Unit 2 单元话题写作讲练-【精品课】2025-2026学年八年级英语下册同步精品课件（新教材人教版）

UNIT 2 Stay healthy Section B 单元话题写作 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 use vocabulary and sentence structures related to health and allergies to ask and answer questions and write. develop logical expression and problem-solving skills, through situational reasoning and role-playing. enhance information integration and language production skills. increase awareness of food safety and allergy precautions, and learn to respond appropriately in emergency situations. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Lead in Food Allergy What's the video about ? 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Food Allergy eggs tree nuts shrimp peanuts Lead in 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 peanuts Let's read a story about peanut allergy ! Pre-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Lead in Diagnosis Results A mystery Case Mark What happened? His face is red and hot. His throat is tight. Why did it happen? How was it solved? 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Let’s read Why did it happen? One Saturday, Julie invited Mark and Lucy to her house for lunch. Her parents weren’t home, so they had it all to themselves. They ordered pizza, salad, and juice. But in the middle of the meal, Mark started to feel strange. His face felt warm, and his throat felt tight. “Were there any peanuts in our food?” he asked nervously. “I think I tasted peanuts in the salad,” said Julie. “What's the matter?” “Oh no, I’m allergic to peanuts!” Mark cried. His friends jumped into action and took him to the hospital at once. At the hospital, Mark’s friends told Dr Cooper what happened, and she gave Mark some medicine right away. When Mark felt better, the doctor asked him some questions and gave him some advice. “I’ll take better care of myself from now on,” Mark promised. It was a day he would never forget. peanuts /əˈlɜːrdʒɪk/ 过敏的 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Who are the main characters in the story ? Fast-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Julie Lucy Dr Copper Mark Fast-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Who invited Mark and Lucy to lunch? Julie What food did they order? Careful-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Why did Mark start to feel strange during the meal? Because he was allergic to peanuts, and there were peanuts in the salad. What did Mark's friends do when they realized he was having an allergic reaction? Careful-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 What did Dr. Cooper do first after hearing what happened? She gave Mark some medicine right away. Careful-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Why was this a day Mark would never forget? Because he had a scary allergic reaction and learned a lesson about being more careful with his food. What will Mark do after this accident? He will check food ingredients more carefully from now on. Careful-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Which of the following is TRUE according to the story ? A. Mark's parents were at home when he went to Julie's house. B. Mark felt his face cold and his throat sore. C. Dr Cooper gave Mark medicine after asking him questions. D. Mark promised to look after himself better in the future. What can we learn from the story? A. We should never eat pizza and salad together. B. We must tell others about our allergies before eating. C. We shouldn’t go to friends’ houses without parents. D. Doctors can cure all allergies with medicine. Post-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 One Saturday, Julie invited Mark and Lucy to her house for lunch. Her parents weren’t home, so they had it all to themselves. They ordered pizza, salad, and juice. But in the middle of the meal, Mark started to feel strange. His face felt warm, and his throat felt tight. “Were there any peanuts in our food?” he asked nervously. “I think I tasted peanuts in the salad,” said Julie. “What's the matter?” “Oh no, I’m allergic to peanuts!” Mark cried. His friends jumped into action and took him to the hospital at once. At the hospital, Mark’s friends told Dr Cooper what happened, and she gave Mark some medicine right away. When Mark felt better, the doctor asked him some questions and gave him some advice. “I’ll take better care of myself from now on,” Mark promised. It was a day he would never forget. Read detailedly and fill in the information list. People involved: Mark, Julie, Lucy, Dr. Cooper When & Where: Saturday, at Julie’s house → hospital What happened: 1. Ate salad (with___________). 2. Felt sick (________face,_______throat). 3. _______to hospital. 