内容正文:
专题11 书面表达:人与社会—科普知识与现代技术
目录
01 考情剖析·命题前瞻 1
02 思维导图·网络构建 3
03 考点通关·靶向突破 3
★ 考点一 核心词句 3
★ 考点二 科技主题征文(材料作文)—描述科技变化+表达观点 6
考点三 科技类邀请邮件(应用文)—告知信息+说明意义 8
★ 考点四 科技产品/应用介绍(材料作文)—介绍对象+阐述好处 11
04 优题精选·练能提分 13
考点
课标要求
复习目标
科技主题征文(材料作文)——描述科技变化+表达观点
结合核心素养中语言运用、思维品质、文化意识要求,能围绕“科普知识与现代技术”主题,完成书面表达,做到内容完整、逻辑清晰、句式多样,能运用相关话题词汇和固定句型表达观点、描述现象、发出邀请等;能根据写作任务(书信、征文、留言等)选择恰当的文体和格式,语言符合交际场景。
1.掌握科普知识与现代技术主题核心词汇、固定短语和高分句型,能灵活运用;
2.能根据不同写作任务(征文、邮件、自荐信)把握文体格式和写作逻辑,做到要点齐全、行文连贯;
3.能围绕科技主题描述变化、表达观点、说明目的,符合中考书面表达的字数和评分要求。
科技类邀请邮件(应用文)——告知信息+说明意义
科技产品/应用介绍(材料作文)——介绍对象+阐述好处
命题预测
1.贴合生活实际:继续围绕人工智能、互联网、移动支付、智能家居等贴近学生生活的科技话题展开,避免生僻科技概念;
2.注重能力综合:写作任务将更强调“信息整合+观点表达”,不仅要求描述科技现象,还需结合自身经历谈感受、谈做法,考查思维品质;
3.文体形式稳定:以材料作文(征文)和应用文(电子邮件)为主要考查形式,可能新增倡议书(如合理使用互联网) 等应用文变式;
4.强调核心素养:要求写作内容体现对科技的理性认知(如科技的利与弊)、创新意识(如科技与未来职业),贴合“人与社会”主题语境。
解题锦囊
锦囊1:审清要求
1.圈画文体、人称、时态、提示词汇/问题、字数五大要素,确保不遗漏要点。
锦囊2:搭建框架
遵循“开头点题+中间展开+结尾总结/表态”三段式结构,中间段按提示问题分点阐述。
锦囊3:句型优先
优先使用主题核心词汇和已掌握的高分句型(宾语从句、状语从句、with复合结构等),避免生僻表达。
考点一 核心词句
类别
核心词汇
拓展词汇
科技基础
1. __________ 技术,科技
2. __________ 发展
3. __________ 发明,创造
4. __________ (artificial intelligence) 人工智能(AI)
1. __________ 实验
2. __________ 设备,装置
3. __________ 应用程序(application的缩写)
4. __________ 机器人
5. __________ __________ 虚拟现实(VR)
功能评价
1. __________ 方便的,便捷的
2. __________ 有用的,实用的
3. __________ 节省时间的
4. __________ 有创造性的,创新的
1. __________ 高效的
2. __________ 实际的,实用的
3. __________ 令人惊奇的,惊人的
4. __________ 快速的,迅速的
行为动作
1. __________ __________ 寻找,搜索
2. __________ 交流,沟通
3. __________...to... 把……应用到……
4. __________ 探索,探究
1. __________ 发明,创造
2. __________ 创造,创作
3. __________ 改进,改善
4. __________ 监控,监测
5. __________ 实施,进行(实验、调查等)
影响作用
1. __________ 影响(动词/名词)
2. __________ 改变,变化(动词/名词)
3. __________ 有益于;好处(动词/名词)
1. __________ an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
2. __________ bad for 对……有害
3. __________ the interest of 激发……的兴趣
活动相关
1. __________ __________ __________ 参加,参与
2. __________ 举办,举行
3. __________ 展示,表演;节目
1. __________ 演讲
2. __________ 讲座,讲课
3. __________ 比赛,竞赛
4. __________ 展示,介绍(报告)
高分句型
开头点题句
1.The rise of...has greatly influenced our daily lives.(……的兴起极大影响了我们的生活)
2.Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life.(科技在生活中愈发重要)
中间展开句
1.It makes our lives more...because...(它让我们的生活更……,因为……)
2.Not only can we...but also we can...(我们不仅能……还能……,倒装句式提分)
3.With the development of..., ...will play an even more important role in the future.(随着……的发展,……未来将发挥更重要的作用)
结尾总结/表态句
1.In my opinion, we should...(在我看来,我们应该……)
2.I believe...will bring more convenience to our lives.(我相信……会给生活带来更多便利)
3.The purpose of...is to...(……的目的是……,邀请/活动类专用)
考点二 科技主题征文(材料作文)——描述科技变化+表达观点
写作思路
1.开篇点题:用一句话点明科技发展对生活/学习/社会产生了重大影响,引出下文;
2.具体阐述变化:结合AI、互联网、高铁、智能家居等实例,描述科技带来的具体改变(如便利、高效、省时等),1-2个实例即可,避免冗长;
3.表达观点/展望未来:评价科技变化的意义,说明科技的利处,或提出合理使用科技的建议,也可展望科技未来的发展。
必备句型
1.With the development of science and technology, ______ has greatly changed our life.(随着科技的发展,______极大地改变了我们的生活。)
2.Technology makes our life more ______ (convenient/ efficient/ time-saving).(科技让我们的生活更______。)
3.For example, ______ can help us ______ (do sth) easily.(例如,能帮助我们轻松做。)
4.In my opinion, these changes are really ______ (useful/ meaningful).(在我看来,这些变化非常______。)
5.We should use ______ (technology/ the Internet) properly and make the most of it.(我们应该合理使用______,充分利用它。)
2.With the progress of technology, ______ will play a more important role in the future.(随着科技的进步,______未来将发挥更重要的作用。)
通用模板
Technology and Our Life
With the development of science and technology, ①______(科技类事物,如AI/互联网/高铁) has greatly influenced our daily life. It brings many great changes to us. For example, ②______(具体科技产物,如智能助手/线上课堂) can ③______(具体功能,如快速解答问题/在家学习), and ④______(另一科技产物) makes ⑤______(生活场景,如出行/学习) more convenient for us. These changes make our life more ⑥______(形容词,如高效的/省时的).
In my opinion, these changes are really ⑦______(形容词,如有用的/有意义的). But we also need to ⑧______(做法,如合理使用它/避免其不良影响). I believe that with the continuous development of technology, ⑨______(对象,如我们的生活/科技应用) will become better and better in the future.
参考示例
Technology and Our Life
With the development of science and technology, AI has greatly influenced our daily life. It brings many great changes to us. For example, smart assistants can answer our questions quickly, and online learning makes studying more convenient for us. These changes make our life more efficient.
In my opinion, these changes are really useful. But we also need to use it properly. I believe that with the continuous development of technology, our life will become better and better in the future.
(2025·北京昌平·模拟预测)Deep Seek的出现引起了人们的热议,人工智能 (AI)的崛起对我们的生活产生了重大影响。假如你是李明,学校的英语杂志正在开展以“人工智能与我们的生活”为主题的征文活动,请你就这个主题进行英文投稿,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示词语:useful, influence, convenient, development, technology
提示问题:
What changes has Al brought to our lives?
What do you think of the changes?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考点三 科技类邀请邮件(应用文)——告知信息+说明意义
写作思路
1.开篇表明意图:开门见山说明写信目的——邀请对方参加某科技类活动(科技节、线上讲座、科技展等);
2.核心信息告知:清晰说明活动的时间、地点(线上活动说明参与方式,如video meeting),再介绍活动的具体内容(演讲、实验、发明展示、讲座讲解等);
3.阐述活动意义:说明参加活动能收获什么(了解科技知识、激发创新兴趣、体验科技乐趣等);
4.结尾表达期待:期待对方参加/回复,用常用邮件结束语。
必备句型
1.I’m writing to invite you to take part in ______ (our school’s Science Festival/ an online lecture about AI).(我写信是为了邀请你参加______。)
2.The activity will be held on ①______ at ②______ in ③______ (the school hall/ online via video meeting).(活动将于______在______举办。)
3.During the activity, there will be many interesting things to do, such as ①______, ②______ and ③______.(活动期间有很多有趣的环节,比如______。)
4.This activity can help us ①______ and arouse our interest in ②______ (science and technology).(这次活动能帮助我们______,激发我们对______的兴趣。)
5.I believe you will have a great time if you join us.(我相信你参加的话一定会玩得很开心。)
6.I’m looking forward to your coming/ early reply.(我期待你的到来/早日回复。)
通用模板
Dear ①______(人名,如Peter/Chris/Tom),
I’m writing to invite you to take part in ②______(活动名称,如我校科技节/人工智能线上讲座). It will be held on ③______(具体日期,如下周一/周六上午) at ④______(具体时间,如十点/下午两点) in ⑤______(举办地点,如学校礼堂/线上腾讯会议).
During the activity, we will ⑥______(活动内容1,如听科技演讲/做科学实验). We can also ⑦______(活动内容2,如观看发明展示/体验智能设备). This activity is very meaningful because it can help us ⑧______(收获1,如开阔眼界/学习科技知识) and make us know more about ⑨______(对象,如科学技术/人工智能应用).
I believe you will enjoy it if you come. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
______
参考示例
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite you to take part in our school’s Science Festival. It will be held on next Monday at 2 p.m. in the school hall.
During the activity, we will listen to a science speech. We can also watch students’ invention shows and try simple experiments. This activity is very meaningful because it can help us open our minds and make us know more about science and technology.
I believe you will enjoy it if you come. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·北京房山·一模)假设你是李华,你们学校将要举办“科技节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。
提示词语:school hall, speech, video, invention, experiment
提示问题:When and where will the science festival be held?
What activities will be done in the science festival?
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
考点四 科技产品/应用介绍(材料作文)—介绍对象+阐述好处
写作思路
开篇引入:结合科技发展背景,点明要介绍的科技产品/应用(如支付宝、共享单车、电子书、智能手表等);
具体阐述好处:从便利、省时、实用等角度,分1-2点说明该产品/应用的优势,结合日常使用场景举例(如支付、出行、阅读、学习等);
结尾总结:对该产品/应用进行整体评价,说明其对生活的积极影响。
必备句型
1.With the development of technology, many useful devices/ apps appear in our life. My favorite one is ①______.(随着科技的发展,很多实用的产品/应用出现在生活中,我最喜欢的是______。)
2.①______ is a very useful ②______ (app/ device) that can help us ③______.(是一款非常实用的,能帮助我们______。)
3.First, it is very ①______ (convenient/ time-saving). We can ②______ easily with it. Besides, it also has the function of ③______.(首先,它非常______,我们能用它轻松______。此外,它还有______的功能。)
4.It not only ①______ but also ②______.(它不仅______,而且______。)
5.In a word, ①______ is a great invention that makes our life more ②______.(总之,是一项伟大的发明,让我们的生活更。)
通用模板
Technology is playing a more and more important role in our life. There are many useful tech products and apps around us, and I want to introduce ①______(产品/应用名,如支付宝/共享单车/电子书) to you. It is a popular ②______(类别,如软件/设备/交通工具) in our daily life.
It brings us a lot of benefits. First, it is very ③______(形容词,如方便的/省时的). We can ④______(具体用法,如付款/出行/阅读) with it without ⑤______(麻烦事,如带现金/出门/找书店). Besides, it can also help us ⑥______(另一功能,如订车票/查资料/存书籍), which saves us a lot of time. What’s more, it is very ⑦______(形容词,如安全的/易用的/便携的) for students and adults.
In a word, ①______(重复产品/应用名) is a really useful invention. It changes our life in a good way and makes our daily life more ⑧______(形容词,如便捷的/舒适的/高效的).
参考示例
Technology is playing a more and more important role in our life. There are many useful tech products and apps around us, and I want to introduce Alipay to you. It is a popular app in our daily life.
It brings us a lot of benefits. First, it is very convenient. We can pay for things with it without carrying cash. Besides, it can also help us book train tickets and order food, which saves us a lot of time. What’s more, it is very safe for students and adults.
In a word, Alipay is a really useful invention. It changes our life in a good way and makes our daily life more convenient.
(2023·北京海淀·一模)假如你是李华,你校英语公众号将推出以“科技”为主题的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言,介绍一个你认为最实用的设备(device)或应用程序(app),并描述它给生活带来的便利。
提示词语:technology, communicate, learn, convenient, time-saving
提示问题:
·What device or app do you want to introduce?
·What benefits does it bring to people?
Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.(2025·北京顺义·二模)假设你是李华,你校将在下周举办科技节活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Chris参加。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容及意义。
提示词语:experiment, show, solve problems, creative, convenient
提示问题:● When and where will you have the activity?
● What will you do during it?
● Why do you have it?
Dear Chris,I’m glad to invite you to take part in our Science and Technology Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to seeing you next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2025·北京海淀·三模)假如你是李华,你校的科学探究社团正在招募社员,以期面向校内中外师生深化科学探索精神。请你用英文给科学探究社团写一封自荐信,在信中说明你申请成为社团成员的理由以及你会在社团中做什么。
提示词语: interest, knowledge, invent, creative, explore
提示问题: Why do you want to join the club?
What can you do in the club?
Dear Sir/ Madam.
I’m writing to apply to become a member of your club.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours.
