内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题3 积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法,勤学善思
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(上)U9 School subjects 九(全)U1 Learning how to
study
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. Everyone is born with the ability to learn.
But whether or not you can do this well
depends on your learning habits.[人教九(全)
U1]
2. English is important and useful to us. How
can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
3. Nowadays, many students can’t make good
use of their time, which has a bad influence on
their study.
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中
间
句 阅读、学
习的重要
性及意义 1. Learning is a lifelong journey because every
day brings something new.[人教九(全)U1]
2. Learning a new language takes time. It can
be challenging, but the new language can give
people more opportunities.[冀教七(下)U5]
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中
间
句 阅读、学
习的重要
性及意义 3. Books are my best friends. Reading can bring me happiness and knowledge.
4. I prefer to study alone because it can help
me think independently.
5. Reading can make a great difference to our
life. It’s important for us to keep good reading
habits.
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中
间
句 学习中存
在的问题 1. The teacher spoke so quickly that I did not
understand her most of the time.[人教九(全)
U1]
2. I dare not answer questions in class because
I’m afraid of making mistakes.
3. There is no doubt that playing video games is one of the biggest problems affecting students’
study.
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中
间
句 学习方法
与建议 1. Try to guess a word’s meaning by reading the sentences before and after it.[人教九(全)U1]
2. You can become better by reading something
you enjoy every day.[人教九(全)U1]
3. Good learners often connect what they need
to learn with something interesting.[人教九
(全)U1]
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中
间
句 学习方法
与建议 4. If you prepare well for a test, then there’s
nothing to worry about![人教九(全)U1]
5. The more you practice, the fewer mistakes
you will make.
6. I can improve my listening skills by listening
to English songs.
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中
间
句 学习方法
与建议 7. The best way to remember new words is to
practice them every day.
8. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes when you practice speaking English.
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结尾句 1. Remember, “Use it or lose it.” Even if you
learn something well, you will forget it unless
you use it.[人教九(全)U1]
2. Everything that you learn becomes a part of
you and changes you, so learn wisely and learn
well.[人教九(全)U1]
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结尾句 3. I believe if I put my heart into learning
English, I will make much progress.
4. Everyone should believe in themselves
because they have the ability to do things
better.
5. In a word, reading not only brings me much
joy but also makes me interested in English
learning.
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俗语谚语 1. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。[人教九
(全)U1]
2. Learn the new while reviewing the old. 温故
而知新。
3. Reading ten thousand books is like traveling
ten thousand miles. 读万卷书,行万里路。
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◆句子翻译
1.你可以充分利用在线课程来获得新知识。(Tip: make good us
e of…)
________________________________________________________
____________
You can make good use of online courses to get new
knowledge.
2. 当你需要帮助时,不要害怕寻求帮助。(Tip: don’t be afraid
of…)
___________________________________________________
Don’t be afraid of asking for help when you need it.
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3. 你在课堂上听讲越认真,你得到的知识就会越多。(Tip: The+
比较级..., the+比较级...)
________________________________________________________
_____________
The more carefully you listen in class, the more knowledge
you will get.
4. 通过合理规划时间,我们将有能力平衡学习与休息。
(Tip: have the ability to do sth.)
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_______________________
By planning time properly, we will have the ability to
balance study and rest.
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◆句式升格
5. Reading plays an important role in our daily lives.(Tip: there
is no doubt that…)
________________________________________________________
_______________
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in
our daily lives.
6. English is helpful. I can use it to communicate with foreigners
freely.(Tip: so… that…)
________________________________________________________
_________________
English is so helpful that I can use it to communicate with foreigners freely.
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7. Middle school students should keep good reading habits.
(Tip: It’s+adj.+for sb.to do sth.)
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_______________
It’s important for middle school students to keep good
reading habits.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。本周你班将召开“How to
Improve English Listening and Speaking”的主题班会,分享提高
英语听说能力的方法。你将自己的方法分享给了同学们并鼓励大
家采用。
参考词汇:improve, listen to, ask...for help, watch English
cartoons, ...
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening and speaking are really
important in learning English. How can we improve English
listening and speaking skills? ____#1.3____
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审题四要素:
审体裁: 说明文
审人称: 第一、二人称为主
审时态: 一般现在时为主
审要点: 分享提高英语听说能力的方法并鼓励同学们采用#1.4.4
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
Here is some advice for you.
It is helpful to watch English videos or listen to English songs.
Don’t be afraid to ask the teacher for help when you don’t understand something.
We can improve our English listening and speaking abilities step by step.
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二、范文:分阶范文&对比赏析
初阶范文 高阶范文
How to Improve English
Listening and Speaking
As we know, English
listening and speaking are
really important in learning
English. How to Improve English
Listening and Speaking
As we know, English listening
and speaking are really important
in learning English.. .
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初阶范文 高阶范文
. .How can we improve
English listening and
speaking skills? Here is
some advice for you. How can we improve English
listening and speaking skills? Here
is some advice for you.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
First, watch English
videos or listen to English
songs often. You can learn
how words are said.
Second, listen to your
teacher carefully in class. First, it is helpful to watch
English videos or listen to English
songs often. This lets us hear
how words are pronounced.
Second, always listen to the
teacher carefully in class.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Notice how he or she says
words. Third, ask your
teacher for help when you
don’t understand something.
He or she can explain
things clearly. Fourth, watch
English cartoons. Pay attention to his or her
pronunciation. Third, don’t be
afraid to ask the teacher for help
when you don’t understand
something. He or she can explain
it clearly. Fourth, watching English
cartoons can be both fun and
useful.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
It’s fun and you can learn
new words and sentences
easily. Finally, talk with
your classmates and friends
in English as much as you
can. We can learn new words and
sentences in an interesting way.
Finally, try to have conversations
with your classmates and friends
in English as much as possible.
Practice makes perfect!
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初阶范文 高阶范文
Do these things often,
and your English listening
and speaking will get
better. By doing these things often,
you can improve your English
listening and speaking abilities
step by step.
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_________ 对比赏析:
1. 内容维度:高阶范文内容更丰富,对每个建议的作用都有细节补充。
2. 逻辑维度:除清晰序列词外,还使用一些逻辑衔接表达,让建议之间的逻辑关系更紧密。
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3. 亮点表达:①词汇上:“pronounced”“conversation”等;②句式
上,使用了“It is helpful to…”(it作形式主语),“be both fun
and useful”(并列结构),“Practice makes perfect”(谚语)等,
让表达更地道、丰富。
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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一、为优化英语作业设计、切实提升学生英语学习成效,你校英语
社团现张贴海报,面向全体学生征集英语作业建议。假如你是九年
级一班的李华,请根据下面海报要求,写一篇英语短文投稿。
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English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
★What kind of English homework do you like best? Why?
★What was the most meaningful homework you’ve ever had?
Write and share!
Send it to happyhomework@English.com
Read a book
Do exercises
Make a speech
Act out a play
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;#1.1.1
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词
数。)
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English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My favourite kind of
English homework is ___
I hope our English homework can be more meaningful and
more creative like this. Thanks.
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English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My favourite kind
of English homework is acting out a play. It can help
improve my language skills and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act
out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six. It was a
big challenge. Firstly, I read the play with group members
and we shared our understanding of the play. Then, we
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chose our roles and practised the lines a lot. My spoken
English has improved greatly during the practice. In the end,
we put on a great show and won praise. Now I’m interested
in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of
the public.
I hope our English homework can be more meaningful
and more creative like this. Thanks.
二、生活里没有书籍,就好像没有阳光;智慧里没有书籍,就好
像鸟儿没有翅膀。书香浸润灵魂,阅读陪伴成长。阅读是我们一
生的旅程,少年正是读书时,暑假即将到来,让我们一起读书吧!
请根据以下图示及要求,以“Reading—a Lifelong Journey”为题,
用英语写一篇短文,倡导同学们读书。
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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Reading—a Lifelong Journey
Summer vacation is coming. We should do something
meaningful. As we know, reading plays an important role in our
lives.____
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Reading—a Lifelong Journey
Summer vacation is coming. We should do something
meaningful. As we know, reading plays an important role in
our lives. We can get knowledge and learn many skills by
reading books. Besides, we can develop interests through
reading and make our lives colorful. There are many kinds
of books we can read, such as great books, science books
and even newspapers. Magazines about study are also good
choices for us.
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We can read books in our free time, and it’s a good
idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library.
How about joining the Reading Club in our school? While
reading, it’s necessary to take notes and write reviews. We
can certainly share them with our friends in the club.
In my opinion, reading is a lifelong journey. We can see
the world in books. Let’s read together.
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score:__/15
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