Unit 2 Writing课件+学案2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

P6-Writing An unforgettable trip Unit 2 Travelling around the world 1 Learning Objectives By the end of this class, we are able to: know how to write an article about “An unforgettable trip” learn about topic sentence, supporting sentence and developing sentence. Task 1： 范文赏析 Task 3写作三部走训练 Task 2： 语篇结构训练 Content: 写作任务 旅游总是能让人感到开心和放松，本单元的主题是“旅游”，主要介绍世界各地的旅游胜地和著名景点，在你的成长中，肯定也去了不少地方旅游，请你以“An unforgettable trip”为主题，写一遍短文，介绍你的游玩经历。 An unforgettable trip By Mike I‘m very pleased to talk about my unforgettable trip to Paris during the last summer vacation. The weather there was warm and sunny, and people are kind and friendly. My family and I had a rest in the Paris Big Star Hotel. During the trip, we visited lots of famous places of interest. For example，we went to the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. The Eiffel Tower is one of the tallest towers in France and the Louvre Museum is one of the biggest museums in the world. They are very great and beautiful and we took a lot of pictures. After that, we also went to the vineyard. It is famous for its wine and food and we all like them very much. At the end of the trip, I went shopping at the Champs-Elysees and bought some gifts for my friends. There are department stores there. It was an exciting trip. I think Paris is a good place to travel. I enjoy travelling in this city very much. I will never forget it! a. Underline some useful expressions. 短语 Task 1： 范文赏析 Let’s learn to write an unforgettable trip from Mike. be pleased to do sth. 乐于做某事 have a rest 休息 places of interest 名胜 be famous for… 因…而闻名 buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 an exciting trip 令人兴奋的旅行 a good place to do sth. 做某事的好地方 enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事 Do you get all the useful expressions? An unforgettable trip I‘m very pleased to talk about my unforgettable trip to Paris during the last summer vacation. The weather there was warm and sunny, and people are kind and friendly. My family and I had a rest in the Paris Big Star Hotel. During the trip, we visited lots of famous places of interest. For example，we went to the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. The Eiffel Tower is one of the tallest towers in France and the Louvre Museum is one of the biggest museums in the world. They are very great and beautiful and we took a lot of pictures. After that, we also went to the vineyard. It is famous for its wine and food and we all like them very much. At the end of the trip, I went shopping at the Champs-Elysees and bought some gifts for my friends. There are department stores there. It was an exciting trip. I think Paris is a good place to travel. I enjoy travelling in this city very much. I will never forget it! b. Underline some useful conj.连接词. c. Underline some great sentences . 高分句式. Tip： 通常情况下，一篇作文里有1-2个高分句式/亮点句式即可 An unforgettable trip I‘m very pleased to talk about my unforgettable trip to Paris during the last summer vacation. The weather there was warm and sunny, and people are kind and friendly. My family and I had a rest in the Paris Big Star Hotel. During the trip, we visited lots of famous places of interest. For example，we went to the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. The Eiffel Tower is one of the tallest towers in France and the Louvre Museum is one of the biggest museums in the world. They are very great and beautiful and we took a lot of pictures. After that, we also went to the vineyard. It is famous for its wine and food and we all like them very much. At the end of the trip, I went shopping at the Champs-Elysees and bought some gifts for my friends. There are department stores there. It was an exciting trip. I think Paris is a good place to travel. I enjoy travelling in this city very much. I will never forget it! 