读后续写-友情修复冲突解决类反转！Olivia苦练画技为给Emily惊喜，却成了最大的“黑粉” 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 广东省肇庆市2026届高三上学期第一次模拟考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, Olivia and Emily were dining in a pizza shop when a cartoonist nearby drew a caricature(漫画像) for Olivia with a few quick simple lines. The head was twice as big as the body and the ears were almost as big as the head. It was funny but looked just like Olivia. when holding up the picture for Emily to see, Olivia advised Emily to have herself drawn. But Emily shrugged and declined, mentioning that she hated others joking about her appearance. she had tolerated too many lighthearted“jokes”about her freckles(雀斑) since childhood. Each joke amused others but hurt her. Olivia liked the drawing and wished she could draw as well as the cartoonist. Emily told Olivia she was a good artist and encouraged her to draw a cartoon for the school art exhibition. “A cartoon? No way. I can′t draw like that, ”said Olivia. “well, not yet, but maybe someday you can, ”Emily responded. Encouraged by Emily′s confidence in her, Olivia decided to make a change. That evening, she took out a fresh page, found a photo of a person and began to sketch. It turned out terribly. But Olivia didn′t lose heart and practised hard the following days. She practised every evening for two weeks. She even bought a book about caricatures and learned some of the secrets: Exaggerate the main features. Leave out parts that aren′t important. Keep everything simple. Soon she could use a few lines and shapes to draw a funny caricature just like the cartoonist did. With the art show coming, Olivia decided to sign up for it and draw someone nobody had drawn before—Emily, her best friend. She immediately set to work. she was so satisfied with the cartoon that she thought she had a chance to win first place. To give Emily a surprise, Olivia kept it a secret from her. On the opening day, the art exhibition attracted many students, including Emily, who was looking forward to Olivia′s amazing drawing and ready to applaud her. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: When Olivia arrived, Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. Paragraph 2: Watching Emily’s disappearing shadow, Olivia decided to do something to make up for her fault. 广东省肇庆市2026届高三上学期第一次模拟考试 [标注版] 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, Olivia and Emily were dining in a pizza shop when a cartoonist nearby drew a caricature for Olivia with a few quick simple lines. The head was twice as big as the body and the ears were almost as big as the head. It was funny but looked just like Olivia. When holding up the picture for Emily to see, Olivia advised Emily to have herself drawn. But Emily shrugged and declined, mentioning(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that she hated others joking about her appearance(伏笔). She had tolerated too many lighthearted “jokes” about her freckles since childhood. Each joke amused others but hurt her. Olivia liked the drawing and wished she could draw as well as the cartoonist. Emily told Olivia she was a good artist and encouraged her to draw a cartoon for the school art exhibition(伏笔). “A cartoon? No way. I can′t draw like that, ”said Olivia. “Well, not yet, but maybe someday you can, ”Emily responded. Encouraged by Emily′s confidence in her(过去分词短语做原因状语), Olivia decided to make a change. That evening, she took out a fresh page, found a photo of a person(伏笔) and began to sketch. It turned out terribly. But Olivia didn′t lose heart and practised hard the following days(人物努力). She practised every evening for two weeks. She even bought a book about caricatures and learned some of the secrets: Exaggerate the main features. Leave out parts that aren′t important. Keep everything simple(伏笔). Soon she could use a few lines and shapes to draw a funny caricature just like the cartoonist did. With the art show coming, Olivia decided to sign up for it and draw someone nobody had drawn before—Emily, her best friend. She immediately set to work. She was so satisfied with the cartoon that she thought she had a chance to win first place. To give Emily a surprise, Olivia kept it a secret from her. On the opening day, the art exhibition attracted many students, including Emily, who was looking forward to Olivia′s amazing drawing and ready to applaud her. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: When Olivia arrived, Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. Paragraph 2: Watching Emily's disappearing shadow, Olivia decided to do something to make up for her fault. 一、整体分类读后续写类型 本篇属于 “友情主题+自我接纳+个人成长型” 的高考读后续写故事。 特点： 情感线：友情受伤 → 和解 → 成长 冲突线：好意造成误伤 主题线：接纳自我、理解他人、成长与道歉 适合采用： “心理冲突—误会升级—情感破裂—修复关系—呼应主题” 的续写框架。 二、续写构思步骤（教学可直接用） 1. 阅读定位：抓住冲突源头 Emily 自卑点：freckles 被嘲笑 Olivia 行为动机：好意但不敏感 核心冲突：Olivia 的“惊喜”正好戳中 Emily 最敏感的痛点 2. 明确续写的逻辑主线 ① Emily 看到自己被画成 caricature → 伤心 ② Olivia 误以为 Emily 是感动，但看到她转身离开 → 懊悔 ③ Olivia 必须采取行动修复 → 道歉＋重新创作＋表达理解 ④ Emily 接受 → 友情升华（首尾呼应“best friend”） 三、故事山模式分析 阶段 原文对应 续写衔接 开端 Olivia 被漫画启发，开始练习 已有背景，不再写 上升动作 Olivia 决定为 Emily 画 caricature 续写开始：Emily 看到作品 冲突爆发（高潮） Emily 有外貌自卑 → 容易被漫画伤到 第一段：Emily seeing the picture, watery eyes 下降动作 Olivia 意识到错误 → 内疚 → 想弥补 第二段：决定“做点什么” 结局 和解＋主题升华（接受自我） 第二段后半部分 四、原文伏笔、冲突点与隐含线索 1. 伏笔 She hated others joking about her freckles. Emily 对外貌极度敏感 Kept everything simple; exaggerate the main features caricature 必然突出 freckles 而且还得大 To give Emily a surprise, Olivia kept it a secret. “惊喜”会变成“雷区” 2. 冲突点 Olivia 的“最佳用心”与 Emily 的“最大痛点”直接冲突 Emily 看到 caricature → 傻眼、受伤、委屈、退场 3. 隐含线索 Olivia 对友情的重视 > 对获奖的追求 Emily 表面坚强但内心非常脆弱 这幅画是“伤害”也是“和解的契机” 4. 解决方案 真诚道歉 画一幅新的作品（正向、温柔） 让 Emily 看到：她不是被嘲笑，而是被珍惜 五、衔接关键 可用于续写中自然引用或呼应： She hated others joking about her appearance. Hurt her. Exaggerate the main features. Kept it a secret to give Emily a surprise. Looking forward to Olivia’s amazing drawing. 六、续写分析表 分析角度 内容分析 原文对应句（证据） 人物刻画 Olivia：热情、善良、有艺术天赋；Emily：敏感、自卑但善良 She hated others joking about her freckles. 情感层次 Emily：期待→惊讶→受伤→离开；Olivia：自信→得意→懊悔→修复 Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. 关键情节点 caricature → 意外伤害 → 离场 → Olivia 弥补 → 和解 leave out parts that aren’t important. 语言特色 情感词、夸张表达、简单线条构图 原文 caricature 描写方式 关键词分析 caricature / exaggerate / hurt / surprise / watery eyes 多处出现 心理描写 Emily：被触痛的敏感；Olivia：内疚、慌乱、反思 Each joke amused others but hurt her. 动作描写 Emily 的“shrugged”“declined”“staring”“leaving”、Olivia 的“kept it a secret” 全文多处 环境描写 艺术展、学校走廊、人群 the art exhibition attracted many students 隐含主题 接纳自我；善意也需敏感；友情需要理解与道歉 整体文本 情感转折 期待→受伤；自信→懊悔 → 和解 清晰情感线 空间转换 餐厅→家练习→艺术展现场→追到走廊/庭院 文中时空切换明显 时间过渡 That evening；two weeks；opening day 多个时间标记 隐含线索 Emily 的自卑＋Olivia 的秘密“惊喜” → 必然冲突 kept it a secret to give Emily a surprise 7、 动作、心理、环境描写 A. 动作描写 Her fingers trembled slightly as she reached for the drawing. 她伸手去拿那幅画时，手指微微发抖。 He stepped back instinctively, as if trying to hide his reaction. 他本能地后退一步，仿佛想掩饰自己的反应。 She bit her lip, struggling to keep her emotions under control. 她咬着嘴唇，努力控制自己的情绪。 Emily turned away abruptly, her shoulders stiff with discomfort. Emily 突然转过身去，肩膀僵硬，满是尴尬。 Olivia hurried forward, but Emily slipped into the crowd. Olivia 匆匆向前，却被 Emily 混入人群消失。 He clenched the picture in his hand, unsure of what to say. 他攥着那张画，不知道该说什么。 She brushed past him without meeting his eyes. 她从他身边擦肩而过，连眼神都没对上。 Her footsteps quickened, echoing down the hallway. 她的脚步声加快，在走廊里回响。 Olivia froze, the smile fading slowly from her face. Olivia 愣住了，脸上的笑容慢慢消失。 He reached out a hesitant hand, then let it drop helplessly. 他伸出一只迟疑的手，随后又无力地放下。 B. 心理描写 A sharp pang shot through her chest as she recognized herself in the caricature. 看到 caricature 中的自己，一阵刺痛涌上她的心头。 Shame washed over her, hot and overwhelming. 羞愧涌上心头，炽热而难以承受。 Her confidence crumbled in an instant. 她的自信瞬间崩塌。 Olivia felt her heart sink, realizing something had gone terribly wrong. Olivia 意识到情况不妙，心里一沉。 A swirl of guilt and confusion wrapped tightly around her. 愧疚与困惑交织，将她紧紧缠绕。 Emily’s old insecurity surged back like a rising tide. Emily 过去的不安全感像潮水般涌回。 Olivia’s excitement drained away, replaced by cold panic. Olivia 的兴奋瞬间消失，取而代之的是冰冷的慌乱。 Regret gnawed at her, sharp and persistent. 后悔啃噬着她，尖锐而持续。 She battled the urge to cry, forcing herself to breathe steadily. 她努力克制住哭意，强迫自己稳住呼吸。 A desperate determination took root inside her—she had to fix this. 一种迫切的决心在她心中生根——她必须弥补。 C. 环境描写 The exhibition hall buzzed with laughter and excited chatter. 展厅里充满了笑声与兴奋的交谈声。 Bright lights spilled onto the paintings, casting long shadows on the floor. 明亮的灯光洒在作品上，在地板上投下长长的影子。 Students crowded around the display boards, pointing and whispering. 学生们围在展板周围，指指点点、小声议论。 The smell of fresh paint lingered in the air. 空气中弥漫着油墨的气味。 The large hall felt suddenly too small as tension spread. 随着紧张蔓延，大厅忽然显得狭小压迫。 Her footsteps echoed sharply against the high ceiling. 她的脚步声在高高的天花板下清晰回荡。 Sunlight streamed through the windows, illuminating dust motes. 阳光透过窗户洒进来，照亮了飘浮的灰尘微粒。 Posters fluttered slightly in the soft breeze from the open door. 海报在敞开的门吹来的微风中轻轻摆动。 The once lively room felt strangely hollow after Emily left. Emily 离开后，原本热闹的房间显得异常空荡。 Distant applause rose and fell like waves, indifferent to her turmoil. 远处的掌声此起彼伏，与她的心绪形成鲜明对比。 常见单词的高级替换词 1. 表达“开心/高兴” 基础词 高级替换 happy delighted / thrilled / overjoyed / exhilarated / in high spirits 2. 表达“难过/伤心” 基础词 高级替换 sad devastated / heartbroken / crushed / dismayed / downcast 3. 表达“生气/不满” 基础词 高级替换 angry irritated / furious / infuriated / resentful / outraged 4. 表达“害怕/紧张” 基础词 高级替换 scared anxious / uneasy / on edge / alarmed / unsettled 5. 表达“决定/下定决心” 基础词 高级替换 decide resolve to / determine to / be committed to / make up one’s mind / pledge to 4. 搭配解析 (1) 内疚相关语料 词汇：guilt 词性：n. 词意：内疚 近义词：remorse, shame, regret 反义词：pride, satisfaction 固定搭配： be filled with guilt（充满愧疚） a pang of guilt（一阵内疚刺痛） overcome by guilt（被愧疚压倒） 例句： A pang of guilt hit her as she saw Emily’s expression. Olivia was overcome by guilt and didn’t know how to apologize. (2) 伤害相关语料 词汇：wound 词性：v./n. 词意：使受伤；伤口（心理/身体均可） 近义词：hurt, injure, upset 反义词：comfort, heal 固定搭配： deeply wounded（深深受伤） wound one’s feelings（伤害某人的感情） emotional wounds（情感创伤） 例句： Her words unintentionally wounded her friend. The caricature reopened the emotional wounds she had tried to hide. (3) 离开、退场相关语料 词汇：slip away 词性：v. 短语动词 词意：悄然离去 近义词：leave quietly, vanish, disappear 反义词：approach, come forward 固定搭配： slip away into the crowd（悄然混入人群离开） let the chance slip away（让机会溜走） 例句： Emily slipped away before Olivia could speak. He watched the moment slip away helplessly. (4) 鼓起勇气相关语料 词汇：pluck up the courage（固定搭配） 词意：鼓起勇气 近义词：summon up courage 反义词：lose courage 例句： Olivia finally plucked up the courage to approach her. He plucked up the courage to confess his mistake. (5) 情绪突然崩溃相关语料 词汇：break down 词性：v. 词意：情绪崩溃 近义词：collapse, lose control 反义词：compose oneself 例句： She almost broke down when she saw the caricature. Unable to explain, he simply broke down in silence. 10、 Possible Version(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1 When Olivia arrived, Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. The moment Olivia caught sight of her expression, the excitement collapsed instantly(无灵主语句). She hurried to Emily’s side, trying to explain(现在分词短语做伴随动作), yet words tangled in her throat(无灵主语句). Emily’s trembling fingers traced the exaggerated freckles in the drawing, and Olivia suddenly realized what had gone terribly wrong. Although she had hoped to celebrate Emily’s uniqueness, the result, unintended though it was(强调倒装句), had reopened the wounds Emily had carried since childhood. Before Olivia could reach out, Emily took a step backward, her face pale with hurt(独立主格). “I trusted you,” she whispered. Then, with her shoulders stiff and her eyes lowered(with复合结构), she turned and slipped away into the crowd, leaving(现在分词短语做结果状语)Olivia frozen(过去分词做宾补) beside the display board, guilt spreading through her like cold water(独立主格刻画人物心理). Paragraph 2 Watching Emily’s disappearing shadow, Olivia decided to do something to make up for her fault. Determination surged through her, sweeping away the