Li Hua
3.(2025·北京丰台·二模)科技正以前所未有的态势重塑人类的就业方式。某英文公众号正在开展以“我的未来职业”为题的征文活动。假设你来是什么样的,以及你选择这个职业的原因。
提示词语:give lessons, robot, challenge, guide
提示问题:
·What do you want to be in the future?
·What will the job be like in the future?
·Why do you want to choose the job?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2023·北京丰台·一模)在科技发达的时代,人们有多种多样的阅读方式,比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志,在线阅读,或者使用app听书等。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上交流活动,其公众号计划推送有关阅读方式的系列内容,请你用英语写一篇文章,介绍你最喜欢的方式,并阐述理由。
提示词语:reason, convenient, notes, review, feel the joy of
提示问题:·What is your favorite way of reading?
·Why do you choose this way?
Nowadays, there are many ways of reading.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
21 / 21
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$
专题11 书面表达:人与社会—科普知识与现代技术
目录
01 考情剖析·命题前瞻 1
02 思维导图·网络构建 3
03 考点通关·靶向突破 3
★ 考点一 核心词句 3
★ 考点二 科技主题征文(材料作文)—描述科技变化+表达观点 5
考点三 科技类邀请邮件(应用文)—告知信息+说明意义 9
★ 考点四 科技产品/应用介绍(材料作文)—介绍对象+阐述好处 12
04 优题精选·练能提分 16
考点
课标要求
复习目标
科技主题征文(材料作文)——描述科技变化+表达观点
结合核心素养中语言运用、思维品质、文化意识要求,能围绕“科普知识与现代技术”主题,完成书面表达,做到内容完整、逻辑清晰、句式多样,能运用相关话题词汇和固定句型表达观点、描述现象、发出邀请等;能根据写作任务(书信、征文、留言等)选择恰当的文体和格式,语言符合交际场景。
1.掌握科普知识与现代技术主题核心词汇、固定短语和高分句型,能灵活运用;
2.能根据不同写作任务(征文、邮件、自荐信)把握文体格式和写作逻辑,做到要点齐全、行文连贯;
3.能围绕科技主题描述变化、表达观点、说明目的,符合中考书面表达的字数和评分要求。
科技类邀请邮件(应用文)——告知信息+说明意义
科技产品/应用介绍(材料作文)——介绍对象+阐述好处
命题预测
1.贴合生活实际:继续围绕人工智能、互联网、移动支付、智能家居等贴近学生生活的科技话题展开,避免生僻科技概念;
2.注重能力综合:写作任务将更强调“信息整合+观点表达”,不仅要求描述科技现象,还需结合自身经历谈感受、谈做法,考查思维品质;
3.文体形式稳定:以材料作文(征文)和应用文(电子邮件)为主要考查形式,可能新增倡议书(如合理使用互联网) 等应用文变式;
4.强调核心素养:要求写作内容体现对科技的理性认知(如科技的利与弊)、创新意识(如科技与未来职业),贴合“人与社会”主题语境。
解题锦囊
锦囊1:审清要求
1.圈画文体、人称、时态、提示词汇/问题、字数五大要素,确保不遗漏要点。
锦囊2:搭建框架
遵循“开头点题+中间展开+结尾总结/表态”三段式结构,中间段按提示问题分点阐述。
锦囊3:句型优先
优先使用主题核心词汇和已掌握的高分句型(宾语从句、状语从句、with复合结构等),避免生僻表达。
考点一 核心词句
类别
核心词汇
拓展词汇
科技基础
1. technology 技术,科技
2. development 发展
3. invention 发明,创造
4. AI (artificial intelligence) 人工智能(AI)
1. experiment 实验
2. device 设备,装置
3. app 应用程序(application的缩写)
4. robot 机器人
5. virtual reality 虚拟现实(VR)
功能评价
1. convenient 方便的,便捷的
2. useful 有用的,实用的
3. time-saving 节省时间的
4. creative 有创造性的,创新的
1. efficient 高效的
2. practical 实际的,实用的
3. amazing 令人惊奇的,惊人的
4. rapid 快速的,迅速的
行为动作
1. search for 寻找,搜索
2. communicate 交流,沟通
3. apply...to... 把……应用到……
4. explore 探索,探究
1. invent 发明,创造
2. create 创造,创作
3. improve 改进,改善
4. monitor 监控,监测
5. conduct 实施,进行(实验、调查等)
影响作用
1. influence 影响(动词/名词)
2. change 改变,变化(动词/名词)
3. benefit 有益于;好处(动词/名词)
1. play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
2. be bad for 对……有害
3. arouse the interest of 激发……的兴趣
活动相关
1. take part in 参加,参与
2. hold 举办,举行
3. show 展示,表演;节目
1. speech 演讲
2. lecture 讲座,讲课
3. competition 比赛,竞赛
4. presentation 展示,介绍(报告)
高分句型
开头点题句
1.The rise of...has greatly influenced our daily lives.(……的兴起极大影响了我们的生活)
