内容正文:
Part 4 Writing
议论文写作
写作题目
现在“躺平”这个词在网上很流行,请你就此现象写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.“躺平”的含义及其出现的原因;
2.我们应该躺平吗?谈谈你的看法。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Chinese word “tangping” has been popular on the Internet for a long time.
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.公司,企业
2. vi.有同感,产生共鸣
3. vt.忍受;能经受
4. n.趋势;倾向
5. 是……的说明(或原因)
答案 1.enterprise 2.empathize 3.tolerate
4.tendency 5.account for
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:说明“躺平”的含义
(1) (据说) “tangping” means (失去信心) and stopping working hard.
第二段:分析“躺平”现象出现的原因
(2)The huge pressure may (是这一现象出现的原因).
(3)Therefore, they (倾向于放弃) and choose to “tangping”.
第三段:表达对“躺平”现象的看法
(4)If everyone chooses to “tangping” (在遇到困难的时候), our society (就会停止运转). It is terrible.
(5)We make a persistent effort and (一切皆有可能).
答案 (1)It is said that; losing heart
(2)account for this phenomenon (3)have a tendency to give up (4)when meeting difficulties; will stop functioning (5)anything is possible
2.句式升级
(6)用定语从句改写句(4)
(7)将句(5)改写成含有条件状语从句的主从复合句
答案 (6)If everyone chooses to “tangping” when meeting difficulties, our society will stop functioning, which is terrible.
(7)As long as we make a persistent effort, anything is possible.
连句成篇
写作积累
议论文写作的常用表达
常用的
过渡词
(组)
递进
what’s more;in addition;besides;furthermore;moreover
因果
therefore;for this reason;thus;consequently
转折
however;on the contrary;instead
时间顺序
afterwards;from then on;eventually;in the meantime;at the same time;at present
列举
first;to begin with;first of all;next;secondly;last but not least;for one thing...for another...;on the one hand...on the other hand...
举例说明
for example;for instance;take...for example
让步
nevertheless;still
对比
in contrast;similarly
陈述事实
in fact;actually;as a matter of fact
解释说明
that’s to say;in other words;to put it in another way
强调
above all;more importantly;indeed
总结
in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion;in brief;in summary;in general;all in all
常用
句式
引出话题
Attitudes towards...are various.
说明各方
观点
Opinions on the question are divided as follows:70% of people think that...On the other hand, 30% don’t like the idea of...
发表看法
In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned...
实战演练
(2025浙江四校联考月考)
假设你是李华,你注意到现在越来越多的年轻人倾向于通过社交媒体分享自己的生活点滴。针对这一现象,请你给某英文网站写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.描述你观察到的现象;
2.分析背后的原因;
3.发表你的看法。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Sharing Life Online
答案与分层梯度式解析
实战演练
One possible version:
Sharing Life Online
In recent times, a remarkable trend has emerged among young people—an increasing tendency towards sharing their life details on social media, including pictures of their outfits, meals, and even their deepest thoughts.
There are multiple reasons behind this phenomenon.Firstly, in a digital age, people long for attention.A simple “like” or positive comment can boost their self-esteem.Secondly, it serves as a convenient way to maintain contact with friends who are far away.
From my perspective,although this sharing does enrich our online experiences and bring people closer, over-sharing might lead to privacy issues.Therefore, we should strike a balance and share wisely.
1.重点词汇
①emerge v.浮现,出现
②multiple adj.多种多样的
③long for渴望
④self-esteem n.自尊(心)
2.亮点句型
From my perspective,although this sharing does enrich our online experiences and bring people closer, over-sharing might lead to privacy issues.(although引导让步状语从句)在我看来,虽然这种分享确实丰富了我们的网络体验并拉近了人们的距离,但过度分享可能会导致隐私问题。
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