内容正文:
Part 4 Writing
介绍标志性动物
写作题目
假设你是李华,请你给你的澳大利亚好友Jim写一封邮件介绍中国的国宝——大熊猫,内容包括以下几个方面:
1.大熊猫的特征;
2.大熊猫目前的状况;
3.采取的保护措施及取得的效果。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.符号的;图标的
2. adj.位于
3. n.哺乳动物
4. 共同的努力
答案 1.iconic 2.located 3.mammal
4.joint effort
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:大熊猫的特征
(1)Pandas are (一种标志性动物) unique to China.
(2)Pandas are instantly recognizable with their (黑白相间的毛), round faces and plump bodies.
第二段:大熊猫目前的状况
(3)Pandas are among (稀有的哺乳动物) that have been surviving for millions of years on earth.
(4)However, they have been (处于……的边缘) extinction.
第三段:采取的保护措施及取得的效果
(5)Nowadays, a nature reserve (位于四川省) has been set up.
(6)The nature reserve provides pandas with an abundant supply of bamboo, (使它们能够快乐地生活).
(7)With (适当的保护和共同努力), the pandas' population is on the increase every year.
答案 (1)an iconic animal (2) black-and-white fur (3)the rare mammals (4)on the edge of (5)located in Sichuan Province
(6)allowing them to live happily (7)proper protection and joint effort
2.句式升级
(8)把句(1)和句(2)合并成含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
(9)把句(5)和句(6)合并成含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (8)Pandas are an iconic animal unique to China, which are instantly recognizable with their black-and-white fur, round faces and plump bodies.
(9)Nowadays, a nature reserve located in Sichuan Province has been set up, which provides pandas with an abundant supply of bamboo, allowing them to live happily.
连句成篇
Dear Jim,
I am glad to tell you some fascinating facts about pandas. Pandas are an iconic animal unique to China, which are with their black-and-white fur, round faces and plump bodies. They mainly feed on bamboo.
pandas are among the rare mammals surviving for millions of years on earth. However, they have been extinction.
Nowadays, a nature reserve located in Sichuan Province has been set up, which provides With proper protection and joint effort, the pandas' population is every year.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
介绍动物的增分词句
亮点短语
feed on以……为食
social animals群居动物
active at night夜行性的
be native to原产于……
dense forest茂密的森林
cultural significance文化意义
be friendly to visitors对游客友好
on the edge of dying out处于灭绝的边缘
prevent...from being hurt防止……受到伤害
亮点句式
1.It has a wide distribution throughout the country.它在全国各地分布广泛。
2.They are about the size of...and look like...它们大约有……那么大,看起来像……
3.The giant panda has become popular in the form of a cultural icon.大熊猫以文化符号的形式广受喜爱。
4.Almost all of...live in high mountains and prefer a quiet life.几乎所有的……都住在高山上,更喜欢安静的生活。
5.As is well-known to us, elephants are highly social and intelligent animals.众所周知,大象是高度社会化和聪明的动物。
6.To protect these endangered species, we should take measures to set up more nature reserves.为了保护这些濒危物种,我们应该采取措施建立更多的自然保护区。
7.It's time for...to protect them from dying out.
是……保护它们免遭灭绝的时候了。
8.Due to the destruction of the natural habitat, the number of...has declined sharply.由于对自然栖息地的破坏,……的数量急剧下降。
实战演练
(2025山东菏泽月考)
根据以下要点,写一篇有关濒危动物——金丝猴的短文。
1.栖息地:大部分金丝猴生活在中国。
2.外貌:金黄色和灰色的毛;尾巴几乎和身体一样长。
3.生活环境:高山密林。
4.生活习性:主要在树上生活,群居,吃水果、坚果、树叶等。
5.它们的数量减少及其原因,呼吁人们保护金丝猴。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Golden Monkey
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The Golden Monkey
The golden monkey, a precious animal mainly distributed in China, is truly charming. With soft golden and grey fur, and a tail almost as long as its body, it looks unique and lovely. The amazing creature lives in the dense forests on high mountains, spending most of its time in trees. They stay in groups, moving together to find fruits, nuts, and leaves to eat.
Sadly, their habitats are being destroyed, so fewer golden monkeys are left,for which they are under our country's first-class protection. It is urged that the public should raise their awareness of protecting this rare animal.
1.重点词汇
①precious adj.宝贵的,珍贵的 ②charming adj.迷人的
③in groups成群地 ④sadly adv.不幸地 ⑤habitat n.栖息地
2.亮点句型
It is urged that the public should raise their awareness of protecting this rare animal.(that引导主语从句)强烈要求公众提高保护这种稀有动物的意识。
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