2.Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life.(科技在生活中愈发重要)
中间展开句
1.It makes our lives more...because...(它让我们的生活更……,因为……)
2.Not only can we...but also we can...(我们不仅能……还能……,倒装句式提分)
3.With the development of..., ...will play an even more important role in the future.(随着……的发展,……未来将发挥更重要的作用)
结尾总结/表态句
1.In my opinion, we should...(在我看来,我们应该……)
2.I believe...will bring more convenience to our lives.(我相信……会给生活带来更多便利)
3.The purpose of...is to...(……的目的是……,邀请/活动类专用)
考点二 科技主题征文(材料作文)——描述科技变化+表达观点
写作思路
1.开篇点题:用一句话点明科技发展对生活/学习/社会产生了重大影响,引出下文;
2.具体阐述变化:结合AI、互联网、高铁、智能家居等实例,描述科技带来的具体改变(如便利、高效、省时等),1-2个实例即可,避免冗长;
3.表达观点/展望未来:评价科技变化的意义,说明科技的利处,或提出合理使用科技的建议,也可展望科技未来的发展。
必备句型
1.With the development of science and technology, ______ has greatly changed our life.(随着科技的发展,______极大地改变了我们的生活。)
2.Technology makes our life more ______ (convenient/ efficient/ time-saving).(科技让我们的生活更______。)
3.For example, ______ can help us ______ (do sth) easily.(例如,能帮助我们轻松做。)
4.In my opinion, these changes are really ______ (useful/ meaningful).(在我看来,这些变化非常______。)
5.We should use ______ (technology/ the Internet) properly and make the most of it.(我们应该合理使用______,充分利用它。)
2.With the progress of technology, ______ will play a more important role in the future.(随着科技的进步,______未来将发挥更重要的作用。)
通用模板
Technology and Our Life
With the development of science and technology, ①______(科技类事物,如AI/互联网/高铁) has greatly influenced our daily life. It brings many great changes to us. For example, ②______(具体科技产物,如智能助手/线上课堂) can ③______(具体功能,如快速解答问题/在家学习), and ④______(另一科技产物) makes ⑤______(生活场景,如出行/学习) more convenient for us. These changes make our life more ⑥______(形容词,如高效的/省时的).
In my opinion, these changes are really ⑦______(形容词,如有用的/有意义的). But we also need to ⑧______(做法,如合理使用它/避免其不良影响). I believe that with the continuous development of technology, ⑨______(对象,如我们的生活/科技应用) will become better and better in the future.
参考示例
Technology and Our Life
With the development of science and technology, AI has greatly influenced our daily life. It brings many great changes to us. For example, smart assistants can answer our questions quickly, and online learning makes studying more convenient for us. These changes make our life more efficient.
In my opinion, these changes are really useful. But we also need to use it properly. I believe that with the continuous development of technology, our life will become better and better in the future.
一、单项选择
(2025·北京昌平·模拟预测)Deep Seek的出现引起了人们的热议,人工智能 (AI)的崛起对我们的生活产生了重大影响。假如你是李明,学校的英语杂志正在开展以“人工智能与我们的生活”为主题的征文活动,请你就这个主题进行英文投稿,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示词语:useful, influence, convenient, development, technology
提示问题:
What changes has Al brought to our lives?
What do you think of the changes?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考点拆解:
核心考点:运用一般现在时描述科技变化,使用提示词汇,结合实例展开,表达个人观点;
框架考点:三段式结构(开头点题+中间举实例+结尾评价)。
写作思路:
开头:用The rise of AI has greatly influenced our lives.点题,引出“带来诸多变化”;
中间:结合smart assistants, smart home, healthcare等实例,用It makes our lives more convenient.说明变化,融入提示词汇;
结尾:用I think these changes are really useful.表达观点,用With the development of technology...展望未来。
【参考范文】
Artificial Intelligence and Our Lives
The rise of AI, like Deep Seek, has greatly influenced our lives. It has brought many changes. AI makes our lives more convenient. For example, smart assistants can answer our questions and help with tasks. Smart home devices allow us to control our houses easily. Also, AI in healthcare helps doctors make more accurate diagnoses. I think these changes are really useful. With the development of technology, AI will play an even more important role in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,属于说明文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:依据给定的主题、提示词语和问题进行写作,需阐述人工智能带来的生活变化及对这些变化的看法,不能遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明人工智能极大地影响了我们的生活,引出下文对变化的阐述;
第二步,具体举例说明人工智能带来的便利,如智能助手帮忙处理任务、智能家居轻松控制房屋、医疗领域辅助医生诊断等;
第三步,表明自己对这些变化的看法,认为很有用,并提及随着技术发展人工智能未来会更重要。
[亮点词汇]
① make sb./sth. adj.使某人/某物……
② help with 在某方面帮助
③ play an important role 扮演重要角色
[高分句型]
① I think these changes are really useful.(think后为省略that的宾语从句)
② With the development of technology, AI will play an even more important role in the future.(“with + 名词短语”结构作伴随状语)
考点三 科技类邀请邮件(应用文)——告知信息+说明意义
写作思路
1.开篇表明意图:开门见山说明写信目的——邀请对方参加某科技类活动(科技节、线上讲座、科技展等);
2.核心信息告知:清晰说明活动的时间、地点(线上活动说明参与方式,如video meeting),再介绍活动的具体内容(演讲、实验、发明展示、讲座讲解等);
3.阐述活动意义:说明参加活动能收获什么(了解科技知识、激发创新兴趣、体验科技乐趣等);
4.结尾表达期待:期待对方参加/回复,用常用邮件结束语。
必备句型
1.I’m writing to invite you to take part in ______ (our school’s Science Festival/ an online lecture about AI).(我写信是为了邀请你参加______。)
2.The activity will be held on ①______ at ②______ in ③______ (the school hall/ online via video meeting).(活动将于______在______举办。)
3.During the activity, there will be many interesting things to do, such as ①______, ②______ and ③______.(活动期间有很多有趣的环节,比如______。)
4.This activity can help us ①______ and arouse our interest in ②______ (science and technology).(这次活动能帮助我们______,激发我们对______的兴趣。)
5.I believe you will have a great time if you join us.(我相信你参加的话一定会玩得很开心。)
6.I’m looking forward to your coming/ early reply.(我期待你的到来/早日回复。)
通用模板
Dear ①______(人名,如Peter/Chris/Tom),
I’m writing to invite you to take part in ②______(活动名称,如我校科技节/人工智能线上讲座). It will be held on ③______(具体日期,如下周一/周六上午) at ④______(具体时间,如十点/下午两点) in ⑤______(举办地点,如学校礼堂/线上腾讯会议).
During the activity, we will ⑥______(活动内容1,如听科技演讲/做科学实验). We can also ⑦______(活动内容2,如观看发明展示/体验智能设备). This activity is very meaningful because it can help us ⑧______(收获1,如开阔眼界/学习科技知识) and make us know more about ⑨______(对象,如科学技术/人工智能应用).
I believe you will enjoy it if you come. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
______
参考示例
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite you to take part in our school’s Science Festival. It will be held on next Monday at 2 p.m. in the school hall.
During the activity, we will listen to a science speech. We can also watch students’ invention shows and try simple experiments. This activity is very meaningful because it can help us open our minds and make us know more about science and technology.
I believe you will enjoy it if you come. I’m looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·北京房山·一模)假设你是李华,你们学校将要举办“科技节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。
提示词语:school hall, speech, video, invention, experiment
提示问题:When and where will the science festival be held?
What activities will be done in the science festival?
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news.
Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival. I’m glad to invite you to take part in it. The event will be held on January 19th in the school hall. There will be a variety of activities for you to enjoy. Our headmaster will give a speech. You will see amazing inventions and videos about them, which show the latest developments in science and technology. Also, you’ll have the chance to attend interesting lectures on different scientific topics. If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments. It’s going to be a great opportunity to learn and have fun at the same time!
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“邀请Peter来参加科技节,活动时间,地点和内容”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一个好消息。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“邀请Peter来参加科技节,科技节举办的时间,地点以及科技节的活动内容”重点介绍科技节的相关情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我期待你早日答复。”
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Our school is going to hold a school Science Festival.(be going to do sth表示“计划做某事”)
②If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments.(if引导的条件状语从句)
考点四 科技产品/应用介绍(材料作文)—介绍对象+阐述好处
写作思路
开篇引入:结合科技发展背景,点明要介绍的科技产品/应用(如支付宝、共享单车、电子书、智能手表等);
具体阐述好处:从便利、省时、实用等角度,分1-2点说明该产品/应用的优势,结合日常使用场景举例(如支付、出行、阅读、学习等);
结尾总结:对该产品/应用进行整体评价,说明其对生活的积极影响。
必备句型
1.With the development of technology, many useful devices/ apps appear in our life. My favorite one is ①______.(随着科技的发展,很多实用的产品/应用出现在生活中,我最喜欢的是______。)
2.①______ is a very useful ②______ (app/ device) that can help us ③______.(是一款非常实用的,能帮助我们______。)
3.First, it is very ①______ (convenient/ time-saving). We can ②______ easily with it. Besides, it also has the function of ③______.(首先,它非常______,我们能用它轻松______。此外,它还有______的功能。)
4.It not only ①______ but also ②______.(它不仅______,而且______。)
5.In a word, ①______ is a great invention that makes our life more ②______.(总之,是一项伟大的发明,让我们的生活更。)
通用模板
Technology is playing a more and more important role in our life. There are many useful tech products and apps around us, and I want to introduce ①______(产品/应用名,如支付宝/共享单车/电子书) to you. It is a popular ②______(类别,如软件/设备/交通工具) in our daily life.
It brings us a lot of benefits. First, it is very ③______(形容词,如方便的/省时的). We can ④______(具体用法,如付款/出行/阅读) with it without ⑤______(麻烦事,如带现金/出门/找书店). Besides, it can also help us ⑥______(另一功能,如订车票/查资料/存书籍), which saves us a lot of time. What’s more, it is very ⑦______(形容词,如安全的/易用的/便携的) for students and adults.
In a word, ①______(重复产品/应用名) is a really useful invention. It changes our life in a good way and makes our daily life more ⑧______(形容词,如便捷的/舒适的/高效的).
参考示例
Technology is playing a more and more important role in our life. There are many useful tech products and apps around us, and I want to introduce Alipay to you. It is a popular app in our daily life.
It brings us a lot of benefits. First, it is very convenient. We can pay for things with it without carrying cash. Besides, it can also help us book train tickets and order food, which saves us a lot of time. What’s more, it is very safe for students and adults.
In a word, Alipay is a really useful invention. It changes our life in a good way and makes our daily life more convenient.
(2023·北京海淀·一模)假如你是李华,你校英语公众号将推出以“科技”为主题的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言,介绍一个你认为最实用的设备(device)或应用程序(app),并描述它给生活带来的便利。
提示词语:technology, communicate, learn, convenient, time-saving
提示问题:
·What device or app do you want to introduce?
·What benefits does it bring to people?
Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考点拆解:
表达考点:用定语从句(the most practical app that...)介绍对象,提升句式丰富度;
逻辑考点:分点阐述好处,用Besides/Moreover等连接词让行文更连贯;
词汇考点:灵活运用convenient, time-saving等评价类词汇,结合具体场景说明好处。
写作思路:
开头:用As for me, the most practical app is...引出介绍对象(如Alipay/WeChat);
中间:结合daily payment, booking tickets, ordering food等场景,用Not only...but also...阐述“convenient”和“time-saving”的好处,融入提示词汇;
结尾:用In conclusion...总结评价,点明该产品/应用是重要的科技成果。
【参考范文】
Technology is now becoming more and more important in our life. As for me, the most practical device that I want to introduce is the mobile payment app called Alipay.
With Alipay, people can make transactions easily and quickly without the need for cash. It has become a popular way to pay for daily expenses, such as groceries, transportation, and even utility bills. Besides, Alipay also provides various functions, including booking flights and hotels, ordering food, and even investing money.
Alipay is not only convenient but also time-saving. It reduces the time needed to count and handle cash, which can be frustrating and time-consuming. Additionally, people do not need to carry a lot of cash with them, which can help prevent theft and loss of money.
In conclusion, Alipay is an app that brings a lot of benefits to people’s daily lives, making transactions more convenient and efficient. It is one of the most practical technological advancements that we have today.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明你想介绍什么设备或应用;
第二步,具体阐述它给人们带来了什么好处;
第三步,最后作总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②not only...but also...不但……而且……
③in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①the most practical device that I want to introduce is the mobile payment app called Alipay.(that引导的定语从句)
②It reduces the time needed to count and handle cash, which can be frustrating and time-consuming.(which引导的非限制定语从句)
1.(2025·北京顺义·二模)假设你是李华,你校将在下周举办科技节活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Chris参加。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容及意义。
提示词语:experiment, show, solve problems, creative, convenient
提示问题:● When and where will you have the activity?
● What will you do during it?
● Why do you have it?
Dear Chris,I’m glad to invite you to take part in our Science and Technology Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to seeing you next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to invite you to take part in our Science and Technology Festival. It will be held in the school hall next Monday.
During the festival, there will be various activities. Students will conduct interesting science experiments on-site, showing us the magic of science. There will also be a technology show where some creative inventions like smart-home devices will be presented. We can not only watch these amazing shows but also try to solve some practical problems with the knowledge we’ve learned.