主题句topic sentence 支撑句supporting sentence(s) 主题句topic sentence 支撑句supporting sentence(s) 支撑句supporting sentence(s) 主题句topic sentence d. 文章结构：主题句、支撑句、拓展句 拓展句developing sentence（s） 支撑句supporting sentence(s) 主题句topic sentence in the south，long history；weather，sunny but hot，warm-hearted and friendly.   Try your best to make some sentences. one of the tallest towers; the top floor by taking the lift, a bird’s-eye view is famous for, natural beauty, took pictures not only…but also…, unforgettable, in the south of China with long history. The weather there is sunny but hot, and people are warm-hearted and friendly. Canton Tower is one of the tallest towers in the world. We got to the top floor by taking the lift and we got a bird’s-eye view of the whole city. famous for its natural beauty. We took many wonderful pictures in it. The trip is not only exciting, but also unforgettable. Task 2： 语篇结构训练 Task 3写作三部走训练 9 Task 3写作三部走训练 审 1 2 3 列 扩 Three steps Bobby wants to write an email to his e-friend Anna to tell her about himself 10 Steps for English Writing 英语写作步骤 审 Step 1: Search 审： 1. 主题 2. 文体 3. 时态 4. 人称 11 1.审主题：_______________________. 2.审文体：_____________. 3.审人称：_____________. 4.审时态：_____________. 一般过去时 介绍自己去西安的游玩经历 介绍文 第一人称 审 12 Step 2: List 列 列： 1. 提纲 2. 要点 Steps for English Writing 英语写作步骤 13 02 01 03 对这次旅行的感受 介绍游玩的地点、和谁一起去 列 包括全部 要 点及补充 简单介绍景点有什么，做了什么 吃了什么，觉得怎么样 Step 3: Extend 扩 1. 优化词汇：高级词汇替换 2. 优化句子：短句变长句 3. 使用高级句型 4. 恰当使用连接词 5. 巧用谚语提分 Steps for English Writing 英语写作步骤 15 高分短语 （一）基础必备短语 出行与方式：take the train to...（乘火车去……） 景点与活动：take many photos（拍许多照片）、 walk around...（四处走走） 评价与感受：amazing（令人惊叹的）、 fantastic（极好的）、delicious（美味的） 美食相关：local food（当地食物） 扩 （二）进阶提分短语 出行与方式：choose to go there by train（选择乘火车去那里）、 take a walk along...（沿着…… 散步） 景点与活动：couldn’t stop taking photos（忍不住一直拍照）、 stand on the top（站在顶端） 评价与感受：local delicacies（当地美食，比 local food 更高级）、 new favorites（新宠，特指最喜欢的食物）、 have another chance to...（有另一个机会去……） 扩 二、高分句型 （一）开头段：点明旅行背景（时间、地点、人物） I will never forget my trip to + 地点 + 时间状语. （我永远不会忘记…… 时候去…… 的旅行） [地点] is the capital city of + [省份 / 国家]. （…… 是…… 的省会 / 首都） （二）主体段：描述行程活动与感受（核心得分点） We visited + 景点 + and + 动作. （我们参观了…… 并做了……） ... so + 形容词 + that + 句子. （…… 如此…… 以至于……） When ..., 主语 + 谓语. （当…… 时，……） Such as + 名词 / 名词短语. （例如……，用于列举同类事物） (三）结尾段：总结评价与未来展望 [地点] is a wonderful city. I really want to go there again. （…… 是一座很棒的城市，我真的想再去一次） What a + 形容词 + 名词 + 主语 + 谓语！ （多么…… 的…… 啊！） I sincerely hope I can + 动词原形... （我真诚地希望我能……） An unforgettable trip 　I will never forget my trip to Xi’an last summer holiday. Xi’an is in Shaanxi province and I took the train to Xi’an with my grandma. 　We visited the amazing Terracotta Warriors and took many photos. Then we went to the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda. The city view from the top was fantastic. We also walked around the ancient City Wall. During the trip, we tried lots of local food like roujiamo, yangrou paomo and biangbiang noodles. They were so delicious. 　Xi’an is a wonderful city. I really want to go there again. 基础版范文: 21 An unforgettable trip 　I will never forget my trip to Xi’an last summer holiday. Xi’an is the capital city of Shaanxi province. My grandma and I chose to go there by train. 　