内容正文:
Part 6 Writing
阐述观点
写作题目
英语课上,同学们就学生是否应该参加课外辅导班(after-school classes)展开讨论,请就此写一篇短文。要点如下:
赞同
反对
1.弥补校内缺漏的功课;
2.有利于帮助自控能力差的学生。
1.增加学习负担(burden),容易导致学生厌学;
2.既浪费金钱,又占用了培养爱好的时间。
你的观点?
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Today in our English class, a discussion was held about
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. v.投票;表决
2. n.自制力;自我控制
3. 对……有利
答案 1.vote 2.self-control 3.be beneficial to
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:引出话题
(1)Today in our English class, a discussion was held about (学生是否应该参加课外辅导班), and we voted on it.
第二段:介绍双方的观点
(2)Some students are for attending after-school classes and think that (这是更好的方式)to make up for the missing lessons at school.
(3)They also (持有这个观点).
(4) (这对……是有益的) students with poor self-control.
(5)Attending after-school classes (浪费大量的钱).
(6)Attending after-school classes also (占用了时间) to develop hobbies.
第三段:阐述自己的观点
(7)We should (充分利用)school time to study hard.
(8)Do (我们感兴趣的事情) to make study more interesting.
答案 (1)whether students should attend after-school classes (2)it's a better way
(3)hold the opinion (4)It is beneficial to (5)wastes a lot of money (6)takes up the time (7)make the most of (8)what we are interested in
2.句式升级
(9)用现在分词短语作状语改写句(2)
(10)把句(3)和句(4)合并为含有名词性从句的主从复合句
(11)用not only...but also...合并句(5)与句(6)并使之构成倒装句
答案 (9)Some students are for attending after-school classes, thinking that it's a better way to make up for the missing lessons at school.
(10)They also hold the opinion that it is beneficial to students with poor self-control.
(11)Not only does attending after-school classes waste a lot of money, but it also takes up the time to develop hobbies.
连句成篇
Today in our English class, a discussion was held about whether students should attend after-school classes, and we voted on it.
Some students are for attending after-school for the missing lessons at school. They also hold the opinion that it is beneficial to
students with poor self-control. However, the others think it may increase their burden and lead to learning-weariness. Besides, not only does it waste a lot of money, but it also takes up the time to develop hobbies.
In my opinion, we should make the most of school time to study hard, and spare some after-school time to do what we are interested in to
make study more interesting.
写作积累
关于阐述观点的增分佳句
开头:引出
话题
①When it comes to..., some consider/think/believe...当提及……时,有些人认为……
②One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is...许多人目前讨论的最热门的话题之一就是……
③Recently the issue/problem of...has been brought into focus.近来,……的问题已经成为焦点。
④Nowadays, it is commonly/widely/generally believed/thought/considered that..., but I doubt...如今,人们普遍认为……,但是我怀疑……
主体:介绍双
方的观点
①On the one hand..., on the other hand...一方面……,另一方面……
②Despite the fact that most of them like...some would like to choose...尽管他们中的大部分人喜欢……,一些人还是想要选择……
③Different people have different opinions/views/ideas about...Some people take it for granted that...On the contrary, other people think...关于……的观点因人而异。有些人想当然地认为……相反,其他人则认为……
④People differ on this problem. Some maintain that...Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that...Personally, I stand on the side of...对于这个问题人们意见不同。有些人坚持……与此相反,其他人则认为……就我个人而言,我站在……这一边。
结尾:得出
结论
①As is mentioned above...如上所述……
②In summary/In conclusion/In a word/All in all...总之……
③Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that...因此,不难得出……的结论。
④Taking all of these factors into account, we may reach the conclusion that...考虑到所有这些因素,我们可能会得出……的结论。
实战演练
(2025北京育才学校月考)
假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。近期,你校学生会组织了一场辩论赛,主题为“中学生是否可以借助网络资源完成作业”。请你给校刊投稿,用英文介绍辩论赛的开展情况。内容包括:
1.正反双方的观点及理由;
2.你的看法。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our Student Union held a debate on whether middle school students can do homework with the help of the Internet.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 6 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Our Student Union held a debate on whether middle school students can do homework with the help of the Internet. Both sides have valid arguments.
Some students support the idea for the following reasons. They argue that the Internet provides rich resources, enabling students to access information quickly and easily. Moreover, it encourages independent research skills and prepares them for the digital world. However, some are against the idea. They believe that excessive reliance on the Internet may hinder critical thinking and creativity. Besides, they argue that traditional methods like using the textbooks and libraries foster a deeper understanding of the subject.
In my opinion, a balanced approach is crucial. The Internet can be a valuable tool, but it should not replace traditional methods entirely. It is essential to equip students with the necessary skills to navigate both the digital and physical worlds effectively.
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