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Unit 2Stay Healthy Section B (3a-3c) 写作课导学案 一、学习目标 1. 能读懂Mark过敏就医的短篇故事,掌握allergic to, check the ingredients, take care of myself等核心写作词汇与句型。 1. 能从故事中提取关键信息,完成问诊笔记梳理;能运用所学语言知识复述故事、完成医患对话写作。 1. 能撰写一篇结构清晰、语言准确的短文,描述一次健康意外经历,体现“关爱自我、科学管理健康”的意识。 二、自主预习 1. 词汇预热 写出下列短语的英文表达: 1. 对……过敏:_ 2. 喉咙发紧:_ 3. 查看配料:_ 4. 照顾好自己:_ 5. 健康掌握在自己手中:_ 2. 句型热身 根据中文提示补全句子: 1. Mark started to feel strange. His face _ (感觉发热), and his throat _ (感觉发紧). 2. I’m allergic _ peanuts, so I can’t eat food with peanuts. 3. You should always _ (查看配料) of anything you eat or drink. 4. I promise I _ (更好地照顾) myself from now on. 三、课堂练习 任务一:阅读信息梳理(3b) 阅读故事,完成表格(用短语/短句填写): Dr Cooper Mark’s responses / notes What happened just now? ate something at my friend’s place; felt strange Do you know what you are allergic to? _ When did you start to feel sick? _ How much salad did you eat? _ What happened after you ate the salad? _ You should always check the ingredients of anything you eat or drink. _ 任务二:语法填空(故事复述版,10个空) 在空处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式: One Saturday, Julie invited Mark and Lucy to her house for lunch. Her parents weren’t at home, so they enjoyed 1. _ (they). They ordered pizza, salad, and juice. But in the middle of the meal, Mark started to feel 2. _ (strange). His face felt warm, and his throat felt tight. “Were there any peanuts in our food?” he asked 3. _ (nervous). “I think I tasted peanuts in the salad,” said Julie. “Oh no, I’m allergic 4. _ peanuts!” Mark cried. At the hospital, Dr Cooper gave him some medicine and asked questions. She told him, “You should always check the 5. _ (ingredient) of anything you eat or drink.” Mark promised he 6. _ (take) better care of himself from now on. 任务三:核心写作任务 任务A:故事复述写作(60词基础版) 用简洁的语言复述Mark的过敏就医经历,必须包含: 事件起因(去朋友家吃饭) 过敏症状 就医与医生建议 可用结构: One Saturday, ... was invited to ... / First, ... Then, ... Finally, ... / The doctor told him to ... 任务B:医患对话写作(80词提升版) 根据3b的笔记,补全并续写3c的医患对话,要求: 1. 包含医生的全部问题与Mark的回答 2. 加入医生的健康建议 3. 结尾体现Mark的承诺 可用句型: 1. Doctor: What happened just now? / Are you allergic to ...? / You should ... 1. Patient: I felt ... / I’m allergic to ... / I will ... 四、课堂小结 1. 核心写作词汇:allergic to, felt warm, throat felt tight, check the ingredients, take care of myself 2. 写作结构: 1. 复述:起因 症状 就医 建议 1. 对话:问候 问诊 应答 建议 承诺 3. 写作技巧:先梳理关键信息,再用First, Then, After that, Finally等衔接词串联内容;对话要符合真实交际语气。 五、课后作业 1. 背诵本节课核心健康词汇与写作关键句。 2. 完成一篇60词短文,描述一次你或家人的饮食不适/过敏经历,包含: 1. 事件起因 1. 主要症状 1. 你的应对或医生建议 1. 你的感受与反思 参考答案 自主预习 1. 词汇预热 1. be allergic to 2. throat felt tight 3. check the ingredients 4. take care of myself / look after myself 5. Your health is in your hands. 2. 句型热身 1. felt warm; felt tight 2. to 3. check the ingredients 4. will take better care of / will look after myself better 任务一:阅读信息梳理(参考) Dr Cooper Mark’s responses / notes What happened just now? ate something at my friend’s place; felt strange Do you know what you are allergic to? I’m allergic to peanuts. When did you start to feel sick? In the middle of the meal / After I ate some salad. How much salad did you eat? A little / Not much. What happened after you ate the salad? My face felt warm, and my throat felt tight. You should always check the ingredients of anything you eat or drink. OK / I will / I promise I’ll check ingredients later. 任务二:语法填空答案 1. themselves(enjoy oneself 固定搭配) 2. strange(feel + 形容词,表“感觉……”) 3. nervously(副词修饰动词asked) 4. to(be allergic to 固定搭配) 5. ingredients(复数形式,表“各类配料”) 6. would take(过去将来时,promise后表达未来的承诺) 任务三:写作参考示例 任务A:故事复述(60词) One Saturday, Mark was invited to his friend Julie’s house. He ate some salad with peanuts and started to feel sick. His face felt warm and his throat felt tight. His friends took him to the hospital. Dr Cooper said he was allergic to peanuts and gave him medicine. She told him to check food ingredients. Mark promised to take better care of himself. 任务B:医患对话(续写完成版) Mark: Thank you, Dr Cooper. I feel much better now. Dr Cooper: That’s good. What happened just now? Mark: Well, I ate something at my friend’s place, and then I started to feel strange. Dr Cooper: Do you know what you are allergic to? Mark: Yes, I’m allergic to peanuts. I tasted peanuts in the salad. Dr Cooper: When did you start to feel sick? Mark: After I ate the salad, in the middle of the meal. Dr Cooper: How much salad did you eat? Mark: Not much, just a little. Dr Cooper: What happened after you ate the salad? Mark: My face felt warm, and my throat felt tight. Dr Cooper: You should always check the ingredients of anything you eat or drink. Mark: I see. I’ll check ingredients carefully from now on. Thank you! 写作评价标准 1. 信息完整:包含起因、症状、就医/建议等核心信息(30%) 2. 语言准确:无明显语法错误,正确使用核心词汇与句型(30%) 3. 结构清晰:逻辑连贯,使用衔接词串联内容(20%) 4. 健康意识:体现“关爱自我、科学管理健康”的理念(20%) 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $