内容正文:
类别二
经历感受类
常见题目表述)
①》人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升生活并非一成不变,总是充满了跌宕起伏。然而,他人一次
不经意的帮助,可能会带给我们别样的温暖。请你以“A()
Moment'”为题,用英语讲述一件你接
受他人帮助的往事以及你的感受。内容包括:
1.他人对你提供帮助的经历(时间,地点,人物等):
2.你接受帮助后的感受。
②人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活无论是长途旅行还是郊游,每一次旅行都是珍贵的回忆。你校
英文报正在以“My Meaningful Trip”为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你暑假去了什么地方;
2.你在假期做了什么;
3.你的假期感受。
③●人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活你们学校正在开展“健康用网周”活动,你参与了其中的一项
挑战:在刚过去的24小时内不使用任何电子设备(手机、电脑、平板等)。请你用英文记录你的经历、感受和
收获。内容包括:
1.介绍你此次活动的经历:
2.你的感觉如何;
3.在这次经历中你的收获。
④●人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生话学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期题为“My Delicious Memory”的英
文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你选择一种食物,写一篇英语短文,讲述你与它之间的故事,并分享它对你的
特殊意义。内容包括:
1.特殊的食物(粽子、饺子、月饼等);
2.你关于这个食物的记忆;
3.这份美味的记忆对于你的意义。
作文框架)
开头:以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历。
中间:讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果,即五个“W”(when,where,who,why,what)和一个
“H”(how)a
结尾:对上述经历进行总结,表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么或以后会怎么做。
高分模板D
One
Experience
I'm glad to share
(我的经历).
When I first went into junior high school,I
(遇到的经历)because
(原因).Iwas/felt
(感受)and didn't know what to do.
()encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice.
First of all,
(我的行为①),which helped to
(这样做的结果①).Second,
(我的
行为②).In this way,I not only
but also
(这样做的结果②).Day by day,I could
(可以做的事情)andI(现在的行为)now.
Through the experience,I have deeply realized that
(感悟)
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优秀范文记背D
Passage 1
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Warm Moment
Life is full of ups and downs.Once,an act of
A Warm Moment
kindness from a classmate gave me a truly warm
Beginning:引
Life is full of ups and downs,and
moment.
出话题
sometimes a small help can light up
Last Friday,it rained cats and dogs.When
our day.
school was over,I rushed to the school gate,only to
Body:讲述一
Last Wednesday was a rainy day.After
realize I'd left my umbrella at home.Standing there,
个你接受他
school,I found I had forgotten to take my
feeling anxious and helpless,I didn't know how to get
人帮助的
umbrella.I was worried and didn't know
back.Just then,my classmate Li Hua noticed me.
经历
what to do.Just then,my classmate Li Hua
Without a second thought,he walked up and said
came over.He had an umbrella and said,
gently,"Let's share my umbrella."On the way,he
“Let's share it.”We walked home together..
kept moving the umbrella to cover me well.Even
On the way,he always tried to keep me
though part of his clothes got wet,he didn't care at all.
dry.His kindness gave me a warm feeling.
His kind words and warm smile made the rainy day
Ending:表达
This moment is unforgettable.It makes
bright.
自己的感受
me want to help others in need too.
This moment taught me the power of kindness.I'll
surely help others like he did.
Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Delicious Memory
My Delicious Memory
Beginning:点
Food can bring back sweet memories.
Food is not just about taste;it can bring back a
明能唤起你
For me,zongzi is such a food.
special memory.Among all foods,zongzi holds the
特殊记忆的
Zongzi is a special food for the Dragon
most delicious memory for me.
食物
Boat Festival.It has rice and red beans.Last
Zongzi,a traditional treat for the Dragon Boat
year,my grandma made zongzi.I watched
Festival,is made of rice and red beans.Last year,
during the festival,my grandma and I had a zongzi-
her and wanted to have a try.At first,my
making day.She taught me to fold the leaves and fill
Body:具体讲
zongzi looked messy,but Grandma laughed
述你与此食
them with the rice carefully.Though my first try was a
and helped me.When we ate them,they
物之间的
failure,Grandma's patience made the process full of
were really delicious.It was the best zongzi I
故事
joy.When we finally enjoyed the zongzi,the sweet
had ever eaten.
taste and warm feeling made me very happy.
This memory is special because I spent
Ending:阐述
This memory is special.Zongzi connects me with
此食物对于
time with my grandma.Zongzi tastes good,
Grandma's love.Every time I see zongai,I'm
你的意义
and it also means family love to me.
reminded of that happy day-a taste of love and
tradition.
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