内容正文:
陕西
英 语
主题写作培优册
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第一部分 写作六大微技能
微技能二 写出正确的句子
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技巧1 熟悉句子成分
成分 作用 位置 示例
主语 动作的执行者、事
物或被描述的对象 放在句首,动词
之前 Maria and her
sister go to the
piano class
every week.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
谓语 对主语的行为或状
态加以陈述 主语后 They can
create and
play beautiful
music.
宾语 动作的对象或动作
承受者 动词或介词后 Maria’s brother
plays the
guitar and the
violin.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
宾语补足
语 补充说明宾语的动
作、身份或状态等 宾语后 I find this
story
interesting.
表语 说明主语的性质、
状态或特征等 系动词之后 She is my
mother.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
定语 对名词或代词进行
修饰或限定的词、
词组或句子 一般放在所修饰
词之前;不定
式、短语或从句
放在所修饰词之
后 The woman
with a baby in her arms is
my mother.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
状语 表示动作的
时间、地
点、方式、
原因、目的
等,用于修
饰动词、形
容词、副词
或句子 位置灵活:修饰形容词
或副词时,一般放在其
前;修饰动词时,通常
放在其后,如果是不及物
动词,副词可放在句首
或句末;若修饰整个句
子,通常放在句子的开
头或末尾 The result is
surprisingly
good.
I love my mother
deeply.
Luckily, no one
was hurt in the
accident.
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成分 作用 位置 示例
同位语 一个名词对另一个
名词或代词进行解
释或补充说明 名词或代词之后 We students
should study
hard.
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技巧2 排查常见错误
1. 检查句子成分是否完整#1
错误原因
缺主语 John is my brother.
Works at Ames Bank. John is my brother. He
works at Ames Bank.
缺谓语 Many people white
cars. Many people have white
cars.
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错误原因
缺宾语 She always carries in
her pocket. She always carries a pen
in her pocket.
缺宾补 She found the room
very. She found the room very
cold.
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2. 检查名词是否正确使用#2
错误原因
可数名词单数形式不
能单独出现 Jill made
sandwich. Jill made a sandwich./Jill
made sandwiches.
可数名词复数形式错
误 I saw some
sheeps. I saw some sheep.
将不可数名词用作可
数名词 I will give you
two advices. I will give you two
pieces of advice.
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错误原因
不可数名词误用不定
冠词/复数形式 Sara has an
information.
Sara has
informations. Sara has information.
集合名词主谓一致错
误 His family are
very big. His family is very big.
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3. 检查动词是否正确使用#3
错误原因
易混动词误用 There have a book
on the desk. There is a book on
the desk.
主谓一致错误 He call his parents
every day.
There is ten people
in my office. He calls his parents
every day.
There are ten people
in my office.
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错误原因
be动词形式错误 I is a student. I am a student.
否定形式错误 You not at school
today.
Ella not wrote a
report for her boss. You are not at school
today.
Ella did not write a
report for her boss.
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错误原因
情态动词使用错
误(情态动词后
跟动词原形) We might to play
football tomorrow. We might play football
tomorrow.
动词搭配错误 She tried to avoid to
meet him. She tried to avoid
meeting him.
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错误原因
时态
错误 We call our parents
yesterday.
They will not came to the party.
The environment in our
school is become better
and better. We called our parents
yesterday.
They will not come to the
party.
The environment in our
school is becoming better
and better.
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错误原因
语态
错误 The book wrote by Mo Yan. The book was written by
Mo Yan.
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4. 检查形容词或副词是否正确使用#4
错误原因
形容词位置错误 I have a car red. I have a red car.
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错误原因
多个形容词修饰同
一名词,顺序混乱
(形容词顺序一般
是限定词/描述类/大
小/形状/新旧/颜色/
国籍/材料/用途) I bought a wooden
big table.
He has a blue new
car. I bought a big
wooden table.
He has a new blue
car.
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错误原因
形容词、副词混用 The flower smells
sweetly.
She looks happily
today.
She sings beautiful. The flower smells
sweet.
She looks happy
today.
She sings
beautifully.
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5. 检查代词是否正确使用#5
错误原因
主格/宾格
混淆 Her and I are good
friends.
Mom gave he a new
book. She and I are good friends.
Mom gave him a new
book.
物主代词
错用 Their classroom is big.
Our is small. Their classroom is big.
Ours is small.
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错误原因
some/any
错用 I don’t have some
books. I don’t have any books.
相似词错
用 They are five people in
my family.
Piano keys have two
colors. There are black
and white. There are five people in
my family.
Piano keys have two colors.
They are black and white.
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6. 检查介词是否正确使用
错误原因
介词错用 I was born on 2010.
She is at Beijing now.
He is waiting on me. I was born in 2010.
She is in Beijing now.
He is waiting for me.
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错误原因
介词遗漏 He is good playing
basketball. He is good at playing
basketball.
介词多余 I will go to home at 5
o’clock. I will go home at 5
o’clock.
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7. 检查冠词是否正确使用#7
错误原因
a/an 混用
(看单词首字
母发音音素,
不是首字母) I have an useful book.
It was raining hard,
and she didn’t have a
umbrella. I have a useful book.
It was raining hard, and
she didn’t have an
umbrella.
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错误原因
冠词缺失或多
余 I saw elephant in the
zoo.
Pass me book on the
desk.
He plays the basketball
well. I saw an elephant in
the zoo.
Pass me the book on
the desk.
He plays basketball
well.
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8. 检查数词是否正确使用
错误原因
序数词前忘加
the/其他限定词 She is first student to
arrive. She is the first student
to arrive.
基数词当序数
词用 Tomorrow is my ten
birthday. Tomorrow is my tenth
birthday.
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错误原因
概数词是否加
-s There are two
thousands students in
our school.
There are thousand of
birds in the sky. There are two
thousand students in
our school.
There are thousands of
birds in the sky.
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9. 检查是否被母语干扰出现错误
错误原因
句子结构
顺序颠倒 I very much like
English.
He yesterday went to
the park. I like English very much.
He went to the park
yesterday.
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错误原因
直译思维 Because he was ill,
so he didn’t go to
school. Because he was ill, he didn’t
go to school./He was ill, so
he didn’t go to school.
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句子改错
例:My uncle is play basketball now. play改为playing
1. My father a doctor in the hospital. ____________
2. I want to buy book. ______________
3. There are five child in the classroom. _________________
4. He bought two tomato just now. ___________________
5. The girl with two cats are playing in the yard. __________
father后加is
book前加a/the
child改为children
tomato改为tomatoes
are改为is
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6. They was late for class yesterday. _____________
7. We aren’t have a meeting today. _______________
8. She can sings very well. ______________________
9. She apologized for his mistake. _______________________
10. He has lunch at 12 o’clock yesterday. ____________
11. The letter was wrote by my sister. _________________
12. Many trees plant every spring. ____________________
13. I have a cat black. ______________________
was改为were
aren’t改为don’t
sings改为sing或删掉can
his改为her或She改为He
has改为had
wrote改为written
plant改为are planted
cat black改为black cat
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14. She wants to eat delicious something. ____________________
______________________
15. She has a red beautiful dress. ___________________________
16. This book is real interesting. ______________
17. My mom bought I a new bag. _________
18. This is mine book. _____________
19. There are any apples on the table. _____________
20. I’m interesting in English. _______________________
21. He arrived to London last night. _________
delicious something
改为something delicious
red beautiful改为beautiful red
real改为really
I改为me
mine改为my
any改为some
interesting改为interested
to改为in
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22. She is afraid from dogs. ____________
23. We’ll have a party on next Friday. ________
24. I’ll wait you at the bus station. ____________
25. He is a honest boy. _________
26. There is an university in this city. _________
27. He plays piano very well. _____________
28. He is one of best students in our class. ____________
from改为of
删除on
wait后加for
a改为an
an改为a
piano前加the
best前加the
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29. My birthday is on July five. ____________
30. Thousand of students joined the volunteer activity.
________________________
five改为fifth
Thousand改为Thousands
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