The purpose of this festival is to arouse our interest in science and technology. It helps us understand how science and technology make our lives more convenient and creative. I believe you‘ll have a great time if you join us.
I am looking forward to seeing you next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明写信目的,即邀请Chris参加科技节,并告知活动时间和地点 。
第二步,详细描述活动内容。
第三步,阐述举办科技节的意义,写结尾表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②arouse one’s interest in 激发某人对……的兴趣
[高分句型]
①It will be held in the school hall next Monday.(一般将来时的被动语态,清晰表明活动举办的时间和地点 )
②The purpose of this festival is to arouse our interest in science and technology.(动词不定式作表语,明确说明活动目的 )
③I believe you’ll have a great time if you join us.(宾语从句中包含条件状语从句,丰富句式结构 )
2.(2025·北京海淀·三模)假如你是李华,你校的科学探究社团正在招募社员,以期面向校内中外师生深化科学探索精神。请你用英文给科学探究社团写一封自荐信,在信中说明你申请成为社团成员的理由以及你会在社团中做什么。
提示词语: interest, knowledge, invent, creative, explore
提示问题: Why do you want to join the club?
What can you do in the club?
Dear Sir/ Madam.
I’m writing to apply to become a member of your club.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours.
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to apply to become a member of your club. As a student passionate about science, I have a strong interest in discovering how things work and enjoy sharing my knowledge with others. I believe this club is a great opportunity to explore new ideas with both Chinese and international students. In the club, I can contribute by brainstorming creative solutions to problems and even helping invent simple experiments. I also hope to organize science-themed discussions to promote curiosity and teamwork.
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示要点进行写作,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表示自己想加入俱乐部;
第二步,详解介绍自己想加入的理由以及可以做的贡献。
[亮点词汇]
①passionate有激情的
②discover发现
③opportunity机会
④promote促进
[高分句型]
I believe this club is a great opportunity to explore new ideas with both Chinese and international students.(宾语从句)
3.(2025·北京丰台·二模)科技正以前所未有的态势重塑人类的就业方式。某英文公众号正在开展以“我的未来职业”为题的征文活动。假设你来是什么样的,以及你选择这个职业的原因。
提示词语:give lessons, robot, challenge, guide
提示问题:
·What do you want to be in the future?
·What will the job be like in the future?
·Why do you want to choose the job?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I want to be a teacher in the future. As technology will change how we work, teaching will combine traditions with modern tools. In the future, teachers will give lessons with the help of AI robots and use virtual reality to bring lessons to life. Moreover, teachers can monitor students’ progress through technology in order to give them specific suggestions on their study.
There are two reasons for me to be a teacher. First, I love children and teaching brings me a strong sense of achievement. Second, I got a lot of help from my teacher and I’d like to be a great person like her. I’m excited to use technology in teaching and guide students to a better future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍未来想从事的职业;
第二步,具体介绍未来的工作;
第三步,具体介绍选择这份工作的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①combine…with…将……与……结合
②moreover而且
③specific 具体的
[高分句型]
As technology will change how we work, teaching will combine traditions with modern tools. (动名词作主语)
4.(2023·北京丰台·一模)在科技发达的时代,人们有多种多样的阅读方式,比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志,在线阅读,或者使用app听书等。
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上交流活动,其公众号计划推送有关阅读方式的系列内容,请你用英语写一篇文章,介绍你最喜欢的方式,并阐述理由。
提示词语:reason, convenient, notes, review, feel the joy of
提示问题:·What is your favorite way of reading?
·Why do you choose this way?
Nowadays, there are many ways of reading.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Nowadays, there are many ways of reading. Among them, I like reading e-books best. There are several reasons. First, we can easily download new books from the Internet. It is much easier and quicker to search for the passages we want to read. And we can also write notes or mark some important information in an e-book. Moreover, a number of books can be stored in a small machine, which is easy to take. Last but not least, e-books save a lot of paper and are good for the environment. But e-books are still more expensive than paper books, so not all people can afford them. However, with the rapid development of electronic technology, e-book readers will become cheaper and cheaper. A lot of people think there will be more e-books than paper books in the near future.
In short, no matter which way you choose, I hope you can feel the joy of reading.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式是什么;
第二步,具体阐述你选择这种阅读方式的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①moreover而且
②last but not least最后但同样重要的是
③in short简言之
[高分句型]
①It is much easier and quicker to search for the passages we want to read.(省略that的定语从句)
②a number of books can be stored in a small machine, which is easy to take.(which引导的定语从句)
21 / 21
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$