内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
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中考命题角度探究
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教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(上)U2 The family 七(下)U12 Weekend
activities
七(下)U2 Daily routines 八(上)U1 Holidays and
vacations
七(下)U3 Transportation 八(上)U2 Free time
activities
七(下)U6 Everyday activities
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一阶 课本句型促写作
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开头句 1. I’m having a great time visiting my aunt in
Shaanxi. [人教七(下)U7改编]
2. We visited the science museum and it was
really interesting. [人教七(下)U11]
3. Last month we asked our students about their
free time activities.[人教八(上)U2]
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开头句 4. My holiday is very colorful. The most
important thing is to learn something new and
have fun. [人教八(上)U3改编]
5. It’s necessary for you to plan the trip carefully
so that you can make good use of your time and
visit all the places you want to see.
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中间
句 日常
活动 1. Every year, my family and I take a photo
together under the big tree in our village. I like
taking photos because they help me remember
fun times with my family.[新人教七(上)U7]
2. I go swimming two or three times a week.
Swimming is good for me because it keeps me
healthy.[新人教七(下)U3]
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中间
句 日常
活动 3. We had a wonderful party last night and
everybody had a good time.[外研七(下)M10]
4. Acting is fun and useful. You can meet lots of
new people and improve your social skills.[冀教
七(下)U4]
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中间
句 假期
活动 1. There are lots of ways to relax and have fun.
However, the most important part of a holiday is
to rest your mind and body.[新人教八(上)
U1]
2. I’m going to the countryside with my dad. We
are going to plant trees.[冀教七(下)U4]
3. I think it’s better to have our picnic at the top
of the hill. [外研八(下)M8]
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结尾句 1. No matter how many difficulties we have, I
believe all problems can be solved in the end. [人
教九(全)U7]
2. You’ll make mistakes along the way, but the
key is to learn from your mistakes and never
give up. [人教九(全)U14]
3. Although all of us felt very tired, we created the happiest memories.
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俗语谚语 1. Life is what you make it. 你的生活由你创造。
2. Well begun is half done. 好的开始是成功的一
半。
3. Time flies when you’re having fun. 快乐的时光
总是飞逝。
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◆句子翻译
1. 上周末,我们在滨河公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip: have
a great time)
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Last weekend, we had a great time flying kites in Binhe
Park.
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2. 我喜欢在假期爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip: because; it
makes sb. feel…)
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I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it
makes me feel relaxed.
3. 周末和父母到乡下去亲近自然更好。(Tip: It’s better to do
sth.; get close to)
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It’s better to go to the countryside with parents on
weekends to get close to nature.
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4. 我们可以参加很多有意义的活动,比如读书和做志愿工作。
(Tip: such as)
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We can take part in many meaningful activities, such as
reading books and doing volunteer work.
5. 当我们参加社团活动时,最重要的事情是与他人友好相处。
(Tip: the most important thing is to…)
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When we take part in club activities, the most important
thing is to get along well with others.
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6. 当我们和父母一起旅行时,保持安全和开心是关键。
(Tip: the key is to…)
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When we travel with our parents, the key is to stay safe
and happy.
7. 在我去西安旅行期间,我参观了很多名胜古迹。(Tip: places
of interest)
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During my trip to Xi’an, I visited many places of interest.
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8. 在寒假结束时,我们全家一起看了一部令人放松的电影。
(Tip: at the end of)
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At the end of the winter holiday, my whole family watched a relaxing movie together.
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◆句式升格
9. Students go on a trip. The trip can help students open their
minds.(Tip: It’s necessary for…; so that)
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It’s necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can
help them open their minds.
10. We met many troubles on vacation. The beautiful scenery
always made us forget troubles.(Tip: No matter how many
troubles…)
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No matter how many troubles we met on vacation, the
beautiful scenery always made us forget them.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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同学们,暑假即将来临,你打算如何度过一个有意义的暑假?
本次的写作任务是以“A Meaningful Vacation”为题,写一篇英语
小短文。请你根据写作要求,简单介绍你的暑期计划,认真完成
写作任务。
●study(finish your homework, do some reading, ...)
●health(healthy eating habits, exercise, ...)
●life(share housework, cook, ...)#1.3
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A Meaningful Vacation
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审题四要素:
审体裁: 说明文
审人称: 第一人称为主
审时态: 一般将来时为主
审要点: 依次从学习、健康、生活和其他方面谈谈自己的暑假计划#3.4
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一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
It is very important to make a good plan for a meaningful vacation.
As the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man.”
I will share some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning.
In a word, I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful vacation.
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二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
A Meaningful Vacation
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The summer vacation is coming soon. How can we
make it meaningful? It is very important to make a good
plan for a meaningful vacation.
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As the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man.” So
firstly, I plan to do some reading after I finish my
homework. Secondly, nothing is more important than good
health. I want to do more exercise, such as running and
swimming. Also, I will develop healthy eating habits. I’ll eat
more fruits and vegetables. Thirdly, I will share some
housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. What’s
more, I will try to help others and always remember to be
safe in daily life.
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In a word, I will make full use of time to spend a
meaningful vacation.
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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一、千年古都,常来长安。随着中国过境免签政策的实施,越来越
多的外国游客想来感受西安的魅力。假如你是李华,你收到了笔友
Peter的邮件。他和他的家人想在转机回国之前,利用免签政策,
在陕西游玩三天。请你写一封邮件来给他提一些旅游建议,包含以
下内容:
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要求:
1. 先补全邮件格式中缺少的部分,
再写邮件内容;
2. 邮件应包含题目要求所给关键信息,可适当发挥;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4. 邮件中不得出现真实的个人信息;
5. 词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
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I’m so glad that you and your parents will pay a visit to
Shaanxi. _______________________________________________,
I hope you’ll love Shaanxi as much as I do. Let me know if
you need more tips.
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Dear Peter,
I’m so glad that you and your parents will pay a visit
to Shaanxi. Anyone coming to Shaanxi is sure to have a
good time. Let me share something about traveling in
Shaanxi.
Shaanxi Province lies in the northwest of China. It is a
beautiful place with a long history. Shaanxi Province is
known for Chinese ancient culture because there are many
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places of interest. Visitors can enjoy themselves here. If you
come to Shaanxi Province, I advise you to go to Xi’an Bell
Tower, Terracotta Warriors and Huashan Mountain.
Also, Shaanxi Province is famous for its delicious food
like Roujiamo, Shaanxi liangpi, Biangbiang noodles and so on.
As the saying goes, “Life is a journey to experience, to learn
and to enjoy.” So come to Shaanxi Province and you’ll have
an unforgettable experience.
I hope you’ll love Shaanxi as much as I do. Let me
know if you need more tips.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、“近水识鱼性,近山识鸟音。”为了让学生们了解农场,学习
农耕文化(agricultural culture),亲近自然,体验劳动实践,5
月9日,你校在红星农场(Red Star Farm)开展了一次农场研
学活动。请你以“A Farm Trip Made Me Happy”为题,写一篇
英语短文叙述你的经历和感受,并谈谈你对此次活动的看法。
参考词汇:visit, labor劳动, all kinds of, pick, happy,
have a good time, …
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要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考
词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4. 词数:不少于70。 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
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A Farm Trip Made Me Happy
In order to help students know more about farms, learn
about agricultural culture, get close to nature, and experience
labor practices, our school held a farm trip last month. _______
A Farm Trip Made Me Happy
In order to help students know more about farms, learn
about agricultural culture, get close to nature, and
experience labor practices, our school held a farm trip last
month.
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We had a school trip to Red Star Farm on May 9. We
did a lot of interesting things on the farm. The workers
there gave us a warm welcome and then we visited the farm.
We saw many kinds of animals, like chickens, ducks, cows
and so on. We picked strawberries and planted tomatoes.
We also fed chickens and rode horses. We learned a lot.
The farm was so beautiful that we took a lot of photos. We
had a picnic by the river in the afternoon. We were so
happy.
All in all, we learned a lot and had a good time on the
farm.
Reflecting
How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
●I can keep my writing paper
clean.(2分)
●I can use correct English
expressions in writing.(5分)
●I can write all the points.(5分)
●My article is clearly structured
and well organized.(3分) □
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How well can you do these
things? ____________
Very
well ____________
OK ____________
Needs
work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s
assessment
Total score: ___/15
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