内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第一部分 写作六大微技能
微技能三 如何组织段落
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
主题句→
定方向 段落
开头
第一
句 明确段落
核心内容 Reading is my favorite hobby. It
lets me travel around the world
through pages.
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
过渡句→
搭桥梁 支持
细节
之间/
段落
末尾 衔接段落
内不同内
容,或为
下段作铺
垫,让行
文更流畅 Every day, I read for half an
hour. I love funny storybooks,
like Cat in the Hat. It makes
me laugh with the cat’s silly
tricks.(支持细节1) Reading
not only makes me laugh with
funny stories, but also helps me
solve real-life problems.
续表
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
支持细节
→给支撑 主题
句之
后 用例子、
原因等充
实内容 (过渡句1:段落内衔接,从“阅
读的快乐”转到“阅读的实用帮
助”) Once, my little sister was
crying because of a broken toy.
I told her an interesting story
from my book. It made her
smile again!
续表
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
支持细节
→给支撑 主题
句之
后 用例子、
原因等充
实内容 (支持细节2)But wait—reading
has another super power! It even
helps me face my fears bravely.
Let’s talk about it next.
(过渡句2:段尾为下段作铺
垫,为“阅读让我变得勇敢”作铺
垫)
续表
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
逻辑连接 支持
细节
之间 增强句子
连贯性 and, what’s more, besides, so,
therefore, in order that, however,
first(ly), then, next, for
example, in a word, all in all等
续表
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
结论句→
收闭环 段落最
后一句 总结段
落内容 直接总结型:In short, reading is
like a magic key. It unlocks fun
stories, new knowledge, and good
times with friends. I’ll never stop
reading!
续表
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句子类型 位置 作用 示例
结论句→
收闭环 段落最
后一句 总结段
落内容 情感升华型:Reading isn’t just a
hobby—it’s my best friend! It stays
with me when I’m happy or sad,
teaching me and making me laugh.
It’s a friend that grows up with me!
续表
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例: My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day. It warms
my heart .(主题句)Every evening, we sit around the table.
Mom cooks delicious food, like fried chicken and tomato soup.
Dad tells funny work stories. Once, he told us a story about a
“silly boss”—we laughed so hard!(支持细节) Family dinner
isn’t just about delicious meals and jokes—when troubles come,
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it becomes our “problem-solving corner”! (过渡句)Last week,
the sadness I felt from the text disappeared right here.
(支持细节)All in all, family dinner time is love on a plate.
I’ll keep enjoying this warm time forever.(结论句)#1.1.1.1
I would like to make it
meaningful and fun.
First, I plan to take part in community activities. I will
volunteer at the local library. This will teach me
responsibility and allow me to help others.
根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节和结论句。
训练一:Summer holiday is coming! ______________________
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Second, I want to learn a basic life skill. I’m going to
learn how to cook some simple Chinese dishes from my
grandma. I believe it’s important to know this skill and I
can also make delicious food for my family!
I’m sure my summer holiday will be both colorful and
meaningful!
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训练二: Good morning, everybody! Today I want to talk about
“How to Be Happy”. _____________________________________
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The following are my suggestions.
First of all, we must keep healthy. Without good health,
we will lose everything. So we should have good living
habits and try our best to take exercise every day. Next, we
should have good hobbies. Some colorful hobbies can also
bring us joy. Finally, we are supposed to be ready to help
others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much
happiness.
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I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life. That’s
what I want to share with you.
Thank you!
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训练三: Learning Some Skills Is Important
It’s important for us to learn some skills. _______________
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As for me, I
always cook for my parents when I’m free.
A year ago, my parents were often busy with work, so
I decided to cook a meal for them. First, I washed some
vegetables and cut them into pieces. And then after watching
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some videos on the Internet, I followed the steps carefully.
Finally, I did it well. My parents were very happy.
From this experience, I knew that we should always try
something new to enrich our life.
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