4. ________doctor, ______ medicine. peanuts warm tight went saw took Key Words: 过敏的： 立即行动： 立即马上： 照顾： 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 One Saturday, Julie ________ Mark and Lucy to her house for lunch. Her parents weren't at home, so they had the whole house _________________ — it was like their own small world. Just in the middle of the meal, Mark suddenly felt ________. His face turned warm and his throat felt tight. He asked nervously if there were peanuts in his food. Julie checked the food carefully and said she found peanuts in the ________. Mark ___________ in fear and shouted, “I’m ___________ to peanuts!” His friends ___________________ at once and took him to the hospital ________. At the hospital, Mark’s friends told Dr Cooper the whole ________ clearly. The doctor gave Mark some medicine right away, and later she gave him some useful ________ about food safety. Mark ____________ to take better care of himself from then on. He said he would never ________ this unforgettable day, because it taught him a very important lesson. invited to themselves strange salad cried out allergic jumped into action at once story advice promised forget 3a Retell the story Post-reading 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Dr Cooper What happened just now？ Do you know what you are allergic to？ When did you start to feel sick? How much salad did you eat? What happened after you ate salad? You should check the ingredients of anything you eat or drink Look at the doctor’s questions in the table below and discuss: "Why does the doctor ask these questions?" 了解事件 确定病因 判断反应速度 评估严重程度 了解处理过程 给出预防措施 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Dr Cooper Mark What happened just now？ Do you know what you are allergic to？ When did you start to feel sick? How much salad did you eat? What happened after you ate salad? You should check the ingredients of anything you eat or drink 3b Read Dr Cooper’s questions and advice for Mark. Imagine how Mark respond. Make notes. 2.时态：故事是过去时叙述，对话中Mark的回答也应用过去时。 1.人称转换：故事是第三人称（Mark felt...），对话需转为第一人称（I felt...）。 3.推测：如“How much salad?”故事未写明，根据上下文合理猜测。 How to reply from Tom's perspective? I ate some salad at my friend’s home. Then I felt strange. Yes, I do. I'm allergic to peanuts. Some salad. I tasted a little peanut in it. In the middle of the lunch My face felt warm and my throat felt tight. Thank you, Doctor. I’ll be more careful of the ingredients from now on. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 Mark: Thank you, Dr Cooper. I feel much better now. Dr Cooper: That's good. What happened just now? Mark: Well, I ate something at my friend's place, and then I started to feel strange. Dr Cooper: Do you know what you were allergic to? Mark: Yes, I.. Use your notes in 3b to write a conversation between Dr Cooper and Mark. 3c 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 the event（事件） food allergen（过敏源） time（时间） quantity（数量） symptoms(症状) advice(建议) promise（承诺） Pre-writing 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 本单元教材写作情境为“看病就医时的症状描述与医生的治疗建议”， 属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“身心健 康，抗挫能力，珍爱生命的意识”等。常见的写作任务有介绍健康的生活方 式，如何保持健康，如何保证安全等。体裁多为应用文或说明文。 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 22 （Unit 2 Section B 3c P19） 审题指导 1.文体：对话 2.人称：第一、二人称 3.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时 思路点拨 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 23 教材写作品读 Mark:Thank you，Dr Cooper. I feel much better now. Dr Cooper:That’s good.①What happened just now? Mark:Well，I ate something at my friend’s place，and then I started to feel strange. Dr Cooper:Do you know what you were allergic to? 教材原句 ①【Section A 1d】 What happened？ （What happened？询 问病情） 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 24 Mark:Yes,②I am allergic to peanuts.There must be some peanuts in the salad. Dr Cooper:When did you start to feel sick? Mark:I started to feel sick in the middle of the meal. Dr Cooper:How much salad did you eat? Mark:Maybe two spoons of salad. ②【Section B 3a】I’m allergic to peanuts. （be allergic to对……过 敏） 续表 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 25 Dr Cooper:What happened after you ate the salad? Mark:My face ③felt warm，and my throat ③felt tight. Dr Cooper:You ④should check the ingredients of anything you eat or drink. ③【Section B 3a】His face felt warm，and his throat felt tight. （feel warm,feel tight描述 病情） ④【Section A 4a】You should see the dentist and get an X-ray.（should表示 提建议） 续表 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 26 Mark:OK，I will.⑤After all，it is a day I will never forget. Dr Cooper:And remember,⑥your health is in your hands.You can never be too careful. Mark:Thank you for your advice.⑦ I will take better care of myself from now on. ⑤【Section B 3a】It was a day he would never forget.（省略了关系词 that的定语从句） ⑥【Section A 3a】Your health is in your hands.