内容正文:
No Rules, No order
单元话题写作讲练
Unit2
Lead in
Look and say.
Do you remember Alice’s rules at home?
Alice has to make her bed before breakfast.
Alice has to hurry to school because she can’t be late for school.
Lead in
Look and say.
Do you remember Alice’s rules at home?
Alice has to finish her homework and practise the piano before playing basketball .
Alice can’t go out with friends on weekdays .
Lead in
Look and say.
Do you remember Alice’s rules at school?
Alice can’t use her phone in class.
Alice must wear the uniform.
Lead in
You can’t ...
You must ...
You have to ...
You mustn’t ...
I have so many rules in my life too. This is awful! I need help!
You can ...
Know the rules
Discuss the rules
Understand the rules
Why is Eric unhappy?
Because he has to follow too many rules at home and at school.
So Eric also writes a letter to Dr. Know to ask for advice.
Know the rules
Discuss the rules
Understand the rules
Dear Dr. Know,
Can you help me? I __________ follow too many rules at home and at school. I ___________ clean my room every day, and I __________ let my desk get untidy. At school, I ___________ wear my own clothes. I __________ wear my favourite cap either. After school, I _____ watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things!
I __________ even relax at weekends because I ________ practice the violin every day! I never have fun. What can I do?
Yours,
Eric
Please help complete the missed words.
Know the rules
Discuss the rules
Understand the rules
Dear Dr. Know,
Can you help me? I __________ follow too many rules at home and at school. I ___________ clean my room every day, and I __________ let my desk get untidy. At school, I ___________ wear my own clothes. I __________ wear my favourite cap either. After school, I _____ watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things!
I __________ even relax at weekends because I ________ practice the violin every day! I never have fun. What can I do?
Yours,
Eric
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Pre writing
Read Eric’s letter and fill in the blanks.
Dear Dr Know,
Can you help me? I have to / must follow too many rules at home and at school. I have to / must clean my room every day, and I can’t / mustn’t let my desk get untidy. At school, I can’t / mustn’t wear my own clothes. I can’t / mustn’t wear my favourite cap either. After school, I can watch TV, but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things!
I can’t even relax at weekends, because I have to / must practise the violin every day! I never have fun. What can I do?
Yours,
Eric
Eric’s home rules must / has to _____________ every day and can’t ____________________.
can’t watch TV before _____________________, _________________, and _______________________.
must / has to _______________ every day and cant’t ______ at weekends.
Eric’s school rules can’t _________________________.
can’t _________________________.
clean his room
let his desk get untidy
finishing his homework
working the dog
doing lots of other things
practise the violin
relax
wear his own clothes
wear his favourite cap
Pre writing
2b. Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Eric’s home rules must / has to _____________ every day and can’t ___________________.
can’t watch TV before _____________________, _________________, and _______________________.
must / has to _______________ every day and cant’t ______ at weekends.
Eric’s school rules can’t _________________________.
can’t _________________________.
clean his room
let his desk get untidy
finishing his homework
working the dog
doing lots of other things
practise the violin
relax
wear his own clothes
wear his favourite cap
Why is each rule important?
What is your advice for each rule?
Pre writing
Why is this rule important?
A tidy and clean room makes us feel better.
You can improve your self-independence by cleaning the room by yourself.
What is your advice for this rule?
You can put things away after using everytime.
Rule 1: Eric has to clean the room everyday.
2b. Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Pre writing
Why is this rule important?
It’s necessary for us to do something more important first.
By doing housework, we become more responsible and independent.
It’s important to lighten your parents’ burden.
What is your advice for this rule?
You can do homework when you’re free at school.
You can also think differently that you will be really relaxed by watching TV after homework and housework.
Rule 2: Eric can’t watch TV before doing a lot of things.
2b. Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Pre writing
Why is this rule important?
It can help us focus on learning rather than clothing .
Wearing the uniform builds school spirit.
What is your advice for this rule?
You can wear your own clothes on weekends.
Rule 3: Eric has to wear the uniform at school.
2b. Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
While writing
2c. Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us ...
How to write a reply as Dr Know?
Pre writing
Read Dr Know’s letter and analyze the structure.
Show understanding and opinion
receiver
writer
beginning
body
ending
Explain why rules are important
Give advice
Show understandind and attitude again
Dear Alice,
Yes, there are many rules in life. But they can help you to become a better person.
You mustn’t be late for class. That shows respect for your class and teacher. You can't use your phone in class because you need to focus on learning. You have to wear a uniform because it builds school spirit.
You can also think about the things you can do! You can use your phone at home. You can relax after you finish your homework. And you can hang out with friends at weekends!
I know it's hard, but rules can help to make the world better. Remember: No rules, no order!
Best,
Dr Know
Do you know how to write a reply letter giving some advice?
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be for us.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
____________________________________________________________________________________.
Best,
Dr Know
Your reasons why the rules are important.
Your advice for the rules.
Your understanding of rules.
Finish the outline about your favorite animal.
引出话题
Reasons
总结
Advice
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us.
You can’t/mustn’t/have to...because...
You can...
I think these rules are good for you. Remember: No rules, no order.
My reply
Beginning
Body
Ending
Pre-writing
Finish the outline about your reply.
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While-writing
There are many rules in my school. I think they are strict but helpful.
I have lots of strict but helpful school rules.
Different schools have different rules. Now I would like to tell you about my school rules.
你的开头:
Beginning
Body
Ending
_____, I mustn’t be late for school. I have to be on time. I have to get up early. _______, I have to keep my hair short and wear a school uniform. It si boring. I can’t run in the halways. ______, I mustn't fight in school. I think it’s good for students. I can't eat in the classroom _________ we must keep the classroom clean. I think it's a good idea. ___________, I can't listen to music in class, ____ can listen to it after class. It's relaxing. ______, I am very happy to say I can do sports after school. I often play basketball with my students. It's very important to do sports.
请用连接词 “first,second,third,what's more,last,but,because,so” 等完成下面的校规的主体部分,使其流畅可读性强。
First
Second
Third
What’s more
because
but
Last
While-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
All in all, we must follow them..
They are strict, but they are also important for our life...
To make our life better, let's follow them.
Rules are necessary in life and school.
I agree that freedom depends on rules.
你的结尾:
While-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
Salutation (打招呼) Dear Eric,
Body paragraph (正文) I know how you feel. People always tell us, “Don’t do this!” or “You can’t do that!” But the rules can help us./ I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us.
You have to/ must…because…
You can’t/ mustn’t …because…
There are a lot of things you can do. You can…
I know it’s hard, but rules can help to make us better persons and the world better.
1) Main idea
2) Supporting details
3) Final sentence
Closing(结束语) Good luck!/ Best
While-writing
There are many rules in my school. I think they are strict but helpful.
First, I mustn’t be late for school. I have to be on time. I have to get up early. Second, I have to keep my hair short and wear a school uniform. It si boring. I can’t run in the halways. Third, I mustn't fight in school. I think it’s good for students. I can't eat in the classroom because we must keep the classroom clean. I think it's a good idea. What’s more, I can't listen to music in class, but can listen to it after class. It's relaxing. Last, I am very happy to say I can do sports after school. I often play basketball with my students. It's very important to do sports.
Schools make rules to help students. I think rules are very important. So students must follow them.
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be for us.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Best,
Dr Know
You must clean your room every day because it keeps the living environment clean and tidy. That makes it easier to focus on work or study.
You can’t wear your own clothes in school
because it helps you to focus on learning rather than clothing.
You can’t/ mustn’t watch TV
before you finish your homework first because it helps you focus on what's really important first.
Here is my advice. You can make your bed as soon as you get up. It just takes a couple of minutes and makes the room look much better.
You can wear your own clothes at weekends.
a quiet place to do your homework first. This will help you focus better and get it done faster. Then you can have more time to watch TV.
You can find
They are strict, but they are important for our life. Without rules, it would be a mess everywhere.
Remember: No rules, no order!
Time to write
本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一
主题群,涉及子主题“班级与学校规则,规则意识”。写作时要运用祈使句
和情态动词来表达请求、命令、劝告等。常见的写作任务是谈论学校的一
些规章制度或家规。体裁多为说明文或议论文。
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◆开头句
①As students,we must follow the rules.
②Different schools have different rules.
③Now I’d like to tell you something about my school rules.
◆中间句
①When we’re in school,we mustn’t use our phones.
②In class,we should be quiet and focus on learning.
③I must make my bed after I get up.
④When we meet our teachers,we should say hello to them.
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◆结尾句
①The rules are hard to keep,but they can help us become better people.
②Let’s follow the rules and build a strong school spirit.
③I think rules are very important in our lives. They’re strict but helpful.
【谚语积累】
①A nation has its rule and a family also has one.国有国法,家有家规。
②Rules are the principles of being a good person.规矩是做人的原则。
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作为学生,你们应该遵守学校的各项规章制度。你们学校都有哪些规
定呢?你觉得它们是否合理呢?请以“My School Rules”为题写一篇短文,
简单介绍一些你们的校规,并谈谈你的看法和理由。词数不少于70。
内容提示:
1.What are the rules in your school?
2.What do you think of the rules?
参考词汇:follow the rules 遵守规则,get up 起床,be late for 迟到,be
quiet 安静,be kind to 对……友好
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审题指导
1.文体:说明文
2.人称:以第一人称为主
3.时态:一般现在时
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思路点拨
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优秀范文
My School Rules
There are many rules in our school.
As students,we ①must follow the rules.
②First,we must get up early and
③can’t be late for class. When we’re in
school,we ④mustn’t use our phones. In
class,we ⑤should be quiet and focus on
learning. We should also keep our
classroom clean and tidy. 点评:
灵活运用①must,③can’t,④
mustn’t,⑤should和⑧have to等
情态动词来谈论多个校园规
则,覆盖了学生应遵循的基本
行为规范。
②First,⑥Then,⑦One more
thing,
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⑥Then,after class,we should finish our
homework on time.⑦One more thing,we
⑧have to wear our school uniforms on
weekdays.⑨Besides,we should be kind to
our classmates and treat our teachers
with respect.
The rules are hard to keep,but they
can help us become better people. Let’s
follow the rules and build a strong
school spirit. ⑨Besides的使用,使文章衔接
得当,内容紧密,条理清晰。
本篇范文语言精练,表达流
畅,灵活运用了本单元所学短
语follow the rules,be late
for,focus on,treat our
teachers with respect和build
school spirit等,意思表达准
确。
续表
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假如你是Tina,你有很多家规要遵守。请给你的好朋友Julie发一封70词
左右的电子邮件,告诉她你的家规并谈谈你对这些家规的看法。
内容提示:
1.What do you have to do at home?
2.What can’t you do at home?
3.What do you think of the family rules?Why?
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审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: __________
3.时态: ____________
应用文
第一人称
一般现在时
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思路点拨
(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)
表明家有家规
I have lots of rules at home.
描述家规中允许和禁止的事
I must/should/have to…;I mustn’t/can’t…
表达观点和感受
My feeling about my family rules.
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小试身手
Dear Julie,
I am very glad to receive your letter._____________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
I have lots of rules at home.
Every morning,I have to get up at 6:00.I have to hurry to school
because I can’t be late. My parents ask me to arrive home before 6:00
p.m. every day,so I can’t hang out with my friends after school. I can’t
play computer games after dinner,and I can’t watch TV either. I have to
practise speaking English on weekdays. Besides,I must clean my room at weekends.
These rules,though strict,are good for me. So I always follow them carefully.
_________________________________________________________________
_ ________________________________________________________________
What about your family rules?Please write soon.
Yours,
Tina
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