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2025-2026学年下学期七年级英语单元知识基础巩固(外研版2024)
Unit 2 Go for it!写作讲练
目录
第一部分 写作主题阐释锁定基础 高效学习
第二部分 必备词句积累用法精析 变式巩固
第三部分 写作强化训练深度优化 扫清盲区
◇Part 01 写作主题阐释
一、写作话题
本单元书面表达的核心是引导七年级学生运用本单元所学的时间、活动、喜好、能力等相关词汇和句式,清晰、连贯地介绍一支运动队,包括队伍的基本信息、成员特点、日常活动、团队精神等内容,既能巩固单元语法知识,又能培养书面表达的逻辑性和规范性,提升英语语言运用能力。
1. 主题内涵
本话题围绕“运动队”展开,核心内涵不仅是简单介绍一支队伍的名称、项目,更在于通过描述队伍的日常训练、成员协作、共同目标等,体现团队合作精神、坚持拼搏的态度,以及对体育运动的热爱。写作时需结合自身认知,选取熟悉的运动队(如班级运动队、学校运动队、简单的体育俱乐部队伍等),用简洁、准确的英语表达真实的感受和认知,避免空洞描述,突出“团队”的核心意义。
2. 审题要点
(1) 明确写作对象:必须是“一支运动队”,不能是单个运动员,可选取班级篮球社、学校足球队、羽毛球小队等,避免偏离主题;
(2) 控制写作篇幅:短文要求简洁,符合七年级书面表达要求,约80-100词,不宜过长或过短;
(3) 紧扣单元重点:必须运用本单元所学的时间表达(如in the morning, after school)、动作词汇(如play, practice, run)、情态动词(如can, must)等,体现单元知识的运用;
(4) 保证逻辑连贯:需按照一定顺序(如队伍基本信息→日常活动→成员特点→团队感受)展开,避免内容杂乱无章;
(5) 语言规范:使用一般现在时,语法正确、句式简单易懂,单词拼写准确,标点使用规范,避免出现复杂句式和生僻词汇。
二、写作框架
本单元书面表达可采用“总-分-总”结构,清晰明了,贴合七年级学生的写作水平,具体框架如下:
1. 开头(总起):简要介绍运动队的名称、运动项目,点明自己与这支队伍的关系(如“我是这支队伍的一员”“这是我们班级的运动队”);
2. 中间(分述):分2-3句话,描述队伍的日常活动、成员特点或训练情况,体现团队协作;
3. 结尾(总结):表达对这支队伍的感受、喜爱,或对队伍的期望。
【示例分析】
(1) 开头示例:My name is Li Ming. I am in our class basketball team. It is a small but great team with 8 members.(译文:我叫李明,我在我们班级的篮球队里。这是一支虽小但很棒的队伍,有8名成员。)—— 点明队伍名称、自己的身份和队伍规模,简洁总起。
(2) 中间示例:We usually practice basketball after school from 4:30 to 5:30. Every member is hard-working. When we play games, we help each other and never give up.(译文:我们通常放学后从4点半练习篮球到5点半。每个成员都很努力,当我们打比赛时,我们互相帮助,从不放弃。)—— 描述日常训练时间和团队协作,贴合单元重点。
(3) 结尾示例:I love my basketball team very much. It makes me happy and teaches me the importance of teamwork.(译文:我非常爱我的篮球队,它让我很开心,也教会了我团队合作的重要性。)—— 表达对队伍的喜爱和收获,总结全文。
◇Part 02 必备词句积累
一、主题词汇
(1) 运动队及运动项目类
basketball team(篮球队)、football team(足球队)、volleyball team(排球队)、badminton team(羽毛球队)、table tennis team(乒乓球队)、sports team(运动队)、club(俱乐部)、team member(队员)、captain(队长)、basketball(篮球)、football(足球)、volleyball(排球)、badminton(羽毛球)、table tennis(乒乓球)、sport(运动)、game(比赛)、match(比赛)。
例句1:Our school has a great football team. 我们学校有一支很棒的足球队。
例句2:Lucy is the captain of our volleyball team. 露西是我们排球队的队长。
(2) 动作及训练类
play(打、踢)、practice(练习)、train(训练)、run(跑步)、jump(跳跃)、pass(传递)、shoot(投篮、射门)、catch(接住)、win(赢得)、lose(输掉)、compete(竞争)、exercise(锻炼)、start(开始)、finish(结束)、join(加入)、take part in(参加)。
例句1:We practice basketball every afternoon after school. 我们每天下午放学后练习篮球。
例句2:He can pass the football very quickly. 他能很快地传球。
(3) 时间及频率类
every day(每天)、every week(每周)、after school(放学后)、in the morning(在早上)、in the afternoon(在下午)、on weekends(在周末)、from...to...(从……到……)、usually(通常)、often(经常)、sometimes(有时)、always(总是)、never(从不)。
例句1:They often play football on weekends. 他们经常在周末踢足球。
例句2:Our training time is from 4:00 to 5:00 p.m. 我们的训练时间是下午4点到5点。
(4) 形容词及感受类
great(很棒的)、excellent(优秀的)、hard-working(努力的)、friendly(友好的)、strong(强壮的)、fast(快的)、happy(开心的)、excited(兴奋的)、proud(自豪的)、brave(勇敢的)、cooperative(合作的)、wonderful(精彩的)、fun(有趣的)、important(重要的)。