panic(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that had been choking her moments earlier. It occurred to her that an apology alone would never heal something that had been hurting Emily for years. What she truly needed was reassurance—real reassurance—that her appearance was nothing to be ashamed of. So, ignoring the noise of the exhibition around her, Olivia tore down her own cartoon. With trembling hands but a steady heart, she began sketching again, choosing this time not to exaggerate but to celebrate every feature(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that made Emily herself. When Emily finally returned, anger softened into shock as she saw a gentle, warm portrait—nothing humorous, nothing distorted. “This is how I see you,” Olivia said. And slowly, cautiously, Emily’s defenses began to fall. 高分搭配 watery eyes excitement collapsed untangle words reopen wounds slipped away into the crowd make up for her fault surge through steady her heart soften into shock defenses began to fall 高级替换词 基础词 高级替换 sad downcast / dismayed / heavy-hearted angry resentful / wounded / bitter fix remedy / mend / make amends for think realize / come to understand / grasp nervous unsettled / on edge / uneasy 可积累短语 a pang of guilt（一阵内疚） A pang of guilt hit her as she realized her mistake. emotion washed over sb.（情绪涌上心头） Relief washed over her when Emily smiled again. be rooted in（根源于） Her insecurity was rooted in years of teasing. voice trembling with…（声音因…颤抖） His voice trembled with regret. Version 2 Paragraph 1 When Olivia arrived, Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. At first Olivia thought Emily was moved, but the stiff way Emily held her shoulders made the truth instantly clear. The caricature that Olivia had proudly created had wounded the very person who had encouraged her. “Emily, I didn’t mean—” Olivia began, but her voice faltered as she saw the pain hidden behind Emily’s forced smile. It struck Olivia that while she herself saw the drawing as playful, Emily had lived her whole life battling jokes about her freckles. Emily drew in a shaky breath, whispering(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “Why would you choose me? You knew…” Her voice broke before she could finish, and the unfinished sentence hung heavily between them(无灵主语句). Olivia reached out, but Emily gently avoided her touch. A moment later, Emily turned away, moving through the crowd with hurried, uneven steps(现在分词短语做伴随动作), leaving (现在分词短语做结果状语)Olivia drowning in confusion and regret. Paragraph 2 Watching Emily’s disappearing shadow, Olivia decided to do something to make up for her fault. For the first time, she understood that being a real artist meant more than skill—it required empathy. She hurried to the exhibition office and asked for her work to be temporarily removed. Olivia seized the chance to rewrite her mistake. Settling into a quiet corner(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she sketched again, but with a new intention: not to impress the judges, not to show off her progress, but to honor the friend who believed in her. She eliminated exaggeration, added warmth to the eyes, and softened every line until the drawing reflected not how Emily looked, but how she made people feel—steady, kind, and irreplaceable.When Emily reluctantly returned to look for her, Olivia offered the new portrait with both hands. “You deserve to be seen this way,” she said. Emily hesitated, then finally stepped forward, the first sign of forgiveness glimmering in her eyes(独立主格). 