We visited the Terracotta Warriors. Those warriors looked so amazing that I couldn’t stop taking photos all the time. Then we went to the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda. Standing on the top, we saw a beautiful view of the city. We also took a walk along the ancient City Wall. Xi’an is also famous for its local delicacies. We tasted many kinds of delicious food, such as roujiamo, yangrou paomo and biangbiang noodles. They’re all my new favorites now. 　What a wonderful city Xi’an is! I sincerely hope I can have another chance to explore Xi’an. 进阶版范文： 22 Homework 必做： 完成作文，详细要求见学案 背诵U2reading 选做: 双语报Q6，N4 $Unit 2:Travelling around the world Writing:An unforgettable trip Class: Name: Student Number: Task 1:Read the article below and know about Mike's unforgettable trip. 找出文章中的重点短语，连接词及高分句型 找出正文中的写作手法（主题句、支撑句、拓展句） An unforgettable trip By Mike I'm very pleased to talk about my unforgettable trip to Paris during the last summer vacation.The weather there was warm and sunny,and people are kind and friendly.My family and I had a rest in the Paris Big Star Hotel. During the trip,we visited lots of famous places of interest.For example,we went to the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum.The Eiffel Tower is one of the tallest towers in France and the Louvre Museum is one of the biggest museums in the world. They are very great and beautiful and we took a lot of pictures.After that,we also went to the vineyard.It is famous for its wine and food and we all like them very much.At the end of the trip,I went shopping at the Champs-Elysees and bought some gifts for my friends.There are department stores there. It was an exciting trip.I think Paris is a good place to travel.I enjoy travelling in this city very much.I will never forget it! Word bank: 1 Task 2:Exercise:use the words on the left to make some sentences. 语篇结构训练 in the south,long I had a wonderful trip to Guangzhou last summer vacation with my family. history;weather, Now let me tell you something about it(主题句).Guangzhou sunny but hot, warm-hearted and (支撑句1)_ friendly. (支撑句2) one of the tallest We visited lots of places of interest in it )The first one was Canton towers;the top floor Tower. by taking the lift,a (支撑句) bird's-eye view (拓展句) The second one was the Baiyun Mountain(主题句).The Baiyun Mountain is famous for,natural beauty,took pictures is (支撑句) (拓展句) What's more,,we also enjoyed some Cantonese food there(主题句).It was not only...but quite delicious(支撑句) also.... (表感受)I think Guangzhou unforgettable, is a good place to travel. Task3:写作三步走训练 3. 超越范文挑战 假如你是Linda,去年暑假你和奶奶一起去了西安旅游。 请根据下面的提示内容，以“An unforgettable trip”为题，介绍 你去西安游玩的经历。 要求：70词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示： the Terracotta Warriors(兵马俑)；the Places of interest Giant Wild Goose Pagoda(大雁塔)；… Local delicacies (roujiamo;yangrou paomo;... An unforgettable trip I will never forget my trip to Xi'an last summer holiday. 高分短语 (一)基础必备短语 出行与方式：take the train to.（乘火车去…) 景点与活动：take many photos（拍许多照片)、walk around.(四处走走) 评价与感受：amazing（令人惊叹的)、fantastic(极好的)、delicious（美味的) 美食相关：1 ocal food(当地食物) (二)进阶提分短语 出行与方式：choose to go there by train（选择乘火车去那里) take a walk along..(沿着…散步) 景点与活动：couldn't stop taking photos（忍不住一直拍照)、 stand on the top（站在顶端) 评价与感受：local delicacies(当地美食，比local food更高级)、 new favorites(新宠，特指最喜欢的食物)、 have another chance to..(有另一个机会去…) 3 高分句型 (一)开头段：点明旅行背景（时间、地点、人物） 基础必备句型：I will never forget my trip to+地点+时间状语. (我永远不会忘记…时候去…的旅行) 进阶提分句型：[地点]is the capital city of+[省份/国家]. (…是…的省会/首都) (二)主体段：描述行程活动与感受（核心得分点） 基础必备句型：We visited+景点+and+动作 (我们参观了…并做了…) 进阶提分句型（结果状语从句）：.so+形容词+that+句子 (…如此…以至于…) 进阶提分句型（现在分词作状语）：Whem,主语+谓语. （当…时，…) 进阶提分句型（举例表达）：Such as+名词/名词短语.（例如…，用于列举 同类事物) (三)结尾段：总结评价与未来展望 基础必备句型：[地点]is a wonderful city.I really want to go there again. (…是一座很棒的城市，我真的想再去一次) 进阶提分句型（感叹句）：What a+形容词+名词+主语+谓语！ (多么…的…啊) 进阶提分句型（表达愿望）：I sincerely hope I can+动词原形. (我真诚地希望我能…) 4