例句1:All the team members are hard-working and friendly. 所有的队员都努力又友好。
例句2:I am proud of my sports team. 我为我的运动队感到自豪。
(5) 其他相关词汇
teamwork(团队合作)、goal(目标)、hope(希望)、dream(梦想)、friendship(友谊)、effort(努力)、skill(技能)、energy(精力)、together(一起)、each other(互相)、help(帮助)、support(支持)。
例句1:Teamwork is very important for a sports team. 团队合作对一支运动队来说非常重要。
例句2:We help each other and support one another in the team. 我们在队伍里互相帮助、互相支持。
二、主题句式
(1) 介绍队伍基本信息
1. This is our school sports team. 这是我们学校的运动队。
2. Our team is a small but great team. 我们的队伍是一支虽小但很棒的队伍。
3. There are...members in our sports team. 我们的运动队有……名成员。
4. My sports team is called... 我的运动队叫做……。
5. I am a member of the...team. 我是……队的一员。
6. Our team’s captain is... 我们队的队长是……。
7. We play...in our sports team. 我们在运动队里打/踢……。
(2) 描述日常活动及训练
8. We usually practice...after school. 我们通常放学后练习……。
9. Our training time is from...to...every day. 我们每天的训练时间是从……到……。
10. We often play...on weekends. 我们经常在周末打/踢……。
11. Sometimes we have a match with other teams. 有时我们会和其他队伍打比赛。
12. Every member of the team works hard. 队伍里的每个成员都很努力。
13. We start our training at...in the afternoon. 我们下午……开始训练。
14. We finish our practice at... 我们……结束练习。
15. We often run and jump to practice our skills. 我们经常跑步、跳跃来练习我们的技能。
16. When we practice, we help each other. 当我们练习时,我们互相帮助。
(3) 表达能力及特点
17. I can play...very well. 我能把……打得/踢得很好。
18. Our captain can shoot basketball very accurately. 我们的队长投篮非常准。
19. He/She is good at playing... 他/她擅长打/踢……。
20. All of us are strong and energetic. 我们所有人都强壮又有精力。
21. Our team is very cooperative. 我们的队伍非常有合作精神。
22. She/He runs very fast in the team. 她/他在队伍里跑得非常快。
23. We can work together to win the match. 我们可以一起努力赢得比赛。
(4) 表达感受及期望
24. I love my sports team very much. 我非常爱我的运动队。
25. It is fun to play with my team members. 和我的队员们一起玩很有趣。
26. I am proud of our team. 我为我们的队伍感到自豪。
27. I hope our team can win more matches. 我希望我们的队伍能赢得更多比赛。
28. Playing in the sports team makes me happy. 在运动队里打球/踢球让我很开心。
29. I learn the importance of teamwork from the team. 我从队伍里学到了团队合作的重要性。
30. I want to stay with my team forever. 我想永远和我的队伍在一起。
31. Our team will become better and better. 我们的队伍会变得越来越好。
巩|固|练|习
根据提示翻译句子
1.我们的篮球队有10名队员。(there be句型,basketball team, member)
2.我们每天下午4点到5点练习足球。(practice, football, from...to...)
3.我的队长擅长打篮球。(captain, be good at, play basketball)
4.我为我们的运动队感到自豪。(be proud of, sports team)
5.团队合作对一支运动队来说非常重要。(teamwork, important, sports team)
范|文|例|析
My name is Tom. I am a member of our class basketball team. There are 8 members in our team, and our captain is Jim. He is good at playing basketball and very friendly to us.
We usually practice basketball after school from 4:30 to 5:30 every day. Every member works hard. When we play matches, we help each other and never give up. Playing with my team members makes me happy.
I love my class basketball team very much. It teaches me teamwork and makes me stronger. I hope our team can win more matches in the future.
【范文分析】
1. 结构完整:严格遵循“总-分-总”框架,开头介绍队伍名称、自己的身份、队伍规模和队长;中间描述日常训练时间、队员态度和团队协作;结尾表达对队伍的喜爱和期望,逻辑连贯。
2. 词汇运用:灵活运用了本单元及话题相关词汇,如basketball team, team member, captain, practice, help each other, teamwork等,词汇丰富且准确,符合七年级学生水平。
3. 句式规范:使用了简单句、并列句,句式多样且易懂,如There be句型、when引导的时间状语从句、make sb. + adj. 结构等,贴合单元语法重点,语法正确,无拼写和标点错误。
4. 主题突出:围绕“班级篮球队”展开,突出了团队合作和队员的努力,表达了真实的感受,符合写作话题要求,篇幅控制在100词左右,符合七年级书面表达规范。
【优化策略】
1. 词汇优化:避免重复使用同一词汇,如描述“努力”时,可交替使用hard-working、work hard;描述“喜欢”时,可使用love、like、enjoy,同时优先使用本单元所学词汇,既巩固知识,又让文章更丰富。
2. 句式优化:避免通篇使用简单句,可适当加入and、but、when等连词,连接两个简单句,使句子更连贯,如“We practice hard. We help each other.”可优化为“We practice hard and help each other.”;同时合理运用There be句型、情态动词can等,让句式更多样。
3. 内容优化:避免空洞描述,加入具体细节,如介绍队伍时,可补充“队伍的运动项目”“训练的具体时间”;描述队员时,可补充“队员的特长”,让文章更生动、真实,如“Our captain is Jim. He is good at shooting.”比“Our captain is Jim. He is good at basketball.”更具体。
4. 逻辑优化:写作前先梳理思路,按照“开头-中间-结尾”的顺序,给每部分确定1-2个核心内容,避免内容杂乱;中间分述部分,可按照“训练情况→队员特点→团队协作”的顺序展开,让逻辑更清晰。
5. 规范优化:注意一般现在时的正确使用,主语是第三人称单数时,动词要加-s/-es;检查单词拼写和标点符号,避免低级错误;控制篇幅,确保在80-100词之间,避免过长或过短。
6. 情感优化:结尾部分可适当加入自己的真实感受,如“我为队伍自豪”“我学到了团队合作的重要性”,让文章更有温度,贴合主题内涵,避免结尾生硬。
◇Part 03 写作强化训练
提|升|练|习
1.假如你是李辉,你在某英文网站上看到一则有关分享运动经历的征文。请以“An Unforgettable Competition”为题结合以下要点写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1)语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2)不可出现真实姓名与学校名称;
3)词数70左右。
An Unforgettable Competition
As we all know, sports can not only make us fit, but also bring us some unforgettable memories. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保障,在日常生活中,我们也应加强锻炼。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack发来一封电子邮件, 想了解你平时的运动生活。请你根据Jack提出的问题给他回一封电子邮件, 分享一下你较常做的运动项目以及多久会进行此项运动, 并谈论一下运动的重要性。
提示词语:keep fit, practice, at the start, work out, important, interesting…
提示问题:1. What sport or exercise do you do most often?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How often do you do it?
4. What do you think of playing sport?
注意: 1. 语句通顺,条理清晰,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 内容必须包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名,不少于80字。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)Dear Jack,
I’m happy to share with you about my sport life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.随着“全民健身”国家战略的深入实施,全民运动的热情日益高涨。假如你是李华,你校英文报刊正在举行以“Go for It: My Sports Story”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容,用英文写一篇短文投稿,分享你的运动故事。
要求:1.文章须包含提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于50词 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Go for It: My Sports Story
I’m Li Hua and I would like to share my sports story with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.习近平总书记在2024年新年贺词中说:“世事变迁,合作共赢始终是硬道理。”本月校刊英语专栏以“Teamwork”为主题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,分享自己的一次团队活动经历,如体育运动,合作学习等,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数80左右。
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5.Teens around the world是一个国际青少年交流网站,近日有人在交流网站上发布了一个帖子,假设你是大明,阅读下面原帖后,用英语回帖。
Teens around the world
Subject: sports heroes
Hey, guys. Everyone has his own favourite sports team or sports star. What about yours? Do you know anything about it/him/her? Why do you like it/him/her? Please share yours with us.
Amy, America
注意:
1.70词左右;
2.不要出现本人信息;
3.禁止抄袭试卷中的语篇内容。
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Daming, China
6.英语课上老师要求以“Sports Make Us Better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。
Frank: I like bike riding best. It makes me…
Cindy: My favourite sport is volleyball. I often play it with my friends…
Li Hua:…
要点:
1. 介绍小组成员各自喜欢的运动;
2. 谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70~80(开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数)。
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One.
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That’s all. Thank you.
7.学校英文网站正在开展以“体质健康提升”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Improve My Physical Health”为题,写一篇投稿谈谈你在体质健康提升方面的做法和理由。
提示:
(1)What kind of exercise do you usually do?
(2)How do you do exercise?
(3)What else can help you improve your physical health? Give your reasons.
注意:
(1)词数80个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。
How to Improve My Physical Health
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to physical health. For me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.假如你是李华,两年前你加入了学校篮球队。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文,向校英语广播电台投稿,介绍你校篮球队的训练情况。
内容要点:
(1)每星期六早上,你们7点开始训练;
(2)你们尽可能早到学校操场,以便有更多时间热身;
(3)去年你们输了很多场比赛,因为没有刻苦训练;
(4)今年你们训练得更认真了,更有机会获胜;
(5)教练对你们很满意,你们作为一个团队,比赛打得更好了;
(6)你希望……
要求:
(1)词数不少于80;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I joined our school basketball team two years ago. We _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.你的英国笔友 Ruby 从你发的朋友圈得知你参加了你市的五公里“健康跑”,她给你点了赞并发来微信向你询问相关情况。请你根据以下提示写一段话,回复她的微信。
1.要点:
1) How did you feel at the beginning of the race?
2) Did you finish the race?
3) What did you learn from the race?