地道搭配 stiff shoulders voice faltered hidden pain unfinished sentence hung heavily drowning in regret be granted the request rewrite her mistake honor the friend glimmer of forgiveness 高级替换词 基础 替换 remove withdraw / take down / pull from display improve refine / polish / enhance show reveal / display / demonstrate sad sorrowful / distressed / weighed down step forward（迈出和解的第一步） She finally stepped forward to hear Olivia’s explanation. soften one’s tone（语气缓和） Her tone softened as she listened. carry emotional weight（承载情感重量） The portrait carried emotional weight she did not expect. Version 3 Paragraph 1 When Olivia arrived, Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. But it wasn’t just sadness that Olivia saw—it was the mixture of disbelief, disappointment, and the old, familiar insecurity Emily rarely admitted. Olivia felt as if someone had snapped a pencil inside her chest. Everything she had prepared crumbled in seconds. “Emily, please listen. I drew it because you’re my best friend,” she said, but Emily’s lips trembled “That’s exactly why it hurts.” Emily turned her head to hide the tears. “I thought you understood me.” Olivia stepped forward, desperate to explain(adj做主语补语), but Emily, overwhelmed(过去分词做主语补语), shook her head and walked away, her departure slicing through the air like a quiet storm(独立主格). Paragraph 2 Watching Emily’s disappearing shadow, Olivia decided to do something to make up for her fault. She realized that if trust had broken because of a drawing, then perhaps a drawing could repair it—provided she poured the right meaning into it. So she hurried back to the classroom, grabbed her sketchbook, and began a new portrait. This time she drew the confidence Emily showed when encouraging her, the patience she offered during Olivia’s failures, and the warmth that made their friendship steady. It became less a portrait and more a letter in lines and shading. Later, when Olivia found Emily, handing her the newly-created artwork. “I didn’t draw the freckles bigger,” she said softly. “I drew your courage bigger.” Emily looked at the drawing—really looked—and for the first time that afternoon, her expression loosened, allowing smile to slip back in(现在分词短语做伴随动作). 亮点词汇/短语 mixture of disbelief and disappointment snapped a pencil inside her chest（比喻） crumbled in seconds gather along her lashes slice through the air like a quiet storm（隐喻） a letter in lines and shading draw courage bigger expression loosened hope slipped back in 高级替换词 普通 高级 break fracture / damage / undermine understand grasp / perceive / take in afraid hesitant / unsettled / vulnerable 1. let sth. sink in（让某事慢慢被接受） She stared at the drawing, letting the meaning sink in. It took a moment for the apology to sink in. 2. emotional storm（情绪风暴） A silent emotional storm raged inside her. 3. hold one’s breath（屏住呼吸） Olivia held her breath, afraid of the reaction. We held our breath as the score was announced. 4. steady one’s voice（稳住声音） She tried to steady her voice before speaking 官方： When Olivia arrived, Emily was staring at the cartoon with watery eyes. On seeing Olivia, she sniffed and asked if the cartoon was supposed to be her. After Olivia murmured a “yes”, Emily's anger erupted. She protested that not only did Olivia's cartoon exaggerate her freckles(倒装), but it also made her fluffy hair look like a plate of spaghetti. “This is the ugliest cartoon I've ever seen!” exclaimed Emily. Hearing these words(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Olivia froze, shocked(adj做主语补语) that her carefully prepared surprise had turned into a disappointment. She tried to explain but Emily stormed off, leaving her(现在分词短语做结果状语)with only a disappearing shadow. Watching Emily's disappearing shadow, Olivia decided to do something to make up for her fault. That night she set about crafting the most exquisite portrait of Emily she could. The next morning, Olivia sought Emily out, apologized sincerely and begged for forgiveness, explaining(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that she had never meant to tease her-she had drawn her solely as her best friend. She then presented Emily's new portrait. Its beauty made Emily's eyes sparkle. She forgave Olivia , praised her cartoon progress and even apologized for calling her earlier drawing ugly. Exchanging a knowing smile(现在分词短语做伴随动作), they walked to the classroom together, their friendship deeper than ever(独立主格). 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $