内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题2 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(上)U3 Things in the
classroom 七(下)U11 School trips
七(下)U1 Joining a club 九(全)U14 School days
七(下)U4 Rules
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. On September 21st, we have a school trip in
the afternoon. [人教七(上)U8]
2. I can’t believe how fast the time went by!
[人教九(全)U14]
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开头句 3. I’m sure that you all have your own memories about the happiness of the last three years.[外研九(下)M8]
4. How time flies! We’ll graduate from Gaoxin
International School this weekend!
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中间
句 学生
学习 1. I like maths because I’m good with numbers.
We learn how to work out maths problems in
class. It feels like magic and is really fun. [新人
教七(上)U4]
2. You can become better by reading something
you enjoy every day. [人教九(全)U1]
3. Learning is a lifelong journey because every
day brings something new. [人教九(全)U1]
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中间
句 学生
学习 4. You were all so full of energy and thirsty for
knowledge. [人教九(全)U14]
5. As for me, I’d like to set up the English
club. In the club, you can speak to foreigners and
talk about good ways of learning English.
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中间
句 校园
活动 1. Today I went on a school trip. We visited the
science museum and it was really interesting.
[人教七(下)U11]
2. I joined many different school clubs and had a
lot of fun. [人教九(全)U14]
3. In order to make our school life more colorful, all kinds of clubs have been set up.
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中间
句 校园
环境
与基
础设
施 1. The dining hall is across from the sports field.
It’s my favourite place because there are many
kinds of food. I love the Chinese food there. [新
人教七(上)U3]
2. My favorite place is the library. It is very
quiet and I enjoy reading there. [人教七(下)
U8]
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中间
句 校园
环境
与基
础设
施 3. Between this building and the dining hall is the classroom building with twenty-four classrooms.[外研七(上)M3]
4. The place I like most in my school is the
playground where I can do exercise and play
happily with my classmates.
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中间
句 校园
生活
的建
议 1. You’d better take an active part in different
kinds of activities and make your school life
more colorful.
2. A good relationship between teachers and
students can help you improve your study.
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中间
句 对校
规的
看法 1. There are many rules in life! But they can
help you to become a better person.[新人教七
(下)U2]
2. Parents and schools are sometimes strict, but
remember, they make rules to help us. [人教七
(下)U4]
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结尾句 1. All in all, it was an exciting day. [人教七
(下)U11]
2. Even though I was sad that junior high is
over, I looked forward to new experiences in
senior high! [人教九(全)U14]
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结尾句 3. As long as you follow the advice above, I
believe you will have a colorful school life.
4. If you make full use of your free time, you
will have a wonderful school life and learn a lot.
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俗语谚语 1. No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘,一分收获。
2. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志
者,事竟成。
3. It’s never too late to learn.活到老,学到老。
4. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之
母。
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◆句子翻译
1. 下个月我们将举行一次参观科学博物馆的学校旅行。
(Tip: have a school trip)
________________________________________________________
________
We will have a school trip to visit the science museum next month.
2. 我相信我能在期末考试中取得好成绩。(Tip: I’m sure that…)
____________________________________________________
I’m sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
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3. 大声朗读是学好英语的好方法之一。(Tip: the good ways
of…)
________________________________________________________
______
Reading aloud is one of the good ways of learning English
well.
4. 我们都充满兴奋且渴望书中有趣的故事。(Tip: be full of…,
be thirsty for…)
________________________________________________________
____________________
We are all full of excitement and thirsty for interesting
stories in the books.
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5. 我的老师总是鼓励我,帮助我成为更优秀的人。(Tip: become
a better person)
________________________________________________________
________________
My teacher always encourages me and helps me to become a better person.
6. 我积极参加学校的英语角来练习口语。(Tip: take an active
part in…)
________________________________________________________
__________________
I take an active part in the school’s English corner to
practice speaking.
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7. 如果我们充分利用学校图书馆,我们课后就能读到更多好书。
(Tip: make full use of…)
________________________________________________________
________________________
If we make full use of the school library, we can read more good books after class.
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◆句式升格
8. Our team wants to win the basketball match. We practice hard
every afternoon.(Tip: in order to…)
________________________________________________________
______________________
In order to win the basketball match, our team practices
hard every afternoon.
9. The math exam was difficult. I tried my best to finish all the
questions. (Tip: even though)
________________________________________________________
________________________
Even though the math exam was difficult, I tried my best to finish all the questions.
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10. We listen carefully in class. We can understand the
knowledge easily.(Tip: as long as)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
As long as we listen carefully in class, we can understand
the knowledge easily.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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近年来我省积极开展课后延时服务,学校提供了运动、艺术等课
后活动给学生自主选择。请以“Our After-Class Activities”为题,
写一篇英语小短文。根据写作要求,简单介绍你们学校及你本人
参加课后活动的情况。
●What kinds of after-class activities does your school have?
(study, sports, art…)
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●What’s your favorite after-class activity? Why?
(English corner, talk about, improve…)
●What’s your feeling and hope on after-class activities?
Our After-class Activities
Nowadays, students have more free time to take part in
after-class activities. ______________________________________
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审题四要素:
审体裁: 说明文
审人称: 第一人称为主
审时态: 一般现在时为主
审要点: 学校开展的课后活动种类,你最喜欢的一门课后活动课,
你对课后活动的感受和希望
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
There are many after-class activities in my school.
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English corner is my favorite activity because I can make
a lot of friends and we can talk about everything together.
I try to speak more there so that I can improve my English quickly.
We can build good relationships with other students.
What’s more, we can learn from each other through communication.
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二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
Our After-class Activities
Nowadays, students have more free time to take part in
after-class activities. _____________________________________
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Our After-class Activities
Nowadays, students have more free time to take part in
after-class activities.With no exception, there are many after-
class activities in my school. We can do sports, play
instruments, study English, and so on. I like these activities
very much.
For me, English corner is my favorite activity because I
can make a lot of friends and we can talk about everything
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together. I try to speak more there so that I can improve
my English quickly, and my teacher says this is a good way
to learn.
In my opinion, after-class activities are very important
for us students. Firstly, we can build our bodies by taking
exercise. Secondly, we can build good relationships with
other students. What’s more, we can learn from each other
through communication. I hope there will be more colorful
after-class activities.
三阶 写作实战提能力
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一、初中生活即将结束,回顾过去的三年,总有一些人或事让你印
象深刻。本次的写作任务是以“Unforgettable”为主题,写一篇英语
小短文。请你从以下两个方面任选其一,根据写作要求,简单描述
在初中三年里,你难以忘记的人,或者你难以忘记的经历,认真完
成写作任务。
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选择1:
●Who is the most unforgettable person to you?
(teacher/friend/…)
●Why is he/she unforgettable to you?(warm-hearted, help,
encourage, …)
●How do you feel about him/her?(…)
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选择2:
●Which event is the most unforgettable to you?(breaktime
games/festival celebrations/…)
●Why is this event unforgettable to you?(learn some skills,
improve, …)
●What has this unforgettable event brought to you?
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名)。若文中出现人名,请选择使用:Mr. Liu/Ms. Wang/Ma
Li/Wang Gang
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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In the past three years, we experienced a lot and surely
made progress. As for me, ___
In the past three years, we experienced a lot and surely
made progress. As for me, the most unforgettable person in
my junior high life is my English teacher, Ms. Wang. She
has short curly hair and always wears a warm smile. She is
warm-hearted and patient. She is always ready to help
others.
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What I remember most is how she helped me with my
shyness. Once, I froze when I was asked to answer a
question in class. Instead of letting me sit down, she
patiently guided me with simple questions. When I finally
spoke out, she cheered for me loudly. Since then, I’ve
become brave enough to join in English discussions.
She also taught us more than just grammar. She often
encouraged us to study English well and told us, “Language
is a bridge to the world.” Now, as I look back, I realize she
didn’t just teach English—she helped me grow. I’ll always
remember her kindness and encouragement.
二、我们在这所中学已经度过了三年的快乐时光,学校的每一个
角落都留下了我们的欢声笑语。学校英语广播站正在以“The
School Corner and Me”为题征稿,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,
谈谈你最喜欢的学校某一角以及你在这里发生的故事。
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地
名)。若文中出现人名,请选择使用:Mr. Liu/Ms. Wang/Ma
Li/Wang Gang
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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The School Corner and Me
Among all the corners of my school, ___
The School Corner and Me
Among all the corners of my school, the garden is my
favorite place. Located behind the classroom building, it has
a big tree with thick leaves, colorful flowers, and soft grass.
Several wooden chairs are placed under the tree, creating a
peaceful spot for students to relax.
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One sunny afternoon, I sat there reading a book but
felt upset about my math exam. My classmate Ma Li
noticed my worries and asked if I needed help. We spent
hours discussing math problems under the tree. From that
day on, the garden became our secret study spot. We shared
stories, did homework, and even laughed about silly mistakes.
Her patience and kindness turned my stress into confidence.
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The garden is more than just a beautiful corner. It
recorded my growth, friendships, and unforgettable moments.
Every time I pass by, I smile, remembering how the quiet
place brought warmth to my school life. This corner is not
just a place, but a valuable treasure of my growth.
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Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score: ___/15
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