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2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期满分冲刺专练(人教版2024)
Unit 1 Animal friends 书面表达专练
【写作主题】
本单元的话题是“动物”,要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇介绍自己的宠物的文章。
【语言点拨】
1. 动物的特征:
clever and cute 聪明又可爱
big and strong 又大又壮
be friendly to people 对人类很友好
It has two round black eyes. 它有两只圆圆的黑色眼睛。
2. 动物喜欢做的事情:
gnaw a bone 啃骨头play with balls 玩球
take / have a walk 散步be good at running 擅长奔跑
take the shoes to me 帮我拿鞋子help open and close the door 帮忙开门和关门
help blind people cross the road 帮助盲人过马路
My dog enjoys chasing and catching balls.我的狗喜欢追球和接球。
3. 表达对动物的喜爱:
bring me much fun 给我带来很多乐趣
I love it very much. 我非常喜欢它。
【写作专练】
1.动物是人类的好朋友,忠诚友善的狗,活泼可爱的兔子,精灵古怪的猴子……现你们学校的网站正在开展以“My Favourite Animal”为主题的英文征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下提示问题用英语写一篇短文投稿,说说你最喜欢的动物是什么,它长什么样子以及你喜欢它的原因。
What’s your favourite animal?
What does it look like?
Why do you like it?
Something more about your favourite animal.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Animal
Hello, my name is Li Hua. My favourite animal is
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2.动物是我们的朋友,它们和我们共享一个地球,但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明,你们学校的校报正在征集关于保护野生动物的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题,根据以下写作要点和要求,写一篇英语短文进行投稿,呼吁大家保护野生动物。
写作要点:
1. How are wild animals now?
2. Why are some wild animals in danger?
3. What is your advice (建议)?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:protect保护 nature reserve自然保护区
Save the wild animals
Animals are our friends, but_______________________________________________________
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3.每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假设你最喜欢的动物是企鹅。请根据以下提示内容写一篇约80词的文章,介绍一下企鹅。
外形和习性
1. 有翅膀,身体是黑白色的;
2. 不会飞行,但游泳游得很快;
3. 主要吃小的海洋动物;
4. 主要来自南极,通过挤在一起的方式取暖。
现状
处于危险中
要求:
1. 必须包含表格中提到的所有要点。
2. 可适当发挥想象。
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4.请根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫。
要点:
1.大熊猫拥有黑白相间的皮毛,看起来很可爱;
2.它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区;
3.它们喜欢吃竹子,每天花很多时间吃东西和睡觉;
4.大熊猫是中国的象征之一,目前世界上仅存大约2,000只野生大熊猫,因此我们会尽力保护它们。
要求:
1.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右,短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My favourite animal—the giant panda
There are many kinds of animals in the world, _________________________________________
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5.你喜欢聪明而强壮的大象吗?在泰国大象是好运的象征。然而大象又是世界上的濒危动物之一,我们怎么才能够挽救大象呢?请你根据提示内容,写一篇英语短文介绍你心目中的大象。要求:不少于80词。
提示内容:strong and clever a symbol of good luck huge large ears and long trunks in danger save the elephants
There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope people can save elephants.
6.同学们,动物是人类的好朋友,很多人都希望拥有自己的宠物。请以“I want to keep a ________ as my pet”为题写一篇作文。阐述你养这种动物作为你的宠物的原因以及你会如何对待它。开头已经给出,请在答题卡上完整作答。
写作要求:1. 内容要围绕导图展开陈述,也可以适度发挥。
2. 字数控制在80字左右。
3. 不得出现真实姓名和班级。
I want to keep a … as my pet
As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is
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7.动物是我们的朋友,与人类关系紧密,为人类提供许多帮助。请你阐述动物对人类的帮助和重要性,呼吁大家保护动物,与动物和谐共处。
提示:
1.提供丰富的食物(如肉类、奶制品);
2.助力工作(如导盲犬);
3.带来乐趣(如熊猫、猴子)。
要求:
1.要点齐全,并适当增加细节;
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯;
3.70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Animals are our friends and they are a part of our life.
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8.动物是人类的好朋友,学校英语社团正在举行主题为“My favorite animal”的演讲比赛,假设你是李华,请写一篇演讲稿来介绍你最喜欢的动物吧!
内容包含:
(1)介绍你最喜爱的动物,如性格,外貌等。
(2)描述你与它之间的特别的或者幸福的相处经历。
(3)动物是人类的好朋友,呼吁人类保护动物。
注意:
(1)词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal.
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参考答案
1.例文
My Favourite Animal
Hello, my name is Li Hua. My favourite animal is the rabbit.
Rabbits are cute with two long ears, soft fur, and a little pink nose. They can jump very high and also have a special ability to hear very well. Even when they are sleeping, they can hear the sound. I like rabbits not only because they are lovely but also because they are gentle and friendly. They don’t make much noise and are always happy. I also like to watch them eat carrots and greens. It’s so funny! I hope to have a pet rabbit in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,明确自己最喜欢的动物;
第二步,描述该动物的外貌特征;
第三步,说明喜欢它的原因,并补充一些相关细节。
[亮点词汇]
①have a special ability to do sth.有做某事的特殊能力
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③in the future在将来
[高分句型]
①Even when they are sleeping, they can hear the sound. (even when引导的让步状语从句)
②I like rabbits not only because they are lovely but also because they are gentle and friendly. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2.例文
Save the wild animals
Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Also, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot.
First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.
Let’s try our best to help wild animals together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:需包含野生动物现状、濒危原因及保护建议,可适当发挥,使文章通顺、完整,词数约70词,开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,说明动物是人类朋友,但部分野生动物正处于濒危状态;
第二步,阐述野生动物濒危的原因(栖息地破坏、人类非法猎杀);
第三步,提出具体保护建议(停止砍伐、禁止猎杀、建立自然保护区),并呼吁大家共同行动。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险中
②cut down trees砍伐树木
③nature reserve自然保护区
[高分句型]
①People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in.(说明栖息地破坏对动物的影响)
②Also, some people kill them for their meat and fur.(说明人类非法猎杀的原因)
③What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.(提出具体保护措施,丰富内容)
3.例文:
Everyone has his or her favourite animal. The penguin is my favourite animal. I like penguins because they are very cute and they look friendly.
Penguins have wings and black-and-white bodies. They can’t fly like other birds, but they can swim fast. They mainly feed on small sea animals. They mostly come from Antarctica, a very cold place. Penguins often stand close together. It helps them keep warm.
Now penguins are in danger. I will try my best to help the penguins.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点清晰,围绕“喜爱的动物是企鹅”展开,依次介绍喜爱的原因、企鹅的特征与习性、企鹅的生存现状及自身的帮助意愿,无遗漏要点,细节补充合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明主旨,说明自己最喜爱的动物是企鹅,并简要给出喜爱的原因;
第二步,详细介绍企鹅的外形特征、特殊能力、食物、栖息地及生活习性;
第三步,说明企鹅当前的危险处境,表达自己将尽力帮助企鹅的意愿,结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite animal最喜欢的动物
②black-and-white黑白相间的
③feed on以……为食
④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I like penguins because they are very cute and they look friendly.(because引导原因状语从句)
②They can’t fly like other birds, but they can swim fast.(but连接并列句,表转折关系)
4.例文
My favourite animal—the giant panda
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favourite is the giant panda.
Giant pandas are very cute animals with black-and-white fur. They usually live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi. They mainly live on bamboo. They seem to be lazy because they spend much time eating and sleeping.
Giant pandas are one of the greatest symbols of China. Nevertheless, now there are only about 2,000 wild giant pandas in the world. In fact, they are in great danger. We must try our best to save them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:围绕大熊猫的皮毛外观、栖息地、生活习性、象征意义及保护现状展开,重点突出其可爱特征和保护必要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:用1-2句话引出主题,表达大熊猫是最喜欢的动物;
第二步:描述皮毛颜色和栖息地点,覆盖要点1和2;
第三步:介绍饮食习性、象征意义及保护呼吁,覆盖要点3和4;
[亮点词汇]
①spend much time doing sth花费大量时间做某事
②in the world在世界上
③in great danger处于极大危险之中
[高分句型]
①Giant pandas are very cute animals with black-and-white fur.(介词短语作后置定语)
②They seem to be lazy because they spend much time eating and sleeping. Giant pandas look shy and quiet.(because引导的原因状语从句)
5.例文
There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever. They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food.
In Thailand, elephants are a symbol of good luck. However, they are now in danger because of hunting and habitat loss. To save the elephants, we should protect their homes and stop buying ivory products.
Elephants are friendly and intelligent. They can remember places and help people with work. So we should do our best to protect these amazing animals.
I hope people can save elephants.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明主题 —— 表明自己最爱的动物是大象,并简述喜爱原因及大象的核心身体特征;
第二步,介绍大象的文化意义,转而阐述其当前濒危的现状及原因,并提出具体的保护措施;
第三步,补充大象的其他优点,最后表达希望更多人采取行动保护大象的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① a symbol of... ……的象征
② in danger 处于危险中
③ habitat loss 栖息地丧失
④ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food.(定语从句)
6.例文
I want to keep a cat as my pet
As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is the cat. I’d like to keep a cat, because it makes me feel happy. It can help me relax and teach me responsibility. If I have a cat, I will feed it well and walk it every day. I won’t make it a stray. I hope to play with it daily. Of course, I will keep it clean and make it healthy. My parents also love small animals. I am sure the cat will be happy with us in my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:根据导图展开陈述,注意要点齐全,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全题目,表达想要养一只宠物;
第二步,介绍想要养的宠物,包括喜欢的原因及打算如何照顾它;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事
②of course当然
[高分句型]
①I’d like to keep a cat, because it makes me feel happy. (because引导原因状语从句)
②If I have a cat, I will feed her well every day. (if引导条件状语从句)
③I am sure the cat will be happy with us in my family.(宾语从句)
7.例文
Animals are our friends and they are a part of our life.
Firstly, they provide us with a rich variety of food. For example, cows give us milk, and chickens and pigs supply us with meat. Secondly, many animals are of great help in our work. Just like the well-trained guide dogs, they can lead the blind to cross the roads safely. Moreover, animals bring us a lot of fun. We love to watch the lovely pandas and naughty monkeys in the zoo.
In conclusion, animals are very important to us. We should protect them and live in harmony with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏给出的信息,写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明动物与人类关系密切;
第二步,从“食物供给、工作辅助、情感价值”三方面来具体阐述动物的重要性;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物
②a variety of多种多样的
③in conclusion总之
④in harmony with和睦共处
[高分句型]
We should protect them and live in harmony with them. (and连接的并列句)
8.例文
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is my dog, Coco. She has big eyes and soft fur. She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me. Also, Coco brings me lots of happiness. When I feel sad, she sits beside me quietly. Every weekend, we play together in the park. I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.
Animals are our best friends. They make our lives colorful. So let’s protect them and give them warm homes. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,介绍自己最喜欢的动物;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍它的性格,外貌,以及与它之间的相处经历;
第三步,呼吁人类保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②in the park在公园
[高分句型]
①She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me.(时间状语从句)
②I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.(and连接并列句)
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