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Unit1 Animal Friends
单元话题(动物朋友)写作满分范文15篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1.动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物,关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢? 请根据思维导图的提示信息,以“My favourite animal”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的动物。
要求:
1. 内容须包含思维导图的所有信息,可适当拓展。
2. 不少于 60个词。
3. 不得出现真实个人信息。
My favourite animal
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2.在这个“映日荷花别样红”的季节里,有外国朋友来到荆门,他们想参观荆门动物园。朋朋是荆门动物园里的一头大象。请你观察下面有关于朋朋的思维导图,用一篇英语短文向外国朋友介绍一下朋朋的情况。
要求:
1. 文章必须包含思维导图里面的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息;
3. 词数60左右(文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Our friend
Pengpeng is an elephant from Yunnan. It lives in a zoo in Jingmen.
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3.动物是人类的好朋友,能给我们带来很多欢乐。现在越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你有一只宠物狗,请根据下面的内容提示,以“My Pet Dog”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:
1. What does it look like?
2. What does it like?
3. What can it do?
4. How’s your feelings?
写作要求:
1.必须包含所提供的提示信息,并作适当发挥;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.70词左右;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、地名和校名。
My Pet Dog
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4.每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。请以“My Favorite Animal”为题,根据要点写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种动物吧!
要点内容:
1. What’s your favorite animal?
2. How is it?
3. Why do you like it?
注意事项:
1. 内容必须包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 书写工整,卷面整洁,句子流畅;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。文章开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。
My Favorite Animal
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my favorite animal to you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.假设你是王斌,你有一位特别的动物朋友。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍它。提示:
动物朋友的基本信息(名称、种类、外貌等);
它的爱好和习性;
它对你的意义(如陪伴你、让你开心等);
你对动物保护的看法。
要求:
词数80-100;
条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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进阶拓展训练5篇
6.假设你有一只宠物小狗,它非常讨人喜欢。你的朋友们很想了解它的一些情况。请根据下面提供的信息以“My little dog”为题,用英语描述你的宠物,可适当拓展。50词左右。
1. 外部特征:黑白相间 (black and white),有两只大耳朵。
2. 这只小狗很可爱,能看家,因为它的嗅觉 (sense of smell) 很灵敏。
3. 它喜欢的食物是肉。爱好是玩球。
4. 它对人很友好,但有些害羞 (shy)。
5. 狗是人类的好朋友,我们应该 (should) 爱护 (take care of) 它们。
My little dog
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7.Write a letter for help on behalf of wild animals to humans, at least 60 words. (代表野生动物向人类写一封求救信,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. self-introduction;(自我介绍)
2. writing purpose;(写信目的)
3. problem/cause;(问题和起因)
4. request。(诉求)
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8.动物是我们的朋友,与人类关系紧密,为人类提供许多帮助。请你阐述动物对人类的帮助和重要性,呼吁大家保护动物,与动物和谐共处。
提示:
1.提供丰富的食物(如肉类、奶制品);
2.助力工作(如导盲犬);
3.带来乐趣(如熊猫、猴子)。
要求:
1.要点齐全,并适当增加细节;
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯;
3.70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Animals are our friends and they are a part of our life.
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9.同学们,动物是人类的好朋友,很多人都希望拥有自己的宠物。请以“I want to keep a ________ as my pet”为题写一篇作文。阐述你养这种动物作为你的宠物的原因以及你会如何对待它。开头已经给出,请在答题卡上完整作答。
写作要求:1. 内容要围绕导图展开陈述,也可以适度发挥。
2. 字数控制在80字左右。
3. 不得出现真实姓名和班级。
I want to keep a … as my pet
As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is
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10.每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假设你最喜欢的动物是企鹅。请根据以下提示内容写一篇约80词的文章,介绍一下企鹅。
外形和习性
1. 有翅膀,身体是黑白色的;
2. 不会飞行,但游泳游得很快;
3. 主要吃小的海洋动物;
4. 主要来自南极,通过挤在一起的方式取暖。
现状
处于危险中
要求:
1. 必须包含表格中提到的所有要点。
2. 可适当发挥想象。
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能力综合实践5篇
11.假如你是李华,你的朋友Linda对中国的动物文化很感兴趣,计划举办一场动物主题派对,她向你询问如何融入中国元素。请你写一封信回复Linda,谈谈如何为她的动物主题派对 (Animal-themed Party) 加入中国特色元素。请根据以下写作提示完成写作。
写作提示:
1. What can you do to add Chinese celebrations to the party?
2. Show Chinese animal-related short films.
3. Where can you have the party?
4. What special gift can you give Linda and why?
写作要求:
1. 内容包含所给提示信息,可适当拓展;
2. 语句连贯,书写规范,词数80左右。作文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements.Here are my ideas.
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Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards,
Li Hua
12.假设你是李华,你的笔友Tom对动物很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍你最喜欢的动物,并分享你与动物的有趣经历。
要求:
词数:80—100词;
包括以下要点:
你最喜欢的动物是什么;
你为什么喜欢它;
你与这种动物的有趣经历。
适当发挥,使文章连贯。
Dear Tom,
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13.动物是人类的好朋友,能给我们带来很多欢乐,现在越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你有一只宠物免,请根据下面提示写一篇英语作文。
Your pet
a rabbit
What does it look like?
white and black, long ears, lovely
What does it eat?
grass and vegetables
What does it do?
run after me, make me relax
What’s special about it?
always by my side
要求:
(1)包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥。
(2)不少于70 词。
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My Pet Rabbit I have a lovely pet rabbit, and it has become an important part of my life. My rabbit is white and black. Its long ears stand up straight, and its small red eyes shine brightly, making it look extremely cute. When it hops around, its fluffy tail wiggles, which always makes me laugh. It mainly eats grass and fresh vegetables. Every day after school, I’m responsible for feeding it. Watching it munch on the food happily is really interesting. My rabbit loves running after me when I get home. It follows me everywhere, as if it’s my little bodyguard. When I feel tired or stressed, it stays by my side quietly, which helps me relax. What makes it special is that it’s always there for me, whether I’m happy or sad.
I love my pet rabbit very much. It’s not just a pet but also my best friend.
14.学校英语社团正在开展“My favourite zoo”为主题的征文活动。假如你是社团成员,请根据下面内容提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确;
3. 不少于60词,可适当发挥。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My favourite zoo is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.动物是我们的朋友,它们和我们共享一个地球,但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明,你们学校的校报正在征集关于保护野生动物的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题,根据以下写作要点和要求,写一篇英语短文进行投稿,呼吁大家保护野生动物。
写作要点:
1. How are wild animals now?
2. Why are some wild animals in danger?
3. What is your advice (建议)?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:protect保护 nature reserve自然保护区
Save the wild animals
Animals are our friends, but
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2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料,名师遴选!
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
Unit1 Animal Friends
单元话题(动物朋友)写作满分范文15篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1.动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物,关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢? 请根据思维导图的提示信息,以“My favourite animal”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的动物。
要求:
1. 内容须包含思维导图的所有信息,可适当拓展。
2. 不少于 60个词。
3. 不得出现真实个人信息。
My favourite animal
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【答案】例文
My favourite animal
Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
Pandas mainly come from Sichuan and Gansu provinces in China. They are black and white. They have two big eyes. They look like bears. They are quiet and peaceful. They eat bamboo shoots and leaves.
I like pandas because they are friendly to people. We should cut down fewer trees and get on well with animals to protect endangered animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料所给信息不得遗漏,可适当补充细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,说明自己最喜欢的动物;
第二步,描写熊猫的外形特征和习性;
第三步,写出喜欢熊猫的原因,以及提出如何帮助动物的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②look like看起来像
③cut down减少;砍伐
④get on well with与……相处得好
[高分句型]
①I like pandas because they are friendly to people.(原因状语从句)
②We should cut down fewer trees and get on well with animals to protect endangered animals.(动词不定式作目的状语)
2.在这个“映日荷花别样红”的季节里,有外国朋友来到荆门,他们想参观荆门动物园。朋朋是荆门动物园里的一头大象。请你观察下面有关于朋朋的思维导图,用一篇英语短文向外国朋友介绍一下朋朋的情况。
要求:
1. 文章必须包含思维导图里面的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息;
3. 词数60左右(文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Our friend
Pengpeng is an elephant from Yunnan. It lives in a zoo in Jingmen.
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【答案】例文
Our friend
Pengpeng is an elephant from Yunnan. It lives in a zoo in Jingmen.
Some years ago, it was young and huge. It was playful. It had large ears, strong legs and short trunks. It played with the keepers. And it often picked up and carried heavy things for people.
Now it is old and ugly. It has long trunks, but it is slow and kind. It always sleeps at the daytime. It doesn’t eat too much. It likes swimming in the pool.
Although Pengpeng is old now, people still love it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中所列举的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍朋朋是云南的一只大象,引出主题;
第二步,介绍朋朋以前以及现在的区别;
第三步,表达人们对朋朋的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①playful爱嬉戏的
②pick up采摘
[高分句型]
①Some years ago, he was young, with short trunks, strong legs and large ears. (with表伴随)
②It has long trunks, but it is slow and kind. (but表转折)
3.动物是人类的好朋友,能给我们带来很多欢乐。现在越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你有一只宠物狗,请根据下面的内容提示,以“My Pet Dog”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:
1. What does it look like?
2. What does it like?
3. What can it do?
4. How’s your feelings?
写作要求:
1.必须包含所提供的提示信息,并作适当发挥;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.70词左右;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、地名和校名。
My Pet Dog
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【答案】例文
My Pet Dog
I have a pet dog named Wangwang. He is two years old. His hair is brown. He is very beautiful. He is very clever and friendly, too. Sometimes he is a little lazy. He likes sleeping. He also likes bones and meat. He can walk straight and dance. After school, he plays with me and we watch TV together.
He is not only my pet dog but also my best friend. I like him very much because he brings me lots of happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述宠物的外貌;
第二步,介绍宠物喜欢的东西或事情;
第三步,介绍宠物的技能;
第四步,描述拥有这只宠物的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②after school放学后
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④lots of许多
[高分句型]
I like him very much because he brings me lots of happiness.(because引导的原因状语从句)
4.每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。请以“My Favorite Animal”为题,根据要点写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种动物吧!
要点内容:
1. What’s your favorite animal?
2. How is it?
3. Why do you like it?
注意事项:
1. 内容必须包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 书写工整,卷面整洁,句子流畅;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。文章开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。
My Favorite Animal
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my favorite animal to you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my favorite animal to you.
My favorite animal is a dog in my home. Its name is Pipi. He’s three years old. He has big ears. He’s black and white. He likes eating rice and meat. He also likes noodles. But he doesn’t like vegetables. He likes to go out for a walk, so I often walk with him on weekends. When I come back home after school every day, he often runs to the door to welcome me. We’re close friends.
Pipi is a clever and lovely dog. I like him very much. He is my favorite animal.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的一种动物,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的动物是什么;
第二步,介绍这个动物;
第三步,介绍你为什么喜欢它。
[亮点词汇]
①go out for a walk散步
②on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
When I come back home after school every day, he often runs to the door to welcome me. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5.假设你是王斌,你有一位特别的动物朋友。请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍它。提示:
动物朋友的基本信息(名称、种类、外貌等);
它的爱好和习性;
它对你的意义(如陪伴你、让你开心等);
你对动物保护的看法。
要求:
词数80-100;
条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文:
My Special Animal Friend
I’m Wang Bin. I have a lovely dog named Coco. It has golden fur and big black eyes. Coco is very active. It likes running in the park and playing with a ball. Every morning, it waits for me to take it out. When I get home from school, it always runs to me happily.
Coco is more than a pet. It stays with me when I’m alone and makes me laugh when I’m sad. I think animals are our friends. We should protect them. Let’s live in peace with all animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点,并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍动物基本信息;
第二步,描述它的爱好和习性;
第三步,说明它对你的意义,并表达对动物保护的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①active活跃的
②waits for等待
[高分句型]
①When I get home from school, it always runs to me happily.(时间状语从句)
②Let’s live in peace with all animals.(祈使句)
进阶拓展训练5篇
6.假设你有一只宠物小狗,它非常讨人喜欢。你的朋友们很想了解它的一些情况。请根据下面提供的信息以“My little dog”为题,用英语描述你的宠物,可适当拓展。50词左右。
1. 外部特征:黑白相间 (black and white),有两只大耳朵。
2. 这只小狗很可爱,能看家,因为它的嗅觉 (sense of smell) 很灵敏。
3. 它喜欢的食物是肉。爱好是玩球。
4. 它对人很友好,但有些害羞 (shy)。
5. 狗是人类的好朋友,我们应该 (should) 爱护 (take care of) 它们。
My little dog
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【答案】例文
My little dog
My favorite animal is the dog. I have a little dog. It has two big ears and a black and white body.
The dog is very cute. It can look after the house. This is because it has a very good sense of smell. My little dog likes eating meat very much. It enjoys playing with a ball. It’s very friendly to people, but it’s kind of shy.
Dogs are people’s real friends, so we should take care of them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点提示已给出,考试应注意要求中的内容,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头引入话题,表达自己最喜欢的动物是狗,并引出自己的小狗;
第二步,详细描述小狗的外貌特征、性格特点和行为习惯;
第三步,总结升华,阐述狗与人类的关系,呼吁人们照顾它们。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite最喜欢的
②look after照顾
③a sense of smell嗅觉
④kind of有点,有几分
⑤take care of照顾
[高分句型]
① This is because it has a very good sense of smell. (运用了because引导的表语从句)
② Dogs are people’s real friends, so we should take care of them. (运用了so连接的并列句)
7.Write a letter for help on behalf of wild animals to humans, at least 60 words. (代表野生动物向人类写一封求救信,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. self-introduction;(自我介绍)
2. writing purpose;(写信目的)
3. problem/cause;(问题和起因)
4. request。(诉求)
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【答案】例文
Dear Humans,
We are your wild neighbors—deer running through forests, birds singing in trees, and fish swimming in rivers. Today, we write to you with heavy hearts. Our homes are disappearing because you cut down trees and build cities. Many of us are dying from polluted water and air. Some are even killed illegally for fur or meat.
We just want to live in peace. Please stop destroying our habitats. Protect rivers and forests. Say no to illegal hunting. We share this earth with you. Let’s make it a home for all living things.
Your wild friends
July 13, 2025
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:围绕野生动物的生存困境及诉求展开,清晰传达了栖息地破坏、污染、非法猎杀等问题,以及希望人类保护它们的愿望。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以野生动物的身份自我介绍,并阐述当前面临的生存危机,包括栖息地消失、因污染死亡、遭非法猎杀等具体问题。
第二步,表达野生动物的诉求,希望人类停止破坏栖息地、保护河流森林、拒绝非法猎杀,呼吁共同守护地球家园。
[亮点词汇]
①wild neighbors野生邻居
②disappearing消失
③illegally非法地
④in peace和平地
[高分句型]
①Our homes are disappearing because you cut down trees and build cities.(because引导原因状语从句)
②Let’s make it a home for all living things.(let’s引导祈使句)
8.动物是我们的朋友,与人类关系紧密,为人类提供许多帮助。请你阐述动物对人类的帮助和重要性,呼吁大家保护动物,与动物和谐共处。
提示:
1.提供丰富的食物(如肉类、奶制品);
2.助力工作(如导盲犬);
3.带来乐趣(如熊猫、猴子)。
要求:
1.要点齐全,并适当增加细节;
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯;
3.70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Animals are our friends and they are a part of our life.
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【答案】例文
Animals are our friends and they are a part of our life.
Firstly, they provide us with a rich variety of food. For example, cows give us milk, and chickens and pigs supply us with meat. Secondly, many animals are of great help in our work. Just like the well-trained guide dogs, they can lead the blind to cross the roads safely. Moreover, animals bring us a lot of fun. We love to watch the lovely pandas and naughty monkeys in the zoo.
In conclusion, animals are very important to us. We should protect them and live in harmony with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏给出的信息,写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,点明动物与人类关系密切;
第二步,从“食物供给、工作辅助、情感价值”三方面来具体阐述动物的重要性;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物
②a variety of多种多样的
③in conclusion总之
④in harmony with和睦共处
[高分句型]
We should protect them and live in harmony with them. (and连接的并列句)
9.同学们,动物是人类的好朋友,很多人都希望拥有自己的宠物。请以“I want to keep a ________ as my pet”为题写一篇作文。阐述你养这种动物作为你的宠物的原因以及你会如何对待它。开头已经给出,请在答题卡上完整作答。
写作要求:1. 内容要围绕导图展开陈述,也可以适度发挥。
2. 字数控制在80字左右。
3. 不得出现真实姓名和班级。
I want to keep a … as my pet
As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is
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【答案】例文
I want to keep a cat as my pet
As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is the cat. I’d like to keep a cat, because it makes me feel happy. It can help me relax and teach me responsibility. If I have a cat, I will feed it well and walk it every day. I won’t make it a stray. I hope to play with it daily. Of course, I will keep it clean and make it healthy. My parents also love small animals. I am sure the cat will be happy with us in my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:根据导图展开陈述,注意要点齐全,可适当增添细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全题目,表达想要养一只宠物;
第二步,介绍想要养的宠物,包括喜欢的原因及打算如何照顾它;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事
②of course当然
[高分句型]
①I’d like to keep a cat, because it makes me feel happy. (because引导原因状语从句)
②If I have a cat, I will feed her well every day. (if引导条件状语从句)
③I am sure the cat will be happy with us in my family.(宾语从句)
10.每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假设你最喜欢的动物是企鹅。请根据以下提示内容写一篇约80词的文章,介绍一下企鹅。
外形和习性
1. 有翅膀,身体是黑白色的;
2. 不会飞行,但游泳游得很快;
3. 主要吃小的海洋动物;
4. 主要来自南极,通过挤在一起的方式取暖。
现状
处于危险中
要求:
1. 必须包含表格中提到的所有要点。
2. 可适当发挥想象。
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【答案】例文:
Everyone has his or her favourite animal. The penguin is my favourite animal. I like penguins because they are very cute and they look friendly.
Penguins have wings and black-and-white bodies. They can’t fly like other birds, but they can swim fast. They mainly feed on small sea animals. They mostly come from Antarctica, a very cold place. Penguins often stand close together. It helps them keep warm.
Now penguins are in danger. I will try my best to help the penguins.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点清晰,围绕“喜爱的动物是企鹅”展开,依次介绍喜爱的原因、企鹅的特征与习性、企鹅的生存现状及自身的帮助意愿,无遗漏要点,细节补充合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明主旨,说明自己最喜爱的动物是企鹅,并简要给出喜爱的原因;
第二步,详细介绍企鹅的外形特征、特殊能力、食物、栖息地及生活习性;
第三步,说明企鹅当前的危险处境,表达自己将尽力帮助企鹅的意愿,结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite animal最喜欢的动物
②black-and-white黑白相间的
③feed on以……为食
④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I like penguins because they are very cute and they look friendly.(because引导原因状语从句)
②They can’t fly like other birds, but they can swim fast.(but连接并列句,表转折关系)
能力综合实践5篇
11.假如你是李华,你的朋友Linda对中国的动物文化很感兴趣,计划举办一场动物主题派对,她向你询问如何融入中国元素。请你写一封信回复Linda,谈谈如何为她的动物主题派对 (Animal-themed Party) 加入中国特色元素。请根据以下写作提示完成写作。
写作提示:
1. What can you do to add Chinese celebrations to the party?
2. Show Chinese animal-related short films.
3. Where can you have the party?
4. What special gift can you give Linda and why?
写作要求:
1. 内容包含所给提示信息,可适当拓展;
2. 语句连贯,书写规范,词数80左右。作文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements.Here are my ideas.
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Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear you’re planning an animal-themed party and want to add Chinese elements. Here are my ideas.
Celebrations: Decorate the party with red lanterns and paper-cuts of zodiac animals like dragons or tigers. Red means good luck in Chinese culture.
Short films: Show videos about pandas, China’s national treasure. You can also play clips from The Monkey King, a famous Chinese story with animal characters.
Location: Host the party in a park with traditional Chinese gardens or a room decorated with paintings of animals like cranes and koi fish.
Special gift: Give guests small panda key chains. Pandas are symbols of peace, and the key chains are both cute and meaningful.
By doing these, your party will be fun and full of Chinese culture!
Hope your party will be a great success!
Best regards.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,需围绕派对的庆祝方式、播放影片、举办地点、特殊礼物等方面融入中国元素进行写作,可适当拓展,注意语言连贯规范。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,表明高兴得知朋友计划举办派对并想融入中国元素,引出下文的具体建议;
第二步,分别从派对装饰、播放影片、举办地点、特殊礼物等方面,给出融入中国元素的具体建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达按以上建议进行操作,派对会充满中国文化且有趣,并预祝派对成功。
[亮点词汇]
①decorate... with... 用……装饰……
②national treasure 国宝
③be symbols of 是……的象征
[高分句型]
① Pandas are symbols of peace, and the key chains are both cute and meaningful. (and连接的并列句)
12.假设你是李华,你的笔友Tom对动物很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍你最喜欢的动物,并分享你与动物的有趣经历。
要求:
词数:80—100词;
包括以下要点:
你最喜欢的动物是什么;
你为什么喜欢它;
你与这种动物的有趣经历。
适当发挥,使文章连贯。
Dear Tom,
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【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in animals. My favorite animal is the panda. I’d love to introduce this animal to you.
Pandas are so lovely with their round bodies and black-and-white fur. They always seem so calm and peaceful, which makes me feel relaxed. Besides, they are unique to China, representing our country’s precious culture.
Last year, I visited the zoo and saw pandas up close. One panda was eating bamboo leaves. Suddenly, it dropped the bamboo and looked around with a confused face. It was so funny that everyone around burst into laughter.
Do you have a favorite animal? Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出写信目的,介绍最喜欢的动物是熊猫;
第二步,描述熊猫的外貌特征,介绍喜欢熊猫的原因;
第三步,讲述去年去动物园近距离看到熊猫的有趣经历;
第四步,书写总结,期待交流。
[亮点词汇]
①up close 近距离地
②look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①They always seem so calm and peaceful, which makes me feel relaxed. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②It was so funny that everyone around burst into laughter. (so … that引导结果状语从句)
13.动物是人类的好朋友,能给我们带来很多欢乐,现在越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你有一只宠物免,请根据下面提示写一篇英语作文。
Your pet
a rabbit
What does it look like?
white and black, long ears, lovely
What does it eat?
grass and vegetables
What does it do?
run after me, make me relax
What’s special about it?
always by my side
要求:
(1)包含所有要点提示,可适当发挥。
(2)不少于70 词。
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【答案】例文
My Pet Rabbit I have a lovely pet rabbit, and it has become an important part of my life. My rabbit is white and black. Its long ears stand up straight, and its small red eyes shine brightly, making it look extremely cute. When it hops around, its fluffy tail wiggles, which always makes me laugh. It mainly eats grass and fresh vegetables. Every day after school, I’m responsible for feeding it. Watching it munch on the food happily is really interesting. My rabbit loves running after me when I get home. It follows me everywhere, as if it’s my little bodyguard. When I feel tired or stressed, it stays by my side quietly, which helps me relax. What makes it special is that it’s always there for me, whether I’m happy or sad.
I love my pet rabbit very much. It’s not just a pet but also my best friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,描述兔子的外貌、饮食习惯、日常行为等客观事实;
③提示:文章严格按照题目要求,从兔子的外貌、饮食、日常行为以及特别之处四个方面展开,包含所有要点提示,适当发挥,内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,文章开头点明主题,说明自己有一只宠物兔子且它对自己很重要;
第二步,分别从四个要点进行介绍。先描述兔子的外貌;接着说明它的饮食主要是草和蔬菜,以及自己喂食的日常;然后讲述兔子喜欢跟着自己,能给自己带来放松;最后强调兔子总是陪伴自己这一特别之处;
第三步,结尾表达对宠物兔子的喜爱,升华主题,指出它不仅是宠物更是最好的朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①fluffy毛茸茸的
②munch用力咀嚼
③bodyguard保镖
④responsible负责的
[高分句型]
①When I feel tired or stressed, it stays by my side quietly, which helps me relax.(when引导时间状语从句)
③What makes it special is that it’s always there for me, whether I’m happy or sad.(what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句,whether... or...引导让步状语从句)
14.学校英语社团正在开展“My favourite zoo”为主题的征文活动。假如你是社团成员,请根据下面内容提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确;
3. 不少于60词,可适当发挥。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】
My favourite zoo is City Zoo. It is big and clean, with wide paths and green trees everywhere. Firstly, there are many different animals here. Some are beautiful like peacocks, others are smart like monkeys and some are strong and friendly like elephants. The animal star is a panda named Lulu. She comes from China and has soft black-and-white fur. Lulu loves eating bamboo and is good at climbing trees. Besides, there are two important rules in the zoo. We mustn’t litter to keep the environment tidy. Also, feeding animals is not allowed because it might harm their health. I love visiting City Zoo. It’s a perfect place to learn about animals and enjoy nature!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍你最喜欢的动物园的特点,动物以及规定等方面的具体详情。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②love doing sth喜欢做某事
③be good at擅长
④learn about了解
[高分句型]
①Also, feeding animals is not allowed because it might harm their health. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Some are beautiful like peacocks, others are smart like monkeys and some are strong and friendly like elephants. (并列句)
15.动物是我们的朋友,它们和我们共享一个地球,但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明,你们学校的校报正在征集关于保护野生动物的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题,根据以下写作要点和要求,写一篇英语短文进行投稿,呼吁大家保护野生动物。
写作要点:
1. How are wild animals now?
2. Why are some wild animals in danger?
3. What is your advice (建议)?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:protect保护 nature reserve自然保护区
Save the wild animals
Animals are our friends, but
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【答案】例文
Save the wild animals
Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in. Also, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot.
First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.
Let’s try our best to help wild animals together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:需包含野生动物现状、濒危原因及保护建议,可适当发挥,使文章通顺、完整,词数约70词,开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,说明动物是人类朋友,但部分野生动物正处于濒危状态;
第二步,阐述野生动物濒危的原因(栖息地破坏、人类非法猎杀);
第三步,提出具体保护建议(停止砍伐、禁止猎杀、建立自然保护区),并呼吁大家共同行动。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险中
②cut down trees砍伐树木
③nature reserve自然保护区
[高分句型]
①People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live in.(说明栖息地破坏对动物的影响)
②Also, some people kill them for their meat and fur.(说明人类非法猎杀的原因)
③What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them.(提出具体保护措施,丰富内容)
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