Unit 1 Past and present 书面表达10篇（单元话题：时代变迁）-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（译林版）

Unit 1 Past and present 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 时代变迁 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。进入初二，我们自己也在发生着改变。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 Changes around us 1. going abroad 2. traveling online 3. using computers and mobile phones …… Changes of me 1. doing more reading 2. giving a helping hand 3. protecting the environment …… 注意： 1. 必须包括所有要点 ，可以适当发挥，使短文语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 不少于 80词，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 Great changes have taken place around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。 提示： 生活中变化 （1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。 （2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。 （3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。 自己的变化 （1）去了许多名胜古迹，例如…… （2）比以前更加喜爱阅读，阅读的益处：…… （3）……，……（变化及感受） 要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2）词数80个左右； 3）展开的内容需合理想象，用自己的话补充完整。 The Changes _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．你校英语专刊组织了“Changes in people’s life”的征文比赛，假如你是杨玲，请根据以下图片信息用英语写一篇文章，描写人们生活的变化。 要求：1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 30 years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, the life of the people is getting better than before. 4．根据所给内容，以“The changes to my hometown”为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 字迹工整； 2. 要点全面；   3. 分段写作；    4. 注意时态；   5. 字数80词左右。 要点： 过去： 1. 空气清新，环境很好； 2. 房屋小、旧，人们走路或骑车上班； 3. 曾经是个宁静的地方。 现在： 1. 住房宽敞明亮，很多人有了自己的小汽车； 2. 人们可以坐公交车或火车去城里； 3. 生活条件好了，空闲的时候可以出去旅游。 4. 这些变化给人们带来了现代化的生活，他们感到很高兴。 将来：请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句) The changes to my hometown 5．“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护，无论城市还是农村，环境条件、人的意识都发生了很大的变化。请你根据提示材料，对你所居住的小镇的变化做一些描述。 past 1. roads…  2. living conditions…  3. environment…   4. transport…    present 1. life: (自拟1-2点) 2. transport: (自拟1-2点) 3. travelling: the best time to visit my hometown… future (自拟1-2点) 要求： 1.字迹工整、规范； 2.字数：100词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I have seen the changes myself. In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 6．上周五，你们班就“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了一次热烈的讨论．请根据讨论内容，以Past and present为题写一篇短文． 注意事项： 1. 作文必须表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥；语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2. 词数80个左右，作文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．五月份，是我们学校“勤俭节约，树文明新风”主题月。同学们在学校的大力倡导下，有了很大的改进，请按下面要求，以“Changes to my classmates” 为题，写一篇100字左右的英语作文。 具体要求在表格中 过去（Past） 1. 过多地浪费水；2. 轿车接送上学；3. 花钱买许多东西 现在（Present） 1. 离开教室，及时关灯（in time）；2. 骑车或步行上学； 3. 互相帮助，照顾同学；4. 捐钱给贫困儿童 展望 …… （一点即可） 注意：1. 字数在100字左右，开头已写好，不计入总词数。 2. 文中须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯。 Changes to my classmates My classmates have changed a lot recently. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李明，紧张的一学期已经过去了一半，请你写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友，告诉他你这半学期以来的学习和生活情况以及你接下来的计划。 已完成的事情 回了家乡两次，家乡变化很大 读完 5本书，最喜欢……(reasons) 在学校参加了英语节活动 接下来的计划 去一次上海，参观世界著名的贸易中心—陆家嘴 多去无锡图书馆，借更多的书来阅读 ……（自由发挥1—2点） 注意事项： 1.需包含所有要点，并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon! Yours, Li Ming 重难语篇练习 1．假如你是Suzy，最近收到来自在外地生活多年的表妹Amy的电子邮件，想了解一下家乡近些年的变化以及Suzy的课余生活，请根据表格中的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.    过去污染严重，现在政府采取行动改善了这种情况，经常见到蓝天； 2.    人们搬进了新的公寓，开阔的空地上建造了新的公园和剧场； 3.    出行很便捷，可以乘坐公交、地铁…… 课余活动 1. 喜欢读书，每周花6小时左右阅读小说，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书有很多好处……； 2. 闲暇时间喜欢旅行，享受当地美食，感受不同文化；今年五一打算去成都游玩。 个人感受 …… 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，省略内容可作适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90字，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.语义通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Amy, I’m very happy to hear from you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come back to our hometown for a visit some day. Yours, Suzy 2．假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件，请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。 Dear Li Ming, I haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you spent too much time playing computer games and you wanted to have a change. Now you spend much time reading books. Can you tell me something about your reading habits, like when, where and what you read? And do you have any plans for the summer holiday this year? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Kevin 注意： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；回信须包含邮件中的所有相关内容，并作适当发挥； 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息； 3. 词数不少于90词，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Changzhou has changed a lot over the years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Past and present 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 时代变迁 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。进入初二，我们自己也在发生着改变。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 Changes around us 1. going abroad 2. traveling online 3. using computers and mobile phones …… Changes of me 1. doing more reading 2. giving a helping hand 3. protecting the environment …… 注意： 1. 