（in one’s hands掌握在某 人手中） ⑦【Section B 3a】I’ll take better care of myself from now on. （take better care of oneself更好地照 顾某人自己） 续表 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 27 开头句 1.你怎么了？ 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ ____________ What’s wrong with you？/What’s the matter with you?/ What happened?/… 2.They enjoyed learning how to do many things themselves.（how to do作 宾语） 仿写：我很高兴做一个关于如何在生活中保持安全的演讲。 ________________________________________________________ I’m very glad to give a speech about how to stay safe in life. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 28 中间句 1.I’ll avoid looking at my phone while crossing the road next time.【教材 Section B 2c】 仿写：我们应该避免花太多时间在手机上或电脑上。 _________________________________________________________________ __________ We should avoid spending too much time on the mobile phone or the computer. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 29 2.I’m suffering from a very bad headache.【教材Section A 2d】 仿写：如果我们患有近视（myopia），我们就看不清黑板。 _______________________________________________________________ If we are suffering from myopia，we can’t see the blackboard clearly. 3.Then，we should often have our eyesight checked.（用What’s more进行 升格） ___________________________________________________ What’s more,we should often have our eyesight checked. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 30 结尾句 1.Your health is in your hands.【教材Section A 3a】 仿写：你的幸福掌握在你自己手中。 ______________________________ Your happiness is in your hands. 2.To protect your eyes，every 20 minutes，you should rest your eyes.【教 材Section A 4c】 仿写：为了保护我们的视力（eyesight），让我们现在就开始行动吧！ _________________________________________ To protect our eyesight,let’s take action now! 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 31 【名言积累】 1.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。 2.Life lies in movement.生命在于运动。 3.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.早睡早起身体好。 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 32 近年来“青少年视力健康”受到社会的广泛关注，我国早在1996年就确 立每年的6月6日为全国爱眼日，号召大家科学用眼，保护视力。请你从以 下几个方面写一篇100词左右的短文，谈谈你对近视的看法： 1.造成近视的原因； 2.近视对学习或生活的影响； 3.如何保护视力并号召大家行动起来。 参考词汇：eyesight视力；myopia近视；trouble麻烦 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 33 审题指导 1.文体： ________ 2.人称： __________ 3.时态： ____________ 议论文 第一人称 一般现在时 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 34 思路点拨 引出问题,并说明原因 too much time on the screen;too close to the books;read in poor light 阐述影响,并提出建议 We can’t see the blackboard clearly. It’s not convenient to swim or bath. We shouldn’t spend too much time on the mobile phone or the computer;Going outside for exercise… are also helpful;We should often have our eyesight checked. 号召保护 视力 Let’s take action now. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 35 小试身手 【基础版】 The eyesight of many students is getting worse and worse. Here are many reasons._____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Some students see the screen for a long time. Some keep their eyes too close to the books while reading and others often read in poor light. Myopia can cause a lot of trouble.We can’t see the blackboard clearly without glasses.Also，it’s not convenient for us to swim or bath with glasses on. So，it’s important to protect our eyes. First，we 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 36 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ shouldn’t spend too much time on the mobile phone or the computer.Second，going outside for exercise and doing eye exercises regularly are also helpful.What’s more，we should often have our eyesight checked. Let’s take action now.Hope all of us can have bright eyes and a bright future. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 【提升版】 The eyesight of many students is getting worse and worse. Here are many reasons. _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Some students often spend too much time on the screen without taking a break. Some keep their eyes too close to the books while reading and others often read in poor light. Myopia can cause a lot of trouble.If we are suffering from myopia， we can’t see the blackboard clearly.Also，it’s not convenient for us to wear glasses when we are in a swimming pool or a bathroom. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 38 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________#2.1.1 So，it’s important to protect our eyes. Firstly，we should avoid spending too much time on the mobile phone or the computer.Secondly，going outside for exercise and doing eye exercises play an important role in relaxing our tired eyes.What’s more，we should often have our eyesight checked to make sure our eyes stay healthy. Actions speak louder than words.To protect our eyesight,let’s take action now!Hope all of us can have bright eyes and a bright future. 小红书：Christina在努力 原创课件 $