects waste which
can be recycled or used again. Then the school sells
the waste and uses the money to help students in
poor areas.[外研九(上)M12]
2. Students at a green school also learn ways to save
energy and recycle at home. That means less waste.
[外研九(上)M12]
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中
间
句 共建
绿色
校园 3. Each of us students is a cleaner. If we see
garbage, we should actively pick it up and put it in
the bin.
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结尾句 1. So together, our actions can make a difference
and lead to a better future! [人教九(全)U13]
2. Though pollution is heavy now, I don’t think it’s
hopeless. If everyone starts to do something, the
world will be saved.[外研九(上)M12]
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结尾句 3. We cannot hope for rapid change, but let’s take
these simple steps today so that we will save the
world for our grandsons and granddaughters tomorrow.
[外研九(上)M12]
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俗语谚
语 1. Save water, shame of waste.节约用水,浪费可耻。
2. Clear waters and green mountains are golden hills
and silver mountains.绿水青山就是金山银山。
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◆句子翻译
1. 我们学校最大的问题之一是太多塑料瓶被扔掉。(Tip: one of
the biggest problems is…)
________________________________________________________
_______________________________
One of the biggest problems in our school is that too many plastic bottles are thrown away.
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2. 正如所有学生所知,多植树有助于保持空气清洁。(Tip: as is
known to sb.)
________________________________________________________
______________
As is known to all students, planting more trees helps keep the air clean.
3. 周末在公园捡垃圾对我们有好处。(Tip: It’s good for sb. to
do sth.)
________________________________________________________
It’s good for us to pick up litter in the park on weekends.
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4. 离开教室时关灯是非常重要的。(Tip: It’s of great importance
to do sth.)
________________________________________________________
________________
It’s of great importance to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.
5. 我们的科学老师教我们学习在日常生活中节约能源的方法。
(Tip: learn ways to save energy)
________________________________________________________
______________
Our science teacher teaches us to learn ways to save energy in daily life.
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6. 我们班开始收集旧书并重新利用,以减少浪费。(Tip: start to
do sth.)
________________________________________________________
______________
Our class starts to collect old books and reuse them to
reduce waste.
7. 学生们自己带水杯去学校是明智的。(Tip: It’s wise for sb. to
do sth.)
________________________________________________________
________
It’s wise for students to bring their own water bottles to
school.
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8. 购物时,我们可以用布袋代替塑料袋。(Tip: instead of)
________________________________________________________
_______
We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
◆句式升格
9. We pick up litter on the playground after PE class. The
ground stays clean.(Tip: so that)
________________________________________________________
_______________________
We pick up litter on the playground after PE class so that the ground stays clean.
10. We grow some plants in the school garden. It makes the air
fresher.(Tip: which)
________________________________________________________
_____________
We grow some plants in the school garden, which makes the air fresher.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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树木是保护自然环境的卫士,是人类能持续生存在地球上的
保证。请你以“Functions of Trees(树的功能)”为题,根据以下
思维导图的提示,写一篇短文,发表你的看法。#1
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参考词汇:carbon dioxide(二氧化碳), oxygen(氧气),
soil(土壤), …
Functions of Trees
Trees are like natural guardians of our planet. ____#1.4
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审题四要素:
审体裁: 说明文
审时态: 一般现在时
审人称: 第一人称为主
审要点: 对人类:提供食物、衣物、药物;对动物:提供栖息地、
食物;对环境:净化空气、防风固土;我们该做什么:如多种树、不
砍伐树木等。#1.5.4
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
Trees play important roles in many ways.
Many animals live in the forest which is full of trees.
Let’s work together to keep our earth green and beautiful!
They can stop the wind from blowing away the soil and prevent soil from being washed away by water.
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二、落笔:分阶范文&对比赏析
初阶范文 高阶范文
Functions of Trees
Trees are like natural
guardians of our planet.
They play important roles
in many ways. Functions of Trees
Trees are like natural guardians
of our planet. They play important
roles in many ways.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
For people, trees are
truly helpful. They give us
food like fruits, materials for
clothing, and medicine made
from their leaves. Animals
benefit a lot from trees.
Many animals live in the
forest. They feed on fruits,
leaves and other things from
trees. For people, trees are truly
helpful. They give us food like
fruits, materials for clothing such
as cotton, and medicine made
from their leaves. Animals also
benefit a lot from trees. Many
animals live in the forest which
is full of trees, and they feed on
fruits, leaves and other things
from trees.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
For the environment, trees
are amazing. They can
stop the wind from
blowing away the soil.
They prevent soil from
being washed away by
water. For the environment, trees are
amazing. They clean the air by
taking in carbon dioxide and
giving out oxygen. They can not
only stop the wind from blowing
away the soil but also prevent soil
from being washed away by water.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
So, we should plant
more trees and protect
them well. Let’s work
together to keep our earth
green and beautiful! Therefore, we should plant
more trees and protect them well.
Let’s work together to keep our
earth green and beautiful!
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_________ 对比赏析:
1. 内容维度:内容更丰富具体,在人类受益部分细化“clothing
such as cotton”,动物部分补充定语从句“which is full of
trees”,环境部分明确“taking in carbon dioxide and giving out
oxygen”的光合作用原理。
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2. 逻辑维度:逻辑更严谨,在阐述树木对动物的作用时,用
“which is full of trees”明确森林与树木的关系,让“动物依赖树
木生存”的逻辑更紧密;环境部分通过“clean the air”的原理说
明,把“防风固土”的作用与生态循环逻辑结合,说服力更强。
3. 亮点表达:①词汇上:“planet”替代“earth”,更具书面感;②
句式上:用定语从句“which is full of trees”、并列结构“taking
in… and giving out…”丰富句式。
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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你所在的学校上个月举办了“校园环保创意实践周”活动,你
和同学一起完成了一项环保创意作品,并参与了相关志愿活动。
请以“An Unforgettable Environmental Protection Activity”为题,
写一篇英语短文,分享你的经历。
●Creative works made by you and your classmates;
●Volunteer activities you took part in;
●Your gains and feelings from these experiences.
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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An Unforgettable Environmental Protection Activity
Last month, our school held an “Environmental Protection
Creative Practice Week” activity to encourage students to protect
the environment through practical actions. ____
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An Unforgettable Environmental Protection Activity
Last month, our school held an “Environmental
Protection Creative Practice Week” activity to encourage
students to protect the environment through practical
actions. My classmates and I joined in actively, and it became
an unforgettable experience.
We decided to make something creative with waste. We
collected old boxes, plastic bottles and used cloth at home.
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After three days of working on it, we made a “multi-
functional storage shelf”. Our work won the “Most Creative
Award” in the school’s exhibition.
During the week, we also volunteered to encourage
garbage sorting on campus. We made posters to explain how
to sort different types of garbage and helped younger
students put waste into the right rubbish bins. Many
students said they learned a lot from us.
This activity taught me that we can turn waste into
treasure with creativity. It also made me realize that
everyone can do their part for environmental protection. I
will keep doing small environmental actions in daily life to
make our planet better.
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score: ___/15
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