必须包括所有要点 ，可以适当发挥，使短文语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 不少于 80词，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 Great changes have taken place around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great changes have taken place around us. With the development of the society, people like going abroad. A lot of people enjoy traveling in their spare time. Some people like traveling online. Also, people are fond of using computers and mobile phones. As for me, I like doing more reading, which can increase my knowledge and expand my horizons. I also like giving a helping hand and protecting the environment. Because they make the world a better place. In a word, our life is changing and becoming more and more beautiful and colorful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍我们身边的变化和自己的变化； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“旅游、电子设备”等方面介绍我们身边的变化，从“兴趣爱好、行为习惯”等方面介绍自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多 ②be fond of喜欢 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] As for me, I like doing more reading, which can increase my knowledge and expand my horizons.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 2．假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。 提示： 生活中变化 （1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。 （2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。 （3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。 自己的变化 （1）去了许多名胜古迹，例如…… （2）比以前更加喜爱阅读，阅读的益处：…… （3）……，……（变化及感受） 要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2）词数80个左右； 3）展开的内容需合理想象，用自己的话补充完整。 The Changes _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes There are many changes in my life. For example, the factory used to dump waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment. Besides, I lived in a low and shabby house before, but now I have moved into a tall and modern apartment instead. I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago. On the other hand, I have changed a lot, too. I went to many places of interest, like the Great Wall. I tend to like reading more than before. Reading helps me relax myself after class. To conclude, many good changes have taken place both in my life and upon myself. I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，介绍生活中的变化以及自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①dump倾倒 ②take action采取行动 ③shabby破旧的 ④on the other hand另一方面 ⑤places of interest名胜古迹 ⑥take place发生 [高分句型] I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago.(that引导宾语从句) 3．你校英语专刊组织了“Changes in people’s life”的征文比赛，假如你是杨玲，请根据以下图片信息用英语写一篇文章，描写人们生活的变化。 要求：1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 30 years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, the life of the people is getting better than before. 【答案】例文： Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 30 years. In the past, people kept in touch with relatives and friends by sending letters. They listened to the radio for news. Besides, students used to ride to school. They had to live in old and small houses. However, now people’s life has changed. They can talk on the telephone or chat online. When they are free, they can watch TV to relax. What’s more, a lot of families are rich enough to drive their children to school. More and more people have lived in tall buildings with many floors. In a word, the life of the people is getting better than before. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为记叙文； ②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图片信息，描写过去和现在人们的生活，突出“变化”；可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写过去人们的生活； 第二步，描写现在人们的生活。 [亮点词汇] ①keep in touch with 保持联系 ②listen to the radio for news 听广播获取新闻 ③used to 过去常常 ④chat online 网上聊天 [高分句型] ①When they are free, they can watch TV to relax.（when引导时间状语从句、不定式表目的） ②What’s more, a lot of families are rich enough to drive their children to school.（“adj enough to do sth”结构） 4．根据所给内容，以“The changes to my hometown”为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 字迹工整； 2. 要点全面；   3. 分段写作；    4. 注意时态；   5. 字数80词左右。 要点： 过去： 1. 空气清新，环境很好； 2. 房屋小、旧，人们走路或骑车上班； 3. 曾经是个宁静的地方。 现在： 1. 住房宽敞明亮，很多人有了自己的小汽车； 2. 人们可以坐公交车或火车去城里； 3. 生活条件好了，空闲的时候可以出去旅游。 4. 这些变化给人们带来了现代化的生活，他们感到很高兴。 将来：请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句) The changes to my hometown 【答案】例文 The changes to my hometown My hometown is Shuyang, Suqian. In the past, the air here was very clean. The environment was very good. The houses were small and old. People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a very quiet place. Now things have changed a lot. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. A new railway station has been in use. People can go to the town by bus or by train. With the improvement of the living condition, people can travel in their spare time. But there are fewer trees than before. The environment is not as good as before. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel very happy. I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful. The environment is better than before. We can live a happier life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文要用一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时。 ③提示：要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明自己的故乡是哪里，并说明过去的故乡是什么样； ②第二步，讲述自己的故乡现在的样子； ③第三步，展望未来的故乡是什么样子。 [亮点词汇] ①on foot 步行 ②one’s own 某人自己的 ③with the improvement of the living condition 随着生活条件的提高 ④in one’s spare time 在某人空闲时间 [高分句型] ①It used to be a very quiet place. (used to do 过去常常) ②With the improvement of the living condition, people can travel in their spare time. (with结构作伴随状语) ③I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful. (省略that的宾语从句) 5．“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护，无论城市还是农村，环境条件、人的意识都发生了很大的变化。请你根据提示材料，对你所居住的小镇的变化做一些描述。 past 1. roads…  2. living conditions…  3. environment…   4. transport…    present 1. life: (自拟1-2点) 2. transport: (自拟1-2点) 3. travelling: the best time to visit my hometown… future (自拟1-2点) 要求： 1.字迹工整、规范； 2.字数：100词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I have seen the changes myself. In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 【答案】例文 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I have seen the changes myself. In the past, there were no flowers and grass here. There were only narrow and dirty roads. People travelled around the town on foot or by bike. Local people lived in old and small houses. The water was dirty and smelt terrible. What’s worse, some factories put the waste water into the river. But now everything has changed a lot. There are many beautiful flowers and grass everywhere. The streets are wide and clean. The water is also clean and the air is fresh. And you can see bees and butterflies dancing among the flowers. And people go travelling by bus, taxi or train. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now. The best time to visit my hometown is in spring because the weather is always sunny then, but not too hot. Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为说明文，是材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料，对所居住的小镇的变化做一些描述，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述小镇发生了许多变化； 第二步，从道路、环境条件、交通方面描述小镇的过去； 第三步，从生活、交通、旅行方面描述小镇的现在； 第四步，表达人们对小镇的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ① take place发生 ② what’s worse更糟糕的是 ③ move into搬到 [高分句型] ① There were only narrow and dirty roads.（there be句型） ② The best time to visit my hometown is in spring because the weather is always sunny then, but not too hot.（because引导的原因状语从句） 6．上周五，你们班就“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了一次热烈的讨论．请根据讨论内容，以Past and present为题写一篇短文． 注意事项： 1. 作文必须表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥；语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2. 词数80个左右，作文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Past and present Last Friday, we had a discussion about life’s changes in the past and at present. Here are some of the changes. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in our city. But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. Now the government has built many shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. Years ago, people lived in small old houses. Now most of them have moved into new flats. In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground. Most families have their own cars. Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：题干中给出了写作方向，考生应从交通、环境、生活等方面对比过去与现在的变化，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍上周五针对“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了讨论； 第二步，具体从交通、生活及交通等方面介绍变化； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ① have a discussion 进行讨论 ② in the past 在过去 ③ on foot 步行 ④ by bicycle 骑自行车 [高分句型] ① But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides.（with的复合结构） ② In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground.（but连接的并列句） 7．五月份，是我们学校“勤俭节约，树文明新风”主题月。同学们在学校的大力倡导下，有了很大的改进，请按下面要求，以“Changes to my classmates” 为题，写一篇100字左右的英语作文。 具体要求在表格中 过去（Past） 1. 过多地浪费水；2. 轿车接送上学；3. 花钱买许多东西 现在（Present） 1. 离开教室，及时关灯（in time）；2. 骑车或步行上学； 3. 互相帮助，照顾同学；4. 捐钱给贫困儿童 展望 …… （一点即可） 注意：1. 字数在100字左右，开头已写好，不计入总词数。 2. 文中须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯。 Changes to my classmates My classmates have changed a lot recently. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Changes to my classmates My classmates have changed a lot recently. In the past, they wasted too much water, they didn’t turn off the faucet in time. They went to school in their parents’ car though their parents were busy. They spent money on a lot of things. But at present they turn off the faucet and they turn off the lights when they leave the classroom. They go to school by bike or on foot, they help each other and take care of their classmates. They often donate money to poor children. I hope everyone will try to be a civilized person, so that our world will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，说明自己的同学改变了很多； 第二步，具体介绍同学过去和现在的行为； 第三步，总结表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①spend money on sth 在某事上花钱 ②donate money 捐钱 ③civilized person 文明人 [高分句型] ①They went to school in their parents’ car though their parents were busy.（让步状语从句） ②I hope everyone will try to be a civilized person, so that our world will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句；目的状语从句） 8．假如你是李明，紧张的一学期已经过去了一半，请你写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友，告诉他你这半学期以来的学习和生活情况以及你接下来的计划。 已完成的事情 回了家乡两次，家乡变化很大 读完 5本书，最喜欢……(reasons) 在学校参加了英语节活动 接下来的计划 去一次上海，参观世界著名的贸易中心—陆家嘴 多去无锡图书馆，借更多的书来阅读 ……（自由发挥1—2点） 注意事项： 1.需包含所有要点，并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon! Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear John, How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you. I have been to my hometown twice so far. Great changes have taken place there. Besides, I have read five books. Among them, I like Harry Potter best. The story is very long but really exciting. What’s more, I have taken part in the English Festival. I have made some future plans for the other half of the term. First, I want to visit one of the most famous trade centers, called Lujiazui. Second, I would like to go to the library as often as possible and borrow many books to read. Finally, I plan to visit my dream university. So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表明学期过得很快，引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“已经完成的事情”和“接下来的计划”2个方面重点介绍自己这学期的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。希望收到对方来信。 [亮点词汇] ①so far目前为止 ②take place发生 ③twice两次 ④university大学 [高分句型] ①First, I want to visit one of the most famous trade centers, called Lujiazui.(过去分词作后置定语) ②I plan to visit my dream university.(动词不定式作宾语) 重难语篇练习 1．假如你是Suzy，最近收到来自在外地生活多年的表妹Amy的电子邮件，想了解一下家乡近些年的变化以及Suzy的课余生活，请根据表格中的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.    过去污染严重，现在政府采取行动改善了这种情况，经常见到蓝天； 2.    人们搬进了新的公寓，开阔的空地上建造了新的公园和剧场； 3.    出行很便捷，可以乘坐公交、地铁…… 课余活动 1. 喜欢读书，每周花6小时左右阅读小说，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书有很多好处……； 2. 闲暇时间喜欢旅行，享受当地美食，感受不同文化；今年五一打算去成都游玩。 个人感受 …… 要求： 1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，省略内容可作适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90字，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.语义通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Amy, I’m very happy to hear from you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come back to our hometown for a visit some day. Yours, Suzy 【答案】One possible version: Dear Amy, I’m very happy to hear from you. Our hometown has changed a lot over the years. In the past, pollution was a serious problem. Now the government has taken action to improve the situation. Clear blue sky is always here. People have moved into new flats. The government has also built new parks and theaters in some large open spaces. We can travel around by bus, underground or taxi. Many people even have their own cars. It’s easy and fast. I like reading books. It is one of my hobbies. I like novels. Every week, I spend about six hours reading them. And I always borrow books from the library. Reading books is good for us. It can open up a new world to me. Besides reading, in my spare time, I often go travelling with my parents. It makes me feel good. We can enjoy the local food and learn a lot about different cultures. The May Day holiday is coming. My parents and I are planning to go on a trip to Chengdu. That’s wonderful! I hope you can come back to our hometown for a visit some day. Yours, Suzy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出家乡的变化； 第二步，具体阐述家乡发生的变化； 第三步，介绍自己的课余活动。 [亮点词汇] ①take action to 采取行动 ②spend+时间+(in) doing sth. 花费时间做某事 ③go on a trip 去旅行 [高分句型] ①Reading books is good for us. (动名词作主语) ②We can enjoy the local food and learn a lot about different cultures. (并列句） 2．假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件，请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。 Dear Li Ming, I haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you spent too much time playing computer games and you wanted to have a change. Now you spend much time reading books. Can you tell me something about your reading habits, like when, where and what you read? And do you have any plans for the summer holiday this year? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Kevin 注意： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；回信须包含邮件中的所有相关内容，并作适当发挥； 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息； 3. 词数不少于90词，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Changzhou has changed a lot over the years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown-Changzhou has changed a lot over the years. The government has built many shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. Most people have moved into new flats. Many people have their own cars. People are enjoying a comfortable life. I have changed a lot, too. In the past, I spent too much time playing computer games. But now, I often read books in the library in my free time. I enjoy reading books about technology. Summer holiday is coming. My parents and I are planning to visit you and go on a trip to New York. I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家乡常州的变化； 第二步，介绍你的变化，包括过去和现在，注意不要遗漏要点； 第三步，介绍你的暑假计划。 [亮点词汇] ①own自己的 ②comfortable舒适的 ③technology技术 ④go on a trip旅行 [高分句型] ①In the past, I spent too much time playing computer games. (spend time doing sth花时间做某事) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $