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Integration D
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China's top attractions
China has _________ (attraction) for everyone!
If you love _____________(主题公园), you can go to Window of the World in Shenzhen or _____________(海洋公园) in HongKong. At these attractions, you can
__________________________ (乘坐许多刺激的过山车)。
China also offers seaside fun, ____________________(进行水上运动) in cities like Sanya or Qingdao.
For places of ______________(自然美景), travellers can go to ________________(黄山)
or Jiuzhaigou Valley. There, they can enjoy the landscape.
_______________(古典园林) are also a great choice. The gardens in places like Suzhou and Yangzhou are ________________. (安静又漂亮)
Finally, if you are interested in ___________________(艺术和文化), you can go to Beijing or Shanghai. There are so many museums, and the ____________(艺术品) are amazing!
attractions
theme parks
Ocean Park
go on many exciting rides
doing water sports
natural beauty
Mount Huangshan
Classical gardens
quiet and beautiful
art and culture
artworks
Revision
China's top attractions
Yan'an ____________________(坐落在...的岸边) the Yanhe River, with hills around it. It is a place full of history.
Yan'an was the base of the Communist Party of China (___________________) and become_________________(...的象征) the Chinese people's spirit of _______________
(永不言弃) ________ that difficult period.
If you want to know more about the history of the Communist Party of China, I will
___________(推荐) Yan'an Revolutionary Memorial Hall(_______________________).
It is a large museum with a rich collection of _____________(history) records including thousands of photographs. There you will be able to learn about our _________________
during hard times. ____________________________________________.(对我们来说记住那些英雄是非常重要的。)
sits on the banks of
中国共产党
a symbol of
never giving up
during
recommend
延安革命纪念馆
historical
heroes' great efforts
It is important for us to remember those heroes .
Brainstorm and answer
Lead in
When introducing a popular tourist attraction, what key points should you mention?
a tourist attraction
name
type
location
special
features
things to see
things to do
...
Complete the survey about the attraction you are going to write about.
A popular attraction for visitors
1 What is the name of the attraction?
__________________________________________
2 Which type of attraction is it?
Beach □ Mountain □
Classical garden □ Forest □
Theme park □ Zoo □
Museum □ Other: □
3 Where is it?
__________________________________________
Nanjing Hongshan Forest Zoo.
In Nanjing
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4 What is special about it?
__________________________________________
5 What can you see or do there?
__________________________________________
It is famous for being a kind zoo that cares a lot about animals. It is the first zoo in China to stop animal shows and feeding, letting animals live more naturally.
We can watch pandas, giraffes and many other animals living in large, natural homes. We can also learn how to protect them through fun activities and exhibitions.
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Classical gardens of Suzhou
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Classical gardens of Suzhou
The classical gardens of Suzhou have long been a popular attraction for visitors from home and abroad. These beautiful gardens have a long history and are a cultural treasure of China.
These gardens are special because their designs show off the beauty of natural landscapes. The buildings there have light grey roofs and white walls so the gardens look like Chinese landscape paintings. There are beautiful rocks, ponds, hills and trees. A walk through the gardens will make you feel relaxed. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you. What's more, the patterns and carvings on the doors and windows are fantastic to look at, simple but unusual.
The classical gardens of Suzhou are a model for other gardens all over China. They express traditional Chinese culture, art and design all in one.
Read Daniel's article about the classical gardens of Suzhou
and summarize the main idea of each paragraph.
What are the gardens?
Introduction
Main body
What makes them special?
Conclusion
Why are they so important?
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What is the name of the attraction?
Which type of attraction is it?
Where is it?
What’s the value of it?
What is special about it?
What can you see or do there?
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Classical gardens of Suzhou
The classical gardens of Suzhou have long been a popular attraction for visitors from home and abroad. These beautiful gardens have a long history and are a cultural treasure of China.
These gardens are special because their designs show off the beauty of natural landscapes. The buildings there have light grey roofs and white walls so the gardens look like Chinese landscape paintings. There are beautiful rocks, ponds, hills and trees. A walk through the gardens will make you feel relaxed. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you. What's more, the patterns and carvings on the doors and windows are fantastic to look at, simple but unusual.
The classical gardens of Suzhou are a model for other gardens all over China. They express traditional Chinese culture, art and design all in one.
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Classical gardens of Suzhou
The classical gardens of Suzhou have long been a popular attraction for visitors from home and abroad. These beautiful gardens have a long history and are a cultural treasure of China.
Introduce the name/ type /location of attraction.
(1) ... be popular with...
(2) These beautiful gardens with a long history are ...
(3) ... be attracted by ...
Useful expressions
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These gardens are special because their designs show off the beauty of natural landscapes. The buildings there have light grey roofs and white walls so the gardens look like Chinese landscape paintings. There are beautiful rocks, ponds, hills and trees. A walk through the gardens will make you feel relaxed. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you. What's more, the patterns and carvings on the doors and windows are fantastic to look at, simple but unusual.
Describe special features and things to see/to do.
What makes Suzhou gardens special?
Their designs show off the beauty of natural landscapes. The buildings there have light grey roofs and white walls so the gardens look like Chinese landscape paintings.
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These gardens are special because their designs show off the beauty of natural landscapes. The buildings there have light grey roofs and white walls so the gardens look like Chinese landscape paintings. There are beautiful rocks, ponds, hills and trees. A walk through the gardens will make you feel relaxed. No matter where you stand, there is always a perfect picture in front of you. What's more, the patterns and carvings on the doors and windows are fantastic to look at, simple but unusual.
Describe special features and things to see/to do.
... is special because...
You can...
What's more, you can enjoy/ learn...
You can also come here to...
It is a must-see for..
Useful expressions
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The classical gardens of Suzhou are a model for other gardens all over China. They express traditional Chinese culture, art and design all in one.
...a model of...;They are...
Useful expressions
Write your article based on the information in Part D1. Use Daniel's article as a model.
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Sentences Structure
name
type
location
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
special features
things to see
things to do.
Paragraph 3
Conclusion
Useful expressions
...dates back to...;... is special because...
You can see/hear...What's more, you can enjoy/learn...
You can also come here to...
It is a must-see for...
... is a popular attraction for ...
...have a long history...;
...a cultural treasure …
...is/rests in ...
...a model of...;They are...
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Use the article in Part D2 as a model.
name
type
location
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
special features
things to see
things to do.
Complete the survey in Part D1.
D3 Write your article based on the information in Part D1. Use Daniel’s artical as a model.
Paragraph 3
Conclusion
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Nanjing Hongshan Forest Zoo
Nanjing Hongshan Forest Zoo is a famous AAAA-level zoo. It houses over 3,000 animals, including pandas, koalas and giraffes. Its beautiful natural setting makes visitors feel like they are walking in a forest.
The zoo is a pioneer in animal welfare. It is China’s first zoo to stop all animal shows and
feeding, allowing the animals to live more naturally. Here, you can see them in large, natural habitats like the “Asian rainforest” or “African savanna”. You can also take part in popular activities including watching animals, learning about them, and even joining special night tours.
Nanjing Hongshan Forest Zoo serves as a city embassy for animals, building a bridge between humans and nature. The zoo also leads in environmental protection, such as using solar energy. It inspires every visitor to become a friend and protector of nature.
While-writing
Post-writing
Evaluate and improve
Evaluation Scores Peer-evaluation
1 clear structure three parts 4
2 rich contents 1. What is it?
2. What is special about it?
3. Why are they so important? 6
3 beautiful language 1. formal language
2. authentic expressions
3. proper transitions
4. fantastic ending
5. no grammar or spelling mistakes 8
4 handwriting neat handwriting 2
Total score 20
Xu Xiake (1587-1641) was a famous Chinese geographer and travel writer in the Ming Dynasty. He travelled around China for more than 30 years to learn about different places. He wrote a popular book called Travel Notes of Xu Xiake about these places. Find out more about this book and share your thoughts with your classmates.
Further study
1.Share your composition with your partner.
2.Finish the workbook.
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