2.要求:
1)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;
2)包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3)词数100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Ruby! Thanks for giving me a like. Let me share with you my experience of running the race in my city. It was a 5-kilometre-long “health run”!
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10.假定你是班级篮球队队长李辉,下个月你校将举行篮球比赛。请给你的队友Eric写封邮件告知此事。要点如下:
(1)比赛信息;
(2)赛前准备;
(3)期待Eric加入。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is it going? ________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
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2025-2026学年下学期七年级英语单元知识基础巩固(外研版2024)
Unit 2 Go for it!写作讲练
目录
第一部分 写作主题阐释锁定基础 高效学习
第二部分 必备词句积累用法精析 变式巩固
第三部分 写作强化训练深度优化 扫清盲区
◇Part 01 写作主题阐释
一、写作话题
本单元书面表达的核心是引导七年级学生运用本单元所学的时间、活动、喜好、能力等相关词汇和句式,清晰、连贯地介绍一支运动队,包括队伍的基本信息、成员特点、日常活动、团队精神等内容,既能巩固单元语法知识,又能培养书面表达的逻辑性和规范性,提升英语语言运用能力。
1. 主题内涵
本话题围绕“运动队”展开,核心内涵不仅是简单介绍一支队伍的名称、项目,更在于通过描述队伍的日常训练、成员协作、共同目标等,体现团队合作精神、坚持拼搏的态度,以及对体育运动的热爱。写作时需结合自身认知,选取熟悉的运动队(如班级运动队、学校运动队、简单的体育俱乐部队伍等),用简洁、准确的英语表达真实的感受和认知,避免空洞描述,突出“团队”的核心意义。
2. 审题要点
(1) 明确写作对象:必须是“一支运动队”,不能是单个运动员,可选取班级篮球社、学校足球队、羽毛球小队等,避免偏离主题;
(2) 控制写作篇幅:短文要求简洁,符合七年级书面表达要求,约80-100词,不宜过长或过短;
(3) 紧扣单元重点:必须运用本单元所学的时间表达(如in the morning, after school)、动作词汇(如play, practice, run)、情态动词(如can, must)等,体现单元知识的运用;
(4) 保证逻辑连贯:需按照一定顺序(如队伍基本信息→日常活动→成员特点→团队感受)展开,避免内容杂乱无章;
(5) 语言规范:使用一般现在时,语法正确、句式简单易懂,单词拼写准确,标点使用规范,避免出现复杂句式和生僻词汇。
二、写作框架
本单元书面表达可采用“总-分-总”结构,清晰明了,贴合七年级学生的写作水平,具体框架如下:
1. 开头(总起):简要介绍运动队的名称、运动项目,点明自己与这支队伍的关系(如“我是这支队伍的一员”“这是我们班级的运动队”);
2. 中间(分述):分2-3句话,描述队伍的日常活动、成员特点或训练情况,体现团队协作;
3. 结尾(总结):表达对这支队伍的感受、喜爱,或对队伍的期望。
【示例分析】
(1) 开头示例:My name is Li Ming. I am in our class basketball team. It is a small but great team with 8 members.(译文:我叫李明,我在我们班级的篮球队里。这是一支虽小但很棒的队伍,有8名成员。)—— 点明队伍名称、自己的身份和队伍规模,简洁总起。
(2) 中间示例:We usually practice basketball after school from 4:30 to 5:30. Every member is hard-working. When we play games, we help each other and never give up.(译文:我们通常放学后从4点半练习篮球到5点半。每个成员都很努力,当我们打比赛时,我们互相帮助,从不放弃。)—— 描述日常训练时间和团队协作,贴合单元重点。
(3) 结尾示例:I love my basketball team very much. It makes me happy and teaches me the importance of teamwork.(译文:我非常爱我的篮球队,它让我很开心,也教会了我团队合作的重要性。)—— 表达对队伍的喜爱和收获,总结全文。
◇Part 02 必备词句积累
一、主题词汇
(1) 运动队及运动项目类
basketball team(篮球队)、football team(足球队)、volleyball team(排球队)、badminton team(羽毛球队)、table tennis team(乒乓球队)、sports team(运动队)、club(俱乐部)、team member(队员)、captain(队长)、basketball(篮球)、football(足球)、volleyball(排球)、badminton(羽毛球)、table tennis(乒乓球)、sport(运动)、game(比赛)、match(比赛)。
例句1:Our school has a great football team. 我们学校有一支很棒的足球队。
例句2:Lucy is the captain of our volleyball team. 露西是我们排球队的队长。
(2) 动作及训练类
play(打、踢)、practice(练习)、train(训练)、run(跑步)、jump(跳跃)、pass(传递)、shoot(投篮、射门)、catch(接住)、win(赢得)、lose(输掉)、compete(竞争)、exercise(锻炼)、start(开始)、finish(结束)、join(加入)、take part in(参加)。
例句1:We practice basketball every afternoon after school. 我们每天下午放学后练习篮球。
例句2:He can pass the football very quickly. 他能很快地传球。
(3) 时间及频率类
every day(每天)、every week(每周)、after school(放学后)、in the morning(在早上)、in the afternoon(在下午)、on weekends(在周末)、from...to...(从……到……)、usually(通常)、often(经常)、sometimes(有时)、always(总是)、never(从不)。
例句1:They often play football on weekends. 他们经常在周末踢足球。
例句2:Our training time is from 4:00 to 5:00 p.m. 我们的训练时间是下午4点到5点。
(4) 形容词及感受类
great(很棒的)、excellent(优秀的)、hard-working(努力的)、friendly(友好的)、strong(强壮的)、fast(快的)、happy(开心的)、excited(兴奋的)、proud(自豪的)、brave(勇敢的)、cooperative(合作的)、wonderful(精彩的)、fun(有趣的)、important(重要的)。
例句1:All the team members are hard-working and friendly. 所有的队员都努力又友好。
例句2:I am proud of my sports team. 我为我的运动队感到自豪。
(5) 其他相关词汇
teamwork(团队合作)、goal(目标)、hope(希望)、dream(梦想)、friendship(友谊)、effort(努力)、skill(技能)、energy(精力)、together(一起)、each other(互相)、help(帮助)、support(支持)。
例句1:Teamwork is very important for a sports team. 团队合作对一支运动队来说非常重要。
例句2:We help each other and support one another in the team. 我们在队伍里互相帮助、互相支持。
二、主题句式
(1) 介绍队伍基本信息
1. This is our school sports team. 这是我们学校的运动队。
2. Our team is a small but great team. 我们的队伍是一支虽小但很棒的队伍。
3. There are...members in our sports team. 我们的运动队有……名成员。
4. My sports team is called... 我的运动队叫做……。
5. I am a member of the...team. 我是……队的一员。
6. Our team’s captain is... 我们队的队长是……。
7. We play...in our sports team. 我们在运动队里打/踢……。
(2) 描述日常活动及训练
8. We usually practice...after school. 我们通常放学后练习……。
9. Our training time is from...to...every day. 我们每天的训练时间是从……到……。
10. We often play...on weekends. 我们经常在周末打/踢……。
11. Sometimes we have a match with other teams. 有时我们会和其他队伍打比赛。
12. Every member of the team works hard. 队伍里的每个成员都很努力。
13. We start our training at...in the afternoon. 我们下午……开始训练。
14. We finish our practice at... 我们……结束练习。
15. We often run and jump to practice our skills. 我们经常跑步、跳跃来练习我们的技能。
16. When we practice, we help each other. 当我们练习时,我们互相帮助。
(3) 表达能力及特点
17. I can play...very well. 我能把……打得/踢得很好。
18. Our captain can shoot basketball very accurately. 我们的队长投篮非常准。
19. He/She is good at playing... 他/她擅长打/踢……。
20. All of us are strong and energetic. 我们所有人都强壮又有精力。
21. Our team is very cooperative. 我们的队伍非常有合作精神。
22. She/He runs very fast in the team. 她/他在队伍里跑得非常快。
23. We can work together to win the match. 我们可以一起努力赢得比赛。
(4) 表达感受及期望
24. I love my sports team very much. 我非常爱我的运动队。
25. It is fun to play with my team members. 和我的队员们一起玩很有趣。
26. I am proud of our team. 我为我们的队伍感到自豪。
27. I hope our team can win more matches. 我希望我们的队伍能赢得更多比赛。
28. Playing in the sports team makes me happy. 在运动队里打球/踢球让我很开心。
29. I learn the importance of teamwork from the team. 我从队伍里学到了团队合作的重要性。
30. I want to stay with my team forever. 我想永远和我的队伍在一起。
31. Our team will become better and better. 我们的队伍会变得越来越好。
巩|固|练|习
根据提示翻译句子
1.我们的篮球队有10名队员。(there be句型,basketball team, member)
2.我们每天下午4点到5点练习足球。(practice, football, from...to...)
3.我的队长擅长打篮球。(captain, be good at, play basketball)
4.我为我们的运动队感到自豪。(be proud of, sports team)
5.团队合作对一支运动队来说非常重要。(teamwork, important, sports team)
答案与解析
1. There are ten members in our basketball team.
【解析】考查there be句型的用法,“有”用there be,主语ten members是复数,be动词用are;“篮球队”是basketball team,“队员”是member,此处用复数形式members。
2. We practice football from 4 o’clock to 5 o’clock every afternoon.
【解析】考查practice的用法,practice后接动词原形;“从……到……”用from...to...,“每天下午”是every afternoon,时态用一般现在时,主语we后接动词原形practice。
3. My captain is good at playing basketball.
【解析】考查be good at的用法,be good at后接动词-ing形式;“队长”是captain,“打篮球”是play basketball,play变为playing;主语my captain是单数,be动词用is。
4. I am proud of our sports team.
【解析】考查be proud of的固定搭配,意为“为……感到自豪”;主语I后接be动词am,“我们的运动队”是our sports team。
5. Teamwork is very important for a sports team.
【解析】考查形容词important的用法,“非常重要”是very important;“对……来说”用for,“团队合作”是teamwork,作主语时视为单数,be动词用is。
范|文|例|析
My name is Tom. I am a member of our class basketball team. There are 8 members in our team, and our captain is Jim. He is good at playing basketball and very friendly to us.
We usually practice basketball after school from 4:30 to 5:30 every day. Every member works hard. When we play matches, we help each other and never give up. Playing with my team members makes me happy.
I love my class basketball team very much. It teaches me teamwork and makes me stronger. I hope our team can win more matches in the future.
【范文分析】
1. 结构完整:严格遵循“总-分-总”框架,开头介绍队伍名称、自己的身份、队伍规模和队长;中间描述日常训练时间、队员态度和团队协作;结尾表达对队伍的喜爱和期望,逻辑连贯。
2. 词汇运用:灵活运用了本单元及话题相关词汇,如basketball team, team member, captain, practice, help each other, teamwork等,词汇丰富且准确,符合七年级学生水平。
3. 句式规范:使用了简单句、并列句,句式多样且易懂,如There be句型、when引导的时间状语从句、make sb. + adj. 结构等,贴合单元语法重点,语法正确,无拼写和标点错误。
4. 主题突出:围绕“班级篮球队”展开,突出了团队合作和队员的努力,表达了真实的感受,符合写作话题要求,篇幅控制在100词左右,符合七年级书面表达规范。
【优化策略】
1. 词汇优化:避免重复使用同一词汇,如描述“努力”时,可交替使用hard-working、work hard;描述“喜欢”时,可使用love、like、enjoy,同时优先使用本单元所学词汇,既巩固知识,又让文章更丰富。
2. 句式优化:避免通篇使用简单句,可适当加入and、but、when等连词,连接两个简单句,使句子更连贯,如“We practice hard. We help each other.”可优化为“We practice hard and help each other.”;同时合理运用There be句型、情态动词can等,让句式更多样。
3. 内容优化:避免空洞描述,加入具体细节,如介绍队伍时,可补充“队伍的运动项目”“训练的具体时间”;描述队员时,可补充“队员的特长”,让文章更生动、真实,如“Our captain is Jim. He is good at shooting.”比“Our captain is Jim. He is good at basketball.”更具体。
4. 逻辑优化:写作前先梳理思路,按照“开头-中间-结尾”的顺序,给每部分确定1-2个核心内容,避免内容杂乱;中间分述部分,可按照“训练情况→队员特点→团队协作”的顺序展开,让逻辑更清晰。
5. 规范优化:注意一般现在时的正确使用,主语是第三人称单数时,动词要加-s/-es;检查单词拼写和标点符号,避免低级错误;控制篇幅,确保在80-100词之间,避免过长或过短。
6. 情感优化:结尾部分可适当加入自己的真实感受,如“我为队伍自豪”“我学到了团队合作的重要性”,让文章更有温度,贴合主题内涵,避免结尾生硬。
◇Part 03 写作强化训练
提|升|练|习
1.假如你是李辉,你在某英文网站上看到一则有关分享运动经历的征文。请以“An Unforgettable Competition”为题结合以下要点写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1)语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2)不可出现真实姓名与学校名称;
3)词数70左右。
An Unforgettable Competition
As we all know, sports can not only make us fit, but also bring us some unforgettable memories. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保障,在日常生活中,我们也应加强锻炼。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack发来一封电子邮件, 想了解你平时的运动生活。请你根据Jack提出的问题给他回一封电子邮件, 分享一下你较常做的运动项目以及多久会进行此项运动, 并谈论一下运动的重要性。
提示词语:keep fit, practice, at the start, work out, important, interesting…
提示问题:1. What sport or exercise do you do most often?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How often do you do it?
4. What do you think of playing sport?
注意: 1. 语句通顺,条理清晰,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 内容必须包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名,不少于80字。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)Dear Jack,
I’m happy to share with you about my sport life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.随着“全民健身”国家战略的深入实施,全民运动的热情日益高涨。假如你是李华,你校英文报刊正在举行以“Go for It: My Sports Story”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容,用英文写一篇短文投稿,分享你的运动故事。
要求:1.文章须包含提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于50词 (开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Go for It: My Sports Story
I’m Li Hua and I would like to share my sports story with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.习近平总书记在2024年新年贺词中说:“世事变迁,合作共赢始终是硬道理。”本月校刊英语专栏以“Teamwork”为主题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,分享自己的一次团队活动经历,如体育运动,合作学习等,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含以上提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数80左右。
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5.Teens around the world是一个国际青少年交流网站,近日有人在交流网站上发布了一个帖子,假设你是大明,阅读下面原帖后,用英语回帖。
Teens around the world
Subject: sports heroes
Hey, guys. Everyone has his own favourite sports team or sports star. What about yours? Do you know anything about it/him/her? Why do you like it/him/her? Please share yours with us.
Amy, America
注意:
1.70词左右;
2.不要出现本人信息;
3.禁止抄袭试卷中的语篇内容。
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Daming, China
6.英语课上老师要求以“Sports Make Us Better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。
Frank: I like bike riding best. It makes me…
Cindy: My favourite sport is volleyball. I often play it with my friends…
Li Hua:…
要点:
1. 介绍小组成员各自喜欢的运动;
2. 谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70~80(开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数)。
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One.
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That’s all. Thank you.
7.学校英文网站正在开展以“体质健康提升”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Improve My Physical Health”为题,写一篇投稿谈谈你在体质健康提升方面的做法和理由。
提示:
(1)What kind of exercise do you usually do?
(2)How do you do exercise?
(3)What else can help you improve your physical health? Give your reasons.
注意:
(1)词数80个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。
How to Improve My Physical Health
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to physical health. For me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.假如你是李华,两年前你加入了学校篮球队。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文,向校英语广播电台投稿,介绍你校篮球队的训练情况。
内容要点:
(1)每星期六早上,你们7点开始训练;
(2)你们尽可能早到学校操场,以便有更多时间热身;
(3)去年你们输了很多场比赛,因为没有刻苦训练;
(4)今年你们训练得更认真了,更有机会获胜;
(5)教练对你们很满意,你们作为一个团队,比赛打得更好了;
(6)你希望……
要求:
(1)词数不少于80;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I joined our school basketball team two years ago. We _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.你的英国笔友 Ruby 从你发的朋友圈得知你参加了你市的五公里“健康跑”,她给你点了赞并发来微信向你询问相关情况。请你根据以下提示写一段话,回复她的微信。
1.要点:
1) How did you feel at the beginning of the race?
2) Did you finish the race?
3) What did you learn from the race?
2.要求:
1)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确;
2)包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3)词数100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Ruby! Thanks for giving me a like. Let me share with you my experience of running the race in my city. It was a 5-kilometre-long “health run”!
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.假定你是班级篮球队队长李辉,下个月你校将举行篮球比赛。请给你的队友Eric写封邮件告知此事。要点如下:
(1)比赛信息;
(2)赛前准备;
(3)期待Eric加入。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Eric,
How is it going? ________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
参考答案
1.
An Unforgettable Competition
As we all know, sports can not only make us fit, but also bring us some unforgettable memories. Last term, I took part in the school 1,000-meter race. It was one of the most challenging experiences I have ever had. At first, I felt nervous. During the race, I tried my best. With classmates’ cheers, which gave me great strength, I kept running. Finally, I got the third place.
I was excited and proud of this achievement. This competition taught me that persistence brings success. I will never forget this meaningful lesson.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态是一般过去时和现在完成时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出,开门见山,引出话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“参加的运动比赛”和“参加的时间和地点”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,书写结语,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know众所周知
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③took part in参加
④one of………的其中之一
⑤keep doing sth继续做某事
⑥be excited to对……感到兴奋
⑦be proud of对……感到自豪
⑧teach sb sth教某人某事
[高分句型]
①As we all know, sports can not only make us fit, but also bring us some unforgettable memories. (并列句)
②It was one of the most challenging experiences I have ever had. (省略that的定语从句)
③With classmates’ cheers, which gave me great strength, I kept running. (which引导的定语从句)
④This competition taught me that persistence brings success. (that引导的宾语从句)
2.
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to share with you about my sport life. I often play basketball, which is my favorite sport.
I like basketball for several reasons. Firstly, it’s a great way to keep fit. Running, jumping and shooting during the game help me build a strong body. Secondly, it’s really interesting. I enjoy the feeling of making a perfect shot and the excitement of competing with others. Additionally, through playing basketball, I’ve made many friends with the same interest.
I usually play basketball three times a week, every Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday afternoon. Each time, I play for about two hours.
In my opinion, playing sports is extremely important. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic in study. Moreover, it can improve our teamwork ability and communication skills. So, no matter how busy we are, we should spare some time for sports.
What about your sports life? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件。
② 时态:时态主要为 “一般现在时”。
③ 提示:根据提示写作。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:承接给出的开头,点明自己最喜欢的运动是打篮球;
第二步:介绍自己喜欢打篮球的原因;
第三步:介绍自己打篮球的频率;
第四步:介绍自己对进行体育运动的看法;
第五步:期待收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②competing with others与他人竞争
③made many friends交了很多朋友
④In my opinion在我看来
⑤looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I often play basketball, which is my favorite sport. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②So, no matter how busy we are, we should spare some time for sports. (no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
3.
Go for It: My Sports Story I’m Li Hua and I would like to share my sports story with you. My favourite sport is running. I like running because it helps me keep fit. When I run in the park, I can make friends with other runners. It’s also a great hobby and helps me relax. Every time I run, I feel happy. Running makes me confident, and it’s really fun. Now I’m strong and healthy. I love running!
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意文章必须包括上述写作要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己喜欢的运动是跑步;
第二步,介绍为什么喜欢跑步;
第三步,跑步给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help me relax帮助我放松
②feel happy感觉快乐
[高分句型]
①I like running because it helps me keep fit. (because引导原因状语从句)
②When I run in the park, I can make friends with other runners. (when引导时间状语从句)
4.
Last Sunday morning, my friends and I played a football match on the school playground.
At first, my team kept on making mistakes. Li Xian failed to kick the ball to Wang Jun. Hao Le and Ma Xiao just ran around and didn’t pass the ball. During the break, I held a meeting as the team head. I said, “Boys, we must play as a team. Football is a team sport,” Then we started supporting each other. At last we won.
It was a wonderful experience! We were happy with our teamwork.
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:以一般过去时为主;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明活动背景(时间、地点、事件);
第二步,描述团队合作的过程;
第三步,总结团队合作的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① at first 起初
② fail to do 未能做
③ each other 互相
[高分句型]
Hao Le and Ma Xiao just ran around and didn’t pass the ball.(并列句)
5.
My favorite sports star is Su Bingtian from China. He’s a sprinter. In 2021, he ran 100 meters in 9.83 seconds, breaking the Asian record! He’s also the first Asian to reach the Olympic 100m final in over 30 years. I admire him because he never stops trying, even when things are tough. His hard work shows that with effort, nothing is impossible. He inspires me to push my limits. What about others?
Daming, China
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明你最喜欢的体育明星是谁;
第二步,你所了解的事迹;
第三步,阐述你喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①break the record打破记录
②admire敬仰
[高分句型]
I admire him because he never stops trying, even when things are tough.(because引导的原因状语从句)
6.
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One.
I will share our results with you. Frank loves bike riding best. By riding bikes, he becomes stronger. Cindy’s favourite sport is volleyball. She often plays volleyball with her friends. By playing volleyball, she becomes more confident and healthy. I like playing basketball. When I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends. Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of teamwork and never giving up.
That’s all. Thank you.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题介绍组内交流结果;
第二步,细节介绍组员们喜爱的运动以及运动带来的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①share...with...与某人分享……
②By通过
③the spirit of teamwork团队精神
[高分句型]
①When I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends.(时间状语从句)
②Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of teamwork and never giving up.(动名词做主语)
7.
How to Improve My Physical Health
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to physical health. For me, I have some useful ways to keep fit.
First, I usually go running and playing basketball. I run for 20 minutes every morning in the park, which can make my heart stronger. After school, I play basketball with classmates twice a week.
Besides exercise, I also have a healthy diet. I eat more vegetables and fruits and less junk food, because they provide enough nutrition for my body. Also, I sleep 8 hours every day to let my body rest well. These habits really help me stay healthy.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,点明自己有提升体质的实用方法;
第二步,具体阐述自己做的运动以及健康饮食和充足睡眠;
第三步,书写结语,总结这些习惯带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit 保持健康
②healthy diet健康饮食
③stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①I run for 20 minutes every morning in the park, which can make my heart stronger.(定语从句)
②I eat more vegetables and fruits and less junk food, because they provide enough nutrition for my body.(原因状语从句)
8.
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I joined our school basketball team two years ago. We start our training at seven every Saturday morning. And we arrive at the school playground as early as possible so that we can have more time to warm up.
Last year, we lost many matches because we didn’t practice hard. But this year, we want to do better, so we train more carefully. And we have a better chance of winning. Our coach is very pleased with us and we play better as a team now.
I hope we can make greater progress this year. And we feel more confident to win more games.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“篮球队训练情况”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“训练日常、球队去年和今天的状况、表达希望”等方面进行介绍;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①arrive at到达
②warm up热身
③be pleased with满意
[高分句型]
①And we arrive at the school playground as early as possible so that we can have more time to warm up.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②I hope we can make greater progress this year.(省略that的宾语从句)
9.
Hi, Ruby! Thanks for giving me a like. Let me share with you my experience of running the race in my city. It was a 5-kilometre-long “health run”!
At the beginning, I felt nervous but excited with hundreds of runners around me. Later, with the encouragement of my family, I gained confidence. I successfully finished the race! Though I got tired after 3km, I kept going by cheering myself on.
From this race, I learned that perseverance is the key to success. The feeling when crossing the finish line was amazing! Now I understand why people love running — it’s not just about health, but also about challenging yourself. Maybe you can join me next time!
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己参加了“健康跑”的项目;
第二步,介绍自己参加活动的具体情况,包括最初的感受以及是否完成了跑步;
第三步,介绍自己从这次活动中得到的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① hundreds of成百上千
② keep doing 坚持做某事
③ the finish line终点线
[高分句型]
① Though I got tired after 3km, I kept going by cheering myself on.(Though引导的让步状语从句)
② Now I understand why people love running(why引导的宾语从句)
10.
Dear Eric,
How is it going? I’m writing to tell you that our school will hold a basketball competition next month. It will take place in the school gym on November 20th, and we’ll compete against teams from other classes. This is a great chance to show our teamwork!
To prepare the game, we’ll have practice sessions every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday after school. Please bring your sports shoes and water bottle. Also, let’s review game strategies together.
We really hope you can join us. Your skills and energy are important for the team. Let’s work hard and aim for victory!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,并告诉对方学校将举行的篮球比赛的相关信息;
第二步,介绍赛前的准备工作;
第三步,表示期待对方的加入,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行
②compete against sb与某人竞争对抗,与某人比赛
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to tell you that our school will hold a basketball competition next month.(that引导的宾语从句)
②This is a great chance to show our teamwork!(动词不定式作定语)
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